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                Part 17

 
[ maan n geet still in party..dat is maan is still in his mask..so dnt get confused dat she saw  him...she has not seen him yet...thnq ]
 

maan n geet...
dey were still in each other's arms...
enjoying d beautifull moments of having each other...
d soft theme was adding it up...
maan's hands still on geet waist...while geet' hand still snaked maan's neck...
dey never needed any question to ask.to query to solve...
dey knew each other by deir heart...
d magic has been created far ago.which no 1 reduce now...
dey had to b each other's..dey thout...
eyes were locked in each other...
...
maan naughtily - waise tumhara naam kya hai GEET..?????
geet - mera naam...
she took out her hands from his neck immediatly...so his hands almost loosened on her waist...
she made her gol-gappa wala face - aye lo...apko to mera naam pata hai...or me awehi soch rahi thi ke...
maan - awehi...?????

she innocently nodds her head...
maan romantically - kya soch rahi thi...
geet blushingly - wo me...aap ne mujhe chocolate kyu di...
maan - kyu tumhe acchhee nahi lagi..lao vapas karo...
geet innocently - par wo to mene kha li...
maan - hmm..to ab...
geet making face - me apko apki chocolate vaps kar dungi...
maan - thik hai..mujhe abhi chahiye...
looking at her lips...
geet noticed his gaze...she blushed wid his ownership on her...
he was so confident wid his love in his arms...
he never asked for anything..he just did it taking her for granted...
being owner of her...she loved dat too...
she again lost in her thouts getting lost in his eyes...
...
d best of his is his dominance...nahi unka haqq jatana..no his strong body..nahi unka soft nature...no his gentle touch...she was puzzled..everything about his is best...
he softly whispered in her ear - d best part about me is my lady love in my arms...
she shocked..how cum he know wat was going on in my mind...
ye such me magic man hai...m sure...
to kya inhone meri sari bate sun li..ohh godd...me kitni duffer hu...kab se man me badbada rahi hu...
maan again whispered - i love dat too...
she closed her eyes tightly in disbelieve...
he read my mind...
is he human or...heyy babaji...ye mera man kaise padh rahe hai...
he kissed on her forehead softly...
she smiled wid her eyes closed...
she was so tempted wid his touch...
she was almost drived to another world...
her lips and cheecks turned more pink...

she slowly opened her eyes...
She slowly opened her eyes...
looked front...
he was disappeared...
she looked around...
he was nowhere...he was vanished like everytime...
she got restless...where is he gone...
she didn't even ask his name..didn't even see his face...how stupid is dat...
she patted her head...
he again came like fresh rose...n went away making her life blossom...
she wanted to see him...dnt know y but she felt as if he is still dere...
staring from a corner...
she searched him allwhere...but didn't find him...
she sumwhere didn't like it...
she was angry...angry on him..or herself..for not asking anything about him...
but wen he cum in front of her she dn't feeling like asking anything..just wants to feel him...just wants to live dat moment...
her head was spinning in millions of questions...
jab agli baar milenge na..me baat hi nahi karungi...haan...she decided...

par hum kal hi pehli baat mile the...agar wo dobara mujhse nahi mile toh...mene to kuchh puchha b nahi...she scared...
ek kaam karti hu..jab ghar jaungi na..to sawalon ki ek list bana dungi...matlab mujhe aage problem nahi hogi right...she again decided...
par mujhe kab pata hoga wo mujhe kab milenge..iska matlab mujhe har waqt wo list apne sath rakhni hogi...she wonedere...
dis question ...
dat questions...
she was lost still standing at d same place...
ranbir came from back putting his hand on her shoulder...
she snapped out of her thouts blaberring - list ka idea cancel...
ranbir puzzled - kaisi list...konsi...me kisi list ki nahi janta...
geet confused - wo me...actually ...
ranbir - tune kitni pi ...
geet rolled her eyes...
ranbir - tu yahan akele kyu khadi hai...tera partner kahan gaya...bechara tera gussa dekhke bhag gaya na...
n started running...
geet ran behind him - ranbir ke bachhe...
ranbir still running- me ranbir ka bachha nahi hu..ranbir hu..geet tuze koi galatfaimi hogayi hai...
geet too running- aaj me tuze nahi chhodungi...
...
she was running...
suddenly somebody near a corner pulled her towrds himself...

he pulled her close..pinned her hands on supporting wall...
she was scared...eyes tightly closed...
maan was completely lost in her scared face...
he slowly left her 1 hand...n carrased her cheek...
her scared face calmed...
she knew its him...
her eyes were still closed...
her cheeck tunred pink wid his fingers carrasing her cheek...
soon his finger ran from her cheek to her lips...
spoiling her lipstick at d croners of her lips...

geet shivered wid his touch...
his fingers rubbed her lips totally spoiling her lipstick...
he wanted her to open her eyes...
she slowly opened her eyes...
she was blushig wid his touch on her lips...
she whispered - mujhe laga aap chale gaye...
maan smiled..whispering - bina tumhari izazat...
she blushed more..she loved d way he made her feel special...
he moved closer...
tucking her strands behind her ear...
she was moaning wid his moves...
his another hand was still pinning her 2nd hand behind her waist...
he whispered in her ear - tumhe satane ka haqq sirf mujhe hai...samajhi tum...
...
she blushed like anything...
hiding 2 spark in her eyes...
...

precaps : 1st gift...yeppyyy

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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all dose who want me to pm dem..........can send me frnd request........
thnq........
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
love u mishti..............full update with just maaneet..................i loved it.............the way he dominates her surrendering and making her feel special @ every step................oh god wats the first gift.............cant wait for it.........i am sure u r not going to update the next scene..............oh god mishti u r making me mad for this ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..........loved it
pls add me to ur pm list 😳
Edited by siroilily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update luv it..! but please upddate soonn..! sont test our patiende na plzz..! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
great misty no words but while u giving precap pls at thes ame time give link for us to go back also plsssssssssss i mean the recap episodes of urs.......
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it yaar
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
""his another hand was still pinning her 2nd hand behind her waist...
he whispered in her ear - tumhe satane ka haqq sirf mujhe hai......samajhi tum...""
Maan is soo much possesive for geet.......☺️☺️
loved that........
precap is interesting first gift   WOW!!!
update soon..........😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update ..
so romantic...
Angelic why not showing maan face for geet...
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

im in search wid star for ranbir's chrctr....i guess rajiv is not at all suitable n i dnt hav any photo collection of his.......

........
so can u guys suggest me sum names for ranbir's chrctr........
 

hey u can chose angad aka iqbal khan
or samrat aka mohit from mjht,
prithvi aka gourav khanna from love ne mila di jodi........