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SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 (Page 24)

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Amishaaa, I have caught up with your story now! Loving it the way you're writing it and giving it a whole new direction. Keep it up! Would love to get rid of RM pretty soon *sigh*. Anyway, looking forward to the next udpateBig smile

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Magnificent update, Amisha di!!!!!!!
Love to see you back with epi. 15!!!! Tongue
Great job!!!!Thumbs UpClap


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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Ewww RM!  Pulling a woman's hair, deserves what he got - want to knock his teeth out.

Finally, SaaVan gets alone time!!

Love your update Amisha!

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged

Episode 16:

 

Recap: RM is out of the picture now, SaaVan are in their own world together..

SaaVan are in bed together'.in each other's arms'not caring about anything around them'.the lights are off, Saachi is lying on top of Shravan's chest'and Shravan is holding Saachi ever so close to himself in one blanket.'.they both are so in love'so one'.no one can ever separate them'.they are one soul'..as they both sleep in each other's arms the wind from the balcony caresses them both & Saachi gets a bit cold from the wind so she moves closer to Shravan'.Shravan senses that Saachi is cold so he pulls the blanket over them both'now they both are under 1 blanket'he gazes upon his beautiful wife...& gently kisses her forehead'Saachi feels his kiss & smiles as her eyes are still closed..she holds him tightly'he looks at her & Saachi opens her eyes & looks lovingly at Shravan'he leans forward to kiss her again on her sweet lips and holds her ever so close to himself'.(BG music: Te amo mi ti amo'teri hazaaron dhoop hai'.fallin so crazy in love'..)

They both fall back asleep''

 

*******Morning********

 

The sun streams through the balcony & into SaaVan's room'.both SaaVan are still under 1 blanket & still chipaked to each other'.Shravan opens his eyes & sees Saachi is still asleep..he decides to get up & get ready for work as he has a lot of work to do for this project'As much as he wanted to stay with Saachi he had to go to work'.after all, Pratap gave him this project to handle. He doesn't want to wake Saachi up so he gently puts Saachi's head on the pillow & wraps her up with the blanket'He puts his pants on & goes into the bathroom'

Saachi senses that Shravan has gotten up..she feels around for him with her hand'.Shravanji'..Shravanji uthiye naa'aapko office ke liye tayaar hona hai..She opens her eyes to find Shravan not in the bed'Yeh Shravanji kahan gaye?

Saachi pulls off the blanket & is wrapped in the white silk cloth which Shravan had given her when he had first confessed his love for her'

Saachi goes to the bathroom & notices the door is locked & she hears the shower..Ohh'toh Shravanji abhi shower le rahe hai'hm'.main inke liye nashta order karti hu..

Saachi calls the lobby & orders breakfast for 2 in the room'

 

Saachi opens the curtains & looks outside at the view'the whole of Mumbai could be seen from their window'.what a site'.!

Just then Shravan came out of the shower with a towel wrapped around his waist'he sees his beautiful wife standing with her back towards him admiring the beautiful view'

He comes from behind & holds Saachi close to him & kisses her neck'..Saachi blushes & says, Good Morning Shravanji'.

Shravan: Hmm'good morning Saachiji ?

Saachi: Kya view hai na Shravanji'!! Poora sheher yaahn se dikhta hai'

Shravan was not a bit interested in the city view as he had Saachi in his arms & only cared about her'Meri baahon mein toh ek aur bhi acha view hai'

Saachi gets confused. Matlab?
Shravan: Matlab tum'!!

 

Saachi turns red again & blushes'Shravanji, aap bhi na..!!

She turns toward him & smiles & kisses him on the forehead'.shravan smiles..just then the door bell rings..

Shravan: O teri..!! Ab yeh koun aa gaya darwaaze pe ?

Saachi: Shravanji, maine aapke liye nashta order kiya..Shayad wohi hai..

Shravan goes to open the door & in comes the waiter with the breakfast tray'

Shravan: Oh.! Mr. Hopeful aap !

Waiter: Ji, Jaiswal saab yeh aapka breakfast le aaya hu'aur yeh rahi aapka newspaper'he hands Shravan the Mumbai Times'.

Shravan takes the paper & the breakfast tray & thanks the waiter & lets the waiter go'

Saachi then takes an apple & starts to peel it while Shravan gets ready'She hands him his chai & Shravan says, Saachi yaad hai jab hum pehli baar aaye they aur jab tumne mujhe chai diya tha aur phir meri ungli tumne chai mein dala tha'.!

Saachi laughs & nods'haan Shravanji mujhe yaad hai'.

Shravan: Saachi, phir se karo na'.:P

Saachi puts Shravan's index finger in the chai to remind him that the chai is hot'

Saachi: Haan shreya bol'

Shreya: Didi, abhi mujhe ek party ka invitation aaya hai reception pe'aaj raat ko ek bohut bada party hai hotel mein'aap chalogi mere saath?

Saachi: Bache, mereko nahi pata kyu ki mujhe tera jiju ko wait karna hai aur pata nahi agar who chalenge party pe yah nahi'

Shreya: Kyu didi? Jiju ko parties pasand nahi hai kya?

Saachi is feeling a bit bad, 'she wanted to be with Shravan at night but at the same time did not want to hurt Shreya's feelings either'

Saachi: Shreya dekh, abhi Shravanji kaam ke liye gaye hue hai aur jab woh wapas aayenge phir unse baat karungi theek hai? Then I will message you.

Shreya: theek hai didi'she puts the phone down.

 

Meanwhile'''''..

Shravan is listening attentively to the speaker at the presentation & is also taking careful notes about the project he has to do. There was not enough time left to finish the project so he wanted to make sure that it is done properly.

He then gets up & goes into another conference room & opens his laptop'he smiles as he sees his & Saachi's photo on the background display'He then texts Saachi again'."I love you." & smiles'..

Day dream'.He then looks up & sees Saachi in front of him'.she is looking sexy'wearing a short black dress with her hair open & with light makeup'..she is trying to seduce him with the dance zara zara touch me  touch me touch me'zara zara hold me hold me hold me o zara zara oh'oh'bin tere sanam is jahan mein bekarar ho dum da dum da dum'she is caressing his face & teasing him'.her hands touch her face & into her hair as she swings her waist around'he puts his hands on her face & kisses her while she is exploring Shravan':P :P he suddenly wakes up & sees that Saachi is not there in front of him..


Shravan: O teri'.ab main din mein Saachi ka sapna dekh raha hu'.he blushes..

Just then his phone buzzes..there is a text from Saachi asking about his plans for tonight & what time he was planning on coming back.

He calls her & says Saachi main tumhaare saath time spend karna chahta hu, hum log kahin bahir ghumne chale?

Saachi: Shravanji abhi ek invitation aaya hai reception se ' aaj shaam ko ek party hai hotel mein..

Shravan: Nahi Saachi hum nahi chalenge'mujhe tumhaare saath bahir jaana hai'

Saachi: Acha Shravanji theek hai'hum raat ko kahin chalenge bahir'aap kitne baje aaoge?

Shravan: Hmm'ek ghante mein aaunga'.tayaar rehna':P

Saachi: theek hai, main aapka wait karti hu'

Shravan hangs up the phone'

He quickly finishes his work up & plans out his night out with Saachi'

Meanwhile, Saachi calls Shreya & tells her that Shravan wants to take her out somewhere so she will not be able to go to the party..she suggests Shreya to take Bunty with her so she won't get bored.

Shreya is not too happy but agrees'

 


Precap: SaaVan dance in the rain & relive their Mumbai memories'.

 

 



Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 21 May 2011 at 2:46pm

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Wow really great and awsome update cant wait for more continue soon plzz Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Amisha so nice to see saavan moments in this update.Saavan having a great time in mumbai in your ff.keep writing.its going great!!!

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Update soon - I want to relive Mumbai SaaVan moments too!

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
I have noticed a lot of previous readers who used to read my ff are not reading my recent episodesOuch Very sad..!!!

Please please read my new episodes as it takes time for me to write them & effort. I would appreciate it if you would comment as well. ThanksEmbarrassed

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