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Memories of My Heart - MN OS Gallery (Page 12)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
beautiful ending
so sweet.
mayanks surprise was so sweet.
loved it.
fianally sharma family is complete.
plz start another FF soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Wao so beautiful So lovely Dear
mayank loves her too
Thank U so much for this beautiful Os dear
Thanks for Pm and write more

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
that was cutest update ever.....when you kept saying "was" i was like you better not have killed mayank or something!.....but the way mayank described his feelings was so beautiful....i was all teary while reading it....and the ending was so cute with their 2 kids reliving their snowball fighting days....thanks for a wonderful story Smile.......naina

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
This is extra ordinary writing! ishita........i just finished reading four parts together.......& i m speechless......it was so so so beautifully wqritten story! so simple yet so amazing! i absolutely loved it...falling for ur best freind is not a new story , but the way u wrote it made me imagine every single incident that was taking place in the story & sense every single emotion that Nupur was going through......I connected with the story immediately & that was the best part of ur writing!Ur writing to me to a whole new world... i was simply lost in to the words of mayank & nupur.Beautiful!

Excellent ishita.i m already in love with ur FF ...& now u opening this Os gallery made me even happier....i can now look forward to more & more great OS from u!!!!!!!!
ohh it was amazing! thanks a ton ishita...keep writing........& take careHug
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I was teary eyed when i read mayank's confession.................it was simply heart touching!!!!!!!! a special thanks to u for such awesome confession!


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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Tthis was really interesting,interesting because you've put some innovative things in it that gave it a fresh flavour.
i liked the countdown part very much and the house Mayank bought for Nupur was cute.
you depict Mayur so well...signs of an ardent fanWink
really loved the thing that you didn't delay the update at all
 
p.s - please update "memories in making" as soon as possibleEmbarrassed 

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 7:52pm | IP Logged

ishi di it was such a sweet os i cant tell you.wow i really loved how u started the story....it got me hooked....i read all the 4 parts in one goBig smilethat snowball hitting thing was wayyyy too cute....

and the way you maintained the pace of story.....
the feelings of nupur....her first realization....loved it to coreEmbarrassed
you know now i am really liking the whole concept of best friends falling in love after reading your osEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks a lot di for writing....you really are aa amazing writerSmileSmile
p.s.sorry for replying so lateOuch


Edited by acAasthamayur - 05 March 2011 at 1:58am

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

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Ishi congrats for our Mayur OS gallery(Dont b shocked yaar - of course its not only urs- its our gallery
- )

A big thanx 4 dedicating it to me and other friends
Love u loads dear.............


Any way finally u updated first part of this OS
U know what at first i copied it and then  paste it to MS Word- and i have found the first part become seven and half page---------------------yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m  really veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy happy now-bcoz i alwz love longgggggggggggggggggggggggg FF/OS/SS.

My joys knows no bound.............


Awwwwwwwww what a lovely start dear-u started with a snowy morning- ahhhhhhhh its beautiful na- i hav never  seen it i mean practically.
So my lil nups loves to play with snow- She was the only member of her family who was very excited abt i
t(Hey u also love snow na- and u r the only member of ur family who loves it. baat kya hai bhai. kahi ye tum tou nehi ho na???)

My lil nups wanted play with my sadu mayank but he directly refused her bcoz she is a girl LOL.-BY GOD mayu was fulltush Sadu.

Oyeeeeee Mayu said- he dont want to play with a girl bcoz they cry for every lil thing....


(Ishi itna bada insult............................main tou aise nehi hu- tu hai kya aisa)
OMG nupur got angry and she threw snow towards maynk.(Shabash i mean bravo Nups meri jhansi ki raani)

i loved this line when mayu caught her and smiled at her

""I had even wondered if the snowball had made its way through the ears to your brain and frozen it.""

finally he said sorry to her and they  had becme frnd 4ever- hmmmmmmm thats very good.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh no Mayus dad got transferred to California - it means mayur r going to separate.
Ishiiiiiiiiiii wanna kill u sure.

ok let me read next portion(actually i m reading and side by side commenting on it.lol)

Oh GOD both were damn sad- i can understand re.......

i loved the way they were trying to enjoy their last 3 weeks and cherishing all the happy moments
the gift part was very nice

but i loved the part where nups was reminding him abt his promises that he made for her.
awwwwwwww it was too good re- really touching

ohhhhhhhhhh so both them r now professionally successful- but the emptiness is exist b/w them bcoz they didnt meet each other 4 last 5 years.

hmmmmmmmmmm so here is the end of part 1
awesome ishi- mind blowing...........



Now waiting for part 2

(Sorry 4 my messy type comment and for using big size emotions. )
 
Thank you so much for the lovely comment my dear! And ofcourse, it will always be OUR gallery!! Hug

 

Dedication – No need to thank me for it Fari!! Honestly, I wouldn't have written this OS without all your encouragements! Luv u loads too!! Hug

 

Hun, this OS was 21 pages long (checked it just now on MSWord)! I told u when I started I thought it would be like 4 pages max. Even after I talked to u on cc, I never thought it would be more than 12 LOL! I'm glad u loved the fact that it was long though!! Big smile

 

 Snowy mornings are really a beautiful sight to wake up to! Yes, I love snow but this is definitely not me!!LOL I wanted something to get them together in the beginning!

 

Yup Mayu is a sadu but he did say sorry..

 

LOLLOLLOLYup typical rxn from Nupur…she is not one to just take in insult and be quiet!

 

U r such a cutie!!

I'm glad u loved the promises part!

 

"ohhhhhhhhhh so both them r now professionally successful- but the emptiness is exist b/w them bcoz they didnt meet each other 4 last 5 years." – Bingo!!


Luv u too! And I loved the emoticons! Hug

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

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Yayyy u updatedParty
HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

loved the first part... it was awesomeClap
the snow fight was adorableEmbarrassed
and their friendship was soooooooooooo cuteEmbarrassed

but what's disShocked
Mayank chala gayaCry
the last month together was so touching... specially the last day... Cry 
they didn't want to let go

awesome portrayal of emotions IshiHug

 
thnx for writing and sharing thisHug
 
 
Jiya!! HugHugHugHugHugHugHug
 
Glad to hear you loved the first part! Snow fights are fun!
 
I know it's sad but Sometimes you do need a separation to make the story interesting...right?Wink
 
Thank you for such a sweet comment!!
 
No need to thank me...I love writing abt Mayur!! Hug

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