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Hi everyone ! Now that our fav show has ended & I know how everyone is really sad about no more SaaVan & their precious moments together, I have decided to start a new fanfic & to re-create the memories of SaaVan & their journey together. I would really appreciate everyone's comments & suggestions are welcome as well ! So this is my story...I am starting from the post -accident episode where Shravan is holding Saachi's hand in the hospital as seen in this pic...& will put in my own scenes of SaaVan...
Shravan: Saanchi please come back !! Tumhaare bina main adhoora hu...Saachi Please ! Please come back to me !! Shravan is sobbing as he is holding Saachi's hand & his tears fall on her hand as he is sobbing.
As he is sobbing, Sanchi opens her eyes & her grip on Shravan's hands get tight. Shravan looks up & sees that Sanchi has opened her eyes & he is full of joy !!
Sanchi: Shravanji ? Aap ro kyu rahe ho ?
Shravan exclaims with joy: Sanchi !! & hugs her tightly'& says Sanchi main tumse bohut pyar karta hu ! Sanchi I'm so sorry for everything..! he sobs like a baby
Sanchi: Shravan ji aap please mat ro..main bhi aapse maafi maangna chahti hu, mujhe us tarah se aapko chod ke jaana nahi chahiye tha'she then gets dizzy & closes her eyes & loses consciousness'..
Shravan: Sanchi ! Sanchi aakhein kholo pls !!!
Sanchi goes unconscious & Shravan freaks out & starts calling out to the doctor to come & see what has happened to her. The doctors then come in to see what has happened & tell Shravan to wait outside. He goes out & calls up Pratap.
Shravan: Papa ! aap please abhi turant aa jaaye hospital mein, Sachi ko hosh aaya tha lekin who phir se behosh ho gayi thi.Shravan starts to cry.
Pratap: Beta tu chinta mat kar, sab theek ho jaayega main abhi aa raha hu Sachi ke Mamaji ke saath. (don't' worry I am changing Mamaji's attitude toward's Shravan)
Shravan: Papa lekin agar mamaji aayenge toh mujhe bohut daantenge aur mujhe Sachi se alag kardenge.
Pratap: Beta nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga, hum abhi aa rahe hai hospital mein.
Shravan: theek hai papa. Shravan hangs up the phone & looks inside Sachi's room where the doctors are trying to figure out what is happening to her. One doctor comes out & says to Shravan, " Sachi abhi bohut heavily medicated hai isilye usko poori tarah se hosh nahi aayi. Lekin abhi usko araam karne do aur zyaada usko tension ki baatein mat karo warna woh pareshaan ho jaayegi.
Shravan: Lekin doctor kya main andar jaa sakta hu Sachi ke paas? Mujhe uske paas baitna hai..(BG music ' bin tere o sajan suna hai mera mann tarse dil tere liye)
Doctor: sure, but please don't start any tension wali baat with her.
Shravan goes inside & sits next to Sachi & watches her as she sleeps'.(Bin tere O sanam suna hai mera mann tarse dil'tere liye'.playing in the back)
Shravan: Sachi, main tumhaare bina ek pal nahi jee sakta. Please tum jaldi se theek ho jao aur ghar challenge. Jaisa tum kahogi waisa hi karunga. (Shravan cries)
Just then, Pratap & Mamaji come inside the room ' both are shocked to see what has happened to Sachi & Shravan gets up & says Papa, Mamaji dekhiye na kya hua hai meri Sachi ko. Mujhse badi galti hui hai..maine iske saath ladai kiya lekin sazaa Sachi ko kyu mil rahi hai ? Shravan sobs. Pratap hugs him tightly & says, "Beta tum chinta mat kar. Saachi jald se jald theek ho jaayegi. Hum uska ilaaj karenge kissi best doctor se."
Mamaji: Shravan tum honsla rakh..theek ho jaayegi Sachi.
Just then Sachi opens her eyes & sees Mamaji, Pratap & Shravan standing around her.
Sachi: Mamaji, Papa, Shravanji.. Aap log yahan kab aaye? Mujhe kya hua hai ?
Shravan runs to her & says, "Sachi tumhaara accident hua hai aur tum jaldi theek ho jaayegi tumhe kuch nahi hua h ai.
The doctors walk in
& tell Shravan, Pratap, Mamaji & Sachi that she has some injuries which
will heal quickly & that in a few days she can go home.
Mamaji: Doctor lekin Sachi ko kuch serious toh nahi hua hai na ?
Doctor: Nahi sahib, kuch serious nahi hai, bas thoda injuries hue hai ' Bas aap log iska khayaal rakhna..
Mamaji: theek hai doctor. He turns to Sachi & says, "beta tum bach gayi hai is accident mein. Bas tum araam karo abhi.
Sachi then falls back asleep'.
End of 1st episode'.!
Precap: shravan is sitting next to Sachi & falls asleep holding her..(BG music: bin tere bin tere bin tere'koi khalish hai hawaon mein bin tere)
Thanks for reading my first attempt at a fanfic ! I would appreciate your comments & suggestions'!
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