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SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 (Page 26)

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Very nice update saavan too cute continue soon plzzSmile

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loved the update Amisha!!
do continue soon!!

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Ok Amisha who is this baddie - Tara, Ranbir, the mechanic, Pappu...so many people

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Amisha

keep writing Do not stop writing.
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So now there will be a slight twist in the storyWink
I am in the middle of writing the next update...til then keep reading & posting your comments & stay tuned ofcozEmbarrassed

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Episode 18:

 

Recap: SaaVan re-live their Mumbai moments…a mysterious person has been following SaaVan & leaves a mysterious note on their bed.

 

 

 

And now for episode 18..

 

SaaVan look at each other with shocked expressions as they read the note left on their bed. Shravan: Yeh bhala koun hai jo hamara peecha kar raha hai kabse..?

Saachi: Shravanji, kahin yeh Ranbir toh nahi hai?

Shravan has a thinking expression on his face. Agar us saala Ranbir ne yeh kiya toh main usko chodunga nahi…

He turns towards the balcony & sees Ranbir with an evil smile on his face. He is frauding someone outside..Shravan gets confused as he sees this..

Yeh sala Ranbir kar kya raha hai.?

Saachi gets confused too..

Shravanji, Ranbir logon ko fraud karta hai? Lekin papa ne bola ki yeh bohut bada business man hai? Toh phir yeh fraud kyu karega logon ko?

Shravan shakes his head. Main abhi pata lagata hu…he starts to walk towards the door & Saachi stops him..

Shravanji, pehle soch toh lo thande dimaag se..shayad Ranbir ne aisa kiya nahi?

Shravan has a stern look on his face & says, Dekh Saachi tu bohut bholi hai…tujhe in cheezon ka pata nahi hota. Main Ranbir ko bachpan se jaanta hu…

He goes out the door & runs down the stairs to see Ranbir out in the lobby trying to bribe a business person..he listens quietly behind a pillar where Ranbir cannot see.

Ranbir: acha bhai, yeh paise le aur mujhe chup chap file do abhi ke abhi..

He is talking to a black-hooded guy, whose face we cannot see..

Black-hoodie: Ranbir Ranbir Ranbir….mujhe 25 laks chahiye…not 10 laks..agar 25 laks nahi hai tere paas toh kaam nahi chalne wala hai…

Ranbir looks totally flustered as it seems he has been trying to negotiate a deal with this guy since the past 1 hr.

Shravan in the mean time gets confused. He thinks to himself, yeh toh kissi ke saath dhoka kar raha hai, toh iske haanth mein banduk bhi nahi hai…aakhir kisne goli chalayi thi?

He decides to keep listening as he doesn't trust Ranbir for the life of him.

Ranbir is getting more & more frustrated as he has no way of getting more cash than he already had..

Blackhoodie: Dekh Ranbir, mera aur time mat waste kar. Already 1 ghanta tumne barbad kiya aur mujhe agar tere saath sauda karna hai toh 25 laks do aur tujhe file milega….

Ranbir gives an evil lok at blackhoodie guy & shoves the 10 lak down blackhoodie's pocket & tries to snatch the file from his hand.

Shravan decides to leave as he does not want to have anything to do with this situation.

He then goes outside the hotel & suddenly his phone rings…he looks at the caller id & sees a blocked number.

Shravan gets a bit scared as he doesn't know of anyone who would call him from a blocked number. Aakhir koun ho sakta hai jisne letter likha hai ?

Shravan answers his phone..it is none other than Rocket Singh…!!

Rocket: Oye Sarvan…!!! He shoots his gun….

Shravan jumps up & says, Paji aap? Aap kahan?

Rocket interrupts him & says, oye Sarvan…!! Meri nazar hai tere pe….! Tu mere se nahi bachega haan….!! Tu abhi ke abhi apne kamre mein aa warna main teri biwi ko goli chalaunga…!!

Shravan gets scared & runs up to the room…he opens the door & finds Rocket strangling Saachi…

Shravan freaks out & screams at Rocket.

Oye khoteyaa…!! Tu chahta kya hai ? Meri Saachi ko abhi ke abhi chod…!!!

Rocket Singh fires his gun again..

 

This time the hotel security people hear the gun shot & run up to the room…as they are running, Shravan is fighting with Rocket Singh….

Rocket: oYE Sarvan…!! Agar tum mera paisa wapas nahi karega toh teri biwi ko nahi chodunga…!!! Tu soch lena….Yah phir mera paisa wapas do, ya phir teri woti ko maar dunga haaan,…..!!

Shravan punches Rocket in the face – he is blue in the face.

Just then Mandira walks in…..

Mandira: Praji….!! Yeh sab aap kya kar rahe ho….!!

Rocket: oYE meri behen….! Tu hat jaa yahan se….!! Main Sarvan ko dekhta hu…!

Mandira looks at Shravan who is super pissed off.

She gives him her typical sharmili types look...and says, yeh toh mera hero hai...she blushes as Saachi looks at her with a jealous look.

Rocket fires his gun again. SaaVan & Mandira all cover their ears.

Rocket yells real loud: Sarvan...!! Agar tumne mere paise wapas nahi ki na, toh tujhe main goli chalaunga haan...!!

Shravan looks scared & says, hhhaan paaji, mmmain intezaam karlunga, lekin mujhe 10 din toh do...

Rocket fires his gun again. 10 din...!!! 10 din nahi. 5 din..he gives an evil look.

Mandira goes to him & says, Praji, please aap mere hero ko pareshaan mat kariyo...

Rocket: O meri behen, tu nahi samjhegi...!!!

Security guys take Rocket out the room & Rocket hollers, Sarvan...!! Meri nazar hai tumpe...!!! main 5 din mein wapas aaunga tere paas...!!

Mandira lowers her head & apologizes to SaaVan for her brother's batameezi..

She runs after her brother

SaaVan in the meantime are in a shocked stage & do not know what to say. Shravan was embarrassed that this had come out in front of Saachi. He had to borrow 25 lakhs to give to Saachi as per their prior contract agreement. But now everything had changed. Saachi was is life...his love...his everything.

Shravan lowered his head & turned to Saachi, who was very upset.

Saachi: Shravanji yeh sab kya tha?

Shravan still with his head lowered, says, Sssachi, I'm sorry. Maine Rocket Singh se paise borrow kiya tha jab humaara contract ka deal chala tha. Who 25 lakhs ka clause leker main pareshaan ho gaya tha ki main itne saare paise kahan se lau...

Saachi is now really upset & does not want to hear another word. As Shravan is still mumbling, she walks out on him & goes into the lobby. All the memories flash back to her as she is reminded of the way she was treated initially during the marriage. The ways which Shravan had mistreated her & yet she never had complained..Saachi keeps walking & winds up sitting at the bar. Back in the room, Shravan is still mumbling, & does not notice that Saachi is not there in the room.

He lifts his head up and sees that Saachi is not there. Saachi...!! Saachi...!! Saachi tum kahan ho ? He looks here & there in the room & does not know where she is. He panics...!!!

 

Precap: Saachi is drinking at the bar & here comes Pappu sitting next to her & trying to cheer her up. Shravan happens to walk in the bar & sees this & gets jealous...! Stay tuned :P

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Amisha everytime you update there is always some twist in the story. Its like the original but not like it. Gr8t going so far. Hope the story unfolds quickly, so that all the tangles for Shravan gets untangled.

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