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Hi every1 thanx for ur Love nd Support so far. i really Feel Gr8 To read all ur Comments. i really appreciate dem. nd Maan, Poor guy he's definately gonna dead nw after all of ur so many curseful comments for him.πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Nw here's d Part 7 of my SS. Hope u all Like it. Pls Feel free to Criticise if u all dnt like it.😊

                                                  PART 7:

3 weeks has passed nd both Maan nd Geet were trying their best to get to normal but it didn't seems so easy but still dey didn't stopped trying. Geet gets herself busy in studies nd if not studies den she listen to music, surf internet, read books in short she does everything which can keep her mind away from Maan's thoughts but it fails everytym.

 

On d other hand Maan too tries to follow his daily routine to keep himself away from d guilt which was increasing day by day in his heart but he too fails. It seems dat everything is meaningless without her. Its been 3 weeks nd he had not seen her. Forget about seeing he didn't even heard her voice. He decides to Login to his Facebook account may be he found her online nd if not online den atleast he can have idea wats going in her lyf. He quickly logged in to his Account. Sumwhere he knew dat Geet must have removed him from her Friend list but to his surprise he was still dere nd dat doesn't mean dat Geet has not came online after dat day, she has came online as d latest date shown in her status is after 4 days since dat incident nd eventually he looked at her status nd his heart broken into million pieces wen he reads dat. It shows:

 

"U said u don't want to see me in tears, so does that mean u had closed ur eyes wen I was crying!!!!!!!!!"

 

He saw numerous comments below dat status nd every1 are asking y dis status? Did something happened? But she replied "Nothing yaar aise hi apni Fav. Novel me Line padhi thi to wahi Daal di". Though sum of her friends were still not convienced specially a friend named Armaan who was continuously asking her "Wats Wrong"? Den all of a sudden he remembers a incidence dere first argument regarding Facebook password

 

                                              *****~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~**********

 

 

Maan nd Geet were both talking on call wen Maan suddenly reminds of sumthing.

 

Maan: Geet tell me sumthing?

Geet: ya ask

Maan: who is dis Ashish in ur friend list

Geet: Ashish? Arey he is studying wid me in my class. Y?

Maan: ok so is he a very gud friend of u?

Geet: no, just a normal friend. y?

Maan: den y is he posting in ur Walls wid such a weird words

Geet: arey wat has he done nw?

Maan: y is he addressing u everytym by calling Sweetheart, janu etc etc.

Geet: oh dat, dnt mind on his words. He's like dat only nd not only me he addresses like dis to every1 including Deeps, Pari, nd even Meera too

Maan: hw does Meera knows him?

Geet: thru Facebook only

Maan: ok, but didn't u guys feel weird wen he calls u all like dat

Geet: ya initially we all feel weird den we realize dat it was his habbit.

Maan: whatever, I dnt want him to call u wid dat names. Just make dis thing clear in his mind.

Geet: but Maan...

Maan: no Geet, I cant see anyone calling u wid dese types of names except me. Only I can call u wid dese names. Got it

 

Geet could sense d anger in his voice for Ashish

Geet: ok ok Fine, I'll ask him not to call me wid dat names. U calm down. Ok.

Maan: Geet, pls dnt take me wrong its not like dat I dnt trust u, I trust u but d fact is I cant bear anyone calling u wid d names which only I can call u.

Geet: I knw My Possessive Shona, dnt worry I'll make him understand.

Maan: hhmmm Good

Geet: anything else?

Maan: ya

Geet: wat?

Maan: I need ur Facebook Password

Geet (shocked): Wat?

Maan: ya

Geet: but y?

Maan: just lyk dat. I should knw my Girlfriend's FB Password

Geet: Maan, wat kind of condition is dis?

Maan: y r u having so much Problem in giving d Password? Dnt u trust me?

Geet: Maan its not lyk dat. But d fact is every1 has its own Privacy nd we should not interfere in dat. Had I ask u about ur FB Password for once

Maan: no, but I wont mind giving u my password

Geet: Maan, I dnt want u to give ur Password to me neither my Password to u

Maan: but y r u creating so much issues Geet

Geet: m creating issues? U r making it a issue

Maan: wat? Wat u think I'll misuse ur ID

Geet: wen I had said dat?

Maan: no, but indirectly u mean dat only.

Geet: Maan, nw u r going too far.

Maan: Fine, den lets end dis Conversation over here only. Nw talk to me den only wen u had full trust on me. Bye

Geet: Fine bye.

 

Dey both cut d call. Both were hell angry wid each other infact wen it cumes to anger dey can give tough competition to each other. For next 1 hr. dey blabbers themselves taking dere anger out on each other.

 

Geet (to herself): wat does he think about himself? Arey aise kaise koi Password de deta hai? Har insaan ki privacy hoti hai. Aur kuch kaho to, "Tum mujhpe trust nahi karti" "Tumhe lagta hai main tumhari ID ka misuse karunga" etc etc. aisa thodi na hai dat I dnt trust him, I trust him but sharing Password, no way.

 

Maan (to himself): I haven't asked for much. Just a password only, usme bhi problem. Wats d big deal in dat. D fact isd she don't trust me. Ya dats true becoz if she trusts me den she wouldnt do dis.

 

After 1 hr of blabbering dey both calms down nd realize dat dey hade made dis an issue nd d other person was rite

 

Geet (to herself): but dekha jaye to he was not wrong also, I mean we r in relationship for almost 1 yr. nd sharing d password is not a big deal. Afterall Meera too shared her password wid Yash nd dat too in only 3 months of commitment nd if I trust Maan den I should shre dis wid him. Hain na? haan

 

Maan (to himself): I think I had really gone too far. I mean hw can I ask a girl to share her FB password no matter we luv each other but dat doesn't mean dat I should ask her about dis. Use to yahi lagega na dat I dnt trust her. Ok ab galti ki hai to Sorry bhi bolna padega I'll call her rite nw.

 

He said nd started dialing her no. Geet too was going to dial his no wen she saw his name flashing on cellphone. She quickly picks it up

 

Geet: Hello Maan

Maan: Geet!!

 

"I M SORRY" dey both said together nd den laughs

 

Geet: I m Sorry Maan. I had really made dis an issue

Maan: no Geet I m Sorry, I shouldn't have asked u about ur password

Geet: no Maan, I m sorry main kuch zyada hi bol gayi

Maan: Geet nw stop it. if we keep saying Sorry like dis only den we have to argue for rest of d nite about who is wrong.

Geet: ok. Nd ya I'll msg u my Password after d call nd dnt say a word about dis. I Trust u Maan nd I knw u wont do anything wrong

Maan: thanx Geet nd I'll also msg u my Password.

Geet: ok.

Maan: nd Geet dat Ashish...

Geet: dnt worry I'll make him understand.

Maan: hhmmm Good. Chalo nw go to sleep its really late.

Geet: ok gud nite. Bye nd tc. LOVE YOU.

Maan: LOVE YOU TOO

 

      ******~~~~~~~Back To Present~~~~~~*********

 

Geet smiles wen she remembered dis moment. Their first ever argument nd dat too on stupid Password. Nd Poor Ashish dnt even know dat hw much Maan was in anger wen he saw him addressing wid dose weird names. Nd next day only she knew hw hard it was for her to make Ashish understand to not to call her wid dat weird names as her cousins are also at Facebook nd dey didn't liked anyone calling her wid dat name nd after a lot of effort he finally agreed.

 

Geet (To herself): Everything was going fine between us Maan den where, where we made a mistake dat today we were living our lives lyk dis?

 

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On d other hand Maan too smiles remembers dere first ever Argument. Den suddenly he reminds of sumthing. He quickly Sign out from his Profile nd signed in by Geet's ID. He was sure sumwhere dat Geet had definitely changed her Password wen she last came online but again to his surprise her Password was d same as it was before nd even she didn't changed her DP also as once he has said dat her dis DP is very nice so never change it nd she agreed. Nd even today also d DP is same. Dis was second surprise which he has got in d same evening. He quickly closed d Laptop nd leaned back against d Bed Post

 

Maan (To himself): Geet still haven't changed her password not even d DP. She still trusts me. Y Geet? Y u still trust me dis much? Even I dnt know what Turmoil is going within me. I need to talk to u Geet, I really need to. But I knw u'll not take my call den hw can I talk to u?

 

Den suddenly he reminds of sumthing. He quickly opens d drawer of his side table nd finds sumthing. After finding for 10 minutes he founds a spare SIM CARD. It was his previous no. before he met Geet nd he changed it due to his ex-Girlfriends but today he needs to use it. He just wish dat it was still working but to his disappointment d number is not in use. Ofcourse which service Provider will keep d number Active for 3 yrs if it was not in use. He throws d SIM CARD away in frustration. Den he realizes dat only one person can help him. "Yash". He quickly dialed his no.

 

Yash: ya Dude! Tell me

Maan: I need ur help

Yash: Wat happen?

Maan: I need a spare SIM CARD immediately

Yash: wat? But y?

Maan: I'll answer all ur questions but first arrange it.

Yash: ok Give me 1 hr.

Maan: cool.

 

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After 1 hr. Yash came to his home wid a SIM CARD confused as Maan has never asked him for such things

 

Yash: wats wrong Maan? Y had u asked me to arrange a Spare SIM CARD for u.

Maan: I need to talk to Geet, nd if I call her wid my no. den she'll definitely not take my call.

Yash: but y u need to talk to Geet?

Maan: I don't know. But I want to knw dat if she's ok. Its been 3 weeks I haven't seen her not even heard her voice. I just wanted to talk her nw

 

Yash smiles inwardly as he knew dat dis will happen very soon because he knows dat Maan truly loves Geet nd he cant stay away from her for long but Rite nw he need to realize dis fact as soon as Possible

 

Yash: So wat Maan? Y u bother dis much? I mean u urself said na dat dere was nothing between u nd her den y r u so much concerned for her

Maan: Yash, whatever happened between us was different thing, but before dat she was my friend. As a friend I can talk to her

Yash: ya dat makes Sense but if u r considering her as friend den dere would be no problem den if u call her wid ur No.

 

Maan couldn't say anything as he got trapped in his own reasonings. But now he dnt have tym to sort out all dis

 

Maan: Yash, we'll discuss it later but first let me call her.

 

With dis he started dialing Geet's no.

 

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Geet was doing her project work wen she heard her cell phone ringing. She looked at d screen nd d number was unknown to her. Initially she didn't want to pick it up but later she decides to pick it as may be it was from any of her friend. After 5-6 rings Geet picks up d Call.

 

Geet: Hello!!!

 

Maan got lost in her voice. After whole 3 weeks he was listening her voice but her voice is different today. It was not as cheerful as before wen he use to cakll her. D sadness can easily be sensed in her voice

 

Geet: Hello!! Who's dere?

 

Maan closed his eyes nd cuts d call as he don't have courage to talk to her. Its not as easy as he thought. Yash was watching all dis nd smirks because he can understand wats going in d heart of Maan.

 

Yash: wat Happen? U didn't talk to her? Network nahi laga?

Maan: ummm. No she didn't picked it up

Yash: really? Try once again

Maan: I'll call her after sumtym.

Yash: fine as u wish. M going den, tell me if u need any further help.

Maan: hhmmm ok bye.

 

Yash goes from dere nd as soon as Maan sees Yash going he quickly again dialed her no. nd dis tym puts a Handkerchief on d speaker so dat Geet couldn't recognize his Voice. She picked up d call in 2-3 rings only

 

Geet: Hello!

Maan: May I speak to Geet Handa?

 

Geet felt d voice familiar but couldn't able to recognize it

 

Geet: Whose it?

Maan: u dnt knw me, but I knw u?

Geet: how?

Maan: Actually, I saw u near ur college, nd I really like u nd want to be ur friend

Geet: Wat Rubbish? Nd anyways from where did u get my no.

Maan: I get it after lots of hard work. Pls be my friend

Geet: Listen Mr. whoever u r first of all I dnt knw hw u got my no. nd secondly u r a stranger to me nd I dnt talk to strangers so u r approaching a wrong girl nd m telling u politely dnt ever call me again.

Maan: but wats d Big Deal. Every1 s a stranger wen dey first meet each other. Just trust dis stranger once

 

Geet stood numb for sumtym, his words r somewhere reminding her of Maan

 

Maan: hello Miss u dere?

Geet: ya

Maan: So... m waiting for ur answer

Geet: my answer is no. I had already Trusted a stranger once nd later on has paid a lot for dis trust nd nw I dnt want to trust any1, specially a stranger so dnt call me again.

 

She said nd cuts d call without giving him chance to speak.

 

Maan stood dere lifeless. Every word of Geet's were ringing in his ears nd piercing his Heart. He closed his eyes in pain.

 

Maan (To himself): she's still dere, she's still dere where I left her. She haven't moved on. Infact I haven't left her in d condition dat she can trust anyone else.

 

Yash was standing near d Door listening to their Conversation. He has actually not gone from dere. He knows dat Maan will not talk to Geet in front of him so he said dat he was going but quickly hides himself near d Door nd listened to dem. He smiles a bit nd a tear of happiness has escaped from his eyes. He knows his friend very well. He knows dat he Loves Geet a lot but due to his Immature behaviour he was not able to realize it but very soon he will realize his mistake.

 

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Later dat Evening Geet as usual sitting near her Window, watching outside. Everytym her Mind get diverted towards d Phone call. Her heart continuously says dat it was Maan but her mind is not ready to accept it as she thought dat y would Maan call to her. He must have moved on in his lyf. It was just her Illusion. She was lost in her thoughts wen Misha came to her. She looked at Geet nd got confused. From last 3 weeks she was founding her behaviour weird. She doesn't fight wid her neither do any kind of arguments nd she was really missing all dis. so today she decides to confront her.

 

Misha: Hey Wildy! Wats up?

Geet: nothing Mish! Koi Kaam tha?

Misha: kyun kya ab main apni hi sister se bina kisi kaam k nahi mil sakti? (den turn dramatic) kya itna hi samjha tumne mujhe

Geet: Mish, stop being Dramatic

Misha: O Really! M getting Dramatic. Wat about u? aren't u being Dramatic

Geet: Wat had I done nw?

Misha: o! nw I should tell u. yum Window k paas chupchap baithe rehna. Apne aap ko har waqt busy rakhna. Ye dramatic nahi hai to kya hai. 3 weeks se dekh rahi hoon tumhara yahi routine hai. Infact tum to ab mujhse ladti bhi nahi ho. Kya hua hai Wildy?

Geet: Nothing mish, jaisa tum soch rahi ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai

Misha: o c'mon Wildy! Dnt try to Fool me. I mean just look at urself Man. Totally Devdas ho gayi ho bus haath me ek Bottle ki kami hai

Geet: Mish! Stop it

Misha: no first u tell me wats wrong wid u? tumhara Maan se jhagda hua hai kya? 3 weeks se dekh rahi hoon na tum use call karti ho na uska Call aata hai.

Geet: Aisa kuch nahi hai

Misha: O really! Den y u guys not calling each other? I knw something has happened otherwise 3 weeks passed nd u guys dnt talk to each other dats next to impossible. Nw tell me wats wrong?

Geet: Bola na Mish. Kuch bhi nahi hua hai

Misha: fine dnt tell me I'll ask to Maan myself only

 

She said nd picked up Geet's cell nd started dialing his no. wen Geet stopped her

 

Geet: Mish, stop it u wont call him.

Misha: I'll call him. I want to knw wats going wrong over here

Geet (tries to stop her): Misha give back my cell. Misha I m warning u. give it or it wont be good for u.

Misha: As if I Care

 

Nw Geet cant take dis anymore. She has to stop her

 

Geet: MISHA STOP IT! DERE'S NOTHING BETWEEN ME ND MAAN ANYMORE NW.

 

Misha drops d cell phone instantly as she couldn't believe wat she heard. Geet sat on d floor on her knees crying

 

Misha: Wat r u saying? U joking right.

 

She nods her nead in no.

Misha: but y?

 

Geet told her everything nd misha felt her blood boiling

 

Misha: hw dare he to do dat wid u? I wont leave him. Just wait nd watch wat I do wid him

Geet: Misha u wont do anything.

Misha: no Wildy! He has to pay for dis

Geet: Misha, tujhe meri kasam

Misha: oh stop it Wildy, I dnt believe it in all dis Kasam-Vasam ok

Geet: Mish I really mean it. Pls

Misha: but y u want to save him?

Geet: I cant give answers to any of ur question nw. just dnt do anything pls.

Misha: Fine baithi raho Devdas banke. Tum Ladkiyom ki yahi problem hoti hai. Isiliye ye ladke tum logon ka Faayda uthate hai. Just do wat u want.

 

She said nd goes out from d room angrily but Geet knows dat very soon she'll return back

 

Geet (to herself): u cant understand Misha! Because u haven't been in love nd once u fall in love den only u'll understand y I stopped u today.

 

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It was 8 PM nd Maan was sitting at d Bar of a Pub sipping his drink. No matter hw hard he tried but still his mind couldn't able to stop about thinking of Geet. He himself dnt know wats happening to him. He himself has came into conclusion dat dere was no love between dem den y he's feeling so lonely without her. It seems like he's empty from inside. He was lost in his thoughts wen sum Girl came near him

 

Girl: Hey Handsome!

 

Maan looks at her but didn't respond which was unusual of him. he never ignores any girl approaching him but dat was before he met Geet but today wats wrong wid him wen Geet is not wid him anymore. Girl again tries to gain his attention

 

Girl: hey, u dere?

Maan: ummm

Girl: seems u dnt have any partner would u mind if I join u

Maan: sure

Girl: by d way my name is Simran but u can call me Sim.

Maan: umm. Nice meeting u

 

Simran couldn't able to understand his behaviour but she cant let him go so easily so she tried once again

 

Sim: Wont u get me a Drink (she said in d sensous voice)

 

As soon as Maan heard her unwillingly he thought of Geet nd their first meeting

 

"Excuse me Preety Lady can I get u Drink"


"y? r u a Bartender?"

 

As soon as he remembers dis a smile formed on his lips which makes Simran more confused. She waved her hand in front of him

 

Sim: hey, where u lost?

Maan: umm nothing

Sim: so I was saying wont u ask me for a Drink?

Maan (in cold voice): no.

Sim: Excuse me?

Maan: I said no. as m not a Bartender nd if u need a drink den I think u should ask to a Bartender not me

 

He said nd moves out from dere. Leaving Simran behind baffled.

 

He came out nd stops near d Door of his car. He himself don't know y he behaved in dis way inside. He was not like dis. he had never ignored any girl den y he ignored her today. Y he found it difficult to stay dere for a minute more. He couldn't understand d Turmoil going within him. He gets inside d Car nd started Driving furiously he dnt where he was heading to but he needs to go to d place where he can find all his answers, where he can get d solution of all his restlessness.

 

Precap:

Emptiness


So guys nw tell me hw many of u want to throw chappals nd jutis on me for leaving u all at cliff hanger. hope u all Like dis Part. Hit d Like Button if u all like it. Do Leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary. nd ya forgive me if i had any mistakes while typing. Will PM u all after sumtym rite nw leaving for Presentation. till den Keep commenting
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caught up with the parts dear..nice.. painful from geets side..:((
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caught up with the parts dear..nice.. painful from geets side..:((



Aww muskaan thank u so much dear cant tell u hw happy i m after seeing ur comment. Thank u sooo much. Nd thanx 4 being d first one too
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Aww muskaan thank u so much dear cant tell u hw happy i m after seeing ur comment. Thank u sooo much. Nd thanx 4 being d first one too


geet gum main celbrate karna bhool gayen...
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great part...it is too painful for geet...hope maan realises his mistake and his love for geet soon
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geet gum main celbrate karna bhool gayen...
yeppy mre firstπŸ˜†



ya wat to do Geet ka gum hi kuch aisa hai thanx for being d first πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Hey nice update. Maan can feel Geet's pain but is not able to realize his own feelings.
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maan is in love but confused abt his feelings
good long part
update soon 
bye
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