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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
wow after a long time Smile

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Awesome update
loved it loadzzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Thank you so much for ur sweet comments...
So here i have for u... DOUBLE DHAMAKA!!!! Smile
 
I will be updating... 2 part in a go...
part 46 & Part 47 Big smile
 
Wen i m being so good to you...
i need more comments...Cry
Pls dont disappoint me next time Smile
 

*** Part 46 ***

 

everything went silent...

annie felt guilty very much guilty...

not for asking nupur about her family...

but for thinking of mayank in dat way...

she hated herself for being so selfsh...

 

"mayank is d only person nupur hav in her life now..but i...i tried to take mayank...though i never tried it..but still i felt for him..dat was so srong..ohh god..plz forgive me for dis 1ce...plzz god plz..."

 

annie decided she vil never cum in between dis couple...

dey r made for each other..n she is nobody to seperate dem...

annie - kya wo mujse bahot naraz hogi...

nisha - nahi yaar...sham tak uska mood thik ho jayega..fir woh khud hi sorry bol degi..for getting angry on u...

geet - chil yaar..just love her like a frnd..all she need is love...

all gave a hug of togetherness to each other...

n left...

 

...

ON D OTHER HAND...

maan reached office litle late..thnks to d deir mobile session which didn't let him sleep almost d whole night...

neeva was quite unsure of his change in behaviour now-a-days...

she alwz neeva her boss as a stubborn n angry person wid lots of attitude..confidence n sumwhere arrogant too...

but dis was a very fresh maan she was experincing...

he didn't scold anybody from so much of days...

adi was on 9th cloud due to nice behaviour of maan wid him...

he alws knew d real maan...but experiencing it was another thing...

while neeva was loving dis nature of maan...

" he dn't scold me now...like b4...in london also he treated me so well...he actually started smiling a bit...kya wo b mujhe pasand karne lage hai...shayad haa ya shayad na..koi aur b to vajah ho sakti hai unki khushi ki..par london me unhone kitne achhe se mujhe treate kiya...he respected me...wat is it..watever b but i love dis new maan more..."

...

neeva's thoughts were distracted by dadi maa...

dadi maa - neeva beta..kahan khoyi hai aap...

neeva - ohh mam...i was just like dat..aap aaj office me...

dadi maa - haan hum maan se milne aaye the...aaj unhone breakfast b nahi kiya..na hi humara call receive kar areh hai...

neeva - actually mam...sir meeting me hai adi sir aur kuchh clients ke sath...sir htodi der se aaye so he directly went to meeting...

dadi maa - hmm..tabhi nashta nahi kiya..wat vil i do wid him..kaam ke aage inhe kuchh dikhayi hi nahi deta...

neeva - mam..can i ask u sumthing if u dnt mind...

dadi maa - kya baat hai beta...

neeva - sir aaj kal thode badal gaye hai..i mean..unka gussa kafi kam ho gaya hai..he treating d whole staff very well...

dadi maa - hmm..humne b notice kiya hai..he is changing...

neeva - he is d best boss in anyway..but now-a-days..he started smiling also...

dadi maa smile...patting her head softly - jante hai hum..humara bachha hai hi aisa...

neeva smiled dat atleast dadi maa like her sumwhere...smile wid her...

neeva - mam..aap sir ke cabin me wait kar sakti hai..meeting vil over in few min...

dadi maa - dadi vil b ok...

dadi left...a smiling neeva behind...

 

...

geet reached home..

directly to bedroom ...

only to find..rano cleaning her wardrobe..placing all her new dresses nicely in it...

geet smiled kissing her cheek...

rano - beta ab chal meri help kar...

geet - mumma aap hi kardo na...

rano rolled her eyes...

geet freshned herself n went to sit beside rano..watching her..hating wid her...

rano - tujhe etni dresses lene ki kya jarurat thi...

geet - mumma its not me..its him..mene kitni baar mana kiya ki mujhe etne sare dresses nahi chahiye..par wo hai ke manate hi nahi...

rano - chalo koi to hai to tujhse jyada ziddi hai...

geet rolled her eyes...

rano eyes fell on dat ghagara-choli which maan choose for her for brij's wedding...

rano wid wide eyes - geet..ye kisne kharida...

geet - mumma sari clothes unhone hi liye hai...

rano looked at her in disbelieve - ye to bahot jyada mehanga lag raha hai...tun emana kyu nahi kiya...

 

geet rolled her eyes - mumma ye sari dresses mehangi hai..each dress is almost strts aftr 20,000...n dat ghagara choli vil b in sum lacks...

rano's eyes widened even more...

ofcorse dey are also reach...

dey r also from industrial family...

but dis was sumthing too much...literally too much...

dey alwz kept deir both gals like princess...but dis made rano realize dat..deir princess got her prince who vil keep her as his princess for lifetime...

rano's eyes a bit filled wid happiness...

she couldn't deny..whoever he is...but he is definitely mad in love wid deir daughter...

geet smiled at her mumma's loving natute...

b4 geet could say a word...

 

suddenly her eyes fell on rano hand...holding her slambook...

rano was about to open it when geet snatched it from her hand hiding it behind her back...

rano naughtily - kya chhupa rahi hai dikha...

geet avoidingly - mumma very bad...its personal na mumma...

rano - mujhse b personal..mujhe to laga tha ke me tumhari dost hu...rano acting...heyy babaji...ab yehi sunna baki tha...

geet rolled her eyes...

geet - mumma acting band karo...mumma aap hasoge..me nahi dikhaungi aapko...

rano - nahi hasungi pakka...achha tuhi padhke suna kya likha isme...

geet - mumma ye koi DDLJ movie chal rahi hai..jo aap simran ki mumma ki tarah behave kar rahi ho...

rano - tu bhi to simran ki tarah nakhre dikha rahi hai...dikha na...warna...

geet - warna kya...

rano aftr sum thinking - warna me tera wardrobe aisa se chhodke chali jaungi..n den u hav to clean it...

geet annoying - mumma dis is cheating...

rano - soch le...

geet - fine i vil read it for u...but promise aap veerji pappaji n specially rajji ko iske bare me nahi bataoge...

rano promised...

 

geet opened d book very lovingly...

stated singing ( wat is written in book by her)

 

" mere dil ko ye kya ho gaya

me na janu kaha kho gaya

kyu lage din me bhi raat hai

dhup me jaise barsaat hai

aisa kyu hota hai barbar

kya isko hi kehte hai pyar "

 

rano looked at geet is surprise...

she never knew dis site of her...

she alwz knew geet as angry..ziddi..funny..stupid..sute...childish..but dis..was sumthing dirrent n amusing at same time...

geet blushed a bit..avoiding her mumma's gaze...

 

" mere dil ko ye kya ho gaya

me na janu kaha kho gaya

kyu lage din me bhi raat hai

dhup me jaise barsaat hai

aisa kyu hota hai barbar

kya isko hi kehte hai pyar "

 

rano stand up moving close to her...

geet smiled as rano gave a soft kiss on her forehead...

geet hold her mumma's hand...making her dance wid her...

both laughing...enjoying d moment...

rani pantingly sat on bed...asking her to continue firther...

while geet in her own dreamland...

 

" sapne naye

sajne lage

duniya nayi

lagne lagi

pehle kabhi

aisa na huva

kya pyas ye

jagne lagi "

 

rano raised her finger in front of geet's face...bringing her back to reality...

rano signalling her asking wat hapened..where u lost...

geet smilingly shook her head...signalling..saying..nothing...

 

" madhoshiyon ka hai sama

wo jhukne laga asama

khamoshi bani jai juban

chhede hai koi dasata

dhadkan pe bhi chhaya hai khumar

aisa kyu hota hai barbar "

 

sudenly d rain started...(as its rainy days..i told in 1st part only)

...

geet ran towrds her big balcony..pulling rano wid her...

geet dancing in rain..while rani prefered to get back in room..shooking her head for her mad daughter...wat wid i do wid dis gal...she wondered...

geet was madly dancing in rain...

finally dragged her inside..made her sir infront of dressing table..drying her hairs...

 

" aayine me jo

dekha khudko

aayi sharam

ankhen jhuki

dhak se mera

dhadka jiya

ek pal ko ye

sanse ruki "

 

rano smiled fullheartedly..loving every single stupid act of her daughter...

she hugged her lovingly from her head...

geet hugged her back..n ran to her bed..jumping on it..dancing...

rano just kept staring at her...

 

" ab chori satane lagi

raaton ko jagane lagi

me yuhi machhalane lagi

kuchh kuchh badalane lagi

jane rehti hu kyu bekrar

aisa kyu hota hai barbar "

 

tired geet...fell on d bed...

resting on her stomach...putting her chin on pillow..looking outside...drinking d beautifull sight of rain outside...

her eyes..were full of dreams n love...

rano heart skipped a beat...he daughter is so innocent..so madly in love..she just prayed..nothing go wrong..or her emotional n neive gal cnt bear it...

her sparkling eyes shivered rano wid fear...

while geet just kept looking outside...d blackish sky..n endless rain..trying to picturise his face...in dose droplets

 

" mere dil ko ye kya ho gaya

me na janu kaha kho gaya

kyu lage din me bhi raat hai

dhup me jaise barsaat hai

aisa kyu hota hai barbar

kya isko hi kehte hai pyar

aisa kyu hota hai barbar

kya isko hi kehte hai pyar "

 

geet eye's slowly closed living her dream..n she fel asleep...

rano still noticed a slight curled lips of geet..which made rano realize dat how sweetly she is smiling in her sleep...

rano's eyes filled wid fear...

" babaji..geet ko etna khush pehale kabhi nahi dekha...aapko to pata hai na ke geet kaisi hai..etni emotinal..meri bachhe ki khushiyan banaye rakhna babaji..dukh ki koi parachhayi meri bachhee ki khushiyon ke bich mat aane dijiyega..warna meri bachhee bardasht nahi kar payegi..usse dard bardasht nahi hota aapko pata hai na...wo tut jayegi...uska khayal rakhiyega babaji.." rano heartly preyed her babaji...

n went back to wardrobe..cleaning it...

 

...

3:30

maan's meeting got over...

maan was going back to his cabin..followed by neeva...

maan - wat is it

neeva - sir..mam is waiting inside for u...

maan stopped straight away...his heart throbbed in his chest wid d thought.." geet yahan...geet mere cabin me hai..par kaise..usse kaise pata mera cabin kahan hai..ohh so ms-i-can-also-spy-on-you mujpar spy kar rahi hai..hmm..im loving it "

maan smiled on his own thoughts..n ran to his cabin like 18 yr teenager..running to meet his gf...

neeva found his behaviour odd..." ye sir ko kya ho gaya..aisa bhag kyu rahe..wow..kitna pyar karte hai apni dadi se...how sweet.."..thinking she went back to her cabin...follede by adi...

adi - he he he

neeva - kya huva adi sir

adi - ye sir ko kya ho gaya...aisa lag raha hai jaise sir umar ke sath chhote hote ja rahe hai...

neeva shook her head - adi sir aap b na..unka to nahi pata par maan sir ne sun liya to aap jarur kisiko dikhayi nahi denge...

adi - he he he..par sir ko khush dekhkar achha lagta hai...

neeva gave him a weired smile.." IS HE GAY...OHH NO !!! MY MAAN SIR "

adi still laughing..unaware of neeva's thoughts..went back to his cabin...

...

...

 

spoilers : wat vil happen when maan vil neter his cabin in excitement...:P :P :P

 

 

 

*** PART 47 ***

 
adi - he he he

neeva - kya huva adi sir

adi - ye sir ko kya ho gaya...aisa lag raha hai jaise sir umar ke sath chhote hote ja

 

rahe hai...

neeva shook her head - adi sir aap b na..unka to nahi pata par maan sir ne sun liya to

 

aap jarur kisiko dikhayi nahi denge...

adi - he he he..par sir ko khush dekhkar achha lagta hai...

neeva gave him a weired smile.." IS HE GAY...OHH NO !!! MY MAAN SIR "

adi still laughing..unaware of neeva's thoughts..went back to his cabin...

 

...

maan just stopped near door...

his heart was beating faster n faster...

his hand slowly ran to d door...

he was so excited like his life is hust a door away...he was desperate to open d

 

door...but feeling were playing wid his hand..making him shiver a beat...not letting him

 

open d door fastly...

 

" i still dnt believe..geet is here..so finally ms.handa ko akal aa hi gayi ke apne

 

boyfrnd ke bare me thodi information honi chahiye..."

he smiled of his own thoughts..moreover he just loved d word boyfrnd...

 

" par me usse baat kya karunga..usse kya puchhunga ke ho yahan kaise aayi..usse kaise

 

pata ke mera office..goddd y m thinking so much..she is geet...meri geet...jo mujhse

 

kabhi koi sawal nahi puchhti.."

 

staff walking around started giving a weired look at maan who was standing holding d door

 

for past 10 min..n still not opening it...

but all disappeared wid his single stirn look...

finally he closed his eyes..taking a long breath...

an opened d door in jerk...ony to find d most beautifull of d world standing in front of

 

him..staring at him wid her beautifull almond eyes..looking so cute...

maan just smiled..kept staring at her...

he couldn't think anymore...

she looked more beautifull dan b4...

he himself was amused..everytime he sees her..he finds her more beautifull dan d last

 

time..is she magic woman..who know sum love magic to make herself beautifull more n more

 

each day...

she raised her eye-brows..signalling him asking.." where r u lost..."

she just shook his head whispering.. " y u look more beautifull dan b4..wen every time i

 

see u " ...

...

she didn't reply...instead started walking towrds him..decreasing d distance slowly

 

slowly teasing his senses...

wid her each step..his heart beat started increasing...

ohh no no..!!!!!

dis is not d 1st time..dey r moving close to each other..or rather dey hav shared such a

 

passionate moment last night..while shopping...

den y suddenly her breath started teasing him so much..effecting him like his heart vil

 

explode any moment wid happiness n excitement...

m i still in hangover of our last passionate moment..he thought...

...

he just kept staring at her mesmerized..as she kept moving closer to him...

n dere she is !!

standing just front of him...

she whispered in her softest voice "kya kaha beta aapne.."

maan just smiled.." how naughty she is..she is calling me beta..ohh godd...she drives me

 

insane wid her every stupid act..."

...

she again said litle loudly.."beta aap thik to hai..."

ok..enough now...!!!!

maan blabbered " why u calling me beta..."

OHHK !!!

dadi moved her finger in front of his eyes..bringing him back to reality...

d reality hit him so hard..he nearly fainted..!!!!!!!

 

" dadi maa aap "...

 

dadi maa - ji hum..par aap kahan khoye hai...aur aap kya keh rahe the..everytime i see

 

u..i find u more beautifull dan b4..aur hum ab aap ko beta b nahi bula sakte..aap etne bade ho gaye hai..ohhkkk...

maan again near to faint !!!!

he said dis all to dadi..ohh goddd.ohh nooo...did he even take her name..hope not..help

 

me sumbody plzzz...maan was still in shock...

she actually drives me insane...

now i started mixing her wid dadi maan too...omggg...

thnk god it was dadi...agar koi ladka hota tha...

NO..WAYZZZ !!!!!! he snapped cuming out of his thoughts...

 

dadi maa immediately gave him d glass of water..which he gulped fully in 1 go..again

 

surprising dadi...

dadi checked his forehead...

maan rolled his eyes..still sumwhere in shock..thinking..i actually need a doctor

 

dadi..dil ka doctor...

maan - dadi i m fine...

dadi angrily - ye kya baat huyi beta..hume yahan aaye almost 3 ghnate ho gaye...aap se

 

aate waqt breakfast b nahi kiya aur ab dekhiye..abhitak lunch nahi..its almost evening

 

now...wat is dis all maa...

maan made dadi sit on his own chair...

maan - dadi m fine..meeting importnt thi esliye mujhe jaldi aana pada..aur aap ne dekha

 

na meeting abhitak chal rahi thi...

dadi - par beta..aap ki tabiyat bhi thik nahi lag rahi...

maan smiled - dadi me bilkul thik hu..dekhiye mujhe...aur waise aap etni der kyu

 

ruki..aap ko doctor ne aaram karne kaha hai..hume apki fikar karni chahiye aur aap hai ke

 

hume lekar pareshan rehti hai...

dadi - maan topic mat change kijiye..aap apna khayal rakhna kab sikhenge..ab to aap ke

 

liye ek dulhan dhundani hi padegi...jo aap ka aur...

...

suddenly dadi went silent...

 

"y u look more beautifull dan b4..wen everytime i see u..."

 

maan words entered in dadi's mind...

 

...********...

 

geet's sleep was disturbed by phone call...

she annoying cut it..n slept again...

d phone started ringing again...

geet pickd it up in half sleep...

geet - wat is it

...no reply..

geet - hello...

...

geet got more annoying n cut d call...

wen her phone rang again...

geet - hello...

...

geet - koi hai ya nahi...

...

goshhh...annoying she cut it again...

 

aftr 5 min...

phone rang again...

she lost it now...

geet picked it up..

geet - baat nahi karni to phone kyu kiya...

ranbir - etna chilla kyu rahi hai...

geet - pehle bolne ke doctor ne mana kiya tha...

ranbir - mtalab..pehle tu uth..kumbh-karan...

geet sat on her bed...

geet - pehle phone kiya to bola kyu nahi...

ranbir - tujhe kitni baar bola din me mat piyar kar...mene abhi call hai tujhe..just

 

1ce...

geet rolled her eyes - achha bol..kya huva...

ranbir - nishu ka phone aaya tha..kitne baje aana hai...

geet - kahan aana hai aur kyu...

ranbir rolling his eyes - project par search karna hai remember...

 

geet suddenly remembered she havn't told anything to maan about d subject dey r

 

thinking...ohkk..jab tak ye log aayenge..tab tak me maan se baat kar lungi...she

 

concluded in mind...

 

ranbir - bol na..

geet checked d time..4:15pm

geet - umm..tumlog..7 baje tak aa jana...

ranbir - alright..ab fir se sona mat..warna sir dard karne lagega...

geet - ha baba...chal bye.

cal hanged up..

 

geet immediately called maan...

but it was giving no response...

geet - utha kyu nahi rahe...khadus kahin ke..mera phone bhi nahi utha sakte...

she tried again...

but no response...

geet angrily kept d phone beside...n covered herself in d spread again sleeping..lolll

 

...

d thing was at d time of meeting..maan kept his phone on silent mode...

thnk god..it came in sum use..

warna dadi ke samne geet ka phone uthana...

aage kuwa..aur pichhe khayi..dat would hav been d condition of maan...

still he in danger now also...

he has to manaofy his princess now...

roflll

 

...

 

SPOILERS : yahan dadi..aur waha geet..kya hoga maan ka...roflll

 
 
 
heyy frnds...
i again request...

plz plz plz do COMMENT all... its a special request to my silent readers Smile

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i love reading ur comments..n expecting more comments from silent readers too...
love
MISHTY






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Loved it, continue soon.
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Superb update... loved both the parts
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Lovely update. Spoiler sounds interesting . Pls cont soon.Wanna know wat ll maan do Embarrassed
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hey Angel,
u kno, i hv read this on FB page...
but i can read this Ff,n number of tyms...
i just love it...
it was awesome...
luv it reading anytym...
thnkxxx n update soon...
i want the link for the page of ur Os's n FF's...
plzz help me with that...
so tht i can njoi with all ur writings...
thnkx again...
lots n lots of hugs n kisses... :) :D :* :* <3 <3 <3 <3
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heyy thanks for the double update!!! hope geet doesnt get 2 angry with maan

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