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LOVE...beyonds...LIMITS thread 1 completed !! - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow first love letter it just awesome ,amazing, wonderful yaar
loved it !!!🤗
cont soon

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When do we get the next update dear?
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                 Part 33


IN GEET'S FAMILY...
all came to conclusion dat d environment to b kept is as usual...
b4 1 vil ask her anything...just behave as if nothing happened...
n be sum more protective about her...

geet reached college around 8:30
to find mayank nisha annie nupur n ranbir staring at her angrily keeping her in d mid...

geet - wat..?????????
mayank - just shut up...
nupur - ek shabd muh se nikala na toh...toh...mayank kuchh bolo na...
geet rolled her eyes...
mayank - to me bol raha tha na..tum bich me kyu aayi...
annie - geet..tu mere 1st day pe nahi aayi...
ranbir holding her arms tight - ye kya stupidity hai geet...agar jyada chot lagti toh...
geet - ranbir - im not stupid...
nisha - u r a stupid...a big stupid...
annie - dnt call my geet stupid...
geet smiled...
annie - she is just hav sum mental prob..nothing else...
geet making gol-gappa face...ran behind annie...
hurting her feet again...
mayank holds her gently - geet..daud mat...aaj aaram kyu nahi kiya...
geet - mujhe bahot bore ho raha tha...
nupur - toh yahan pe kya laddoo baat rahe hai jo aa gayi...hoyyeee...
mayank rolling his eyes - nupur...
nupur - mr.mayank sharma...aaj mujhe ankhen dikha rahe hai...
mayank pulling her in hug in front of every 1...
mayank - meri etni majal...mrs.sharma...
nupur blushed as all started to whistle...tease her...
annie looked down...acting as if it doesn't effect her...
geet remembered maan...d way she blushes wen maan looks at her..loves her..care for her...
she already started to miss him...
1 week...ohhh nooo
ranbir held her by arms making her sit properly...
nisha so got used of it dat it doesn't effect for her eyes dat much...but still kills her inside...
annie thinking.."y all relationships r so complicated...
y d person we love..loves sum1 else...
n knowing dat..still we fell in love wid dat person...
y d love is so hurting..."

...
geet thinking..." love never hurts...u can experience d love wen u r truly in love wid sumbody..love never hurts...love is love...in every way..."

nisha - lec ke baad ka kya plan hai...
both annie n geet snapped out of deir thouts..cuming back to reality...

...
d day went like hell for geet...
she had all her lec...
all frnds wid her..doing chit chat...which she alwz loved...
still sumthing was missing...
like her heart is not wid her...
it sumwhere far in london...
she wanted to see him...
"..ek baar dekha unhe..aur 1 week na dekhna intazam b kar liya unhone...dusht kahinke...waise etne dusht b nahi hai...par mujh eunki yaad aa rahi hai uska kya...par kaam b to jaruri hai na..geet..tum apna khali dimag mat chala..."
...
geet ran to her cupboard...
take out d letter..reading again...
its d 13th time she is reading it from morning onwrds...
...
she kissed d lttr..hugging it tight..
like she is hugging him...

...
she ran to cupboard again...take out a key...n opened d locker...
to take a book out...
a big book...not normal book...
but a very special slam book...

"wen u r in love..."

she opened d book...
all she could see was his face..everywhere on d book...
it felt magical...

his/her name - ...
(i dnt know his name yet..so let it b blank..)

his/her bday - ...
nahi pata...let it b blank...

zodiac sign - ...
nahi pata...let it b blank

option cuming...
...
no...
...
no...
...
...
"aye lo...mujhe to unke bare me..kuchh b nahi pata..."
...
1st ltr from him/her - ...
dere was bid space for it...
geet sticked d ltr on d place...kissing it lovingly...
...
geet layed on her tummy on d bed...
thinking of him...
its just 3rd day..her life just seemed to revolve around her mr.hide n sick...not hide any more...
dose clouds started to vanish slowly slowly...
she smiled of her own thouts...
" jaise jaise...me unhe..unki chhoti chhoti baton..unki aadaton ko..janti jaungi...tab tab ye book fill karungi...wo din jarur aayega..jab unki zindagi har razz yaha kaid hoga..mere dil me...unhe samajhna etna aasan nahi hai...dis stupid limb hav fallen in love wid d lion...like a twilight... "
...
she hugged d book tightly...
closing her eyes gently...
" aapko janana hai..samajhana hai...us pal tak pohochna hai..jahan hum dono ke darmiyan kuchh b nahi hoga..na fasla...no waqt..na koi takrar..na koi jhoot..na koi raaz..na hi sans...bas aap aur me...meant to b..."
...
VIL MY DREAM CUM TRUE...or m i dreaming sumthing very much...
...
she took d spread around her...hiding inside to land up in her dreamland wid him...
...

PRECAP :......hmmm...MN_naughty...:P :P

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
 

Me 1st 
Awww Geet's missing Maan ðŸ˜³ ; please bring him beck so that our lovely princess can know her prince more ðŸ˜›
Friends convo was nice 

Loved the update 😃& all the best for ur exams ðŸ˜Š ...
Edited by drashsree100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part 
loved it 
pls cont soon
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                 Part 34


she hugged d book tightly...
closing her eyes gently...
" aapko janana hai..samajhana hai...us pal tak pohochna hai..jahan hum dono ke darmiyan

kuchh b nahi hoga..na fasla...na waqt..na koi takrar..na koi jhoot..na koi raaz..na hi

sans...bas aap aur me...meant to b..."
...
VIL MY DREAM CUM TRUE...or m i dreaming sumthing very much...
...
she took d spread around her...hiding inside to land up in her dreamland wid him...
...
only to find rajji sitting n her tummy in d morning...
geet screaming - rajjiii...
rajji - di...8 baj gaye hai...utho abhi..warna me nahi uthungi...
geet annoyingly - tere pass abhi b waqr hai..mere uthne se pehle bhag yahan

se...warna...
rajji shouting - veerji...
geet - kya hai...veer ji ko kyu bula rahi hai...
rajji - kyunki ek wohi hai jinki bate tere dimag me ghusati hai...
brij enters...
brij - bachha...abhitak so rahi hai...ab fir se colge ke liye der ho jayegi...
geet - veerji..aap mujhe drop kardo na...me abhi tayyar hoti hu...
brij - thi hai..jaldi niche..m waiting...
brij leaves...
rajji killing herself laughing...
geet - ouhhh...i hate u...
rajji - i hate u too...now get up fast...
rajji leaves...

...
maan still sleeping...
geet didn't let him sleep whole night...
geet - maan uthiye...
maan - geet sone do na...
geet - maan dekhiye subah ho gayi hai...aap ki meeting hai thodi der me...
maan - i hate u...
geet - i hate...
b4 she could complete..maan pulls her in his embrace on d bed...
her wet curly hairs makes his face wet wid sudden pull...
geet fall on him...
maahi*...
maahi*...
maan - khabardar jo dobara kaha...u love me...most in d world...
geet - to fir aap ne kyu kaha...
maan - mene kab kaha...
geet - maan aap ne abhi kaha...
maan - kya baat kar rahi ho..mene nahi kaha...
geet - jhute...aap ne kaha...
maan - nahi...
geet - haan...
maan - nahi...
geet - ha...ha...ha...
maan pulls her more...hugging her tight in his embrace...
geet blushes...
maan strts pulling her closer for a kiss...
...
knock knock...
maan alone on d bed...kissing d pillow...
roflll...
" ye ladki...me din me b sapne dekh raha hu..goddd...m missing

her...geeet...ohh no..meeting..."


...
aftr lectures...
nisha - goshh..lec din b din aur boring ho rahe hai...
ranbir - tu mujpar line marna band kare to tera class me dhyan lage...
nisha - ha ha..joke of d day...
mayank - guys kal...
nupur pinched him...
singalling not to say anything...
annie - kal...???
nupur - kuchh nahi..mayank puchh raha hai ke kal lec ke baad jaldi ghar jayenge..no

timepass...
geet - kyu...jaldi ghar kyu jana hai...
nisha - kal kuchh hai kya...i dnt remember...
nupur sighs in relief...
mayank - nwz...me chalta hu..mujhe aaj thoda kaam hai...maa ke office b jana hai...
annie didn't like dat...she hardly get time to spend wid him...
nupur - mayank mujhe b chhod do na...me b chalti hu...
...
geet thinking.." ab me pura din kya karungi...wo b nahi hai..m missing him...i hate

london..."

...*** ...

mayank - tumne mujhe mana kyu kiya...
nupur - kyunki mujhe kal sirf tumhare sath time spend karna hai..no dis chiller

company...
mayank - lekin kal humare relationship ko pure 3 saal ho jayenge...dey all vil ask for

party...
nupur - unhe yaad b nahi hoga..parso batayenge n den v vil hav partyu...but not tom..tom

only u n me...
mayank - as u wish mam...ab chale...

...
9:30
geet,ranbir,nisha n annie on conference call...
geet - kuchh to khichadi pak rahi thi...nupur ka face dekha...
nisha - me bol rahi hu..kal kuchh to hai..par yaad nahi aa raha...
annie - shayad koi special day ho...bday..ya kuch aur special...
ranbir - ohh no..kal to unki anniversary hai...
annie faints...lol
geet - arre haan..kal unki relationship ko 3 saal ho jayenge...
annie cums to conscious immediately...lol
nisha - aaj b wo din yaad hai...jab mayank ne pure colge ke samne nupur ko prupose kiya

tha...
geet - kaun bhulega...pata hai annie..unhone ek play me part liya tha...aur last

scnene me unhone on d spot stage par sare dialogs badal diye...sabko laga dey r playing d

drama...but actually dey were pruposing each other...

annie - dey both r very sweet...
ranbir - eska matlab..kal nupur aur mayank ne kuchh plan kiya hoga...jarur nupur ke farm

house wo dono time spend karange sham me...
nisha - wowww..romantic dance...cake...candles...flowers...
geet - to hume b bin bulaye mehman ki tarah waha jaana chahiye...unki band bajane..it vil

b dead fun...wat say...

annie - nupur vil kill us on d spot...
ranbir - arre darne ka nahi...it vil b rocking fun...
nisha - par vaat kaise lagayange..koi plan...
...
...
...

? ? ? ?
mayank n nupur on farm house...
d farm house deciorated beautifully...
mayank n nupur sitting near pull side...
nupur sitting on mayank's lap..talking non-sense as usual...
mayank listening to her bakwas like a good bf...staring her lovingly...
...

all d gang hiding in 1 corner...
whispering...
nisha - chale..andar...
annie - atleast cake cut karne do dono ko...
geet - ya...cake ke bad dono dance to karnge hi..
ranbir - tabhi band bajayenge...hume nahi bulaya party me...
...
nisha notices a cockroach near her feet...
nisha screams...
awww...
but ranbir grabs her mouth immediately...

nupur n mayank strt looking here n dere if dere is sum1...

geet - abbe kya kar rahi hai...
ranbir patting her head - abhi pure plan ka band bajha deti...
annis - hai..dey cut d cake...
nisha - dey started dancing..lets go...

...
PRECAP : VOLUME KAR KAR...pappa jag jayega...:P :P

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Woah !!! Me 1st again ðŸ˜²  
Maan kissing his pillow ðŸ˜†
The entire gang trying to gate crash Mayank Nupur's 3rd anniversary was too good ðŸ˜†

Loved the update ... ðŸ˜Š
Edited by drashsree100 - 12 years ago