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Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 (Page 132)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved the update..................
their romance understanding and their love is increasing day by day..............
wow the emotions expressed by maan when she was lost and seeing her in that condn wud hv broken him into pieces................well he was angry @ her but that sweet call of his to tell his heart out was superb......................
waiting for the next beautiful update


Maaneet relationship is growing day by day.  Maan could not take it when he realised Geet was missing and was rightfully angry with her but when he realised that he went overboard he was quick to apologise.

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged

love how yu portrayed Maan

concern it was super
& the last part so sweet & cute
the real cared each other like
there married for long time
oh Opti i'm real hooked
with ur FF  so beautiful
how describe each character
awesome update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
i hope yu update more
today pls
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Awwww, it's really nice knowing how much they love each other. Enjoyed every take, from the confession of their love to each other to this one. Glad to see that they are so in love and glad to also see that Maan is so caring for Geet.
 
This update reminded me a lot of our show's Maan and Geet .. Geet -- the sometimes clumsy girl and Maan the worrisome.. always on his edge worrying for Geet because of her carelessness at times.
 
I'm also glad that they understand each other so well and can read each other through their eyes.
 
 
Wonderful update Opti! This story keeps getting interesting.
 
 
 
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Wow nice update, plsssssssssssssssssss continue soon.
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
I know that you know I have read the original. That doesnt mean you should stop sending me PM. I do look forward to your updates.
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
superb update
Opti IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

fear

fear of loosing something, someone is greater then actually loosing
 
well potrayed scene
while reading I remembered a scene from "Atithi tum kab jaoge"
in which Ajay Devgan searched for Paresh rawal
I could imagine those expressions on GC's face
even the breathless DD was not hard to imagine
 
shouting of Maan on Geet was much accepted
how could he not, she's the most precious person for him
but good that you chose to complete the scene by their patching up
 
Shruti
Thanks Shruti. When we loved something or someone we end up with the fear of losing what we have. I've seen teh film you mentioned but dont remember Devgan's expressions.


Edited by Opti - 02 March 2011 at 10:25pm

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Viji79

I know that you know I have read the original. That doesnt mean you should stop sending me PM. I do look forward to your updates.
Viji, I've not PMed anyone this time because I was busy.

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