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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

There is nothing as in,con on the same phase,
Don't change the plot u have drafted.
plz con soon.


Hey Dia,
I didn't understand your first phrase Ouch
Thanks a lot for encouraging me and I'll continue soon Smile.



Luv u all<333
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
PART 10 on PAGE 13
PART 11

Now that Rahul and Muskaan were gone, Maan prayed for their safety and he was happy. Now his coast was clear.

In the other side, Geet felt happy for them yet sad for herself, she would have to leave in Rahul's house alone. Not that she was afraid but she didn't like staying alone. She would have stayed somewhere else but for now she couldn't risk to go there. She had to wait for Vivek to gain his conscience.

What will the next day bring in their lives?

Unlike other days, Geet felt really low, she was never used to stay alone but now she had to as she was away from very important persons in her life. The following day, she went to hospital and resumed her duty.

Meanwhile, Maan had a first full plan ready in his mind with no loopholes. He was going to take each and every step slowly and wouldn't do anything in haste as it would only create more problems for him.

As usually, he wanted to torment Geet, with his touches and kisses. Somewhere, he still thought that he could effect her and if he really effected her than it would be to his advantage. He was fully going to use it.

When she came in his view, he quickly yet secretly held her arm and pulled her in the fire scape. Geet sighed knowing there was only one 'psycho' in the whole hospital. "What is the problem with you Dr Maan Singh Khurana" she spitted the words, clearly showing her despise.

"You are my problem Dr Geet thus I want to warn you, be aware" he said evilly and was about to place his lips on her but was stopped.

Geet placed her hand on his chest and smirked "I thought last time was good lesson for you and I also wondered if you will be ever able to produce baby" she taunted him.

"Geet" Maan yelled at her insulting words.

"Don't Geet me, as I know my name really well" she grinned fully and was about to leave when Maan pinned her to the wall. His arms on each side and barely any space between them.

His eyes were showing pure anger whilst hers were showing more intense anger than his. It felt like, if given a chance, they would have killed each other with eyes.

As he was going to claim her lips forcefully, her pager beeping. Instead of his forceful kiss, she forcefully pushed him away and looked at her pager. Looking at her pager, the color drained from her beautiful face, she was looking pale like a ghost.

No matter how much he hated her but seeing her like this he as worried. "What happened?"

In another side of the world, two lover were involved with each other, forgetting the rest of the world "Rahul, let's go out and have breakfast, I am tired"

"As you wish princess" he said smacking his lips on hers and then freeing her, he took her in the bathroom, the jacuzzi was filled of red roses.

He placed her on the hot water that he filled when he woke up, few minutes before her. He joined her in the jacuzzi and hugged her. Muskaan gasped feeling them touching skin to skin.

Rahul smirked and placed his lips on her neck then moved to her lips, while roaming his hands on her waist and were not. "Rahul" Muskaan moaned, feeling the sensation in her body.

"I *kiss* so love *kiss* you Muskaan" Rahul said between the kisses.

"I love you too" Muskaan said back whenever she pulled back from him, just to be pulled back.

"let's give each other shower" Rahul suggested huskily.

Muskaan blushed but kissed on his cheek. They soaped each other, touching each and every part. Rahul felt really hot while soaping her at few places meanwhile Muskaan felt the same but felt shy. Rahul smiled at his shying bride. Not to control themselves in the between, they made love to each other once again.

"I am tired" Muskaan said, placing her head on his shoulder, once they came out of the jacuzzi. Rahul scooped her in his arms "how about I order, the breakfast in the room".

Muskaan nodded and closed her eyes. Rahul placed her on the bed and ordered the food before wearing clothes. Muskaan had already changed and was laying on the bed. By the time, the  bell rang, Rahul had worn his clothes and went to open the door.

He collected the food and closed the door. He placed the food on the table in the middle of their lovely hall. Rahul went near Muskaan, only to realize she had dozed off. He made a promise to never exhaust her. She slept without having breakfast. He laid next to her, while hugging her and giving her a kiss. Eventually, he too dozed off along her, without having breakfast.

By the time, they woke up, the breakfast was cold and it was lunch time, Rahul immediately ordered it knowing his wife was hungry. "Are you still tired baby?" Rahul whispered while caressing her hairs.

"No, only just a bit" she said, placing her head on his stretched arm.

"I am really sorry, because of me you are feeling pain" Rahul said, with his eyes moist.

"shh" Muskaan said placing his finger on his lips "It is ok, I am just not used to all this, it will take a bit time" she said the last bit shying.

Rahul said "but still I will make sure that you are not so exhaust to sleep when you are hungry" he kissed her on her forehead. He knew if she was hungry, she couldn't still unless, she was dead tired. Muskaan smiled looking at him, feeling really touched. She kissed him back on his forehead.

After that, Rahul laid the food on the table as soon as it arrived, they fed each other along kisses and enjoying each other's warmth of arms.

In the fire scape of Sanjeevani hospital, Maan asked again looking at her pale face "What happened?"

"Vivek is critical" she said in a barely audible tone. If something happened to him how was she going to do for what she came here. "no he can't die, not until I allow him" saying this she rushed out of the fire scape but before her Maan had rushed out.

They both joined the Operation Theater with a difference of a second. They operated him, till the last breath. Geet wasn't ready to give up on him for several hidden reasons and Maan wasn't ready to give up because he loved Vivek as his own brother.

After hours, Vivek was stable and if the operation was really successful with not other effects than he would gain his conscience soon.

As Vivek was back to life according to their diagnosis, neither Maan nor Geet were ready to leave from there.

Even the next day, he hadn't come back to his sense. Maan and Geet were waiting impatiently.

Unfortunately, Geet received an urgent call and had to leave halfheartedly but she would tackle this situation later.

On the other side, Maan observed her leaving and was relaxed. From the past few encounters of Geet and Vivek in coma, he had understood that Vivek had some fear regarding her thus it would be better if she was to stay away from him, specially when he was going to come around.

After an hour, Vivek gained his conscience. Maan ran to him and hugged him "I am so happy to have you back Vivek bhai" He said happily.

"Maan please take me away from here, she... She... Ridhi... Geet will not leave me" Vivek said choking on his words. The main reason that he gained his senses was because of his fear to Geet. All the words she said when he was in coma were still fresh on his mind.

"But bhai, you just came out of coma, you need rest" Maan tried to reason with him.

"no Maan, please take me away from here" Vivek pleaded him but when he still hesitation on Maan's face, he said "please, swear on me, take me away from here"

Maan closed his eyes, having no other option but to give in. He helped Vivek out of the hospital.

Meanwhile, Geet was parking her car when she saw Maan taking Vivek away in his car "WTH, how dare he walk away". Geet was really angry, so angry that she could kill anyone. Without giving a thought, she gave life to the engine and followed them and also called someone.

"Maan, see she is following us" Vivek was scared as soon as he saw her in the car behind them.

Even though, Maan was confused with Vivek's behavior but let it pass thinking it might be traumatic for him to have seen his friend dying.

Not so late enough, a few car stopped them so Maan had to apply breaks. "Sh*t! I am gone" that was the last thing that Vivek murmured.

Vivel reluctantly came out of the car, accompanied by Maan. "Why have you stopped us?" Maan asked with a frown. CBI cars were parked in front of them, for sure they were supposed to be afraid and shocked.

"Mr Vivek, you are under-arrested for making a fraud in Mr Arjun Gupta's company account before your slipped into coma" A cop, around 25 years old, announced him this.

"But I didn't this is a lie" Vivek shouted at the false accuses.

"Oh of course, those accusations are right" Geet said with a grin. The police took Vivek away, leaving a shocked Maan. He was belwiered to see this. "Has even Vivek cheated with me? not this can't happen' he was appalled.

"so nice to see you here Mr Khurana" She said with a smug smile "oh and by the way, he hadn't done any fraud in my company but he will stay in the prison all his life because I have all the necessary proofs" she giggled as she was done saying it.

"you wouldn't dare it" he said in angry tone.

"I will dare it, doesn't it make equal, my brother in jail, yours in jail as well" she said laughed sarcastically.

"Vivek will come out as I will clear all the matters but let me assure you, I will re-open your brothers case and make sure that this time, he receive a sentence till death" he challenged her back, glaring at her, his words full of venom

Geet grinned and said coldly "we will see"

"Wait and watch Ms Gupta oh or should I say ex-Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana" he taunted her but in response didn't get any satisfactory response. In all the process, he forgot that he was to torment her, he wanted to take her off from Vivek's duty in a way that she would be humiliated, so much to face herself; but now Vivek was back to normal thus no use of his plan.

Giving a curt nod, she left him and went back at Rahul's home. Her goal was reaching closer, her brother's case was to be open again, she will make sure, he is out, no matter what. Concerning Vivek, yes she had lied but he needed to stay under custody. He wasn't arrested for those allegations but was arrested for the case itself.

She herself planned it, as she received a call, she picked it up "so what did he say?"

"he is ready to open the case" she said with a victory smile.

"So finally you got what you want" the other guy said with a smile as well.

"no not yet, Yuvraj" she replied curtly

"you are right. By the way, your plan worked, Vivek didn't know what he got himself into. He is actually arrested Arjun Bhai's case and not for the fraud, he will only get to know when the case will be re-opened' Yuvraj chuckled.


Who is Yuvraj? and what are they upto??

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Hey guys,
So Here is the the next part, I really hope you liked the part :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in April(Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).

IMPORTANT POINT: If you find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)


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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
nice part
awesome
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
awesome update
pull of riddles
waiting 4 u to open it slowly
maan and geet married
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged

Brilliant part...............but full of riddles!!!

wonderful update!!!!

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
actually lots of suspense and thrills.............
is it bcoz of maan arjun is in jail or is it bcoz of vicky..........
i think bcoz of vicky and his father and then maan just blindly believed them...........
cant wait for the next update
pl cont soon

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