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Veer aur Sukirti | Book 1 - Secret Life *complete* (Page 11)

anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged

teacher...that was amazing...

loved the part alot...

n VS tu superb..

thnx for the pm...

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*mystic.moon* IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

teacher...that was amazing...

loved the part alot...

n VS tu superb..

thnx for the pm...

hahaha yup agreed...
i am glad u liked it...
well VS are always superb naa ;)
ur welcome
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
its great...thnx for sharing this with me ..realy loved it...Smile

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*mystic.moon* IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnamikaLuvsMaan

its great...thnx for sharing this with me ..realy loved it...Smile

Thank you I am really glad that you liked it :)
Thanx for such a lovely comment
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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
nice part enjoyed reading sukitri chasing after veer!!

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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

nice part enjoyed reading sukitri chasing after veer!!

thank you shruja :)
i am glad u enjoyed reading it!

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged

Chapter 11


Both of them came to an abrupt stop to see one of theirs best friend in severe damage.


Veer exclaimed, "Armaan!" shocked and surprised, shocked to see his "chuddy buddy in this situation, surprised too cause when he looked around he found no one else but just his buddy.


Both of them ran and in an instant filled the gap in middle, and were confused when they didn't saw Sapana anywhere near Armaan.


The first question Veer asked as soon as he reached near him, "Are you alright?" Armaan tried to say something but, was hard to understand as his mouth was tied up shut. Veer unties the cloth from his mouth and Sukirti gets him free from the tree by untying the ropes tied around his abdomen.


Veer asked, "What were you saying?"


-? "What will he say..."


Veer and Sukirti turned around to see a group of men rather goons (for Sukirti) standing ready to attack them.


Armaan sighs, "That is what I was trying to say."


Veer: "Oh! So, let's see what we got here..." and started counting the men in front of him (rather sainiks as he would call them).


Sukirti rolled her eyes at him, "Really Veer, Really!"


Veer questions rather a question in an exclaimed tone, "What?" continues his sarcasm, "they are just seven and we are's so unfair to them," stressing on the word 'so'.


One of the sainiks stepped forward and said, "Unfair to us? Looks like you are gone crazy, if we are seven and you are just two than its unfair to you."


Veer raised his right eye brow and gave a disbelieving look, "Well, we will soon find out about that..." saying so one of the sainiks and Veer jumped in to action, Veer trying to escape the slashing of the swords.


Sukirti joined in. Veer was playing around; while, Sukirti concentrated on what was going on. After few minutes Veer got serious too. Together they both succeeded in getting rid of everyone...except for two, who somehow managed to escape from the scene.


Armaan stared wide eyed with his mouth dropped open at his best friend, Veer and more at his close friend, Sukirti. Veer and Sukirti walked towards him and Veer pushed his buddy's mouth shut with tip of his finger.


Sukirti said scanning Armaan from bottom to top and again from top to bottom, "Look at you!"


Hearing her Veer also scanned his friend out and asked, "Yeah, what happened?"


Sukirti added, "and where is Sapana?"


Armaan looked away hearing the last bit of the question and walked to a nearby tree at distance and sat down his back leaning against the roots of the huge tree.


Veer and Sukirti glanced at each other, Sukirti gulped down a lump forming in her throat and prayed that her ears doesn't get to hear what she thinks she is about to find out.  


Making their way towards Armaan, Veer sat down besides him and kept his hand on Armaan's shoulder and said, "Don't worry, we will find her." Sukirti turned around and squeezed her eyes shut, after about few seconds she gulped down her saliva and turned back towards to young men to find Armaan looking up at her.


Sukirti said, "Yes, we will," smiles at Armaan and hoped that she didn't sounded as unsure as she did to herself.


Armaan smiled back and said, "Thanks... Guess we will," and hoped that they do find her and wherever she is, she is safe and sound.


Veer clears his throat and asks, "Do you know where she is or what kind of place or anything?"


Armaan scratched his head trying to think properly, "I don't know what exactly that place is...It is like a cave, deep, dark and creepy, and about the person? I don't know who he is all I can say is that all his men were calling him 'Sultan' (Islamic word for master) which I am sure that is not his name."


Sukirti searched her brains inside out and accidently said her confusion out loud, "Sultan?"


Veer bit his thumb; "In Naaglok...the only leaders of Naaglok could be Naagrani and Naagraj, but now its just Naagrani as Naagraj is..." he faded and looked at Sukirti as bit his tongue and cursed himself for going anywhere near that topic.


Sukirti jerked her head away on hearing 'Naagraj'. Silence fell over the place. Armaan looked at Veer to see why he suddenly stopped and than at Sukirti to see her back. He knew instantly that something was wrong...But, he will have to wait to know what it is, well forget waiting hearing the awkward silence he doubted that he will ever be able to know this mystery.


Armaan said breaking the long silence, "This is Naaglok?"

Veer thanked his friend silently for getting off the topic, "Yeah," after about a moment, "well this exact place is a forest in Naaglok...You know, Naaglok is pretty big."


Veer and Armaan started their chatting, physically Sukirti watched them talking and laughing with smiles sparkling on both of their faces as if they are meeting after ages but mentally she was completely somewhere else.




Does it just happen to be that mysteries are getting bigger? Who is this Sultan? Is Naaglok really that peaceful as it looks from above?

Next Part: Chapter 12

So, This was the next part, hope you guys like it :) Press Like/Comment :)

Edited by Kasurbest - 01 October 2011 at 5:27pm

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 5:04pm | IP Logged

Chapter 10
Wow, veer cant take the quietness of sukirti
well, she really is tensed. .

love his assurance
so she curses herself! Cry

awww. first time he sees her cry
n he hates it! 
n m loving the bond. hehe

WTH! get s grip suku. u look really beautiful either way! LOL

now veer starts with whats! 
gosh, what's with this duo?! LOL

feeling so bad for amy and sapana. Cry
love how amy says she means everything to me. Embarrassed
though place and time is not ryt for romanceLOL

duffer hehe
duffer + teacher = perfect for each other. 
one covers up for the other. 

love the ending of part. 
going to read chap 11 now 

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 05 September 2011 at 1:19pm

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