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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
OMG Zee!
 
Where were you all these days!
 
I had  stopped reading SR F's or OS"s cause it only reminded me of the  murder committed by thr CVS to their story..
But somehow couldnt help reading this one and OMG! Wonderful.
 
 
 
Beautiful piece......Am off to read it one more time!

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Zeenzie HugHugHug

I love love love dis part <333

I can so feel Sid's pain
And look at d audacity of dat Hormonal creature
he is telling Sid dat his wife doesn't love him AngryAngryAngry
Uhhhhhhhh I feel like pushing him from a hill AngryAngryAngry

Loved how Ridz confronted dat psycho
The dialogues were PERFECT

And her confession Haiyeeee Day DreamingDay Dreaming
I love ' your ' Ridz Embarrassed

My fav part was -

' Lets go home ,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft ,silky hair.
' I am home ,'she whispered with a beautiful smile


Haiyeeee my Siddhima Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming



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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
beautiful update :)
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
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zeenieee u r simply amazing!!!

fabulous partClap Clap Clap

the way u always potray sid's pain is too good 

Sid simply nodded and lead the way. His face was impassive not revealing his true feelings. But  if Ridhimma had cut open his chest she would have seen his heart bleeding.

Clap Clap Clap but i m glad its over n now no more pain 4 sid 

n hormannnnnn Angry Angry Angry he is juss so disgusting bt i hope he is finally gone n never comes back!!!!

n ridhimma was on a roll her confession was so damn beautifull n this was d best part Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'

n d end it could nt get better Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.

awww sidhimma Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

zeeeniieee keep writing more u are juss fab!!!


Edited by subia-17 - 04 March 2011 at 5:07am
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
I love ur Riddhima, zeenieSmile. I wish if d cvs would have done d same thingConfused.
But, zeenie, where is d kissWink dat was not completed earlier?
 
Awesome zeenie,
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Zeeni Hug .oops now to u r OS writer........LOL so i should call u lekhika.............EmbarrassedWinkLOL

awesome wriiten this update.....Clap 

sid s part was fab u described his emotions so well......Embarrassed

i love ur Riddhima maiya version.....why because she did not run away or lost in her thought's role coaster ride............LOL i can't believe she said straight forward to haraam this lines..........Shocked 

'Enough  Armaan enough! Why does everything have to be about you and what you want! Do you want to know the truth? The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'

amazing  Clap

last part was amazing let's go home.......Tongue

love u dear......Smile


Edited by monty22 - 04 March 2011 at 1:05am
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Aww Zeenia - your update reminded me of every quality I loved about Sid and what he done for Riddhima...It was such an azming part!

Really sucks to know what actually happened but I am so happy right now! LOL I loved this part!
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zee, This is fantabulously superb awesome and Lovely update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

Last update i was thinking why u brought back that sitaraman backAngry........But thanks for bringing him back & hitting his mind that Riddhima is not his basket anymore She is always and will remain Sid's RiddhimaTongueBig smile.......I like this Sid's riddhima.Big smile

Also the way u have expressed Sid's feeling in the BB court was so heart wretchingCryCryCryCry.
Happy that Ridz has felt her soulmate. And really loved the way she confessed her life/Love is sid that to in front of SitaramanLOLLOL........Esp loved that more.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedTongue

Also this described Sid love moreClapClap

The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

And hearing it from RidzShockedShockedLOLLOLBig smile

Wish this we could have seen in that crapfestOuchOuch.......But in a way first time ever i am thanking the cv's,Shocked cos of them we r happy to get a lot of SR and SidShi FF's..........I am loving them allllllllllBig smile.


Really yr update made me to feel to revisit those wonderful moments and the lovely journey of Siddhima which i loved once and now with yr FF u made me to love them yet again. EmbarrassedBig smile

Awesome and lovable........This is why SR is so special and uniqueEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.

this partTongueBig smileEmbarrassed

Sid and Ridhimma didn't know how long they stayed in each others arms. Nothing mattered at that moment but the two of them being together where they knew they belonged. Ridhimma rested her face against Sids heart knowing that it beat only for her. And finally when she looked up at Sid, he saw the love radiating from her sparkling  eyes only for him.
'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.
'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.

Loved it so much...........SiddhimaDay Dreaming

Yet again ..........Thanks for writing this FF zeenia..........Love youHug

 


Edited by ssdtvgojan - 03 March 2011 at 12:19pm

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