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Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39 (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arpita25

lovely update dear. Clap
Thanks Arpu Smile Smile Smile

Raj k baare me ab Naina ko sab kuch pata hai bus ye nahi pata tha ki us ne Alekh ko sab kuch bataya hua hai.Confused Ab ye pata chal gaya ki Alekh ko pata tha to gussa to badhna hi tha.LOL
Obviously Naina ko bataya nahi aur Alekh ko bata diya to ye to expected hi tha na. LOL LOL LOL

Par mujhe pata hai ki Raj mana hi lega Naina ko.Wink
Vo to ab Master ban chuka hai is me Wink Wink Wink

But Alekh ne planning kaafi acchi ki thi but mujhe Raj ka vo sab kehna bahut sensible laga aur ab ye sab naya hai na Naina k liye.Embarrassed
Raj samjhta hai na sab kuch itna asaan nahi hota hai vo bhi tab jab sab itne jaldi ho gaya ho to. Tongue Tongue Tongue

But abhi bhi Pune Academy ka secret samajh me nahi aa raha hai.Confused Abhyuday kaun hai jis ka uday nahi hua hai aur Naina kyoun disturb hogi us ko dekh kar? Ouch
Ye kya tha jis ka uday nahi hua hai,Confused Confused Confused tu bhi na shaitaan..sab pata chal jaayega jab mai aage update karoongi tab. LOL LOL LOL

pls dear jaldi karna update.


Thanks a lot love for comment. HugHugHug

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 10 April 2011 at 10:51pm

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Part 29:-

"Par aisa kaise ho sakta hai Captain Das?"

"Mujhe pakki khabar mile hai Naina."

Kuch sochne lagi Naina aur fir us ne Das ko dekh kar kaha, "abhi aap jaa sakte hain Captain mai aap ko bula loongi jaroorat padne pe." Das chala gaya Naina ko ek gehri soch me dooba chod kar.

"Kuch to hai kahin jo mujhe pata nahi hai, Rajveer Sir ko maine kabhi mara hua nahi mana hai aaj tak aur shayad poori zindagi me mai ye maan bhi nahi paaongi. Kyoun officially un ki body nahi mile thi. Mujhe pata karna hi hoga sach kya hai."


After a few days:-

"Lft. Arnav Sahay reporting mam."

"At ease Lft. Sahay. Kaise rahi aap ki journey?"

"Good mam,"

"Aap ko maine jaisa batya tha maine yahan aap ko kuch khaas kaam k liye bualaya hai, ye mere liye koi oficial misin nahi hai balki ye mera personal misin hai aur mujhe poora yakeen tha ki mere is misin bus kewal ek aap hi hain jo apna 100% de sakte hain."

"It's my honour mam." Aur us k baad Naina ne Arnav ko vo sab kch samjhaya jo is misin k sucessful hone k liye jaroori tha. 

After ten days:-

"Mujhe aap se milna hai Captain."

"Ok meet me at 10 in my home."

"Thanks mam." Ye usi din ka waqt tha jab Naina ko Karan ka letter mila tha apne ghar me. (Guys i hope agar aap ko yaad ho first part jahan Naina Raj ko yaad kar k ro rahi thi, aur jis ko nahi yaad hai vo ek baar fir se part one padh sakta hai.)

Someone rang the bell of Naina's house and Naina was alone at that time in home, his parents were out, they have gone to temple. "Yes Sahay aao."

They seated in drawing room and naina bought some water for him, "Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Lft. aap itne jaldi ye kaam kar lenge", she said giving a smile.

"Yes mam, bahut mushkil tha par aap k saath jitna bhi raha hoon mai maine aap se yahi seekha hai ki adverse condition me kaise kaam karte hain aur kaise apne aap ko motvate kar sakte hain."

"Aap ko pata hai na Lft. ki ye sab maine kaise seekha hai."

"Haan mam, kaafi kuch pata hai aap k baare me aur ye rahi vo saari reports jo maine search ki hain aur ye aap padh lijiye." He handed over an envelope to her. "And mam, ab mai chaloonga."

After he left Naina opened that envelope and when she was shocked and surprised too.

Here when Sahay left naina's house he dialled a number on his cell and said, "Kaam ho gaya hai sir, haan sir jaisa aap ne kaha tha bilkul vaisa hi hai sab."

 "Mujhe maaf kar do Naina, mujhe pata hai sach pata chalne k baad bahut naraj hogi tum mujh se par mere pass aur koi option nahi hai." Raj said and sighed.

Back to Naina:- "Ye kaise ho sakta hai.........do logon ki shaklein itne kaise mil sakti hain ki........... Ye sab jhooth hai, mera dil maanane ko nahi taiyaar hai ye sab............ye mere Rajveer hi hain." aur ab Naina ki aakhon se ansoon behne lage.


In Army HQ:-

Ye us din ki baat hai jab Vyom k saath Naina HQ gayi thi aur us ko pata chala tha ki us ko Vyom ki wife ban k rehna hai.

"To problem kya hai is me Naina?"

"Sir problem nahi hai par mai.......aap to jaante hain na ki Major Vyom ka face mujhe.........''.

"Oh to mai ab samjha, Vyom ka face tum ko Captain Rajveer ki yaad dilata hai na?" "Yes sir, aur is condition me mere liye sab kuch bahut jyada mushkil ho jaata hai."

"Mai samajhta hoon Naina, par mai tumhari is duvidha ko khatam kar sakta hoon." Brigedier Dutta said. "Naina mai tum ko kuch batatna chahta hoon. Mujhe nahi pata ye sab jaane k baad tum kaise react karogi par humare misin ko sucessful karne k liye filhaal ye bahut jaroori hai."

"Aise kya baat hai sir?" Naina was confused.

"Sach ye hai Naina ki Major Vyom Rathode hi tumhare Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat hain. Tum ko us k liye jo bhi feel hota tha ya jo bhi lagta tha sab sach tha Naina aur ab mai ye baat tum se aur jyada nahi chupa sakta." Brigedier Dutta said.

Naina was shocked and she was feeling her legs shaking and her whole body trembling with fear, she was unable to move or think. Tears started forming in her eyes and the found the way to flow.She felt a slight pain rising in her heart and she was unable to control her emotions at that moment. Naina ko lag raha tha jis baat ko humesha se us ka dil keh raha tha Vyom k liye vo sahi ho hi gayi fir bhi ye sab kuch bahut ajeeb sa lag raha tha us ko aaj. Naina was about to fall on floor when someone caught her firmly in his arms and how could not she recognize the feeling was those strong arms around her. It was he, his Rajveer. "naina''..a", he screamed panickly when she fainted.

After an hour:-

Naina was taken to infirmary immedieatly and now she was fine, doctor told Rajveer that because of some sudden shock she collapsed and she will be fine after taking rest. Raj moved inside her room. "Ye sab kya tha Naina, tum apna khayal rakhna kab seekhogi? Mai kab tak tumhare aas paas rahoonga tumhara khayal rakhne k liye? Tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko super woman. Jara bhi nahi sochti ho na ki ye sab jo tum kar rahi ho us se mujhe kitne takleef hoti hai. Humesha se kehta aa raha hoon ki apne baare me bhi socha karo na par nahi. Kya halat bana li hai tum ne apni pichle do saalon me, kabhi socha hai aise tum ko dekh kar mujhe kitna dard hota hai?"

Naina was just looking at his face. "Mujhe apna khayal rakhne ki kya jaroorat hai, us k liye aap hai na? Aur jab do saalon me nahi the aap mere pass to aise hi halat honi thi na meri."

Now Raj realized that what he said all being emotinal. "Naina mai'............".

"Shhhh" she pressed her finger on his lips and said, "ab aap kuch nahi kahenge, mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai. Par mujhe is baat pe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki aap mujh se itne badi baat chupa sakte hain."

Naina k pass aaj bahut saare sawal the jin ka jawab dena tha Rajveer ko, "jaanta hoon Naina ki bahut naraj hogi tum mujh se, par meri kuch majbooriyan aise thi jin ki vajah se mai chah kar bhi tumhare pass nahi aa sakta tha. Mai chahta tha Naina ki mai tumahre pass daud k aa jaaon aur tum se kahoon ki dekho Naina mai zinda hoon, tumhare Rajveer sir zinda hai aur tum ko koi bhi fikr karne ki jaroorat nahi hai. Par mai aisa nahi kar sakta tha, mai chahta tha ki tum strong bano aur ek din mujh se bhi acchi solidier ban k dikhao, aur tum ne kiya Naina and now i feel proud on u."

"Samjhti hoon mai aap ko, par aap Vyom ban k mere saath..........i mean..........", aage kaise kya kahe Naina abhi bhi vo us k mentor hain aur kahin na kahin Naina k dil me ek baar fir se Rajveer ka us ka sir hone ka ehsaas aa hi gaya tha.

Raj looked at her face and now he clearly understood what does she mean and got that it was hard for her to say all these words herself, "tum ko kya lagta hai mai aisa kyoun kar raha tha tumhare saath?"

She bent her eyes and said, "mujhe nahi pata sir."

"Tum ko nahi pata Naina sach me?" he questinoed.

"nahi sir."

Raj took a deep breath and started, "Mai dekhna chahta tha ki kya meri Naina pe aaj bhi mera vaisa hi asar hota hai jaisa pehle hota tha?"

Naina blushed, and Raj loved to see this pink color rising in her cheeks.

But something striked her head. "Aap ko mujh par bharosa nahi tha?"

Raj smiled at her question, "Aisa nahi hai Naina, apne aap se jyada bharosa hai tum par mujhe. Par bharosa apni kismat pe nahi tha mujhe, tum jaanti ho na ki meri kismat ne mujhe humesha dhokha diya hai har ek rishte me aur mai aaj sab se door ho chuka hoon. Apna sab se pyaara dost kho diya maine, fir maine apne pita jaise Lala Sahab..........vo to mujhe apne raaste se hi hatana chahte the na. Batao Naina ab kis rishte me yakeen reh gaya hai mere liye. Meri kismat me kya hai ye to mai bhi nahi jaanta par shayad lagta hai kabhi kabhi mujhe kisi k bhi pass jaane ka hak nahi hai."

Naina was really sad to hear all this, vo insaan jis ne Naina ko humesha aage badhna sikhaya hai vo aur humesha encourage kiya hai aaj vo is tarah ki baatein kar raha hai Naina se. She could clearly see the disappointement in his eyes. "Mai hoon na aap k paas."

Raj looked at her, "Dar lagta hai Naina kahin mere saath se tum ko bhi vahi na mile jo kabhi Naveen ko mila tha."

"Aap aisa kyoun kehte hain sir, jo jis ki kismat me hota hai vahi milta hai na. Agar aap nahi hote meri takdeer me to aap kya do saalon baad mujhe vapas milte aise?"

Raj smiled, "ek baar fir se soch lo Naina."

"Soch liya hai sab." She assured him.

"To tum mujhe apni zindagi me accept kar rahi ho?" touching her chin. Naina didn't answer, as she was unable to look in to those black pool of love. She just nodded her head.

 "I love u Naina." He whispered in her ears hugging her.


Paya maine, paya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,

Honton pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paya maine, paya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,

Sapna banaya tumhe, neendun mein bulaya tumhe

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi


But she was unable to respond as if she want to enjoy the moment, when he finally said those three magical words to her and she wanted the time to stop here forever so that she can be in his arms forever. "Jawab do Naina, do u love me?" he asked gently.

She was blushing to accept the love. "Ab kahogi nahi to mujhe kaise pata chalega Naina?"

"Kya kahoon jab aap ko sab pata hai to."

"Kya pata hai mujhe?"

"Sab kuch, apni cadet ko aap se acche se koi jaanta hai kya?" 

"Par ye jaante hue bhi sun na chahta hoon." And he freed her from the hug, "meri aakhon me dekho Naina." He made her look in to his eyes. "Aur keh do vo baat jo mai jaane kab se sunna chahta hoon."

She was feeling shy and her face expressions were enough for Raj to tell him everything, "aap aakhein bund kijiye na."

"Are aise kaho na."

"maine kaha na aakhein bund kijiye." And Raj has no option left so he closed his eyes.

She looked here and there and after collecting all of her courage in her heart she said, "i love u''.sir." and when she mentioned sir Raj's eyes opened up immedieatly.

"Naina ye kya tha?"

"Keh diya na."

"Baad me sir lagane ki kya jaroorat thi?"

"To mai to aap ko humesha se sir hi bolti hoon na?"

"I love u sir kehne se i love u ki beauty khatam ho jaati hai na so take my name and say i love u Rajveer."

"Nahi mai aise nahi keh sakti."

"Kyoun nahi keh sakti?"

"Mai aap ka naam kaise le sakti hoon sir?"

"Jaise mai tumhara naam leta hoon vaise."

"Aap mere sir hain aap mera naam le sakte hain par mere liye ye posible nahi hai."

"par kyoun, ab to tum Captain ban gayi ho na to fir?"

"Mai nahi keh sakti bus."

"Please Naina ek baar kaho to dekho kitna accha lagta hai."

"Kya accha lagega, yahan mujhe kitna ajeeb lag raha hai ye to sochiye."

"Accha theek hai mere saath kaho."

"Nahi maine ek baar keh diya na, ab nahi kaha jaayega mujh se." Tab Raj ka phone ring hua aur us ne phone pick kiya aur baat karne k baad phone pe Naina ko dekh kar kaha. "Naina mujhe jaana hoga mai ek ghante me vapas aata hoon." Ye keh kar jaise hi Raj jaane k liye muda us ne jo suna us se us k kadam aage jaane k liye badh hi nahi paaye.

"I love u Rajveer." Naina said in a single breath and hide her face in pillow. Raj turned and found her hiding her face in the pillow, he smiled and moved close to her. He took the pillow and gazed at her face. 


Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Paya maine, paya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,

Hontun pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paya maine, paya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,

Sapna banaya tumhe, neendun mein bulaya tumhe


Naina was unable to bear that gaze which was making her breath faster with each and every second so she hugged him back fiercly hiding her face in his chest, but Raj has other intentions he freed her and gently gave a light kiss to her forehead.


Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi


"Raj", she hissed softly. Raj liked the feel of his name taken by his love like this, he came down and pressed her both eyelids with his lips, she stiffed.


Paya maine, paya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,

Hontun pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paya maine, paya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,

Sapna banaya tumhe, neendun mein bulaya tumhe


Raj came down and touched her cheeks with his lips, Naina was lost in his touch she was not in condition to respond and to speak up anything.


Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi


He came downwards and his fingers traced the jawline of her face, Naina was trembling and in no time his lips pressed hers and she first time kissed him. He took finally the taste of the honey his love had for him. 


Paya maine, paya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,

Hontun pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paya maine, paya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,

Sapna banaya tumhe, neendun mein bulaya tumhe

Paya maine, paya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,

Hontun pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paya maine, paya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,

Sapna banaya tumhe, neendun mein bulaya tumhe


Back to present:-

"Bus ab mai ek nahi sunoongi aap ki." And Raj gave her a surprised look.

"Kya hua?"

"kab se aap mere pati ki burai kar rahe hain mere saamne, ek baat samajh lijiye ki agar aap ko pasand nahi hain to koi baat nahi mai apne pati se bahut pyaar karti hoon."

Raj smiled, "vaise pyaar to mai bhi apni patni se bahut karta hoon." And he hugged her, the whole night passed in their chit chats.

Next day morning:-

"Naina jaldi kar der ho raha hai."

"haan bus aa rahi hoon Alekh, vaise Rajveer kahan hain?"

"Bus vahar gaye hain sir kuch breakfast pack karane aur jaldi hi aa jaayenge."

Same day in evening:-

"Welcome Captain Naina Singh Rathode and Major Vyom Rathode. I really hope ki aap ko koi problema nahi aayi hogi yahan tak pahuchne me."

"Bilkul nahi sir,".

 "Aap ki posting k orders mujhe pehle hi mil gaye the Captain Singh and kal shaam ko hi mujhe aap ki posting k bhi orders mil gaye hain Major Rathode." Raj just gave a smile and Naina was surprised to know that, Raj gave her a look that he will tell her everything later in detail. 

"Aap yahan as a history teacher rahenge Major aur aap ki true identity mere alawa yahan kisi ko nahi pata hogi. Baaki k arrangments kar liye gaye hain aap k liye."

"Thank u sir," and Brigedier Genral Malhotra called an orderly and ordered him to bring them to their room.

"Ye raha sir aap ka room." Oderly said and smiled at Rajveer.

"Thanks ab aap jaa sakte hain." Raj smiled back at him. N

aina again surprised by his act at 'why is he smiling for that orderly?' "Raj''..i mean Vyom mujhe kuch poochna hai aap se." When she called him Raj, his eye brows curved and he gave her a look.




Edited by Mahak Sinha - 25 March 2011 at 11:46pm

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Hi Vertika

Nice part..ClapClap
Naina was indeed suspicious of Vyom..she nearly believed that he was her Rajeveer but then all her investigations failed because Raj wanted it this way only..
He had his own motives behind all this..when Naina came to know abt the truth she was so happy but somewhere she knew that her heart always knew it.
Raj proposed her in a very cute manner..she was so shy to speak his name but then she tried very hard to overcome her shyness and call him Raj..WinkSmile
Raj was so happy to hear his name from her lips..He wanted to keep her in his arms till eternity..
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