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Weekend Retreat : FF Special scene 7 updated (Page 8)

anjaani07 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Aww suchi i just went through and read all ur scenes in one go!! WOW they are amazing and i can't wait for more!! I
love the way Nivi-Viren are together and i'm loving the bubblier Nivi! Viren toh hamesha badmaash hi rahega lolzzLOL Also, sidya already in love is a lovely twist and now Viren can have Nivi all to himself with no worry of Sid!! Thanks so much sweetie, looking forward to more scenesHug

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Scintillating IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Oh my, Suchi, I am loving this FF more and more. Clap Sidya romance already in full swing. Nice. That leaves NivRen alone and they can romance their heart out, hehe!! Love that!!Smile Okay, really waiting for the next scene and anxiously wanting to know how and when Nivedita realizes that all this while she has actually been interacting with Viren and not Sid.

Edited by Excruciating - 27 February 2011 at 6:32pm

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ashred12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
Wow suchi.. Superb scenes.. Gud thing dat u paired sidya already.. :) waiting 4 d next scene..

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Rani2011 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Suchi, thanks for the FF. Very nice, I am really enjoying each & every sceneClap. I love Viren's boldness as usual lolz. Nivi being feisty, different from what we r watching regularly on tv. 
Sid-Divya r already in love?? I am glad :) and also they both seem  very different.
I am truly loving this story, please do continue..

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dmg_roks_antara Goldie

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
great ff cont soon n plzz pm me on d next part

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FrozenRain IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Woww....suchi di...loved both the scenes.......And i loved this dialogue very much.....

' Jiska mann uskay paas hi na rahe , voh kya kisi ko thang ker payega'....clearly telling the feelings of viren...........

and what a meaningful quote suchi di......'You come to love not by finding the perfect person, but by seeing an imperfect person perfectly'
thank danger from sid....Smile....sidya in love....thank u so much.......waiting for next part........I'm very greedy when come to ur retreats......Pls dont make us wait for long.........

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Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
Scene 8

Read the scene below with this!

'Ok bye Niveditha'

'Bye' Said Niveditha as she got off the car and headed towards her home.

Niveditha! called out viren

She turned around and saw viren running towards her

'kya?' she asked

'Kuch kehna tha' he said running his hand in his hair

Nivedita waited...

'amm... kuch nahi' he said putting his hands in his pocket and smiling

'ok bye' said Viren

'bye' said Nivedith

'ok wait'

' abh bolo bhi sidharth' said niveditha turning around

'hmm...abhi tho sirf theen baj rahe hain aur main ghar per bore ho jaunga. kya thum meray saath ammm ghumnay chalogi' he asked hesitating a bit

Niveditha smiled a little.

'Mujhe ghar per bhi kafi kaam hai sidharth. main nahi aa sakthi' she said
'bye' she said turning away from him and leaving.

She could feel a change in her heart. It felt lighter.

It had been only few hours since she had met sidharth, and they had been spending the entire time together since then. But even then her heart longed for his company.

She turned back and looked at him. Viren was standing as if waiting for her.

He smiled at her and found her returning his smile.


Viren looked up at the sky and saw the birds fly by. He noticed how thy stuck to one pattern without loosing track of their goal.

His hands stretched towards the sky as if trying to embrace it.

'agar voh meray saath waqt nahi guzar sakthi , tho kya hua main tho ker saktha hun' Said viren to himself as he saw niveditha close the door.

There was skip in his step and his heart jumped with unknown joy.

The thought of spending even a single moment with her seemed to increase his heart beat

He skipped towards her house and knocked on her door.

'aao Viren' said Naintara smiling at him as she opened the door.

Viren's eyes were searching for Niveditha. He did not notice what Naintara told him but he caught her hand signal in time, asking him to come inside.

'Khareed-dari ho gayi beta' she asked him as they sat down in the living room

Viren who was still looking around  , nodded at her

'Nivi ko dund rahe ho? she asked him

Viren smiled and nodded in affirmative again

'andhar hai. Jao' she said pointing towards the kitchen

Viren got up and left towards the kitchen. He entered slowly and saw Niveditha with her back towards him, cooking.

He leaned towards the door and watched her

he could hear the sniffles of Niveditha who was cutting onions.

'ouch' she said.

viren stood straight with his hands stretched towards her as if wanting to holding them. His eyes full of concern.

she licked her fingers and poured cold water on it.

'Jaaado, Chaya hai tera jaado.

Kaabu, dil per nahi hai kaabu' He hummed to himself.

Then she placed the cut vegetables into the hot pan.

Viren slowly went towards her pacing his steps cautiously.

Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 27 February 2011 at 9:13pm

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FrozenRain IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Amazing.......lovely scene.....Oh.....perfect much to read.....Love this new nivi a lot.........Viren is so romantic...........Smile.....thank u suchi di......u r the best.....Clap

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