SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 6

whoa?!?!?! Neeta bhabhi = witch in saavan's love story!?!?
KOOLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
lol amisha....lagta hai ki tumhe music baut pasand hai! 😆 😆

Oh Ho Amisha Neetha as a scheming Baabhi; very hard to accept it, but hope urnt going Ekta's way....

Beautiful update, Amisha!! 👏 So, the thorn in SaaVan's happiness is Neeta..😔 Hope, her plans go haywire, and Shravan is able to prove that is a capable and responsible person.

Originally posted by: maris08

Oh Ho Amisha Neetha as a scheming Baabhi; very hard to accept it, but hope urnt going Ekta's way....

 

Still very nice and diff story... I can guess from the precap what will happen to Saachi , waiting for ur next instalment  to either confirm my doubts or whether u will spring a surprise...

whoa!! one of the tracks left half way in the show- a scheming neeta😉 good to see it..some spice in the story😛 btw love the inclusion of the caps in ur updates...the ones in the recent update took me back to those golden days😍😍 Barun is looking so handsome in it😳😳

Lovely! Pleaaaase do continue 😆

I will be updating with episodes 5 & 6 by this weekend...so stay tuned 😳 ideas are welcomed...!😃

That is GREAT!!!!!!
THX!

 

Episode 5:

 Recap: SaaVan enter their room & are surprised with the decorations & gift..SaaVan patch up & Neeta is feeling jealous because SaaVan are getting all the attention

 

**Morning****

Saavan are fast asleep in each other arms & then Shravan's phone alarm goes off & he quietly gets out of bed to get ready for office. Saachi meanwhile is still sleeping..she then wakes up & sees Shravan getting ready..

Saachi: shravanji, aap itne saj sawar ke kahan jaa rahe ho?

Shravan: Main office jaa raha hu, aaj se main zimidar banda banke dikhaunga…aur Saachi…mujhe yeh bhi dekhna hai ki office mein koi sexy wali secretary hai ke nahi…(he's just pulling Saachi's leg to see her reaction)

Saachi: makes a face & says, "Sexy Secretary? Aap pagal toh nahi ho gaye ho ? Aap mere pati ho ! Aap mere ilawa koi nahi dekh sakte!"

Shravan smiles & walks away while Saachi turns her face & starts to think what she's gonna do…shravan is watching this & is having fun making Saachi pareshaan..

Saachi: ab mujhe hi kuch karna hai is sexy secretary ke baare mein…main bhi dekhti hu ki mere pati kis dayan ke haanth mein phas jaata hai ~

Shravan meanwhile goes downstairs where his mom, dadi, Nidhi & Neeta are all standing..Ma is holding a thali & is about to do aarti on Shravan when he asks, ma yeh sab kya hai ?

Madhura: Shravan beta aaj tumhaara pehla din hai office mein toh tumhaara aarti karna hai ~ apna muh meetha karo….

Dadi gives him a hug & says, mera bittu apne papa ka haanth badha raha hai ~ yeh bohut achi baat hai ~

Shravan: Thanks Dadi, aakhir mujhe hi zimidar bana hai  aur mujhe ache se check bhi karna hai ke agar sab apna kaam theek se kar rahe hai ya nahi~ he turns & sees Saachi & says, Right Sachi?

Sachi smugs at him ~ she makes a plan in her mind that she'll join the office too & spy on Shravan

Shravan smiles & walks out the door…

Neeta is also surprised that Shravan got up so early for the office ! She then decides to follow him to see if he really is going to office or not…

 

**Office**

 

Shravan goes inside the office all dressed up looking hot & he walks around looking at the girls as they all say "good morning sir"..then he bumps into Pratap who is shocked to see him in the office so early…

Shravan: Good Morning Dad !

Pratap: Good Morning Beta ! He looks at his watch & says, wow beta ! Abhi toh sirf 8am hai aur tum itni subhe subhe aa gaye ho office mein ! Very good beta ! Very good! I'm proud of you! He looks at Shravan's clothes & says, Haan…yeh hui naa baat…aise kapde pehnte hai office mein….Aao Shravan tujhe main apne Secretary se milwata hu…

Shravan gets excited & says, Ok Papa chalo..

Pratap takes Shravan into a conference room where non other than Saachi is sitting at the table with a folder in front of her…Shravan looks at her & is surprised to see her..

Saachi: Good Morning sir 😃

Pratap smiles & says Shravan maine Saachi ko hire kiya hai Secretary ke position par...ab toh main chalta hu..Saachi tujhe saare details batayegi project ke baare mein...he then leaves…

Shravan then comes to Saachi & says, Ohh Miss Secretary…toh tumhi aa gayi….very nice…

Saachi: Toh Mr. Shravan Jaiswal, kaise lagi apni sexy secretary?

Shravan: Saachi tum itni sexy bhi nahi ho….

Saachi: KYA ? Matlab??

Shravan: Matlab yeh, ki tumne sari pehna hai ~ sexy secretary toh business suits pehnti hai…

Saachi: Sari ? tumhaara matlab yeh hai ki main sari mein sexy nahi lagti hu?
Shravan: Nahi Saachi, woh baat nahi hai, tum bas….he then stares at her…

(BG music: aakhon se tune yeh kya keh diya…dil yeh deewana dhadakne laga…..)

Then Neeta comes inside & says, oh ho…tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho ? Papa ne ek important meeting rakha hai abhi…chalo chalo…

SaaVan then go inside the meeting room & are distracted by each other….Pratap is explaining a new project which will be launched today & is handing the project over to SaaVan who will be responsible for it….

Saachi goes to her desk & starts working on the project while Shravan can't keep his eyes off of her…Saachi then looks up & sees Shravan staring at her..

Saachi: Kya hai ?

Shravan: Kuch nahi ~ Bas dekh raha tha ki tum apna kaam ache se kar rahi ho ke nahi….waise tumhaara sari itni buri bhi nahi hai ~

Saachi blushes ~😳

Meanwhile, Neeta is watching all of this & says hmm…yeh dono toh office aa toh gaye hai lekin phir bhi romance ka chakar hai ~ she walks away & goes back to work…

Pratap then comes to Saachi & asks her if she has started the project yet or not..

Saachi is telling Pratap about how she's planning on doing the project..while all this is happening Shravan is drooling over Saachi's beauty…yaar main itna buddhu tha..mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri saachi itni pyari hai aur itni hardworking hai…just then a co-worker taps him on the shoulder & asks him about a file ~

Shravan: haan haan tum file mere papa se lelo mere paas koi file nahi hai ~

Then he sees Saachi sitting at her cubicle & typing..he calls her up & decides to tease her..

Shravan: Saachi tum peeche hat na ~ mera view block ho raha hai ~

Saachi turns to see the 2 girls talking to each other & rolls her eyes & hangs up the phone…

Shravan smiles & gets back to work…

Neeta on the other hand decides to test Shravan to see if he's really serious about his work or not ~she asks Shravan for a file which he doesn't know about & he tells her, Yaar Bhabhi yeh toh mera pehla din hai office mein ~ mereko kya pata ki kounsa file kahan hai ~ aap dad se puch na…

Neeta: Shravan ab tumko bhi zimidar bana hai ~ Tujhe main sikhadungi ki files kahan pe hote hai …

She then takes Shravan into the filing room & shows him all the files & projects which they have been working on…

Meanwhile…

Saachi is working hard on the project which Pratap gave her..she is a bit confused on whether Shravan was joking with her or if he was serious…while she's thinking all this Shravan comes up behind her & covers her eyes.

Saachi: Koun hai?
Shravan: Bhoot hai ~

Saachi: Shravanji kya hai, main kaam kar rahi hu na…

Shravan sits down next to her & looks into her eyes…..(BG music: tere mast mast do nain…mere dil ka le gaye chain…mera dil ka le gaye chain…tere mast mast do nain…)

 

End……….

 

Precap: Pratap is asking Saachi for the project she's been working on & she accidently gives him the wrong file…….

Good going Amisha...