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Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment...
Here is another update for you all...
Just Part 55 now!!!! 
 

* Part 55 *

 

B4 she could fill further...

her door knocked...

she immeditaely put d slam book in safe place n opened d door..only to find her wud b

 

bhabhi LEHER standing in front of her wid a big smile...

 

geet - bhabhi..aap..kaise hai..

leher - me bilkul thik hu...aap kaisi hai geet...

 

both proceed towrds hall continueing deir chit-chat...

geet - i wud love to...

leher smiled - thnx geet...ab chale..hum sham tak jaldi aa jayenge...

rano - bachhiyon..chandni chauk me jyada mat ruk na..wo area etna safe nahi hai..jitni

 

jaldi ho sake utni jaldi wahan se nilkal jana...

leher - dnt worry mumma...hum chandni chauk ja hi nahi rahe..baki areas me dekh lenge...

rano smiled...

n both gals left...

...

 

gals were about to sit in car...

geet suddenly remembered maan..."..wo to 7 baje tak aa jayenge..promise jo kiya

 

hai...aur me.."

she checkd time..

4:10pm

geet - umm..bhabhi..hum kitna baje tak vapas aa jayenge...

leher - 7-8 baje tak aajayenge...aaj sirf haldi wali din ki sari sekect karni hai..aur

 

uspar jewels...dats it...

geet - umm..bhabhi..hmm 7 baje se pehle hi sara kaam pura karke vapas aa jayenge...mujhe

 

jaruri kaam hai...

leher - ok..7 baje tak jitna hoga utna karenge..aur fir nikal jayenge...

geet smiled - thnq bhabhi..

leher smiled...

 

...

in office...

maan called adi in...

adi - yes sir..

maan - meeting kitne baje shuru honewali hai...

adi - sir...30 min me shuru ho jayegi...

maan - ok..me importnt points discuss karlunga..baki tum handle kar lena...i hav to leave

 

soon...

adi - any importnt matter sir...

maan - dnt get serious adi..its nothing related to work...

adi - ok sir..i vil mange very well...

maan - u can go..

adi - sir..if u dnt mind..can i ask u personal question..

maan - hmm..ask...

maan - now-a-days..u look happy..i mean m really happy to see dis sight of urs..we never

 

seen ur smile ever b4..dats y...

maan - adi..wen a person gets a reason to smile..he smiles...n wen dere is no..a person

 

cnt smile unneccessarily...let say..i hav got a reason to smile...

adi smiled - right sir...

maan - anything else..

adi - no sir..

maan - den go adi...

adi laughed - he he he...ok sir...

 

...

5:15

gals surrounded by unlimited sarees all around...

roflll

geet - bhabhi..i think for haldi..green vil look vey perfect combination...

SM ( service man) - absolutely right mam...

leher - par geet...normally haldi ke function yellow colors dress up karte hai..

SM - u r also correct mam...

geet - dats my point bhabhi..jo sab karte wohi kyu karna...we shud try sumthing

 

different...

SM - wowww..wat a thought mam...

leher - par geet..agar log mupar hasenge toh...

SM - valid point mam...

leher - how about dis saree...

SM - very pretty mam...

leher - mene geet se puchha...

SM cleared his throat...

geet giggling - bhabhi..thi hai..par kuchh maza nahi aa raha...dis is only yellow

 

color...i think we shud take two colored saree...yello n any good color wid it...

SM - ok mam...

he showed dem all combination of yellow dey hav in deir shop...

geet - ..see bhabhi..ye achhee hai..yellow wid green...dis is lovely...

SM - ya dis is really pretty mam...

leher rolled her eyes - geet eski embrodery kafi motti hai...kuchh najuk work ki

 

dekhiyena...

SM sat beside dem thinking..." yahan khade rehkar mere pav tut jayenge..par ladkiyon ki

 

choice...heyy bhagavan...i better sit..."

 

leher - mujhe lata hai..ye achhee hai...yellow wid red..lovely combination..wat a bloody

 

red color...

SM - mam..nice choice...

geet - par bhabhi...

...

...

...

6:00 pm

leher - nahi geet...wo jo mene pehle chhose ki thi na..wohi jyada achhe lag rahi

 

thi...

SM - put his hand on his forehead...

geet - mujhe bhi wo green wali kafi acchhee lagi thi...omggg...bhabhi barish bhi

 

shuru ho gayi..ab bahot traffic ho jayega...

leher - par in dono me se kaunsi lu...

SM - can i say sumthing...

geet+leher - vil u keep ur mouth shut for sum time...

SM thinking.." wen did i spea...galsss...oughhh..."

 

geet - bhabhi..dono le lijiye...best option...

leher - arre haan..mujhe kyu nahi sujh...

geet - suniye..ye dono packs kar dijiyena...bahot der ho gayi hai..aapne kiti time waste

 

kar diya humara...

SM in shock - mene..??

leher - aur nahi to kya..ye dono sareeyan sabse pehle dekhi thi humne..tab bol nahi sakte

 

the..yahi achhee hai...

SM - right mam...thinking.."..ladkiyan sach me etni irritating hoti hai...mera 1st day

 

tha aur bhagwan aapko in dono aafat ko hi bhejna tha...m fainting now..."

 

geet - jaldi..we dnt hav time...

 

...

6:20

in conference meeting...

maan - gentle men..i hav quite given u enough info..rest vil b proceeded by adi..i shud

 

take a leave now...

clients - ok mr.khurana...thnq for ur time...

maan hand-shaked n left...

 

...

6:35

jeweller shop...

geet - bhabhi..abhi to pohoche hai..ab plz thoda jaldi karte hai...

leher - ok..barish hai na is liye..warna etni der nahi hoti...

SM - wat kind of jewels u wud like to see man...

geet - bhabhi...diamond is quite typical now-a-days...i think u shud see sumthing

 

exclusive in pearls...

leher - i think u r right...lets see both...

 

SM showed dem sum exclusive sets in pearls wid collection of neck-peice , ear-

 

rings..bangles..arm-peice , ring , mang-tikka..n payals...

geet - woww bhabhi..dis is an amazing peice...

leher - i know..par saree par suit hoga..m not sure...

6:45

SM showed dem sum more collection in pearls n diamond mix...

 

leher - dis is just beautifull...

...

 

7:00

M HERE MAM...

said maan d moment he enetered through window...

but no response came...

maan searched in room...

NO GEET..LOLLL

 

"..ye ladki bhi na..mujhe bulaya aur khud kahan hai...ghar me hogi..ab use kaise batau ke

 

me kamre me aa gaya hu..."

maan sat on bed confortably...

looking here n dere...

he den realized..he never sae her room neatly...

he started moving in room...

his eyes fell on a cute teady-bear n which was nicely sitting in 1 corner on her dressing

 

table...

he picked it up..."..lucky u..geet ke kamre 24/7..."...MAAN SINGH KHURANA talking wid a

 

teady-bear...roflll

...

his eyes fell on d front mirror..dere was sumthing written wid lip-stick..very small

 

letters...

maan read it carefully...

" LOVE IS IN D AIR "...MAAN SMILED...ye ladki na bilkul pagal hai...

...

moved further...

cup-board...maan opened it...

it was all messed up..."..geet..wen vil u learn to tidy thing..."..he shook his head...

he was about to close it..wen suddenly fell on a earing..dere was only 1...his pair was

 

missing...

it was d same earing..whose another part was wid maan...

maan suddenly remembered dere secong meeting...in d lift..wen he got dat earing of

 

hers...

he smiled...

" usne abhi bhi ese sambhalke rakha hai..."

he picked dat earing up n replaced it wid dat other earing which was in his wallet...

...

he smiled on himself for being so childish...

but he loved too...

 

...

he closed d cupboard...

n moved further...

only to find her study table...

 

"..etna time ho gaya ..kahan hai ye ladki..ok..jab tak wo nahi aati..tab tak me hi search

 

shuru kar deta hu...waise bhi sara kaam mujhe hi karna hai..kaam jaldi khatam ho jayega

 

to uski bakbak sunne ke liye bhi waqt mil jayega.."

...

he instantly sat on d chair n started goggling all d importnt info required for

 

project...

 

...

7:30

uff bhabhi...dis stupid traffic..i hate it...

she thought of calling him..but no signal...roflll

leher - geet...bas hum adhe ghante me pohoch jayenge...

geet - bhabhi..1 hr late...i vil dead...

leher - aisa kaya jaruri kaam hai geet..ke 1 ghante ki bhi deri nahi chalegi...

geet - umm..wo..wo actually..haan wo mujhe project kaam karna hai...kafi kaam hai aur aaj

 

last date hai...esliye..

leher - woh..m sorry geet..aap pehle bolti to hum kal jate shopping ke liye...

geet - its ok bhabhi..aap ko aur bhi bahot sare kaam honge na...esliye mene mana nahi

 

kiya...

leher - ab shant ho jayiye..bas 5 min me hum traffic se bahar nikal jayenge..aur fir

 

kuchh der me ghar...

geet just nodded...

she was going insane wid d thought wat if maan had left..NO no..HOW VIL SHE DO D PROJECT

 

ALL ALONE..ON TOP OF DAT..SHE WANTED TO SEE HIM..SPEND TIME WID HIM..SHE HERSLEF

 

KNOWING..DAT PROJECT WAS JUST A EXCUSE TO MEET HIM...

...

 

8:5

geet banged open d door of her bedroom...

only to find maan resting comfortably on her bed..reading a novel...

geet increased heartbeat..dur to constant running..started calming...

she immediately closed d door..locking it...

maan didn't look up..though he very well knowing she had entered d room...

geet still standing near d door..calming her heart beats...

she looked at him...

he didn't once see her..instead very keanly kept reading d book...

geet started walking near him making baby sorry face...

maan still didn't look up...

he was so enjoying it..but couldn't smile...

he showed his foul mood allover...

geet sat near him...

maan coulkd feel her smel..her vibrant scent..her drug like smell filled into his

 

lungs...making him more addicted to her...

...

he slowly looked up..only to find she was just mere inches away for him...

her hairs n body was litle drechtched...

he understood..she must hav run thorugh rain..his childish sweetheart...

...

but in dose wet looks..she looked so beautifull..so flawless...at d same time...sexy n

 

breathtaking too...

her wet body was hugged to her pink dress..she was wearing...

her litle messed wet hairs..were seducing him like hell...

he let out a high breath making her know how her presence affects him...

her heavy breaths were killing him...

he noticed a litle sweat line above her lips...

geet could make out his gaze above his her lips...

his thumb automatically started running slowly towrds her lips...

d moments she looked at him...

he rubbed his thumb dominantly above her lips..wiping d sweat...

she let out a effecting breath..making him know..wat his touch do to her...

...

his gaze moved from her lips to her eyes..

he looked deep into her eyes...

she made a baby sorry face..pleading a sorry wid her eyes...

he didn't give a damn n said.."..dry urself..warna thand lag jayegi..."

she made a baby face..

n did as he said..

she took a towel...n stood infront of mirror wiping her hairs...

as she looked up in mirror...

she saw him standing right behind her...

b4 she could understand wat is he up to...

he turned her in a jerk...making her hairs hit his face...

he looked at her wid peirceing eyes...

like his gaze could burn her...

she looked at him wid a baby face...

he took her 1 hand into his strongly...

she looked at him wid questioning face..wat is he doing...

he took her hand near to his face..n wiped dose droplets who hit him via her hairs...

she looked at him..like his dominance vil kill her 1 day...

how much she loved him being owner of her...

d way he show his rights..it just breath-taking for her...

he slowly ler go her hand aftr wiping his face..

but didn't move...

she kept looking at him trying to read his eyes...n founf his eyes continuousl looking at

 

sumthing on her face...

n in another second...she founf his lips..just below her left eye...drinking dat small

 

water drop..which was touching her...

but he caught dat drop in betwenn his lip..n licked it...

she closed her eyes in anticipation...

he moved away from her skin only to find her eyes closed...

he didn't smile..he just kept looking at her like an unknown urge of feeling dat just

 

born in him...

...

she slowly opened her eyes...

only to find no maan...

she looked surround...

he was again sitting on d bed...reading d book...

she shook her head..n dried herself...

 

...

aftr drying she slowly made her way to sit beside him only...

geet - aap naraz ho...

maan - ...

geet - aap kab aaye...

maan - ...

geet - wo achanak bhabhi aa gayi aur mujhe apne sath le gayi...unhe kuchh shopping karni

 

thi...

maan - ...

geet - mob me range nahi thi..warna mene aapka phoen try kiya tha...

maan - ...

geet - bas ek his ghanta late hu...

 

maan eyes became litle angry...thinking.." ek ghanta aise bol rahi hai...jaise 1 min

 

bol rahi ho..ab isse kaise batau...ek ghanta eske bina kitna bada lagta..."

 

geet - man me badbadane ki bajay mujse baat kijiyena...

maan smiled a bit..tried to control a lot.but still his lips curved a bit into a small

 

smile...

 

geet smiled..giggled watching his efforts for controlling dat smile...

..

maan looked at giggling geet...

both looked at each other for a moment trying hsrd to control d smile...

but both burst out into laughter...

geet laughing like anything...

while learning to giggle...learning to laugh...

...

watching him smile fully for d very 1st time...

geet's heart jumped in happiness...

...

aftr controlling d laughter sumhow...

both cmfortably sat in front of each other...

geet holding her stomach which started to ache due to so much laugh...

while maan staring his antic peice...

maan - m still angry...

geet looked at him cutely - maan sach me...traffic ki vajah se late ho gaya...warna me

 

jaldi aa jati...

maan - u hav to try litle hard...

geet suddenly stood up from bed...n ran out of d room...

 

maan watched her all surprised.." ab kahan challi gayi..uff ye ladki bhi na.."

b4 he could complete his blabber...

he again saw her running in jumping on bed...

maan - geet dhire...chot lag jayegi...

geet jumping on bbed..sat comfortably in front of him...

he looked at her wid question mark..which meant..wat r u up to...

geet making cute face..showed him a big chocolate in her hand...

raised her hand further...

maan didn't give a damn...

geet smiled...

opened d chocolate n again raised her hand further..making baby face...

...

maan stiil didn't melt...

geet suddenly came forward n sat on his lap...

maan chuckled wid her sudden closeness...

b4 maan could understand...

she was on his lap...

both looked at each other from mere inches distance...

geet very sensuously took 1st bite of chocolate...nibbiling it..rather licking it..wid

 

her eyes which kept maan kaptive to her...

maan's throat went dry..d way she nibbled d chocolate...

he looked at her lips..n den back to her eyes...

his eyes were filled wid emotion...

he didn't dare to break d gaze...

geet slowly moved d chocolate near to his...

his lips automatically parted...n took d bite from d same place where she nibbled...

...

though geet started it wid a naughty thought thinking..dis way she vil reduce his

 

anger...

but son her naughtyness turned into a sudden desire...

n both were totally got lost into each other...

...

geet hypnotycally took d next bite into her mouth from d same place where maan

 

did...

...

bites tunred into nibbles...

nibbles tunrns into licks...

n licks ti further...

...

d session continued wen d last bite came...an it was geet's turn...

geet winked at maan making him know dat SHE WONNN...

maan chuckled wid her wink...

his naughty princess in bcuming more n more naughty day by day...

n geet took d last bite..

wid a victorious smile on her face...

maan gave her an evil smile..making her know..dat its him WHO WONNN...

...

b4 geet could understand how did he win...

...

she found her fingers into his mouth..n maan licking into sensuously...

geet closed her eyes loosing herself in his spell...

maan licked her lips..n let d finger cum out of his lips...

geet opened her eyes blushing only to find dat WINNING SMILE on maan's face...

...

she made an baby angry face..looking away

she completely forgot dat she is sitting on his lap...

...

maan looked at her angry face lovingly...

n taking d advantage..in a jerk..slipped his hand over her waist...pulling her to fall on

 

him...

...

n she found herself falling on him...

 

...

 

SPOILERS : 1 more entry cuming soon...

 

 

 

 
 
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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AMaing update, i hate hameer and hope to see maan soon knows sees how hameer is possesive of geet.