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LOVE...beyonds...LIMITS thread 1 completed !! (Page 109)

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                 Part 44

 

geet thinking.."only 4 min more"

maan thinking..." agar 2 rings me utha liya toh baat karunga warna ye tey ki wo so rahi hai..i vil not spoil her sleep..."

geet annoyingly looking at phone..." 2 more min..."

 

MAAN DIALLED HER NO...

geet phone rang...

geet picked up in 1 ring...

 

geet happily.." hello..."

HIII GEEET...annie screamed...

geet sighed in disappointment...

maan -...busyyy...esse baat karne ke liye din raat kuchh samaj nahi aata..apna dosto ke sath bakwas chit-chat kar rahi hogi...ye nahi ke koi usse miss kar raha ho to thodi der phone khali rakhe...

maan threw d phone on bed...hiding himself under d duvet...

 

...

annie - geet kya kar rahi hai..

geet litle angrily - football khel rahi hu...tu b aana...

annie - gussa kyu kar rahi hai..so rahi thi kya...

geet felt like threwing her phone or banging her head on d wall...

geet calming herself - nahi yaar...bas thodi thak gayi hu...tu bol

annie - kyu kahin bahar gayi thi kya..mera to puar din bakwas gaya...too boring re...

geet - ohhk...u guys shud hav plan sumthing...

annie - yaah...par tu kaha gayi thi..kehti to hum b chalte...

geet - woh actually mujhe thods imp kam tha...dats y...tum abhi tak soyi nahi...

 

...

maan tried anough to sleep..but couldn't...dose moments were flashing in front of his eyes like a movie...

he rolled on d bed for sumtime...

n finally made him way to kitchen...

 

n here...

annie knew geet is not in mood to talk much...unlike her...so she decided to tease her more...

while talking annie made her way to kitchen...

n bumped into maan...

annie on phone - geet ek min...

 

d word geet caught maan's attention...he rolled his eyes thinking.." ye dekho jara...mujse baat karne ke bajay..iss annie se baat kar rahi hai...roj call me to mite hi hai na...oughhh..."

 

d moment annie told geet to wait for a min...

geet put her hand on phone..talking to her babaji..." babaji...plz kuchh karo na..ek annie hai jo mera dimag kha rahe hai...wo ek maan hai jo waha aaram se so rahe honge..jise phone karna chahiye wo nahi karta...aur jisse nahi karna chahiye usse dekho..raat ke 12 baje mujhe phone karne ki sujhi hai...kya hoga mera...blah blah...continues..."

 

maan - annie etni raat gaye yahan kya kar rahi ho..??

annie - wo bhai..mujhe pani pina tha...

maan innocently - kisise baat kar rahii ho kya...

annie - ji bhai..wo meri frnd geet hai na..ussi se baat kar rahi hu...bhai ussi ne phone kiya tha..me to so rahi thi...(annie bite her tongue for laying thinking maan vil scold her for discturbing sum1 at dis hour )

 

maan rolled his eyes thinking..."ye ladki...jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the tab bhi kisi se phone pe hi baat kar rahi hogi...MAAN SINGH KHURANA..wat vil b ur future i wonder..."

 

maan's thout distracted by annie...

annie - bhai..me jau...

maan - haan thik hai..jaldi so jao..

annie - ji bhai...

 

annie on phone - hello geet...

maan felt like snatching d phone from annie's hand...

maan so much wanted to hear her voice..talk to her...but halfheartedly left

 

annie - hellooo u dere...

geet stil talking to babaji...

annie thout d line cut...she too cut d call moving to her bedroom...

 

...

geet didn't even realize...

she still chatting wid babaji...roflll

maan went to his room...rolling on d bed.."abhi tak soyi nahi...mujhe pata hota to me pehle hi call kar leta..par ab kya fayada..ms-I-m-so-talkative must b on phone still...but i can try...MAAN TUJHE HO KYA GAYA HAI...u r acting like a 18 yr teenager...goshhh...par ek last time try karne me kaunsa tufan aa jayega...MAAN SLEEP...ok..if she vil b still busy..i vil directly go to sleep..."

 

maan's heart won...

he called her...

geet chitchat wid babaji was distracted by phone ring...

she picked in 1 ring blabbering.. - haa annie..me sun rahi hu...tu bol...

maan's heart skipped beat hearing her annoying yet melodious voice...

"gusse me b etni pyari awaz..." maan thought...

geet suddenly calmed...became quite...listening to d heart beat..dat was cuming from another sight...

a sudden happiness filled her heart..which to started beating faster...

maan felt blessed hearing her heart beats...it sounded like honey to him..soothing his every sense...every feeling...

dere was complete silence excpet deir beast dat were singing a melodious..no-lyrical music for dem...

still dey could take out d meaning of dat non-myricals words...

...

both of d hearts were beating erotically...wat to say..how to say..how vil d other person vil react..wat vil reply...

she didn't need to check d no..if its him or not...

she just knew..no 1 can breath d way her MAAN DO...she loved d thout HER MAAN...

a small smiled..teased her lips...a silent smile...

still he could feel dat she is smiling...

his heart started jumping inside wid d thout of her smiling lips...

he so much wanted to see her smiling in front of him 24-7...

...

a soft whisper slipped out of her lips.."...MAAN..."

d whisper was so slow dat even her own ears might hav not heard...but he...

he heard her whisper..like he can understand d meaning of her every single breath...

his lips curled into a smile hearing his name from her lips...

 

dey could never understand wat relationship dey shared...everything between dem sounded so different...normal can never believe in such a story...how can a person fall in love like..without knowing nothing about d another person..but geet proved it wrong..love doesn't stand on conditions..dat we hav to see d face...or info about dat person...nothing...

 

"...GEET HAS NOT FALLEN IN LOVE WID MAAN...SHE HAS RISED IN LOVE WID HER MAAN..."

 

MAAN just couldn't concentrate to anyother thing other dan her softest heart beats...

he took a long breath n decided to break d silnce...

maan - kuchh kahogi nahi...

 

"ohh my god...he called me..he actually did..." she felt blessed...

her heart started beating even more fastly...

her lips gave a wide smile..her heart filled wid happiness...

 

maan very well knew...wat is going on in her mind...he decided to tease her...

maan - thik hai...agar tumhe kuchh nahi kehna..i vil not disturb u...b...

geet yelled suddenly - nahi...rukiye

maan smiled naughtily..feeling successfull in his plan...

geet calmed herself knowing she is behaving like a stupid...

geet - me woh..mujuje laga...

maan - kya laga geet...

geet - muje laga ki meri frnd...i mean...

maan - ha ha..mujse baat karne ke liye kisi ke paas time kaha...jab bhi call karo busy hi hota hai...

 

dats it..!!!!!!!

 

she lost it...

she shouted wid her funny angry expressions - aye lo...ek me hu jo pichhle ek week se wait kar rahi hu..ke aap kabhi to muje call karoge..par nahi...mr-i-m-so-busy ke pass time hi nahi...

maan smiled loving her anger...

geet continued - abhi b..me wait kar rahi thi...par aapke jaga meri stupid frnd ne call kiya..to isme meri kya galti hai...

maan - tum mere call ka wait kar rahi thi...

geet felt sudden loving feeling in his voice...

geet smiled a bit...she was about to say yes...

wen maan continued - par kyun geet...

geet grinned her teeth angrily...

she was not liking his tease...coz she knew..she vil get caught...coz he was right..she did...

maan - bolo na geet...

geet - haan kar rahi thi..aur kyu matlab..me bina wajah aapke phone ka intezar nahi kar sakti...

maan - mene aisa kab kaha..bilkul kar sakti ho...

geet - muje pata hai...aap abhi tak soye nahi...

maan - soyi to tum b nahi abhi tak...

geet - me woh...mujhe kuchh ioprtnt kaam tha...par aap kyu nahi soye...

maan - mujhe kuchh importnt kaam tha...

geet - etni raat ko...kya kaam tha...

maan - tumse baat karna chahta tha...

geet loved his straight talk...he didn't made excuses..lol..like her...

geet lovingly - sachhi

maan smiled - sachhi

geet - to kab se call kyu nahi kiya...me kab se wait kar rahi thi..pata hai apko...

maan - mujhe laga..tum so rahi hogi..tum kafi thak lag rahi thi...i didn't want to disturb u...

geet smiled at his caring nature...

maan - y r u smiling...

geet - awahii...

maan just loved dat punjabi word from her supple lips...

he knew..dis word can never sound dis much melodious from anyother's mouth...

geet - achha suniye...

OMG...MAAN FELT BLESSED...

d really were behaving like newly married husband-wife...he loved d thought...

...

maan sweetly - hmm bolo geet...

geet - aaj mumma apke bare me puchh rahi thi...

maan's heart skipped...a sudden fear of losing her filled his mind...

h barely could speak - wat did mumma say...

 

HEAVEN...!!!!!!!

 

D WORD MUMMA FROM HIS MOUTH GAVE D MOST HAPPIEST MOMENT EVER...

SHE JUST LOVED DIS MOMENT LIKE ANYTHING...

geet heartedly - mumma hamesha kehti thi ke geet..tum meri parachhayi ho...

maan smiled..feeling a bit relief of fear..but still fear was dere...

geet continued - mumma ne kaha ke mere har fesale me wo mere sath hai...

maan's heart calmed in relief...

a sudden fear made him numb..but d words soothed his heart like painbalm...

a lovely smile lingered on his lips...

maan - me dar gaya tha geet...ke mumma kaise react karengi...

geet - maan aap...

maan - say it again

geet - say wat...

maan - my name...

geet smiled - nahi kahungi...

maan - kyu..kaho na...

geet - mere muh se kyu sunna hai...

maan - tumhare muh se achha lagta hai...

geet - mujhe chane ke ped par mat chadhayiye...

maan confusingly - chane ka ped..matlab...

geet rolling her eyes... - i meant ke jhoot mat kahiye...

maan - plz geet...kaho na...

geet smiled naughtily - ek shart pe...

maan - shart...okkk...shart kya hai...

geet - mujhe chocolate chahiye abhi...

maan smiled...he knew...she can put on dis conditions..

geet - kya huva..mr-i-m-such-a-dude...

maan - apni ghagara-choli wali shopping bag check karo.ms-only-i-can-win-d-bet...

geet immediately ran to shopping bag...

geet screamed in happiness...yeppyyy

maan loved dose expressions of her...

he could imagine her happy face...

it reminded him of d 1st time he saw her...dancing in d rain wen she won wid dose children playing football...

maan - ab bolo...

geet naughtily - kya...

maan - wohi jo mene tumhae bolne ke liye kaha tha...

geet again - kya kaha tha...making innocent expressions...

maan loved her naughtyness...but it teasing his senses...

he so much wanted to hear his name from her lips..n here she was teasing him...

maan - tum bol rahi ho ya nahi...

geet - par kya...

maan - geet..!!!

geet - MAAN...!!!

MAAN SMILED FULLHEARTEDLY...

...

 

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SPOILERS : call not over yet...ahem ahem...


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 March 2012 at 12:55am

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Awesome update..
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Wonderful update... Have no idea from how long I have been waiting fir ur update.have already read this FF n number of times...never got bored!!!u pls update it regularly dear...take care
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