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Abhiya FF: Dark Angel~ completed (Page 46)

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mangona

very gud we wd w8 4 ur update


Thank you for the long wait. I am sure it must have been long. I fell restless when I dont get the update of my favorite fan fiction too. Its just down right irritating. I am sorry from the core of my heart once again.

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei ayantika,
that was short..but u made abhay-sid face each other n have their own moments..poor sid..he too doesnt know that she is an angel..wish to see sid's face when he fails in hypnotising piya forget abhay..u really confused be here..is some bella is here for sid?

Sid: "Yeah only by a few minutes... what a pleasure it will be to see you dead meat but then... I dont want you to miss seeing Bella madly in love with me." Abhay bared his teeth.

Abhay: "Try to take her brother. I do want to see you disappointed. It would be so nice to see your angry face when Pia comes to you and welcomes with you with a slap. Wouldnt that be wonderful?" he mocked, Sid seemed impressed with Abhay's little rant.

continue soon..


Sorry it was short. I dont have much time to write. Thank you. I am happy I could pull it off. Its so hard to write two brothers fighting. But I dont intend to change that anytime soon if you get what I am saying. Its just too much fun to play with them. No one except Natalie and Pia herself knows this so Sid is going to get a bigger blast when the news breaks to him. Poor vampire, just imagine his face when he finds out that his lovely pray isnt that vulnerable and is capable to gobble him up whenever necessary. Okay that was a little too much... but just imagine that!

Sorry for that Bella thing... It was just that I was reading this awesome fan fiction twilight one and i was simultaneously writing so I got a bot distracted. Now you realize where all my writing time goes. Dont worry I will keep in mind that I never slip again... even if I am reading a wonderful story... LOL

Sid is not meant for anyone. I dont know actually if i would ever forgive him. I could look into the matter of thinking of his match, he would be a waste if we couldnt dwell into his emotions more. I used to find him very intriguing and intimidating. just the person who would keep you guessing and make you obsessed. I am going to go into his share of the story too. He isnt as bad as he is portrayed maybe. We never know...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaanArmaan

thank you so much for the pm.
 
it was really nice...the face-off :D
 
good choice of ideas...keep it up :))


thank you Maan Armaan. I appreciate that you took a look. Thank you again. It was short and I am glad you didnt grumble, but I am happy you liked it. I will come up with some other ideas too. Thanks again. See you soon when I update. Big smile

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ilove99

what is your dushmani with me you replied to else but not me Unhappy


Uf meri maa. Hamesha eisi chize kyun imagine karti ho? Mere paas jitna time thha utne time me meine reply kia... Jo bhi comment pehle thha usse start kia. Bap re... Kitna centu ho rahi ho... Tongue

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aromal

oh the update was superb dear although it was small i really liked it ! and now i am just waiting for the next update becoz it going to be damn interesting when sidharth will try to hypnotize her ...Embarrassed !!


yes it will be interesting wont it? But then he wouldnt be able to do that... NO MYSTERY IN THAT! but then too I havent thought of it yet. I am still working on it. I will update as soon as possible but i am surely making it small. because I wont get time to prepare a longer chapter. Sorry.

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
I replied to many of you today but I need to go to my tutions so I couldnt  complete all of them. I will be back tomorrow to do the rest and hopefully post an update too if possible.

to give you all the good news. My vacations start from tomorrow and the bad news it will be filled with projects which matter a hell lot more than my life itself and loads of studies and syllabus which need to be complete.

I have been a bit formal today because i am in a mood but tomorrow the bomb will be back. And hope you guys are hanging on because something good is coming in the next update. Wait for it and leave loads and loads of comments and I will surely reply to them.

If you have any quarries feel free to ask me, if any thing you would want to criticize about I would be glad to take it. If you want to tell me something that can show me where the character feels like you tell me.

Bye for now. Take care and have a great day. Wish me luck. My life is officially hell!

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini_s

goo one but want more of Abhayia in the next update..


yes I will try to do that! Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals_11

Awesome Update yaar.. Sid-Abhay Convo was Gr8.. I loved d way u had put up Abhay's part..full of confidence.. M not gonna scold u for late n short update.. Hope ur 5in.. Ur not well..?? Nything serious.. Take Care.. 'll b waiting for a long update.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.


Thanks gals. I am happy I could pull it off. Yea! No scolding. I love it when I dont get a scolding... LOL Yeah I am fine. More than fine. Ridiculously happy and joyous. I dont think i will be able to post very long ones though... I will try.



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