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Some NivRen Scenes: Updated Scenes 36 and 37 (Page 34)

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Scene 20
 
They drove in silence with Viren in front wondering if he should say anything but knowing if he did Nivi would get out of the car in an instant. He kept his head straight as he drove and thought. He'd been about to get out of the car to open door for Yash when he saw Nivi coming out and was rooted in place. She had on a yellow saree again and he thought how beautiful she looked in that colour. Yash got in the car with his head in a book and then Nivi got in a second later. Viren quickly got out his sunglasses from his pocket and put them on not knowing what difference that would make and adjusted the rearview mirror so he could see her but she couldn't see him unless she leaned forward. Her head was still down, her hair falling softly around her and Viren thanked god for letting him see her today and be this close to her when he'd thought he wouldn't have the chance. He heard Nivi say she wanted him to take her to the market and his heart leapt again with happiness at the thought of being in the car with her for a while. Suddenly he realised he had to answer and Nivi was about to lean forward and feeling like an idiot he coughed and said it was ok in a very fake sounding fake voice. Luckily Nivi never noticed and he started driving towards Yash's College hoping no-one asked him anything else.
 
In the back of the car, Nivi was looking out of the window, lost in thought again. They drove by where Viren had stopped her last time and she realised absently she was wearing the same saree today. Well he wouldn't be there today she thought to herself, ignoring the fact that part of her was sad at the thought of not seeing him. She didn't know why she was still feeling like this when she knew all the reasons why she left were still there. No matter how much Viren said he changed and he loved her and no matter how much she wanted to believe him, it still sounded like the last time to her and she didn't trust herself to be able to tell the difference. She was still thinking this when Yash suddenly made a noise. Nivi looked at him a second later and saw his face was in his book again. She asked if he was ok and he said he was fine but nervous. Nivi felt bad that she hadn't been paying any attention to him and reassured him that he'd be fine and would do well with the amount of study time he was putting in. He'd had a smile on his face as she was talking but when she mentioned studying his face was worried again. She was about to ask him about it but they were at his college and he quickly got out saying 'bye di' and then saying bye in the drivers direction with a small smile. Nivi waved at him, still thinking he was acting strange and then the car started again and Nivi went back to staring out of the window and thinking she needed to spend less time thinking about Viren and the past and focus on the future.
 
Viren smiled out of the side of his mouth and gave a small wave that Nivi couldn't see to Yash as he left the car to go into the college. Yash had seen him a little while ago; Viren had taken of the sunglasses and was putting them in his pocket when suddenly he realised Yash was looking at him. He'd opened his mouth to say 'jiju?' but Viren put his finger to his mouth looking at Nivi in the rearview mirror. Yash understod and went back to his book quickly when Nivi turned around. As Viren drove Nivi to the market he wondered when a time would come that he could drive her there and everywhere and they would be laughing and talking as they drove...the thought made him sad as he again remembered Keshav's words. 20 days were what he'd had and a few of them were up already. Viren watched Nivi in the mirror and wondered what she was thinking as she looked out of the window. She looked far away, deep in thought and he wished he could ask her what was on her mind...was it him? They arrived at the market much too soon for his liking and Nivi, still pre-occupied, said in his direction that she'd be back in half an hour and left the car. Viren wondered what he was going to do next as he watched her walk away; he couldn't help but smile, thinking again how perfect she was.
 
Nivi walked through the open market getting the things that Dadi had asked for and anyhing else she thought they might need. It was a beautiful sunny day and she felt a little calmer now that she had something to do and focus on. She was pretty much done when she noticed some fresh carrots that looked perfect for making halwa with. Forgetting herself, she remembered how much Viren loved gajar ka halwa. She asked the stall seller to pack some thinking she would ask Vandana exactly how Viren liked it made. She was just about to pay the man when she realised what she'd almost done and what she was thinking and froze in her tracks. She felt a sharp pain in her heart as she thought that she coudn no longer make Viren anything at all and that she never would. She felt tears prick her eyes and as the stall seller asked if she wanted to buy the carrots, she shook her head and turned away. She made herself focus on the shopping and to give herself something to so, she looked through the bag making sure she'd got everything. She felt an even sharper pain and this time the tears poured out as she saw she'd bought a small bag of karelas for some reason when no-one in her family was very fond of them...she stuffed the bag to the bottom and wiped her tears angrily. She went to where the car was parked hurriedly, thinking to herself that why was it so hard for her to distance herself from Viren.
 
Nivi was coming back to the car with a bag full of things; Viren wanted to get out and help her but he couldn't and as he sat there, he thanked god that the windows of the car were slightly tinted so that he could look at Nivi but she couldn't see him. He watched her walk towards him and felt his heart beat faster imagining her walking towards him with open arms and a smile on her face. She wasn't smiling now though, in fact her eyes looked red as if she'd been crying! Viren felt anxious as she got into the car and keeping her head down said 'ghar lekar chaliye please' in a thick voice filled with tears. Viren drove automatically but his mind was racing; why was she upset? Had something happened while she was shopping? Had someone said something to upset her, he thought with a flash of anger, his hands tightened on the steering wheel and he wanted to turn the car around and find that person. He watched her face in the mirror and saw her eyes were still a little red but she'd stopped crying and wiped her tears. He wished he could have been the one to wipe them, to be able to sit next to her and ask her what was wrong and comfort her; his arms ached to hold her as he once had whenever she was upset. He made a snap decision suddenly and started driving the long way home, at the last minute taking a different turning and hoping Nivi didn't notice where he was going.
 
Nivi sat in the car thinking what she was going to do, how she could persuade Viren to just go back home and give up on this stubbornness of his when suddenly she realised she should be home by now and she turned her head to realise they had taken the wrong turning a bit further back. She recognised the area and they weren't far from home at all but she still felt a slight alarm run through her as she said a little too loudly 'driver, hum is taraf kyu aaye, ghar toh peeche reh gaya?' When he didn't answer Nivi felt fully panicked thinking she was alone in the car and outside looked like they were close to a park or something and there was no-one around. She asked the driver to stop the car but he still wasn't answering so she said again 'maine kaha gadi roko' as firmly as she could but she heard her voice was shaking slightly. Feeling like she had no other choice, she went for the door handle thinking the car wasn't going too fast, maybe she'd be ok when suddenly the car skidded and slammed to a stop and the driver took his seatbelt off and turned around and Nivi saw with shock that it was Viren, yelling at her: 'Nivedita! Tum pagal ho gayi ho?! Aise chal thi gadi se koi nikal tha hai kya?!'

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Scene 21
 
Viren was livid, he couldn't believe she'd been about to get out of the moving car a second ago, his heart had leapt into his mouth at the thought and he'd slammed the brakes. Nivi was stunned and relieved: Viren? What was he doing here driving the car? Had he seen them at the market and got the driver to leave? Suddenly she realised she'd been so wrapped up in her thoughts she hadn't even seen the driver since she'd got into the car... All these thoughts flashed through her mind and her relief quickly turned to anger. She ignored his question and said 'Viren TUM? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?! Aur tum kabse yeh gadi chala rahe ho?' Viren still looked angry, HE was angry? Nivi thought, he had some nerve, she'd just been trying to escape from the car. Viren ran his fingers through his hair and took a deep breath to calm himself and said 'haan main! Main kaam kar raha hoon Nivedita, aur mujhe pata tha ke tum mujhe dekh ke gadi main nahi beto ghi is liye maine kuch nahi kaha.' Nivi was still angry too and although she felt a sudden urge to ask him all about his job she said 'teek socha tumne Viren, mujhe ghar le chalo abhi isi waqt, yahaan kyu le kar aaye?'
 
Viren was prepared, he'd known she'd say that. 'Main ghar jaa raha tha Nivedita, lekin tum itni pareshaan lag rahi thi is liye maine socha tumhe yahaan le aao, tumhe acha lage ga' Nivi looked around and he could tell when she realised exactly where they were because she looked even more upset, why would he think this place would make her happy?! Before he could finish what he was saying she cut in, in a hurt and angry tone, 'tumhe meri fikar karne ki ab koi haq nahi hai Viren, aur vaise bhi, main pareshaan hoon ya nahi, tumhe is se kya farak padta hai? Hum alag ho chuke hai!' Viren looked at her sadly, her each word hurting him like a sharp knife and said quietly, 'tum sahi thi Nivedita, mujhe bohth farak padta hai...aur tum apne aap se kaho ya na kaho, tumhe bhi farak padta hai' He said her own words back to her and watched as her eyes widened and her face fell even more and she looked down. He'd turned around fully in his seat so there faces were only inches apart and when she looked up again, he felt his heart speed up and the car suddenly felt tiny. Nivi seemed to feel this too and after a few long seconds she looked away and said 'main ghar pedhal chali jaaoongi!' and got out of the car quickly.
 
Viren rushed out and opened the door for her but stood in her way as she tried to leave. 'Please Nivedita, bas todi dher ki toh baat hai, mera yakeen karo, tumhe acha lage ga, phir main tumhe ghar chod doonga.' He thought quickly and said, 'aur agar maine tumhe ghar nahi choda toh mujhe paise bhi nahi milenge...' He tried to look like the money mattered to him but he didn't care really; he just knew she wouldn't want him to lose out. He watched as she struggled with herself over it and felt bad but he couldn't let her go and he was so relieved and happy when she unwillingly said 'teek hai Viren, lekin paanch minute' She looked at the park entrance they were in front of and said quietly and painfully, 'lekin main waha phir nahi jaana chahti...' Viren understood what she meant; he felt his heart also twist at the memory and said gently 'hum waha nahi ja rahe Nivedita, chalo mere saath'. He turned and went through the gates of what he'd always thought of as his own private little park and heard her following. He slowed down as they walked down the steps, past where they had stood that night and he had said so many hurtful things to her. He watched her look to where he had stood while she'd begged him to come home and winced at the look on her face. He hurried up and she looked away and followed him with her head down till they'd turned and had reached where he was taking her, out of sight of the entrance.
 
Nivi was regretting her decision to come here with Viren, especially as they walked by where they had stood and she had pleaded with him to come home that night when all her dreams and hopes  had shattered in an instant. She pushed the memories away and wondered if she should just turn back and go; then she remembered Viren saying he wouldn't get paid and she couldn't do that to him when he had so little...and he'd looked at her so pleadingly that she didn't think she could have said no even if she'd tried. She watched him as he walked in front of her. He was wearing a black shirt with a while tee underneath and black jeans and looking smarter than normal. She thought back on some of his actions these past few days and found herself wondering if maybe he really had changed but then realised how dangerous it was to think like that; all it would bring her was more pain. She sighed and went forward to tell Viren that she didn't want to see anything and could they just go but then they turned and all of a sudden she was in the most beautiful little garden that she lost all other thoughts and just stared.
 
They were in a little area of the park that was hedged in with bushes and there were flowers of different colours everywhere! There was an old fashioned stone bench in the middle and the whole thing looked beautiful with the sun hitting it just right. It was so quiet and peaceful with only the sound of birds; Nivi smiled unconsciously and went forward to touch one of the yellow flowers, for once forgetting Viren and feeling all her worries slip away for the moment.
 
Viren watched as Nivi took in the garden feeling his heart sing at the expression of wonder on her face. He'd known she'd love it and was glad because it was such a special place to him, even when the flowers weren't in bloom it was so peaceful here. He was happy he could share it with her but also felt a little sad that it wasn't in better circumstances.  As he watched, Nivi smiled a beautiful smile and went to touch a yellow flower which was the same shade as her saree. He wished he could freeze that moment because there was no worry or sadness on her face and that was what he'd wanted to see all along. Afraid to speak and ruin the moment, he went and sat on the bench quietly, picking a yellow flower as he went. He sat and watched his smiling chand who looked as radiant as the sun right now and smiled himself in response.


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Scene 22
 
Nivi watched out of the corner of her eye as Viren went and sat on the bench. She understood exactly why he came here, it was the most peaceful place and felt like it was hidden from the rest of the world. Despite everything, she felt happy that he'd shared it with her and he had been right, it had made her smile and forget her worries for a little while. Not wanting to admit that to him though, she went and sat on the far side of the bench from him, ignoring his smile at her actions. After a few minutes, the silence suddenly felt loaded so she said quickly, 'bohth khoobsurat jaga hai, main dekh sakti hoon ke tum yahaan kyu aate ho.' Viren was still smiling at her as he nodded and said 'haan, bohth khoobsurat...' Not liking where this was going, Nivi quickly asked what she'd been wondering in the back of her mind ever since she realised Viren was driving the taxi: 'tum yeh kaam kabse kar rahe ho Viren?' Viren shook his head as if to clear it and told her it was only a one off and he didn't know if he'd get anymore work from them yet. 'Par main haar nahi maanoonga Nivedita, bohth jald mujhe ek achi naukri miljayegi, mujhe yakeen hai. Main meri maksad main haar nahi sakta.' He spoke with an assured smile, fully determined.
 
Nivi felt annoyance stir in her again and the good feeling began to slip away as she burst out 'yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat hai Viren?! Maine tumhe kitni baar kaha ke sab kuch pehle ki tarah nahi ho sakta!' Viren shook his head and said 'shayad pehle ki tarah nahi Nivedita, lekin hum naye tareeke se toh humaara rishta shuru kar sakte hai na?' Nivi felt an irrational amount of anger at the stubborn look on his face and saying 'main yeh sab nahi sun na chahti Viren!' she stood up to go. Before she could stand up fully though, her heel got caught in her saree and she almost fell till Viren steadied her arm and helped her stand. She pushed him away and Viren muttered a sorry before starting to laugh.
 
Nivi was looking at him so angrily but Viren couldn't help laughing. She looked at him questioningly with her arms folded and he said 'Nivedita, tum giri aur maine tumhara madath kiya...toh phir MAIN kyu sorry bol raha hoon?!' He laughed again. Nivi seemed to have forgotten everything for a minute because she said in an annoyed tone 'toh?! Tumhara hi toh dosh hai, na tum mujhe yahaan laate, na main gir thi! Aur maine kab kaha ke meri madath karo?' She turned away angrily thinking she hated being so clumsy and why was it always aroundViren?! 'Tum toh kabhi bhi nahi kehti, lekin main phir bhi aa jata hoon madath karne...aadat jo ho chuki hai!' Viren had a thought and smiled cheekily saying 'vaise Nivedita, tumhara janam din kab hai?' Nivi was thrown by the random question and forgot her anger and asked him why. 'Kyu ki main tumhare liye woh signboard laa doonga...gir thi hui ladki wala!' Viren said with a wink and then laughed again at her reaction; Nivi was so angry now, her face was a little red and she looked adorable to Viren.
 
Nivi was so annoyed that all she could get out was 'Viren! Tum!' Viren saved her from having to respond coherently by saying 'Acha baba, i'm sorry! Chalo kaan pakad le tha hoon' he held his ears for a second before saying 'tum gusse main itni cute lagthi ho toh mujhse raha nahi gaya!' He smiled and Nivi thought he looked so cute himself holding his ears with the yellow flower still in one hand that her anger vanished as quick as it had come but she still said 'Viren, tum bhi na! Ab ghar bhi chalna hai ya isi tarah saara din guzaar do ge? Sab log ghar pe humara intezaar...' she suddenly trailed off, realising what she'd been about to say and what they'd been doing and looked around. It scared her how easily she'd fallen back into arguing with Viren; she'd forgotten everything in the few minutes she'd been talking to him! She unwillingly felt her heart speed up at the thought of how familiar and 'right' it had felt. She looked at Viren and saw that he'd forgotten too but instead of feeling panicked like she was, he was looking at her with a soft smile. Angry at herself and at the way his smile was affecting her, she said clearly 'mujhe meri ghar le chalo Viren' and turned away, ignoring the pain she felt as she saw his face fall at her words.
 
They drove home in silence. Viren had tried to speak to Nivi once but she had replied with one word so he gave up and just watched her in the mirror instead. It had been so nice to be normal with Nivi for a while and have her respond, he had missed it so much and had been disappointed when she'd clammed up again and had asked to go home. As he drove he smiled to himself; at least he now knew that it was possible to reach Nivi, he just had to dig deep and make her see how much she loved him.
 
Before he knew it they were home and Nivi was reaching for her bag. He got out quickly to open her door but she was already out. She didn't look at him as she turned away and Viren said lightly 'arre kaisi passenger ho? Thank you bhi nahi boli apne driver ko?!' She still refused to look at him and tried to go around the car but he stood in front of her till she looked up. 'Yeh lo phool' he said holding out the yellow flower he'd kept. She just looked at him with big annoyed eyes so he tapped her on the nose with the flower lightly and when she still didn't respond, he leaned forward and whispered as if he was telling her a secret, 'tumhare liye nahi, tumhari saree ke liye, usse yeh rang bohth pasand hai...' He smiled and Nivi looked like she wanted to hit him; instead she turned and went the other way round the car, towards the house. 'Nivedita!' Viren smiled as she stopped automatically but didn't turn. 'Arre ek baar palat ke toh deklo!' he called. She didn't turn and when she reached the door he called again 'Nivedita!'
 
As she went in Nivi heard Viren calling her again and she waited a moment before turning slightly to see Viren leaning on the top of the car with his head propped on his hand. When she turned, he smiled a huge smile which made her heart stutter and he waved the flower at her excitedly. She sighed and shook her head at him before going into the house fully, thinking that she needed to keep her distance from Viren otherwise she'd start to second guess her decision. She went into the kitchen and began taking out the groceries with the image of Viren smiling and waving the flower at her still in her mind.
 
At the same time Viren was about to leave to drop the car off but before he went he put the flower by the door where Nivi couldn't miss it. Still smiling, he got in the car; he felt hopeful about the future as he thought of ways to get Nivi to admit she still loved him...

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Asma sweetie was eagerly awaiting for your scenes.... Thank you for giving 4 awesome scenes.... Really loved it, sooooo sweet and sad at the same time. This was truly a good treat. Mwah thank you again hope you write more soon, when you got extra time. Loved it.... You are an amazing writer. Love you biggggg hugs and kisses.

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Thank u shamima, im glad u liked them. It's good i wrote them on friday because i dont have the heart to d anything today. Happy u enjoyed them sweets and thanx for the hugHug
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Asma jaan Hug Hug... Awwwwesome scenes dear.. Just wat we needed atm.. Thanx 4 posting them.. I was dying to read d new scenes since yday nite.. How cud u think of not posting them? If u hadnt posted them, i wud've chased u with a dhanda all around d world LOL.. Super duper scenes yaar.. I forgot everything else wen i was reading them.. Such sweet cute scenes shud've been in d show b4 d mahaepi *sigh*.. Thanx again for d beautiful scenes.. Hug

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Aww Ashly u made me laugh for the first time today with ur dhanda comment!! Thank u jaanHug
 
I just got home reeealy late last night and then read that stupid article b4 going to bed and it killed me!
 
Im glad u liked the scenes sweetie and happy that it took ur mind off stuffHug

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awesome scenes sweety
loved dem allHug
waiting 4 more scenes
thanks a lot dearHug

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