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Some NivRen Scenes: Updated Scenes 36 and 37 (Page 22)

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Scene 13
 
Nivi gripped Viren's hands tightly and opened her mouth to say how happy she was to hear him say those words when she heard a car start up outside and remembered Dadi! Feeling guilty at having to leave Viren this way she said quickly 'Viren, yeh sab tum kya keh rahe ho, mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha lekin tumhe nahi pata ke main kitni khush hoon yeh sun ke. Mujhe ab jaana hoga' When Viren tried to interrupt, she took one hand away from his and put it on his mouth and said 'Dadi mera intezaar kar rahi hai, main sirf kal raat ke liye ghar gayi thi Viren, kyu ki Dadi ko meri zaroorat thi. Main unke saath Delhi ja rahi hoon unki dost ke ghar kuch dino ke liye.' When he tried to speak around her hand she shook her head and said with a lump in her throat 'bas do-chaar din ki toh baat hai Viren, phir mein waapas aajaoongi, yahaan. Hum baad mein yeh sab baatein kar sakte hai, teek hai?' she asked the last part shyly and she saw Viren's eyes widen at her words. After a few seconds, she saw tears in his eyes and felt his mouth trying to smile as he nodded.
 
Viren felt lighter with every word Nivi spoke. He could feel the relief and happiness bubbling up inside him. She hadn't left him, she was coming back! He felt her fingers still on his mouth and tried to smile. As she made to move her hand, he quickly put his fingers around her hand and held it to his mouth a few seconds longer. He kissed her fingers and still couldn't believe that she hadn't left him; it had been much easier for him to believe that she had! He felt like jumping up and down like a child he was so relieved.
 
He felt Nivi pull her hand away and step away and remembered she was still going. 'Nivedita, tumhaara jaana zaroori hai kya? Aur koi nahi ja sakta Dadi ke saath?!' Nivi smiled at his sweet, pleading tone and said 'nahi Viren, mujhe jaana hai' she came forward again and shyly put her hand on his cheek which he quickly covered with his hand before she could move it. 'Tum please apna khayaal rakna Viren...aur apne baal sukana mat bhool na!!' she added with a smile. She was smiling but she felt like crying at the thought of having to leave him when things were finally looking better. Why had fate come between them this way she thought sadly as her tears threatened to fall. Viren saw Nivi's smile but also saw the tears hidden in her eyes and again felt pain at the thought of her leaving him, even for a few days. He felt tears in his own eyes and he tried to say as lightly as he could, 'agar mujhe sardi ho jayegi toh kya tum ghar jaldi waapas aajaogi?!' She smiled and her tears finally fell as did his. He pulled her closer to him so that their foreheads were touching and they stood like that for a few moments of peace until Nivi whispered, 'mujhe jaana hai Viren' and quickly before she could change her mind, she went to the door only looking back once, memorising every angle of his face before saying 'bye Viren' and leaving the house hurriedly.
 
Viren felt a sharp pain in his chest as he watched her leave. She turned around at the door and he looked at her face, the face of an angel, his angel and then in one moment she was gone! He felt like a part of him was suddenly gone too and after a few seconds, he called 'Nivedita!' and ran after her, only to see her getting into the car. He stopped running and watched the car drive away sadly, thinking he should be happy that she was only going for a few days but all he could think was that she was gone and he was alone again. He felt the empty space where she had been only moments before and felt like every beat of his heart was slower and more painful without her. It began to rain heavily but he didn't notice that he was getting drenched; he stood there in the rain long after the car had gone, lost in thoughts of Nivi.


Edited by anjaani07 - 18 March 2011 at 6:02pm

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Woww...asma jaan...brilliant....awesome.....u made my weekend with these beautiful scenes....each scene has its own essence and fragrance....just falling in love with nivren more and more....
love u.....Hug

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very beautiful dear..............
love u............Big smile

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it was beautiful . no words to explain. hats off ClapClapClap.pls continue writing.

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Awesome scenes dear.. Loving d tadap n cute sweet nivren scene.. Haiiii.. I hope d next part is viren with fever as u let him get drenched Big smile..

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Wow, Awesome scenes

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Asma jaan that was just tooooooo good. Loved it. I could feel the longing both of them felt. You truly great in expressing nivi and viren's feelings for each other. Can't wait for nivi to come back. You doing a great job keep it up. Mwah thank you sweetie for 3 awesome chapter at once. I know it must be take up a lot of time in writing these chapter and we all really appreciate it doll. Thanks again.

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asma wat beautiful scenes
u ar a fab writer

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