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Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 (Page 149)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

HMM lovely updates...you are great at showing the slow progression in their relationship..and I just love the way Maan wants to keep Geet happy..but why are you giving us only one per day? Shocked 

Want more................LOL
Thanks. I am modifying certain things in this fic so it is taking me longer to complete and post them. Will not be able to give three-four updates. Will try to give one more today.

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

nice update .... 

plzz give us a few more today  

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Sana

Thanks Sana. Will post one more in the evening.
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
lovely update maan can drape a saree also wow u r simply greatttttt.......
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
great update! 
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ManEetkiDeewaNi

Thanks for the update...it was terrific...

It was very cute of Maan to buy the a sari for Geet and when she didnt know how to wear it but he did i was just laughing but at the same time it was cute....
and the temptation was their as well. When Maan did Geet's sari for her and when she accidentally exposes herself and Maan has to control....it was just superb.
And Geet understand the promise that they cant consummate until he can give her leisure. Their relationship has truly evolved. 

And yes...Very young. will be in college in a year young. So marriage is a long way, true..One can manipulate in a story but has to face reality in plain truth...

Thanks for the update...cant wait for more 
Yes, Maan knew how to drape a saree but Geet did not.  Maaneet have truly evolved as a couple.  So you are still in school?  Then marriage is definitely a long way away.  Reality is harsh. That's why writers like us escape into fantasy. 
 
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammu5

lovely update maan can drape a saree also wow u r simply greatttttt.......
Thanks ammu. Maan has had enough training draping it for his kid sister. After all he preactically raised her up.
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angullgrl91

great update! 
Thanks
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
hey opti
 
are you going to open new thread as we already reached 149 pages

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