Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 - Page 67

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovley update dear........................lovley both them and the kiss ...............  
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part..... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part..... loved it.................great........
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

 first kiss... and an emotional update...loved it di

Yes, finally the first kiss and that too emotional one.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part ! The beauty of the cofession was in the simplicity of the words !

Thanks Dhara.  This is the only way I can write.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part..... loved it.................great........
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: panchjun5

Wow!!! Opti you have outdone yourself again.....Loved it that when the terrace light was turned on and Geet turned she saw the light of her life standing there...that momentary happiness was shortlived when the reality of the situation came cracking down.....But Maan....our hero....how can he let go that which he holds so precious....The confession from Maan was beautiful....And the last scene ...OOh...I had goosebumps reading it....So once again...fantabulous....and kudos....πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘

As for me writing fics.....No way...😲!!!! I'm not a word weaver like you....you spin such a beautiful yarn with your words....I can never do that....I can just be an avid reader and appreciate the immense talent of people like you....😊...

So please keep up the good work and make the likes of me happy....πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks Kavi. Love the way you pick the smallest of details I put in and interpret it so nicely. Makes it worth the while that these things are getting noticed.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it😊
pls update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Liked both the part

Good Maan used his brain n went directly to Sameera
Liked how Sam helped him out
Cahlo their prob solved n now their one
Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

 
Thanks Afsha.  Sam is his dearest friend and when in trouble he sought her out.