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SAAVAN---A journey Together !!!

maris08 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 December 2010
Posts: 7163

Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Dear all below is my first attempt to make a collage of our beloved Saavan...
Accompanying it is my signature poem,of my journey along with them..
Hopefully you all like them both and enjoy ..Thanz for taking your time to read this postBig smileWinkLOL
SAAVAN---A Journey Together
We will grow old together slowly
Like trees reaching across an old stone wall
Entangling roots & crossing slender branches
Till one can barely tell which comes from where
You are now part of my life wholly
As the music thats often played in my heart
Shaping the surrounding to its beauty & glory
Mirroring the sanctum of its source and course
I have realised all this slowly
As saavan you've enraptured & enthralled me magically
Like the sun ever rising & setting over a tranquil valley
You both have filled my heart and core more than it could hold
PS: Kumar waiting for a suitable shayeri from you, for this collageEmbarrassedBig smile

Edited by maris08 - 28 February 2011 at 1:39am

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-Jahnvi- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 August 2010
Posts: 9787

Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
A beautiful collage accompanied with beautifully written poemClap. Would love to see more collages from you, Maris!!

PS: Kumar, I'm also waiting for your shayari on thisWinkLOL

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Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 January 2011
Posts: 4107

Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged

Superb collage,Maris!!!Clap 

The poem is awesome. Aptly described......n simply charismatic... Day Dreaming
Eagerly waiting, for a befitting shayeri, from Kumar

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keaun Senior Member

Joined: 01 November 2010
Posts: 248

Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
lovely collage and a beautiful poem

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..-Niru-.. Goldie

Joined: 06 October 2010
Posts: 1460

Posted: 28 February 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
lovely collage !!!
splendid poem !!
maris !! u really make my day !!!

kumar ..... i guess we all r waitin !!!!Wink
chammak_challo IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 December 2009
Posts: 5529

Posted: 28 February 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
really nice collage maris ! Clap kumar we're waiting for your shayri Embarrassed

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kchitra77 Goldie

Joined: 18 August 2010
Posts: 1296

Posted: 28 February 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
wow superb first time collage Maris n what a touching poem...beautiful...Kumar its ur turn to surpass Maris...come on...

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Mr.Zk Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 1609

Posted: 28 February 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged

Maris Wonderful Collage...U have Created Wonderfully...And a Very Heart Touching Poem...Lovely Maris...Clap

I am Very thankful to all of you for asking and waiting for my Shayeri...I am going to miss you all a lot...And Can say this Forum is Excelled the Talent Hidden in the Forum Members...Thats why I love this Forum and All the Members....U all are Truly Awesome..The Most Beautiful and Amazing People Which I have never Met in My Life...U all always Stay in My Heart Ever and For ever..Love you all...

Here are My Shayeri for this Wonderful Collage and to the SaaVan Whom We are Missing a Lot...Hope u all Like it..Thanx For Being with me in SaaVan Journey...

Ye Dil tere liye beqarar aaj bhi hai,
Meri aankh ko tera intizar aaj bhi hai,
Tu aayegi ye umeed hai mujhe'..
Tujh ko pane k liye ye tera deewana aaj bhi hai. ..

Humare zakhmo ki wajha bhi woh hai
humare zakhmo ki dava bhi woh hai
woh namak zakhmo pe lagaye bhi to kya hua
Muhabbat karne ki wajah bhi to woh ha

Tum(SaaVan) Hamaare dil mai rahengee ek yad bankar,
Tere lab pe khilengee muskan bankar,
Kabhi apne se juda na samjana,
Hum tere sath chalege aasman bankar.

SaaVan Ke Liye Har Dil Yisa Thadapta Hai Aaaj Se (At least Me)

Kaun ho tum?
Jo Hamaare dilo-dimag par
Is tarah chh gaye ho

Kaun ho tum
jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

Kabhi door lagte ho , bahut door
Kabhi paas , ekdam paas
Pal men hota hun khush
Pal men udas.

Hari ghas aur hari ho gai hai
Aur neela aasman aur bhi
Neela ho gaya hai
Phir bhi kuchh hai
Jo kho gaya hai.

Kaun ho, tum
jo Hamaari  neend udathe ho
tum jo Hamaara chain churate ho

tum jo Hamaari  dhadkanon men sama gaye ho
tum jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

kaun ho?
Kaun ho tum

Edited by ZZkumarZZ - 28 February 2011 at 8:19am

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