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Chapter 8

 

When she reached the door she saw Veer sitting in the garden.

She went over to him and said, "What are you doing over here?"

 

Veer sighed and said, "Nothing much, just thinking."

 

Sukirti raised her right eye brow and asked, "What?"

 

Veer finally looked up at her and said, "What do you mean by 'what'?"

 

Sukirti rolled her eyes and said, "What are you thinking about idiot?"

 

Veer stood up and said, "First of all, I am not an idiot."

 

Sukirti crossed her arms across her chest, "Oh really! Sorry I didn't knew that...Oh yeah right forgot you are not an idiot..you are a duffer...Thanks for reminding that to me," she said blinking her eyes and smiling.

 

Veer getting frustrated said, "There is no point of me to argue with you. Because if I do...than I will have to hear your long bakbak, which right now, I am not in mood to listen to."

 

Sukirti gasped at him and before she could say anything else...

 

Veer continued, "And second of all, I was thinking of all the people I know."

 

Sukirti confusingly asked, "What?"

 

Veer said disapprovingly, "Again what?"

 

Sukirti cleared herself, "I mean why are you thinking...?"

 

Veer interrupted, "Oh, that...to see whom I can trust."

 

Sukirti making sure that she is following him said, "Sooo...you also know the people on whom you can't trust."

 

Veer shook his head, "Actually No, I don't..." pausing and then continuing, "except for you."

 

Sukirti gasped, "Hold on right there...you did not just said that you cannot trust me."

 

Veer said in a matter of fact tone, "Yes, because you are the only-"

 

Sukirti interrupted, "That's it I can't believe you'okay, now you see what I do about your fake ' Sapana liking thing," and started walking towards the door.

 

Veer called out, "Hey! Listen to my whole sentence first."

 

Sukirti turned, glared back at him and asked, "Why should I?"

 

Veer: "Cause you are the only one whom I know...who knows about that yaadshakti thing."

 

Sukirti exclaimed, "What?"

 

Veer getting more frustrated, "How many times in a day you say 'what'?"

 

Sukirti shrugged her solders and said, "I don't know."

 

Veer sighed and said, "Well, as I was saying before I was rudely interrupted...I was thinking of someone to trust on, to remove their yaadshakti and replace it back...specifically of the people who were present when that BIG thing happened."

 

Sukirti,  shrinking it all down, "Ohhh! That...I completely forgot about that thing. Thanks for reminding."

 

Veer rolling his eyes said, "Your Welcome!"

 

Sukirti: "So...what you figured out so far?"

 

Veer thinking seriously said, "Let's see...there were lots people, there should be at least two on whom we can trust."

 

As soon as he said that they heard something in the play house.

They both looked towards the inside door of the garden.

 

Sukirti asked with question mark clearly on her face, "Who is in there?"

 

Veer retorted back angrily, "how am I suppose to know?"

 

Sukirti replied, "Cause you came here before I did."

 

Veer: "Well, No one came in after I came...so they might have come before..."

 

Sukirti sighed and walked towards the play house door and Veer followed her.

 

***************

 

She opened the door and stepped inside.

 

Veer said looking around, "There is no one in here."

 

Sukirti said, "May be, whoever it is...Is in the other room," saying so she started walking towards the door that leads to the other room.

 

She pushed open the door slightly without making any noise and to their surprise they saw Armaan and Sapana with their back towards the door. Armaan pulled Sapana closer to him. They were inches away from each other.

 

Sukirti whispered to Veer, "What's going on over here?"

 

Veer whispered back, "I have no idea...They both alone...that to so close together..." amusingly he continued, "Hmm sounds interesting to me."

 

Sukirti with a big smile on her face said, "That's it."

 

Veer getting the clue, "Yeah...it will work."

 

After that Veer and Sukirti went back and replaced the event that happened during the lunch time to what really happened.

 

When they were done and they opened their eye to see...

Armaan and Sapana more closer to each other than before.

 

And before Armaan and Sapana makes another step

Sukirti cleared her throat, "Khmmm...hmm"

 

Veer hit her in the back.

Sukirti bit her lower lip, "Sorry..."

 

Armaan and Sapana left each other and instantly got a bit far and looked towards the door.

 

"Hi!" Armaan and Sapana said together looking innocent as if they were caught red handed doing something wrong.

 

Well they were caught doing something but not wrong...

 

Sukirti said again a little bit louder, "Sorry..."

 

Veer finished, "We heard something and came to check..."

 

Sukirti knowing that they individual best buddies might be feeling awkward she said, "I think we should go."

 

Sapana nodded, "yeah...I think so too," and starts walking towards the door.

 

Sukirti, "Actually, by 'we' I meant me and Veer," she said pointing towards her and then Veer.

 

Veer grinned, "Yeah, you guys can carry on..."

 

Veer and Sukirti took back a step and turned around to go when...

Armaan called out, "Thanks for sharing your very...whatever it is...your secret something."

 

Veer turning around, "What are you talking about?"

 

Sapana raised her brows, "Really, you are asking that...?"

 

Sukirti turning around, "Oh! Your welcome!"

 

Armaan: "So you don't care that we will tell anyone?"

 

Veer exclaimed, "No!"

 

 "Because if you do than we will tell about what's going on between two LOVE BUDS in our class." Sukirti said looking at Sapana and blinking innocently.

 

Sapana not believing her best friend said, "You are not going to do that."

 

Sukirti said, "Cheez, why are you so...anyways haven't you heard something like this... 'Pyar Kiya to Darna Kya'."

 

Veer not wanting to left behind, nudged Armaan and said, "And by looking at your expressions I think there is really some chakkar going on over here."

 

Sukirti said clearing her throat, "Yeah, when I came in I thought you guys were just playing something like 'Prince falling in Love with Princess' even though that game is too young for you 11th graders."

 

Armaan confused, "Why did you thought that?"

 

Sukirti replied, "For one main Reason..." Pointing towards Sapana's Head, "You are wearing a tiara...Looks like you found one from the cabinet."

 

Veer getting back to main topic, "So, you guys are seriously together?"

 

Armaan replied slowly, "Well, I don't see any point to hide it from you two..any more."

 

Sukirti with a big smile on her face goes to Sapana and asked, "Sooo, you like Armaan huh?"

 

Sapana said shaking her head negatively, "No...no... No me gusta el... Me encanta!"

 

Sukirti cheered, "Ooo...Not bad Miss Sapana!"

 

Veer spoke up for both him and Armaan, "What did she just answered?"

 

Sapana made a face, "Do you know Spanish?"

 

Veer shrugged his solders and said, "Well, yh kinda not much."

 

Sukirti sighed and said, "Well you should learn a bit more basics atleat...

She just said... 'No...no... I don't like him...

I Love Him."

 

Hearing this Armaan shied and looked down on the floor while..

Veer too cheered, "Ooo..."

 

Veer and Sukirti looked at each other. Sukirti nodded and turning to Sapana, "Kay, we will not tell anyone."

 

Sapana looked at her bestie, "Seriously!"

 

Veer: "Ofcourse, Only If...you promise to not tell anyone about what you guys know about us."

 

Armaan not believing his buddy, "No ways...You wont?"

 

Sapana looking towards Armaan, "Okay we will not tell anyone anything."

 

Sukirti forwarded her palm face up, "It's a deal than?"

 

Sapana sealing the deal, "Looks like that to me..."  and smiled.

 

Before turning around and going out...

Sukirti commented, "By the way...You guys look cute together."

 

Sapana amused, "Really, cause to me...you and Veer look great together too."

 

Veer and Sukirti both at the same time, "What?"

 

Veer making himself clear, "Me and her..." making a face, "Ewe...not even in my Dreams."

 

Sukirti agreed, "Same goes here...me and that to with him, my foot" and stomped her foot on Veer's right foot.

Veer jumped up in pain and yelled, "Ouchhh..."

Sukirti turned around and walked out...Poor Veer- kneeled down whining in pain.

 

Armaan a bit surprised, "Wow, she really does not like you."

 

***************

At 6:10pm...

Everyone was at the ticket booth at the main gate of FunTime. They all were excited. Armaan went to buy tickets with Anika, Jia, and two other boys.

 

All four seemed to forget all that happened at play house. But, I guess we will never forget that part.

 

Anika, Sapana, Sukirti, Komal and Pretty were talking when...

Aanchal comes up and said, "Guys, we are not here to talk...they have lots of new rides...Lets go check them out. Aarti and Jia joins them.

 

When they all were going to one of the rides (by all...I mean all the girls...who knows where the boys are).

 

When they all were walking in through the ride entrance...wind comes up from the back and take Sukirti's dupatta with it.

And yes Of course Sukirti goes behind to get it.

 

Sapana called out, "Suku, where are you going?"

 

Sukirti pointing at her dupatta in mid air, "You guys go ahead... I will catch you all up later." And runs behind her dupatta and tries to catch it.

 

Her dupatta flies along the wind and falls over Veer's face.

Sukirti goes to get it unaware that the person her dupatta has landed on is...Veer.

 

When she reaches him...

She put her hand on his face and lightly pulls her dupatta down...

First she saw his eyes and than slowly down to his soft and rosy lips. When she looked back up at his eyes...

He was starring at her. Sukirti's hand was halfway down with her dupatta.

 

Whole world...everyone around her seemed to vanish away. It was just her and Veer. They both were starring right in to each other's eyes.

When a person from behind was walking by and hit their elbow to Sukirti's head, which made the clip fall down revealing her hair open.

 

As if a bird was set open from a cage...her hair started to gently fly in the wind. But, still they both were completely lost in to each other.

 

After about five to ten minutes...from somewhere far away..."Sukirti, where are you?"

 

Hearing her name Sukirti snapped out and came back to real world.

 

She turned around realizing it is Sapana calling she yelled, "I am here...where are you?"

 

Trembling nervously she puts the thin scarf in place and walks away from there.

When she was out of sight...

Veer smiled and started to turn around when he saw Sukirti's hair clip on the ground.

 

He looked back up where he saw her go, bent down, picked up the clip and smilingly walked away in different direction.

 

***************

Precape...

 

Veer climbs up the window to Sukirti's room at 12:00am of night

 

Enjoy!


Next Part : Chapter 9


So, That was the next update...Sorry for the late update..at first the finals had started and than I was away from home for around 2 months...

Hope you guys liked the update :) Press Like/Comment, it surely encourages me to keep on writing.




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wat,...wat...wat...that was gud one...

kitna wat bolti hai...

liked the last bit...duppata n all..

gr888 job...

thxn for the pm...

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

wat,...wat...wat...that was gud one...

kitna wat bolti hai...

liked the last bit...duppata n all..

gr888 job...

thxn for the pm...


Thank you meha dear...
hahaha...agreed dear...
What? .lol.
thanx dear...thats scene came in my mind while i was writting something else...
and i cant help but include it yaar...so just thought of making that an ending of this chapter..

THank you and urwelcome :)
M glad u liked the update Heart

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
i love tis part..especially d dupatta scene n d way tey convince armaan n sapana...Embarrassed but i love d next part mre...Wink

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatzfathi

i love tis part..especially d dupatta scene n d way tey convince armaan n sapana...Embarrassed but i love d next part mre...Wink

Thanx dear :) I am glad u liked the part...
haha seems you had followed bk1 in rtw...well I am glad u are reading it again :)
Thanx for the comment :-*

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kasurbest

Originally posted by fatzfathi

i love tis part..especially d dupatta scene n d way tey convince armaan n sapana...Embarrassed but i love d next part mre...Wink

Thanx dear :) I am glad u liked the part...
haha seems you had followed bk1 in rtw...well I am glad u are reading it again :)
Thanx for the comment :-*

ofcourse i read it in rtw...n i love tis so much diffrnt story...Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Amazing ud! 
You already know but once again, love VAS! so cute they are. 
poor veer. she stomped on his foot. 

Lovely couple... sapana and armaan! 
Love them even more by the end... 
fun starts now.. 
ud soon. 
thrilling precap! and last moment was fantastic

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatzfathi

Originally posted by Kasurbest

Originally posted by fatzfathi

i love tis part..especially d dupatta scene n d way tey convince armaan n sapana...Embarrassed but i love d next part mre...Wink

Thanx dear :) I am glad u liked the part...
haha seems you had followed bk1 in rtw...well I am glad u are reading it again :)
Thanx for the comment :-*

ofcourse i read it in rtw...n i love tis so much diffrnt story...Embarrassed

M really glad to know that dear :) Embarrassed Tongue

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