"and then she said it"~1 |AR| *Chapters: 1-7* (Page 147) (Fan Fictions Forum)

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Hawww i had a feeling she was married... luved da update it was awesome... cnt wait for da nxt update...so wanna knw wat happned...

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OMG!!!! the story is getting more and more intense, interesting, and gripping if that was even possible!!

OMG! so Riddhima was married...did her husband die or betrayed her? OMG!! so many questions!! Raji still chose Riddhima for Armaan..wow!! I am so anxious to read what is Armaan gonna do now...poor him!! he must have been in a big dilemma.

Sush, please update asap..I seriously can't wait to read further!!

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omg was she married !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
whome she was married to???????????
well i must say quite unique bcoz i wasn't expecting it that was quite shocking
that one is a biggg twist
i m very much eager n curious to know abt her past
poor armaan
plz do continue very soon

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shocking update

u got my brain thinking of what was ridiz's past

please update soon

i am eagerly waiting

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OMGOSHH!! I loved the update!!! But unlike the others, I thought the highlight of the update was when Armaan suddenly asked Riddhima.. "Marry me?" I was dyinggg!! :| I like stopped breathing for a while lol so intense! But hands down, nobody or at least I would've never guessed that Riddhima's past would be this...she was married! :O That was def shocking!! Your story is like a mystery lol I love it soo much!! It keeps getting more interesting as you update! Can't wait for Armaan's reaction..he's probably mad at his mom too!

Update very veryy sooon!! :)

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Hey Sushmita!

3 words for you! OH MY GOSH! Did anybody ever tell you that you are such a brilliant writer? I mean, I loved your writing SO much that once I started reading this I just couldn't stop. I read your other FF of AR also! And When I was going through the FF forum and I went through this I just had to read it!

So I read it all today, and since its raining outside and I got soaked so I took a shower and got my laptop out got cozy in a blanket and started reading.. Starting with the introduction,

Fabulous! The introduction was AMAZING! I mean anybody that would read that introduction would get hooked completely after just reading it! And trust me I know.. Because it has happened to me Deewanaa kar gayi kuhje tumarhi introduction!

Anyways I love how this FF is from Armaans point of view! There are many FF's on this forum that have a male's point of view, but your FF is just great! It's extraordinary which makes it so it just makes the person that's reading it ... ADDICTED! Its hard not to get addicted to a FF like this ..

Anyway, coming to the story ...

I love the plot of this story! On the first chapter you just described the personalities of each character of the story so clearly that you can picture what the character would look like and the personality! reminded me of when my primary teacher used to tell me show vs tell .. and you did the exact! That's what makes a wonderful writer which YOU clearly are!

Riddhima's character is really really sensitive and cute! She is just adorable .. I could totally picture her ( and I pictured Jenny and I am a Kajen fan ) wearing armaan's military shorts with a loose t-shirt on! Cutie! AHAHA! Armaan was clearly not wanting to share his clothes with anybody else!

Armaan is very protective of his mom which makes him a total sweetheart! But man, he shouldn't had yelled at poor Riddhima .. poor her .. He made her cry!

Muskaan is so funny! Amazing way of waking up someone Muski! Thanks for the wonderful idea .. maybe i'll try it on my brother , speaking of which he's treating himself to a nap right now ..

Rahul and his use of "SAALE!" .. I love how whenever Armaan blasts his anger out at Riddhima, he would always go and console her! The sweetest part was when he didn't sign the papers and then went to her bedroom to console her! I feel so bad for Riddhima! My heart goes out to her! - Even though this is a fictional story

Armaan is such a cutie! I loved how he blurted out how he'll just laze around since Riddhima's salary will be enough for them! Rahul took advantage of that .. Obviously .. What did Armaan really expect RAHUL to not talk about that and miss a chance of teasing session? Yeah right!

At the end the statement that Riddhima made : " I was already married " Just shocked the wits out of me! Like seriously! WHOA! Was I expecting that? Naaah, THAT I was definitely not expecting! Now your making me fall in love with this story all the more! I mean now I want the other part to come quickly so I can read further on! Especially after this twist to the story!

Once again, I'll say it again! You are a brilliant writer and theres no doubt in that and along with it, your story is addicting as it could get - or can it get more addicting? After this I can surely expect THAT!

Whoa! That was a long comment don't you think? Anyways when will you be updating? I'm just joking update when ever your schedule lets you! But don't make us wait a lot of time! So update sooon!

HERES A HUGE HUG FROM ME TO YOU! TRUST ME, I WOULD MAKE THIS LONGER BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO GO REALLY LONG AND PLUS I HAVE TO GO SOON ALSO.. SO HERES THE HUG!

Love,

Anmol

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dude...you are one hell of a writer!!! that was a heck of an amazing part!! great job! cant wait for the next part!

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oh my god!!!!!! dat was d first reaction i gave out..

d least i expected was to say she saw her parents marriage falling out she spent bad days in orphangae, wa adopted n left..

bt dis was a twist.. i mean she was married...bt den wt she is dng der nw..

cmng 2 armaan.. if his mom knew abt it al d way thru y didn't she not givn an hint to poor ammy...he cld made sum mental prepration d least he wldn't hav got angry on d poor soul...i thnk armaan shld jus go on n giv her a tight hug..

bt d ciffhanger again..

v reaching 150 pgs.. woohhh

thnx 4 d pm

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