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Veer aur Sukirti | Book 1 - Secret Life *complete* (Page 6)

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Originally posted by princess14

loved the update!! continue soon!


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Chapter 6

 

In the morning after getting ready Sukirti walks downstairs. She was surprised to see her mom up this early.

 

"Hi Ma," Sukirti said, "You are up early today."

 

Shilpa: "Oh, I was just not sleepy anymore."

 

Sukirti made a glance towards the clock which ticked 6:30am. She had lots of time till she has to get on her bike.

 

Sukirti sighed, "What's wrong ma."

 

Shilpa: "No, nothing."

 

Sukirti walks towards her Ma and says, "Ma tell me."

 

Shilpa: "Don't you have to eat breakfast."

 

Sukirti smiled at her mother. She knows her Ma does not want to talk with her right now. So, she just walks towards the freeze.

 

Finally Shilpa said, "Where you late yesterday?"

 

Sukirti pouring herself a glass of milk: "Yes, I was'we had Basketball and Badminton practice."

 

Shilpa nodded her head and said, "hmm' what about today?"

 

Sukirti: "If we do than 'will be late today too."

 

Shilpa: "Okay' I have some work to take care of too."

 

Sukirti finished her milk and toast and said, "Bye'take care."

 

Shilpa: "Wow'how nice huh? I am the mother here. I should say take care to you'but, you are telling that to me."

 

Sukirti laughed at he mother's comment'took her iPod and walked outside towards her bike.

 

She rides to school; listening song on her iPod'

 

Do pautho ka saath mein khil naa,

Do pankhi ka saath mein uud naa,

Do premi ka milna julna'

     Ha ha milna julna.

Kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi hai'

Ye duniya prem ki duniya,

     Ye duniya prem ki duniya..

Ye hai ek prem kahani.

 

***************

 

Sukirti and her friends were talking when'

Karun says,  "He is early today."

Everyone followed her eyes to see Veer walking towards them."

 

Anika rolling her eyes says, "He is like chachundar(mouse)'can get anywhere in no time."

Hearing that Sukirti thought, "Di he used his shakti to get'"

"Hi," Veer said interrupting Sukirti's thoughts, "Do you guys always come this early?"

 

Anika sighs, "For me it depends on bus, disadvantage of living 2 hours away from school."

 

Veer nodded his head than looked towards Suku.

 

Suku said to herself, "What does he wants now?"

Komal heard her as she was standing right next to Sukirti.

 

The 1st bell rang'and they all started walking towards the assembly.

Veer whispered, "Sukirti."

 

When she heard him she stopped.

When everyone was out of earshot Veer asked, "Did you went to Naaglok yesterday?"

 

Suku answered, "No, why are you'?"

 

Veer interrupted, "I was just asking."

 

Suku: "Okay' Right now you don't worry about Naaglok and think of your one week'One day is almost over," saying so she walks off.

 

Veer says to himself: "Yaar beta'you better find a name dictionary and pick some name from it, tell her that name and get this thing over with."

 

Komal saw them talking but didn't knew what they were talking about. Since she was too far for that.

 

***************

 

It was only five minutes after the bell for lunch rang.

Everyone was sitting in the classroom.

Suddenly Suku's and Veer's small black pager rang. (It is as small pager phone which rings when there is danger in Naaglok. The only people who has this is the Raj paarivar(family) of Naaglok and other important people'like Veer.)

From which Sukirti for sure didn't knew Veer had one.

 

Sukirti and Veer jumped up hearing it. It has never happened before than'atleast not when they were in school.

 

Veer asked, "Do you know what it is about?"

 

Sukirti "Yes, that's why I am surprised. Ha!"

 

Anika asked confused, "What is that?"

 

"Sorry, "Sukirti and Veer both said at the same time."

 

They both packed their bag and were walking outside the class together.

 

When they reached the open campus at the front of the school'

Sukirti saw Agastya coming in from the front gate of the school. Agastya is one of the enemies of Naaglok. Especially he hates Naagrani, and Rajkumari Sukirti.

 

When Veer and Suku got near him. Sukirti used her Shakti to stop him.

Veer said, "Why are you in Insaanlok?"

 

Agastya knew better that if he found either one of them he will find the other too, "Oh look'Now it was not hard to find both of you was it?" he said with an evil smile on his face.

 

Veer to Suku: "I think he was looking for us."

 

Sukirti rolling her eyes, "Duh' and he has found us and that too in school" looking around she found half of the school was present over there since it was lunch time.

 

Just than Agastya hit Veer with his Shakti and Veer fell back. Sukirti swung her right hand in the air and hit hard at Agastya a yellowish-orange colored flames. Agastya fell down but managed to get up again. But, this time again Veer did the same thing as Suku and Agastya fell down again. When he was trying to get up and ignore the injuries and pain. Veer and Sukirti both swung their right hand from in to out and threw the flames with force at the same time. After that powerful shakti of Rajkumari Sukirti and more shakti combined in from Veer there is no way Agastya could survive. No doubts about that.

 

But...when they were done with him; at least half of the school was out there'shocked and starring at the site. Veer and Sukirti looked at each other flabbergasted.

 

Veer: "Any solution for this problem?"

 

Sukirti looked around and said, "Only one' we will have to replace the event from their mind to what they regularly do during this time."

 

Veer exclaimed, "It's going to take forever to do that for so many people with just two of us to finish the task."

 

Sukirti knowing he is right, "Well, that's the only option left."

 

**************

 

After school'

Everyone was taking a break'from practice.

Girls were practicing Badminton and boys were football. The boys came to front side of school  were the girls were.

 

Veer came to Sukirti who was drinking water.

Veer coming straight to point, "I think we should go to Naaglok'you know'after what happened today."

 

Sukirti: "What?... I mean we can't go right now."

 

Veer: "We are.. before they call for practice' again."

 

Sukirti said, "Okay," putting down her water-bottle and making a face at him completely obvious that she was thinking how annoying and who is he to tell me what to do.

 

Veer after taking one step ahead said, "Hold on' what will we tell them," pointing at their friends."

 

Sukirti getting his annoyance over her head said, "Just Get Out!" and walked away from there.

 

Veer to himself: "What's wrong with her? She always yells at me."

 

After getting out of school and going to the place where no one was around. Sukirti closed her eyes and moved her head as if she was going to faint, pointed her head looking up'kneeled down and disappeared' and in a second came to Naaglok'She was sitting kneeled down'got up, her face looking up and in the situation as if she was about to faint and came to her senses. Veer came from behind. He did the same thing as he did before the night when he turned in to snake. But, this time instead of turning into snake he disappeared and came to Naaglok in a second'in the palace.

 

Veer: "Where is everyone?"

 

Sukirti: "I don't know."

They both started walking towards the pooja ghar (house/room) of the palace knowing that's the best place to start from.

"Maa'" Sukirti called. But, no answer.

After some time of looking around she saw her and called out, "Ma' what's going on?"

 

****************

 

Her real mother; Naagrani of Naaglok.

 

Kirti ' Most of the time in story she is mentioned as Naagrani as that's what everyone in Naaglok calls her as a sign of respect. Kirti is really a caring mother but she knows better that her daughter is born to face danger thus she never stops Sukirti from stepping up when the time comes. She knows very well the dangers and obstacles that are lying in Sukirti's path but she knows her daughter has enough strength to over come any obstacles and powers to live through the death. This is her being a mother, Kirti as Naagrani ' description was already given before.

 

"Thank god! You both are safe, "Naagrani said.

Veer who was right behind Sukirti asked, "What Happened?"

 

Naagrani: "He came to Insaanlok didn't he?"

 

Sukirti nodded her head 'yes'.

 

Naagrani continued, "and everything happened in front of everyone."

 

Sukirti: "Yes'well not 'everyone'."

 

Veer: "Sorry for that.. but, we really did not had any other option."

 

Sukirti: "Yeah'but, we replaced the yaadshakti (memory) of everyone who was present there."

 

Naagrani: "That's the problem."

 

Veer confusingly said, "the problem is that no one doesn't know anything'"

 

Naagrani shaking her head "No' the problem is that you took away the yaadshakti."

 

Now Sukirti also getting confused, "Than what were we supposed to do."

 

Naagrani: "You cannot take the yaadshakti away from everyone."

 

Sukirti: "What?'I- I mean'"

 

Naagrani: "Problem is' that you cannot keep the yaadshakti away from so many people, at the same time'importantly about the 'same thing'."

 

Veer: "Ohhh! Now I get it."

 

Sukirti looking towards him, "Duh'you get it."

 

Veer made a face at her.

 

Naagrani: "Can you both at least choose two people whom you can trust about this and replace their memories back'and if you can do that to more than two people it will be great."

 

Sukirti going near her mother said, "Don't worry Ma'we will do our best and not more than we will get two people whom we can trust completely'Okay"

 

Naagrani smiled at her daughter.

 

***************

 

Back at school'

 

After the practice was over'As usual they all were talking

Komal suggested"How about we go out somewhere?"

 

Anika added, "yes'its been so long since we went out."

 

Karuna asked: "Where?"

 

Pretty said, "Komal' you are the one who brought up the topic."

 

Komal: "Wherever we get most votes at'"

 

Anika hit her in the back and said, "Its not funny'it is your idea."

 

Sapana said, "First lets decide who wants to come."

 

Anika, Komal and Aanchal all said at the same time, "Count me in."

 

Pretty: "Me too."

 

Sapana: "Me three."

 

Some of the boys said they cannot come and some agreed to come.

 

Veer said, "hmm..I will come too."

 

Armaan said, "I will too."

 

That leaves with Sukirti, Karuna, and Aarti'

Aarti: "Guess I will be coming too."

 

They all turned to Sukirti.

Komal: "Please say yes."

 

Anika: "Yeah' every time we  make a plan'you make a excuse and not come."

 

Aanchal: "These time no excuses."

 

Sukirti: "I am not sure'"

 

Sapana hitting her forehead, "Come on'it will be so much fun."

They all were looking at her eagerly.

Finally a tiny smile played on Sukirti's lips, "Okay. Kay'I will come."

Than they all turned towards Karuna "so'"

 

Karuna: "Not this time'I already have to go out'"

 

Anika: "Fine'But, next time you have to come."

 

Karuna: "Okay'I have to go right now'bye."

 

Komal: "First of all'I am not gonna go wearing this'school uniform'my house is like ten minutes away' I am gonna go change."

 

Pretty: "Yeah we all live near' how about we meet at someone's?"

 

Aanchal: "Sounds good to me...But, what about Anika and Veer."

 

They all looked at them and realized that they both don't live near.

 

Sukirti scratching her head innocently, "Can I ask something' we still haven't decided where we are going?"

 

Sapana: "By you'who is speaking'How about we meet at your house."

 

Anika: "Yeah'I can come to your house with you'and we all can got to FunTime, isn't it like only five minutes away from your house."

 

FunTime is like a fair'with different rides and stalls to eat and shop and have fun. I am sure we all know what a fair is.

 

Komal: "Yeah'it will be fun."

 

Pretty: "Okay than its decided' we are meeting at Sukirti's house at 5:30pm and than going to FunTime together."

 

Armaan who was listenening quietly finally says, "Well than I will go now and meet you all at 5:30pm'Bye."

 

All the other boys decided to meet directly at FunTime at 6:00pm.

 

Aanchal: "What about Veer?"

 

Anika: "He can come to Sukirti's house too" turning to Sukirti," He can right?"

 

Sukirti hesitated for a minute and than smiled and said, "Yes' of course why not?"

 

***************

Next Part: Chapter 7

So, Friends here goes the next update...Hope you guys like it. Do comment/criticize and press like :)




Edited by Kasurbest - 16 August 2011 at 4:53pm

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
heyy i used to read tis in rtw..its so nice to c u postin it in here too....! d concept is just so diffrnt n awesome n i love d vm made 4 tis story..!
plzzz pm me frm next time..
 

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:33pm | IP Logged

that was really amazing..

superb part..

whom they'll choose nw..

i guess...armaan n sapna..

thnx for the pm...............

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
hey, nice ud. Thumbs Up
nice bond suku and shilpa share. Wink
hahah .veer, go get a dictionary full of girls names. ROFL
but beware, make sure the name is indian! LOL
oh gosh, they founght in front of whole school. what abt their secret!!!
well, i see they foundo n ly one way.. to erase memory..tough job!
the problem is that they hid their secret n erased the memory LOLROFLROFL
acha, chalo dekhte hai who those two ppl are. 

itna long comment chalega yea iss se b bara comment chahiye????????LOL

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatzfathi

heyy i used to read tis in rtw..its so nice to c u postin it in here too....! d concept is just so diffrnt n awesome n i love d vm made 4 tis story..!
plzzz pm me frm next time..
 


hey dear i am glad u like the story....yupz it is way more ahead in RTW right now :)
thank you sure i got your buddy request :)

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

that was really amazing..

superb part..

whom they'll choose nw..

i guess...armaan n sapna..

thnx for the pm...............



they dear thanx for the comment...
well if u had read it in rtw than u know it lolzz lets cc :)
ur welx

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Princess_Khushi

hey, nice ud. Thumbs Up
nice bond suku and shilpa share. Wink
hahah .veer, go get a dictionary full of girls names. ROFL
but beware, make sure the name is indian! LOL
oh gosh, they founght in front of whole school. what abt their secret!!!
well, i see they foundo n ly one way.. to erase memory..tough job!
the problem is that they hid their secret n erased the memory LOLROFLROFL
acha, chalo dekhte hai who those two ppl are. 

itna long comment chalega yea iss se b bara comment chahiye????????LOL


thank you sis!
yupz the best bond i can know of mother and daughter :)

hahaha yupz veer dictionary of girls name....pick some nice name tooo lollzz
yupz tough job true....they way more though jobs to face ;)
lets cccc Wink



hahah yeah its good lolz hehe thanx for the comment Smile

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