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Tu hi Meri Zindagi last part pg 45 (Page 18)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
omg....cute this update was......so romantic and inspired by the show I see..red dhori and shaan tying it...marjawaan....super cute

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
hey sonali.........
awesome update loved it.........
very well described..........
khanak in redghagra choli...........n shaan climbing to the balcony...........lovely...........
so romantic
update soon

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
shaan's actions...his dialogues.....as well as khanak's...soo ShaNak!
Well done Shona!
 
a fav word of our FF writes....Dhatt!

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
awesome !!! sonali keep it up!!!thanx for the pm

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
hey it ws realy sweet & nw waitn for dem 2 go 2 switzeralnd so pls continue soon

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hey everyone here is the next update, thank-you everyone who  pressed like and commented!

Part Twelve

 Khanak knew she would get it from Shantanu that evening. However for now she needed to get ready to go to college.

 

Madhvi stopped her as she was about to run upstairs to get one of her books from the paatshalla.

 

"Khanak yeh lo kagan. Make sure you keep it safely in your room," she stated.

 

 Khanak smiled. She was glad Madhvi had accepted her as her bahu now more than before.

 

" Theek hai Mummyji. I'll just keep it and then I must leave," she stated.

 

" Dhan se jaana beta," Madhvi said.

 

 Khanak smiled brightly as she placed the kagan in her jewelry box.  She headed over to the  paatshalla to pick up her books. She came down the stairs and met Daadi.

 

" I heard you are going to college. I hope you do well Khanak," she said proudly.

 

 Khanak took blessings and headed out towards the door.

 

She didn't see Dharam and his car around. Suddenly she heard a honk. She nearly dropped her things. She turned to see Shantanu in his car smirking widely at her.

 

 She frowned at him as she tried to shift her books in her arms. She walked over to him.

 

 He lowered the passenger side window.

 

" You didn't leave yet?," she inquired.

 

" Nahin toh.  How could I let you go in a rikshaw?," he quipped.

 

She rolled her eyes.

 

" Dharam kahan hai?"

 

" Dad needed him for something earlier so he is out right now. However I can give you a ride," he said with a sweet smile.

 

She stiffened.

 

" You just like to have an excuse to  bunk office," she hissed.

 

" Nahin Khanak I swear. I am mature now. I do not think of bunking office anymore," he insisted.

 

 " Soch na padega," she said teaslingly.

 

" Besides I have something for you!," he said.

 

" Hmm, phir theek hai," she said and settled down beside him.

 

" Kya hai?"

 

 He reached in the back and pulled out a messenger bag.

 

" You can keep some of your things here," he said.

 

"Thank-you!," she said with glee. She quickly put everything inside.

 

 Shantanu started driving.

 

 The arrived at her college in no time and she flashed him a bright smile.

 

"Khanak ek second."

 

 She turned to see what he wanted to tell her.

 

" Main tuhme pick up karne ke liye aahun ga," he stated ( I will come pick you up)

 

 Khanak smiled brightly.

 

" Theek hai. Dhan se aur theek se kam karna," she stated.

 

" Tum bhi dhan se padri  karna," he said before  driving off.

 

She slung her bag over her shoulder and started walking towards her first class.

 

 

 Khanak was surpised to find some of the other girls around her suddenly stopping to stare at something. She was confused.

 

" In sub ko kya hogaya?," she  thought to herself.

 

 She shifted past them with some difficulty. Then was surprised to see that they were googling her husband. She pouted and  wanted to give them all dirty looks. Instead she had a better plan.

 

 Shantanu was drumming his fingertips on the rim of the car. He turned to smile in her direction.

 

He realized there was a crowd of girls basically drooling while looking at him. He turned to look at Khanak. She had a tight smile and had her hands clenched on her messenger bag strap.

 

" Kaisa tha aap ka din?," she asked sweetly.

 

 Shantanu stiffened  and stood up straighter.

 

" Theek tha Khanak, chalein?" ( It was ok Khanak, let's go?)

 

 She turned to see the girls had now stopped drooling and seemed ready to cry in disappointment. She leaned over towards Shantanu whispered something in his ear.

 

" Yeh sab aap ko dekri hain Jaldi chalo yahaan se," she  hissed.

 

 Shantanu stepped back.

 

" Of course Khanak. We also need time for tutions before dinner," he stated as he got into the driver's side.

 

 Khanak waved with a smile at the girls and hopped into the passenger side.

 

 

 As Shantanu drove he tried not to burst out laughing.

 

" Badi hassi arri hai," she hissed. ( You feel like laughing a lot)

 

Shantanu could not stay quiet any longer.

 

" You were so jealous Khanak!," he declared.

 

" So what? It shows that  I love you a lot. I am sure you would be upset if I was not possessive of you," she replied.

 

Shantanu stayed quiet on that point.

 

" What happened, you have no answer for that?," Khanak asked.

 

" We will discuss this later," Shantanu stated.

 

" Oh yeah you are not very good at multi-tasking. Did you read my letter?," she inquired.

 

 Shantanu nodded.

 

" I read it during lunch today. I will tell you later if I forgive you or not," he replied.

 

 She rolled her eyes.

 

 They got home  and he parked the car. He was able to get out first while Khanak grabbed her things. He waited for her to get out.

 

She was about to walk inside when he grabbed her wrist.

 

 She turned to face him.

 

"Kya hua Shantanu?," she asked.

 

" I do like it when you get jealous," he said.

 

She smiled  and  squeezed his hand.

 

" Let's go inside. You need to freshen up and then I need to start my tutions," she said.

 

Shantanu smiled.

 

" It will be very interesting, my lovely student," he said.

 

 She shook her head at  him before they walked inside together.

 

 Khanak was in the paatshalla before Shantanu. She had started to open her books and take notes.

 

 Shantanu paced around while she looked through the day's lessons to see what terms she needed to go over.

 

 She looked up to see him and he sat beside her as she pointed out the terms she was confused about. He would search for the Hindi term and if he could not think of it, he would try to demonstrate it.

 

 Then she said she had an assignment for art class.

 

" I have to do a life still painting. Do you have any ideas what I should do? I cannot go to Dhulwadi otherwise I could find something natural and living to paint. Here in the city everything is always moving," she stated.

 

 Shantanu thought for a moment before saying," I'll get my laptop one second," he said.

 

 He came back and googled life still paintings.

 

" Here just pick one and we can make it bigger so you can see it better," he said.

 

" That's cheating Shantanu. But this one gives me an idea. I will set up my canvas after dinner," she stated.

 

" I wonder what she will paint?," Shantanu wondered.

 

 



Edited by adventure_gurl - 05 March 2011 at 3:15pm

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
yeyyyyyy  i am the first to comment .sonali it is awesome as everClap

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
awww so cutely shaan says he likes it when she gets jealous...cute update...your romance is so cute...i really like reading it...

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