Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amisha everytime you update there is always some twist in the story. Its like the original but not like it. Gr8t going so far. Hope the story unfolds quickly, so that all the tangles for Shravan gets untangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow really great update shravan get jealous cant wait  write soon plzz😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
just went through the last few updates that i had missed and must say, gr8 going, amisha!!!👏👏 the popular cameo characters-ranbeer, rocky singh, mandira all in mumbai and from the precap, looks like even pappu will make a show!!! would be gr8 to see all of them in one frame...looking forward to the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
woow wonderful update!!
cant wait for the next one!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice chap.looking forward for the next update amisha!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Episode 19...

 

Saachi is sitting at the bar & keeps thinking about the past...all the moments with Shravan she had spent...the bartender keeps looking at her & asks her if she wants a drink. Saachi nods & the bartender notices that she is a girl & maybe she would drink a girly type of drink so he makes her an apple martini :P He puts the glass in front of her & she takes the glass & drinks up her drink in 3 gulps...she lowers her glass & has a big smile on her face. Haaan...yeh hui na baat...she giggles...

Just then Pappu walks up to her..

Pappu: Arre Didi...!! Aap yahan kya kar rahi hai?

Saachi: Papppuuu...!!! she jumps up & gives him a hug.

Tu kya kar raha hai Pappuuu ??

 

Pappu smiles & says Saachi didi aap phir se Mumbai aa gayi hai...!!

Saachi laughs & says, haan Pappu main phir se Mumbai aa gayi hu…..

Pappu: Arre wah….! Ab toh main bhi piyunga aapke saath.

Pappu orders a drink from the bartender & soon both Saachi & Pappu get drunk & start singing songs loudly…Ladkadi ki kaachi kaachi pe ghoda godhe ki dum…& rail gaddi chug chug chug chug

Just then Shravan walks into the bar & sees Saachi & Pappu drunk & laughing loudly & singing songs.

He gets a bit confused at what he is seeing, but then later realizes that it is Pappu & Saachi getting drunk…Ab yeh clown kahan se aa gaya….!! Main toh gayaaa…..! O teriii…..!!!

Shravan angrily walks over to the bar & decides he'll order some drinks too. He orders a whiskey on the rocks & as he is drinking, Saachi notices that Shravan is there & is drinking. (Flashback from previous Mumbai trip when Shravan is drinking & Saachi walks up to him & says, Shravanji aapko aadat nahi hai yeh sab karne ke liye toh phir mat kariye…) Saachi is half drunk & decides to walk up to Shravan & stop him from drinking.

Saachi: Ssshhhravanji……..!! aap aa gaye ho mere peeche peeche….!

Shravan turns his head sideways & says, Kya hai?

Shravan orders another drink. And decides not to pay attention to Saachi as he is in the mood to drink and not think about things that give him a headache.

Saachi is trying to grab the glass from Shravan's hand & Shravan pushes her away.

Luckily Saachi does not fall down, instead she says, Shravan yeh sab kya hai….!
Shravan: Just go away…! Go to your Pappu…!!

Saachi gets upset & says, Pappu??

Shravan: haan..tumhaara Pappu…

He drinks another drink. And then another..

Saachi gets frustrated & walks away…

She goes back to Pappu who is now talking to Ratna, his stalker who keeps following him everywhere he goes…..Pappu is trying to get away from Ratna as she is so annoying…he then goes on the dance floor & starts dancing to Pappu can't dance sala….which he really couldn't dance for the life of him…!!

Saachi sees Pappu making a fool out of himself & decides to ignore Shravan & Pappu all together &  goes to the DJ to play some music. As she is walking to the DJ, Shravan notices her & decides to come in front of her.

SSaaachhhiii….!!! He hugs Saachi tightly & then starts to sing, "Aakhon mein teri…ajab si ajab si aadayein hai…..dil ko banake to patang saansein teri woh hawaayein hain…"

Saachi starts to laugh & pushes Shravan away…she then starts to sing, I am a disco dancer…….

Shravan then puts his finger on her lips & says shhh…..he looks into her eyes & sings, pee loon tere geele geele honton ki sargam, pee loon…hai peene ka mausam….tere sang ishq taari hai…tere sang ek khumari hai…tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekarari hai….

Saachi just looks at Shravan in his eyes & smiles….they both were drunk, but they still loved each other no matter what. They fought, yet they still loved each other. They still understood each other..

They both sit on the couch together & are in each others arms not caring about the world around them…they are singing whatever song is in their head. Tum mile…toh lamhe tham gaye tum mile toh saare ghum gaye tum mile….toh mil gayaa…asmaaann…..!! Both giggle….!

Shravan: acha Saachi yeh batao. Tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho?

Saachi: hmmm Shravanji…main aapko………………..she looks left & right….then she says, jitna bhi yeh world round hai na, round and round and round, utna hi aapse pyar karti hu.

Shravan has his weirdo look on his face when he's confused, so he says, round….!!

Saachi: hmmm….

Just then the restaurant management comes to them & says, madam, sir ab restaurant ka closing time hai..

Saachi: Haan toh phir hum kya kare..?

Shravan: Haan toh band kardena….mere baap ka restaurant thodi hai.

Saachi: aap log bindass band kardo haan..

Manager: Lekin maam, sir, closing time hai..aap logon ko jaana chahiye.

Saachi looks at Shravan & says, Shravanji, ab hum chale? Hum apni pyaari pyaari baatein kahin aur karenge..

Shravan: hmmm….

Both are totally drunk…..!! and cannot even walk in a straight line…Saachi is stumbling & falling all over the place & Shravan is trying to hold her up.

He then picks her up in his arms & carries her back to their room..

Both fall on top of each other on the bed…Shravan looks into Saachi's eyes & sees that she loves him to pieces…she cannot even think of one moment without him. And he could not think of one moment without her either.


Shravan then decides to have a pillow fight with Saachi just like last time so he pretends that she punched him in the eye & hollers, owww….!!

Saachi: chot lagi..???

Shravan: hmmm…!! Yahan..! dekh na mere aakh mein…!

Saachi looks & then sees that he his playing games, so she throws a pillow at him..

Then Shravan throws one back at her & eventually they both fall off the bed…~

Both holler owww…!! And then break out into laughter…

Saachi gets up & decides to change into her pajamas…she takes off her earrings & jewelry..

Shravan is knocked out & doesn't even realize where he is…!

Saachi gets ready for bed and sees Shravan on the floor & is scared as his mouth is half open & his eyes are closed.

Shravanji….!!! Kya hua…???

Shravan doesn't move….

Saachi then decides to throw cold water on his face to see if that would wake him up.

Shravan wakes up in one jhatka…

He gets up & sings, zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga haan laga…shaadi ban gayi umar kait ki saza haan saza….

Saachi busts out laughing & helps Shravan out of his clothes & into his pajamas…

Shravanji ab aap so jaao….aapko neend aayi hai….

Shravan flops on the bed & is fast asleep..

Saachi smiles and goes to sleep as well…

 

 

 

 

Precap: SaaVan are both hungover & have no idea what had happened the night before. As they try to remember the events, Saachi remembers the argument they had had over money when Rocket Singh came. 

Posted: 12 years ago
Zor Ka jhatka.. 🤣 nice update amisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Amisha - they still remain turnip and pottol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  😆
Drunk always equal nahin!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zor ka jahtka that was too funny great update cant wait for the next one😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally. Finally caught up again!😳
Good going with the story, Amisha. Really liked the latest update. Zor Ka Jhatka!!!😆