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nazsij Senior Member
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
now they r one.wow beautiful.
she is so innocent.he is also so soft.
i loved it.simply beautiful.

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
love how he manofy  her
super mindblowing update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
their climax Maan held her close in his arms'he kissed away her tears' 'Geet did I hurt you shona ?' 'Hmm actually mujhe pata nehi tha aisa hota hai..Mills and Boons mein dard ke bare mein kuch nehi likha hai'' Maan smiled at the thought of her innocence'any other woman would have said she wasn't hurt 'but Geet was different and that's why he had surrendered himself to her' 'Geet are you prepared for this journey with a brute? I am not even your dream man'' Geet suddenly kissed him on the mouth'it was sloppy kiss but it was sincere' 'ap kya bol rahe ho? I am yours Maan ki Geet'  Maan was amused 'Kya kaha Maan hmm' he made a fake stern voice'. Geet blushed and hid hemself'she had found her dream man' 'Geet I love you'' Geet had nowhere to hide she was in his arms again'.he stroked her head and cradled her to sleep'.

          Maan Singh Khurana  a man whose success quotient was discussed throughout the country had at last found his love'and he knew even if he were to drown Geet would save him'.she was here to breathe a second life into him'he hoped his parents were here to see their bahu'.

love this part
it was romantic & passionate one my dear
beautiful song
finally they became one
pls cont soonnnnnnn
love it core
 

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
simply nicely written

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
awsome..supreb

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Wow nice update. Ur really master in writing maneet romance.Wink

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
loved both the updates 14 and 15.......................

the way maan expressed his love infront of the whole world was awesome.............

finally they expressed their love and have become one soul..................

dev's entry not sure wat to expect from it...............hope he is not after geet..................

waiting to know how the immature geet becomes mature and her journey with maan

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