Posted: 27 April 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
3 words for you! OH MY GOSH! Did anybody ever tell you that you are such a brilliant writer? I mean, I loved your writing SO much that once I started reading this I just couldn't stop. I read your other FF of AR also! And When I was going through the FF forum and I went through this I just had to read it!
So I read it all today, and since its raining outside and I got soaked so I took a shower and got my laptop out got cozy in a blanket and started reading.. Starting with the introduction,
Fabulous! The introduction was AMAZING! I mean anybody that would read that introduction would get hooked completely after just reading it! And trust me I know.. Because it has happened to me Deewanaa kar gayi kuhje tumarhi introduction!
Anyways I love how this FF is from Armaans point of view! There are many FF's on this forum that have a male's point of view, but your FF is just great! It's extraordinary which makes it so it just makes the person that's reading it ... ADDICTED! Its hard not to get addicted to a FF like this ..
Anyway, coming to the story ...
I love the plot of this story! On the first chapter you just described the personalities of each character of the story so clearly that you can picture what the character would look like and the personality! reminded me of when my primary teacher used to tell me show vs tell .. and you did the exact! That's what makes a wonderful writer which YOU clearly are!
Riddhima's character is really really sensitive and cute! She is just adorable .. I could totally picture her ( and I pictured Jenny and I am a Kajen fan ) wearing armaan's military shorts with a loose t-shirt on! Cutie! AHAHA! Armaan was clearly not wanting to share his clothes with anybody else!
Armaan is very protective of his mom which makes him a total sweetheart! But man, he shouldn't had yelled at poor Riddhima .. poor her .. He made her cry! Muskaan is so funny! Amazing way of waking up someone Muski! Thanks for the wonderful idea .. maybe i'll try it on my brother , speaking of which he's treating himself to a nap right now .. Rahul and his use of "SAALE!" .. I love how whenever Armaan blasts his anger out at Riddhima, he would always go and console her! The sweetest part was when he didn't sign the papers and then went to her bedroom to console her! I feel so bad for Riddhima! My heart goes out to her! - Even though this is a fictional story Armaan is such a cutie! I loved how he blurted out how he'll just laze around since Riddhima's salary will be enough for them! Rahul took advantage of that .. Obviously .. What did Armaan really expect RAHUL to not talk about that and miss a chance of teasing session? Yeah right!
At the end the statement that Riddhima made : " I was already married " Just shocked the wits out of me! Like seriously! WHOA! Was I expecting that? Naaah, THAT I was definitely not expecting! Now your making me fall in love with this story all the more! I mean now I want the other part to come quickly so I can read further on! Especially after this twist to the story!
Once again, I'll say it again! You are a brilliant writer and theres no doubt in that and along with it, your story is addicting as it could get - or can it get more addicting? After this I can surely expect THAT!
Whoa! That was a long comment don't you think? Anyways when will you be updating? I'm just joking update when ever your schedule lets you! But don't make us wait a lot of time! So update sooon!
HERES A HUGE HUG FROM ME TO YOU! TRUST ME, I WOULD MAKE THIS LONGER BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO GO REALLY LONG AND PLUS I HAVE TO GO SOON ALSO.. SO HERES THE HUG!