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                 Part 40



aftr breakfast...
maan made his way directly to d sight...
but b4 leaving...he made sure wen d dr.malhotra is cuming...n insured dev to b dere n handle everything...

dr.malhotra entered KM...
only to find dadi sitting wid annie n dev in d whole having deir cofees n doing stuff...
dev receieved dr...
dr.malhotra - bachhee kahan hai...
dev rolled his eyes - uncle..aap dadi maan ke check up ke liye aaye hai..remember...
dr.malhotra - offcorse...
dadi - aayiye dr.malhotra..kya lenge aap tea aur coffee...
dr - dadi maa...im fine...toh..aap ke pati kaise hai..
annie in shock...

d situation was...mr.malihotra was 1 of d best frnd of maan's dad...aftr his death...mr.malhotra did keep a very good relation wid d family...n so was deir family dr...
dadi rolled her eyes...
dadi - aap fir bhul gaye..unhe guzare huye 12 saal ho gaye...
dr - ohh i see...to batayiye...hmm..beti tumhara check up karna hai..kitni baar kaha hai..ice-cream jyada nahi khate...
annie confusingly - ji mera nahi dadi ka check up karna hai..aur aap ne mujhe kab bataya ice-cream na khane ke liye..
dev - uncle..dadi ka check up jaldi kijiyena..aap ke aur patients b honge...
dr - bilkul sohil...chaliye..jaldi se muh kholiye...
dev - uncle mera naam dev hai..sohil nahi...
dr - sahi kaha ajay...par aap logon aaj ka mere ghar pe kaise aana huva...
annie totally understand wat is dr's problem...
dadi - dr.malhotra ye hamara ghar hai..aur aap yahan humare check up ke liye aaye hai...
dr - ohh m sorry...avinash ka phone aaya tha subah me...
dev - uncle avinsha nahi maan bro...chaliye chaliye..dadi kamre me chaliye...
...
dey didn't gave any chance for dr to speak further..taking him to room for check up...
...
dadi laying on d bed halfly...
dr - ohh no..me instruments lana to bhul hi gaya...
dev gave d bag which he kept beside him saying - ye bag shayad aap hi laye hai...
dr - ohh..thnq manish...
annie was killing herself laughing on dev's situation...

aftr check up...
dr - dadi..aap apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhti...

till d date...dadi might hav million's of time told him dadi she is not dadi but aunty...but gave as she came to know ..rather dan calling different names...dadi vil b obviously better...

dev - uncle..kuchh tension wali baat to nahi hai na...
dr - bilkul hai rejesh...sangeet ke sare dath kharab ho gaye hai...ye kya thik hai...
annie - sangeeta kaun...
dr - tum yogita...aaj se chocolate band...
dev rolling his eyes...
dev - uncle abhi apne dadi ka BP check kiya..uske bare me babayiye..hum yogita ke dath thik karva denge...
annie slapped his arm...
dr - ohh haan...inke BP normal hai..par she need to b more health conscious...unka sugar level bahot jaldi gir jata hai..i need to talk to sagar...
dadi rolling her eyes - dr.malhotra me thik hu..aap maan se kahenge to woh kham kha pareshan ho jayenge...
dr - thik hai..but u kids hav to b more carefull about her food...
annie n dev looked at each other in shock...
did he just call us kids...kids..????????????
dev joined dr till he reach his car...
dev - uncle kuchh pareshani wali baat to nahi na...
dr - jay beta..tension mat lo...ankita ke dath jaldi thik ho jayenge...
dev bang his head on d car...
waving him bye..

...
went back in mansion calling maan...
maan - yes dev..dr uncle ne kya kaha...
dev - uncle ne kaha ke ankita ke dath jald hi thik ho jayenge...
maan - wat...???..dev..
dev - aap unhe change kyu nahi kar dete bro..150000 naam rakh liye mere...dadi se kehte hai ke muh kholo...aur annie se keh rahe the ke ice-cream khana band karo..dath kharab ho gaye hai...
maan - u know d reason dev...
dev - yaah i know..unhone kaha ke dad ka BP to normal hai..par sugar level change hoti rehti hai...we need to b more carefull...
maan - ok..i vil talk to him personally...u take care..i vil meet u all at dinner...
dev - ok bhai..u too tc..
hanged up..

...
its 3:30 pm
maan entered through window...
did mishty need to remind all which window talking about...
ofcorz d window of geet room...roflll
geet was rolling on d bed in deep sleep...
maan rolled his eyes..." ese sone ke alava kuchh aur b aata hai ya nahi..how stupid of me..aata hai na..bakbak karna..plans banana..how variative..."
...
maan sat beside her...
she was sleeping on her tummy...
her hairs were all messed up covring her face...
maan gently tucked dem behind her ear..to hav a clear viw of her face...
he moved closer slowly calling - geet...
geet made a annoying face..rolling on bed...
maan again called litle loudly - geet...
geet in sleep - sone dona...
maan smiled carrasing her hairs softly - utho na jaan please...
geet making baby face in sleep - sone dona baba...
maan shokk his head smiling...
kissed her hairs gently...
n left...

...
aftr sum time...
geet woke up only to find a note below her pillow...
her face brightened wid smile...

" jaan(geet smiled)...

so finaly uth gayi..tumhare sone ka aur mere aane ka timing hamesha same kyu hota hai(geet made baby face)...aur miss.kumbh-karan ko uthana b to aasan nahi(geet made gol-gappa face)...achha gussa mat karo...me 6:30 tak tumhare ghar ke pass aa jaunga..be ready(geet made questioning face)...wat..??...shopping..remember(geet jumped on d bed sitting)...etna hype mat ho..abhi time hai 6:30 ke liye..b ready..ok

tumhara ... "

geet banged her head on d bed...
"ohh shttt...me kaise bhul gayi..ohh goddd..ohh no...ghar pe dinner hai to mumma mujhe shopping ke liye allow nahi karengi...wat do i do now..."

her head started spinning...dinnet or shopping...mumma vil not let her miss dinner...n at any cost she cnt miss d shopping...wid her love..no ways..she cnt afford it...
wat to do
wat to do
suddenly a plan entered in her evil brain...
geet immediately called nisha...
nisha - bol geet...i was hell bored 2day..wat did u do...??
geet - khud hi baat karegi..ya me kuchh bolu...
nisha - achha baba bol...warna tere pet me dard shuru ho jayega...
geet - nishu sunn na..its importnt...
nisha - on a serious note...bol..kya huva...
geet - sun me jaisa bolti tu waisa krna ok...
nisha - 1 more plan...hav u decided to break all records of being evil...
geet - ho gaya...
nisha - achha bol..kya karna hai...
geet - abhi 15 min baad tu mujhe phone karegi...
nisha - ok..
geet - i vil purposely put it on speaker...
nisha - ok..aage...
geet - aage...hmmm...giving a evil smile...

...
...
5:45
rano - beta...wo log aate h honge..get ready now...
geet - yes mumma...
her phone rang...
geet purposely put it on speaker...
person - hellow..mam...i hav a great offer for u mam...m from xyz company..can i hav ur sum time to talk...
geet immediately cut d call giving a innocent smile to rano...
rano find her weired...

her phone rang again...
dis time she checked..ok nishu...
she put it on speaker...
geet - heyy nishy..wats up...
nishu - hi..
geet - kya baat hai..y r u sounding so low...
nisha - kuchh nahi..bas tabiuat kharab hai...
rano gave a corcern look...
geet - omg...uncle auty ko bol ke tujhe hospitak leke jaye...
nisha - actually mumma papa dono bahar gaye ek business party me..der se aayenge..
geet very caringly - nishu..tu akele kaise rahegi...
nisha - wohi to...mujhse utha b nahi ja raha..kya tu yahan aa sakti hai..kuchh der ke liye..jab tak mumma papa nahi aa jate...
geet sadly - me aana to chahti hu..par kya hai..ghar pe dinner hai aaj..so...
nisha - its ok..nupur b bahar gayi hai..chal me rakhti hu...
rano - nahi beta...
nisha n geet both gave a evil smile... 
rano - geet..wo teri best frnd hai..dinner humesha hote hi rehte hai..par abhi ussi teri jarurat hai..ja jaldi ja...
geet - par mumma agar wo log...n papaji..
rano - me sab sambhal lungi..dekh 6 gaye..jaldi ja...
nisha - thnq aunty

...
geet immediately went to her room...
dancing...balle balle..oyye balle balle...
nisha - to ba..plan kya..jaldi ghar aa...
geet rolled her eyes - shut up..tere ghar aane ke liye ye sab plan nahi tha...
nisha - matlab..i thout u dnt wann attend dat boring dinner dats y...
geet - tu bas etna kar agar ghar se phone aaye to sambhal lena...bye sweets..c u tom...
nisha - geeet...
geet - byeee

...
geet entered in d car...
maan - wow..geet on time...
geet - aye lo..me kabhi der karti hu kya...
maan - achha ab chale...
geet - mene kab mana kiya...
maan start d car...
while driving...
geet - me aapke sath 1st time travel kar rahi hu na...
maan smiled - yes...
geet - aapko travel karna achha lagta hai...
maan - haan b aur na bha...
geet - ye kaise jawab hai...
maan - i mean..kabhi kabhi achha lagta hai..aur kabhi kabhu unwantedly b travel karna padta hai...
geet - okkk...aapak fav vacation spot kya hai...
maan thinking.." miss.bakbak ki oral test shuru o gayi..."
geet - bolo na..fav spot for holiday...
maan - switzerland and malesia
geet - mujhe b switzerland me time spend karna achha lagta hai...aur shopping..i lve london for shopping...
maan smiled...
geet - shopping se yaad aaya...hum abhi kahan ja rahe hai...
maan - shopping...
geet rolling her eyes - wo mujhe b pata hai..par kahan...
maan - anamika khanna ke pass
geet eyes poped...
maan - etni badi badi ankhen karogi..to bahar aa jayengi...
geet slapped his hand...
maan - ouchh..let me drive na...
geet - hum normal wardrobe change kar rahe..i thout v vil go sum mall...hum shadi ki shopping nahi kar rahe...
maan - i know dat...
geet - to fir..y designer collection n dat to anamika khanna...she is no 1 in famous designer list allover india...
maan - i know..i puposely called her to hav a visit here wid her designer cloths...
geet - aap pagal ho kya...
maan - no...
geet - hum mall se b shopping kar sakte..anamika..dat vil cost a lot...
maan instantly stopped d car in a jerk...
geet got scared...
maan glared at her angrily...
geet - i mean..
maan - u mean wat..??
geet - aap mujhe dara kyu rahe ho...
ohh godd...how vil i ever b able to get angry of her...her stupid innocent blabber alwz make his anger vanish like thin air...
maan smiled..again strt d car...
geet - aap ke mood ka to pata hi nahi chalta...
maan - adat ho jayegi...
geet - achha aap...
maan stopped d ar..n looked at her...
geet - ab mene kya kiya...
maan - kuchh nahi..hum pohoch gaye...
maan came out...opening door for her...
geet too stepped out...

n both made deir way to anamika's collection...
d hall was like pin crop silence...
not even single person deir excpet dem...
geet hold his hand tightly..looking here n dere...
maan smiled..." miss.darpok "
anamika joined dem...her eyes were just sticked on maan wid firting eyes...
geet pulled him a bit near to her...
maan smiled noticing her possessiveness...
anamika - its a pleasant to meet u sir..m felt very honourable dat u choose me...
maan - can we see d collection...n i vil prefer if nobody vil disturb me n my partner...
anamika - ofcorse...plz dis way...

anamika helped de to collection area..n left halfheartedly...
...
geet - aap ko usse jyada baat karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...
maan smiled - ok baba..nahi karunga...
geet - ankhen dekhi..aisa laga..abhi kha jayegi...
maan - tum ho na..mujhe bachane ke liye...
geet smiled...

dey were about to strts deir selection when dey heard a knock o door...
maan - yes...
waitor - sir..vil u prefer..coffee or sumthing...
maan looked at geet..
geet - two capuchino..plz..
waitor left..

maan started glancing his looks on various designer dresses...
every dresses was like awesum in its own...
every single piece was master...wid delicate n standard designery work...
all dresses...lolll
geet made a baby face...
she dnt hav any knowledge about dresses...
she silently sat on sofa sipping her coffee..
letting maan choose dresses
maan smiled..n started selecting of his own...
...
geet sipping her 4th coffee...
maan still selecting dresses...
geet - aap ab bass b karenge...jitne dresses apne choose kiye hai...utne to mall me nahi honge...
maan - aur tum b ab bass karo..dis is d fth coffee...dis much habit is not good...
geet just realized its her 4th time...
maan smiled at her ignorance...
finally geet pulled his a bit away from dresses
maan - kya huva...
geet - mene kahan ab bas ho gaye...do u even know how many dresses u hav selected...
maan - i didn't count...
geet - ye designer cloths hai..aap ko andaza b hai...how much dis all vil cost...
...
maan in a jek twiested her wrist against her back...
geet moaned in pain... - ouchh...
maan nagrily - dare u talk again about money between us...
geet wid closed eyes...
her painfull expression on her face made her face bright red wid stress...
maan loosesned his grip...
she opened her eyes...
maan caringly took her wrist near to his lips..kissing it gently...
geet smiled blushingly...
maan caringly - dard ho raha hai...
geet shook her head in NO...
maan - mene tumhe car me b mana kiya tha na...
geet making baby face - sorry...
maan smiled - plz geet..dobara aisa mat kehna...m i a stranger..??
geet hugged him...
tears rolled out of her eyes...
geet - how can u b a stranger for me...u r d only 1 in dis whole world who is mine..just mine...
maan hugged her back..loving her simple but special words...
dey sudenly break d hug when dey heard d knock...
person - sir..do u want anything else...
maan - i think..we almost done wid our shopping..only last dress is remained from bride section...in dis time..u pack all dese dress..make it fast...
person kept staring at him in shock...
person - sir..r u sure..dis all...
geet gave ahiding smile...
maan gave him a stirn look...
person scaringly - i mean sir..dey r more dan 80 pieces...all designery...
maan - do u want me to talk to anamika about u...
person - sorry sir...dere is d bride section..i pack all dis dresses in few moments...
...

maan n geet reached bride section...

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SPOILERS : bride section..wat is d reason..?????????????

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                 Part 41



maan hugged her from back..loving her simple but special words...
dey sudenly break d hug when dey heard d knock...
person - sir..do u want anything else...
maan - i think..we almost done wid our shopping..only last dress is remained from bride section...in dis time..u pack all dese dress..make it fast...
person kept staring at him in shock...
person - sir..r u sure..dis all...
geet gave ahiding smile...
maan gave him a stirn look...
person scaringly - i mean sir..dey r more dan 80 pieces...all designery...
maan - do u want me to talk to anamika about u...
person - sorry sir...dere is d bride section..i pack all dis dresses in few moments...
...

maan n geet reached bride section...
maan - i vil prefer if nobody vil disturb us till we cum out like b4...
person - as u say sir..hav nice time...
d person left locking d door behind...
geet - hum yahan kyu aaye hai...
maan - football khelne...
geet - really...??par football kahan hai...
maan rolling his eyes - geet i was kidding
geet - so was i...achha ab batayiye..hum is section me kyu aaye hai..hold a sec..r u planning to marry me soon...
geet gave a naughty smile...
maan smiled..pulling her by waist naughtily - wat if i say yes...
geet - yah right..ab batayiye...
maan - brij ki shadi hai na..in sum weeks...
geet looked at him in shock...
maan knotted his eye-brows...
geet - aap ko har baat kaise pata hoti hai...
maan - hoi hai jo mujhe chupke se akar tumhare bare me sab batata hai...
geet confusingly... - sum 1 spying me..??
maan rolled his eyes - no silly..
geet - to fir kaun...
maan gazing har deep brown eyes...
maan - tumhari ye ankhen...
geet blushed a bit...
maan - omg..m i dreaming..tumhe sharmana aata hai...
geet annoyingly - aye lo...aap ko to har waqt mujhe chhidhane me maja aata hai...
maan naughtily - " kuchh aur b hai..jisme mujhe maja aana chahiye..."..maan leaned towrds her...
geet gave a angry but cute expression...
maan - dress choose kare...
geet - jo hukum mere aaka...
maan shook his head moved towrds various peices...
maan took a baby pink n voilet combi ghagara-choli...dragging geet in front of mirror wid him standing exact behind her...
n tried to make out how it looks on her...
geet looked at mirror only to find maan staring at her...
geet pulled her eye-brows upward asking him how it looks...
maan nodded negatively...
maan went to choose another making her wait in front of mirror only...
to cum back aftr a min wid another beautifull peices...
a red n green combi sharara..very beautifully designed..wid very light n delicate dupatta...
put it on her to check out...
geet smiled...finding d dress quite nice...
but maan nodded negatively...
geet rolled her eyes...
geet - ye to achha lag raha hai...
maan - nahi achha hai..m in search vid d dress which vil look perfect when u vil wear it...
geet - i vil look perfect aftr wearing it...
maan - no..u r perfect...d dress vil b prefect aftr it vil b worne by u...got it...
geet smiled lovingly - achha to ye kaise hai...
maan - no..i didn't like it .
maan again went to choose another 1...

only to find a deadly combi ghagara choli...
it was a dark blue(like her night suit) n white combi ghagara choli...
very beautifull designed...wid white choli..wid light blue designes..n whole blue wide ghagara wid heavy white n blue designing...
it looked flawless...any1 vil b mesmerized by its beauty...
only 1 peice wid dis deadly combination...

maan put it on her...
it looked like d dress was specially made for her...
she seemed more beautifull dan ever...
maan was just mesmerized by d combination of her white milky skin wid d blue dress...
geet looked at mirror only to fidn maan staring at her lost totally...
geet kept looking at him from d mirror...an unknowingly got caught in his gaze...
she didn't dare to tear d gaze...
both were just totally lost in each...
like dey know every breath of each other...
who vil believe its just 1-2 weeks dey meet each other...
it semed like dey knew each other from ages..was just waiting for each other...
nothing could b more beautifull dan having each other locked in gaze...
...
maan stepped a bit closer to her from back..unknown to himself...
geet shivered as his mere closeness his her like current passing through her vein...
...
even maan didn't came to know when his finger unknowingly ran to her neck from back...
gently carrasing her hairs..moving dem sostly in right hollow on her neck..to expose d bare part of her back...
geet let out a small breath...
geet closed her eyes as d skin of his finger touched her back...
it seemed thrilling...
yes..dey did..dey did kiss each other on cheecks...dey did held each other in deir embraces when d fear of lossing each other entered in deir blood poisoning deir blood...

but 2day..it was sumthing different...
like d another phrase of luv...called passion...
deir was passion..deir was desire...deir was right..like dey possessed each other...
he never asked her for anything..just did it...
she never protested him for anything..just accepted it like d most beautifull part of her...like dey owned each other...
maan finger started moving from her neck..gently down..carrasing her smooth n silky skin gently yet sedusingly...
his every single touc made her reach to d edge of insanity...
his fingers slowly ran down till d hook of her dress...
geet arched her back like she want him to close d mere gap between dem by him hugging her from back...other dan sedusingly her..killing...
but he didn't...
he lost his senses so did she...
her heart skiped several beat as his finger slowly unbloted d hook of dresses...
she felt blissed...its heart dat only know wat she feels wid his small touch...
how his skin effects her...like it spoils her senses...making her foeget everything...
she didn't care of anything...nothing in d world came to her mind just dan her prince who is a inch away from her...
dey never confessed wat dey feel for each other..nither dey pruposed each other...
nither dey dependent of dose 3 magical words...
dey relationship is much more deeper which cnt be expressed with just 3 words...
at dat moment..all dey knew was dey r each others..forever...
...
in his wildest dream..he cnt afford to loose his princess he found sum days b4...
but it feel like he cnt breath wothout thinking of her...
he cnt smile without her words...
his sleep in useless until he was her sleep..his sleeping beauty...
...

he didn't even came to his senses to know...his finger started unzipping her d chain of her dress slowly slowly increasing her heartbeats like hell...
she shut her eyes more tightly..as he unzipped her dress...
a feel of completeness hit her heart like a blossom of fress flower...
like an innocent rain drop touching her intarnally...
his touch enetered her body like oxygen..ripping her heart..making his place in it...
...
both were beating faster n faster...
like dey wanted to feel each second of dis moment...
like dere in no tomorrow...
maan finger fully unzipped her dress...
geet was thoutless..she shud blush..or smile..or any other emotion..she is not aware yet...is dere any other feeling to b filled at dis moment...she didn't knew..she never sum 1 so close even in her dream...but it happened...
she opened her eyes...only to fid maan's eyes lost in her..wid love..love n only love...
like he is feeling goosebumps watching his effects on her face...
geet softly smiled..lowering her eyes...
maan inched a bit closer from back...
only to hit his broad musculine toned chest to soft milky skin of her bare back...
geet moaned in pleasure...still looking down...
was was totally lost in d beauty of his princess..his 1st n last princess...
even in his dream..he never think of any gal in last 24 yrs...neither he cared...
but 2day..sumthing was different..like he was hypnotised by her love...

...
his finger started carrasing every inch of her back..making her skipping beats...
his finger touch..explored every single beat of her bare skin..making her his..writing his name on her..owning her for lifetime..making his signature...
n he actually did...
geet felt thrilling goosebumps as she felt maan is writing sumthing on her bare skin sumthing wid his smooth skin of index finger...
geet let out a hard breath concentrating on d alphabets he was tressing on her skin...
aftr concentrating fully...
a soft smile teased her lips wid her eyes again closed...as she understood wat he wrote...

...M A A N...

" MAAN "...a soft whisper slipped out from her lips wid love n blush oozing out of her closed eyes n expressive face...

maan heard d whisper...a smile of love filled his lips..his heart throbbed as he heard his name from her mouth...he never felt his name can sound so beautifull from her mouth...
he felt his name got d real meaning...
YES...she came to know d name of her prince...everything between dem happened like most beautifull fairytale any1 had ever read...
like a prince appeared fromd cwrowd..found his princess n stolen her from dis world to his loveland foreven..just two of dem...
she would hav never thout dat in such beautigull way she vil cum to know his name...
unlimited names she gave to him..mr.possesive..mr.attitude..mr.chocolaty..mr.khadua..mr.dusht..blah blah...
but now she knows..whose she...
she is MAAN'S GEET...
MAAN KI GEET...
...
her body went thorugh unlimited shivers as his face n his gaze moved near to her bear back... 
her heart started panting...wid pleasure n very different feeling she never experienced ever b4...
...
maan's hands slowly made deir way towrds her waist...softly grabbing her into him..making her bare back more near to him...
she accpeted eveything he demanded...
everything he wished..she gave in willingly...without any coplain...wothout any condition...
she didn't even to see his face..neither to know his name..until he himself tells her in his most beautifull way...
way else she needed...her love is dere with her n she trusts him blindly...
he is her prince..only he...
dats all she needed to know...
n she knew it
...


SPOLERS : ...MANEET ? ? 


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sooo happy to see you back in india forums... have been waiting for your updates... but i have read these parts from face book... pls update all the remaining parts asap... thanx for the PM... continue sooon

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love the part ...pls con soon

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heyy dis is not mishty...
m mishty's frnd aknksha...
as u all know she is busy wid exms...
dats y m posting dese scene...
dese all r written by her..m just posting

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loved t...
well reading ur story in fb and leaving my comments there dear...

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