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Some NivRen Scenes: Updated Scenes 36 and 37 (Page 22)

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Scene 12
 
Nivi took Dadaji's ashiwaad and said 'acha Dadaji ab chalti hoon, aap ka khayal rakna mere aane tak' Dadaji smiled and Yashodara said 'tum inki bilkul fikr mat karo Nivedita, itni dino mein tumne humaare liye itna kuch kardiya, ab kuch din araam kar le na Naintara ke dost ke yaha.' 'Ji Dadiji, koshish karoongi lekin chinta toh hogi naa...' Nivi's voice trailed off as she thought of Viren. Yashodara understood and said, 'Viren ki bhi fikr mat karna, hum uska khayal rakenge aur tumse toh uski baath ho chuki hogi toh chinta kis baath ki?' Nivi didn't mention that she hadn't spoken to Viren at all and that he hadn't even bothered to call her after her message...instead she nodded and saying bye left the room.
 
Next she went to find Vandana in the kitchen and said her goodbyes. Vandana asked if she had everything or needed anything before saying, 'Viren se nahi milee?' Nivi looked down and said 'nahi, woh toh is waqt soh raha hoga toh disturb nahi karna chahti...' Vandana frowned and said 'acha teek hai par usse phone zaroor kar le na baad mein. Kal raat kuch woh pareshaan lag raha tha jab maine bola ke tu ghar gayi hai. Tere jaane ke todi dher baad hi woh ghar aagaya tha. Mujhse aur kuch bola hi nahi aur chala gaya waha se...?! Bohth ajeeb tha.' Nivi felt an odd feeling in her chest at the mention of Viren being worried and she tried to ignore it saying 'teek hai chachiji lekin mujhe nahi lagtha ke woh mujse baat bhi karega' She felt tears in her eyes again and couldn't think why he was being silent with her when she'd thought things were starting to improve? She shook away the thought and said, 'dher ho rahi hai, dadi intezaar kar rahi hogi' and Vandana said she'd walk her out.
 
As they were walking and almost at the door, Nivi felt an odd pull behind her and before she could turn or do anything she heard Viren's voice shouting her name. Her heart stopped and she turned around, seeing Viren running down the stairs at full tilt and not stopping till he reached her. He was wearing yellow and white and his hair was still wet and sticking up in different directions. He looked to sweet that she felt all her anger and hurt melt away and all her thoughts disappeared as she just took pleasure in looking at him. She was still staring when she heard Vandana cough slightly and say, 'main tum dono ko akela chod deti hoon' and walk away quickly.
 
Viren tried to focus on what he needed to say but Nivi was just staring at him and she looked so amazing he couldn't think straight. He'd rushed to get here and now he was just speechless and tongue-tied after one look from her; he couldn't believe she was standing right there when just yesterday he'd thought she was gone forever! He looked at her and took in every detail of her face before she disappeared again. Her mouth was slightly open and she was breathing fast even though he was the one who'd just run all the way to her. He was still looking at her lips when he heard Vandana say something and remembered they weren't alone. He didn't hear what she said but at her words and as she left, he suddenly remembered why he'd come there and in a rush asked the most painful question first. 'Tum ghar kyu chali gayi Nivedita? Aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi?!' She was looking at him blankly so he said 'Nivedita, tum sun rahi ho main kya keh raha hoon?!' Nivi hadn't heard a word of what Viren said until he asked if she was listening. She was jolted out of her thoughts and without thinking said the first thing that came to her mind. 'Tumne tumhare baal nahi sukaye Viren, tumhe sardi ho jaayegi!' Viren's eyes widened and he was looking at her like she'd lost her mind! She tried to think what he'd asked when he interrupted impatiently with 'main kya pooch raha hoon aur tumhe mari baalo ki pari hai?!' This wasn't going at all the way Viren had thought and he was more confused than ever! Nivi seemed fine, she wasn't upset, maybe leaving hadn't been a hard decision for her he thought painfully.
 
She asked him to repeat the question so he did and it was harder asking the second time. He added, 'tumne mujhe batana zaroori nahi samja? Yah phir mujse door jaana itna asaan tha tumhare liye ke tumne palat ke bhi nahi dekha?' He said the last question quietly, looking down and feeling like he was dying inside. Nivi didn't know what was wrong with Viren, she'd told him where she was going after all, why was he saying these things? He hadn't bothered to call her and on top he was making her feel so bad! She felt annoyance but then the way he had said the last question made her heart stutter. 'Maine tumhe kaha toh tha Viren, tumne tumhara phone nahi check kiya? Maine Dadaji se pehle poocha bhi tha aur tumhe office se aane mein dheri ho rahi thi isliye maine intezaar nahi kiya...'
 
Viren couldn't understand what she was saying, he thought back to the messages on his phone and realised one must be from Nivi. And Dadaji knew too and he had let her leave?! Instead of clearing things up, he was getting more confused. 'Yeh bhi koi phone message mein bataane waali cheez hoti hai?!' he said, 'main kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha...agar tumhe laga ke tumhe yahaan se jaana chahiye toh hum is baare mein baat kar sakte the Nivedita.' He felt tears fill his eyes and couldn't stop himself from moving forward and taking her hands in his and saying intensely, 'main jaan tha hoon ke main kitna bhura hoon, aur mujse kitni galti hui hai, maine tumhe kitna dard diya hai...lekin Nivedita, tum mujhe un galtiyon ko sudaar ne ka moka bhi nahi do gi?' She tried to interrupt by saying 'Viren' but he cut her off looking slightly panicked 'Nivedita please, main vaada karta hoon ke main aaj se tumhe koi taqleef nahi doonga, bas tum please ghar waapas aajao!!' Viren was looking at her with so much intensity and hope that Nivi felt tears well up in her eyes at the depth of his emotions. She didn't know why he was saying these things and knew he'd somehow got his wires crossed but she didn't care because it made her heart sing hearing them!


Edited by anjaani07 - 13 March 2011 at 12:49pm

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Scene 13
 
Nivi gripped Viren's hands tightly and opened her mouth to say how happy she was to hear him say those words when she heard a car start up outside and remembered Dadi! Feeling guilty at having to leave Viren this way she said quickly 'Viren, yeh sab tum kya keh rahe ho, mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha lekin tumhe nahi pata ke main kitni khush hoon yeh sun ke. Mujhe ab jaana hoga' When Viren tried to interrupt, she took one hand away from his and put it on his mouth and said 'Dadi mera intezaar kar rahi hai, main sirf kal raat ke liye ghar gayi thi Viren, kyu ki Dadi ko meri zaroorat thi. Main unke saath Delhi ja rahi hoon unki dost ke ghar kuch dino ke liye.' When he tried to speak around her hand she shook her head and said with a lump in her throat 'bas do-chaar din ki toh baat hai Viren, phir mein waapas aajaoongi, yahaan. Hum baad mein yeh sab baatein kar sakte hai, teek hai?' she asked the last part shyly and she saw Viren's eyes widen at her words. After a few seconds, she saw tears in his eyes and felt his mouth trying to smile as he nodded.
 
Viren felt lighter with every word Nivi spoke. He could feel the relief and happiness bubbling up inside him. She hadn't left him, she was coming back! He felt her fingers still on his mouth and tried to smile. As she made to move her hand, he quickly put his fingers around her hand and held it to his mouth a few seconds longer. He kissed her fingers and still couldn't believe that she hadn't left him; it had been much easier for him to believe that she had! He felt like jumping up and down like a child he was so relieved.
 
He felt Nivi pull her hand away and step away and remembered she was still going. 'Nivedita, tumhaara jaana zaroori hai kya? Aur koi nahi ja sakta Dadi ke saath?!' Nivi smiled at his sweet, pleading tone and said 'nahi Viren, mujhe jaana hai' she came forward again and shyly put her hand on his cheek which he quickly covered with his hand before she could move it. 'Tum please apna khayaal rakna Viren...aur apne baal sukana mat bhool na!!' she added with a smile. She was smiling but she felt like crying at the thought of having to leave him when things were finally looking better. Why had fate come between them this way she thought sadly as her tears threatened to fall. Viren saw Nivi's smile but also saw the tears hidden in her eyes and again felt pain at the thought of her leaving him, even for a few days. He felt tears in his own eyes and he tried to say as lightly as he could, 'agar mujhe sardi ho jayegi toh kya tum ghar jaldi waapas aajaogi?!' She smiled and her tears finally fell as did his. He pulled her closer to him so that their foreheads were touching and they stood like that for a few moments of peace until Nivi whispered, 'mujhe jaana hai Viren' and quickly before she could change her mind, she went to the door only looking back once, memorising every angle of his face before saying 'bye Viren' and leaving the house hurriedly.
 
Viren felt a sharp pain in his chest as he watched her leave. She turned around at the door and he looked at her face, the face of an angel, his angel and then in one moment she was gone! He felt like a part of him was suddenly gone too and after a few seconds, he called 'Nivedita!' and ran after her, only to see her getting into the car. He stopped running and watched the car drive away sadly, thinking he should be happy that she was only going for a few days but all he could think was that she was gone and he was alone again. He felt the empty space where she had been only moments before and felt like every beat of his heart was slower and more painful without her. It began to rain heavily but he didn't notice that he was getting drenched; he stood there in the rain long after the car had gone, lost in thoughts of Nivi.


Edited by anjaani07 - 18 March 2011 at 6:02pm

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Woww...asma jaan...brilliant....awesome.....u made my weekend with these beautiful scenes....each scene has its own essence and fragrance....just falling in love with nivren more and more....
love u.....Hug

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very beautiful dear..............
love u............Big smile

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it was beautiful . no words to explain. hats off ClapClapClap.pls continue writing.

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Awesome scenes dear.. Loving d tadap n cute sweet nivren scene.. Haiiii.. I hope d next part is viren with fever as u let him get drenched Big smile..

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Wow, Awesome scenes

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Asma jaan that was just tooooooo good. Loved it. I could feel the longing both of them felt. You truly great in expressing nivi and viren's feelings for each other. Can't wait for nivi to come back. You doing a great job keep it up. Mwah thank you sweetie for 3 awesome chapter at once. I know it must be take up a lot of time in writing these chapter and we all really appreciate it doll. Thanks again.

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