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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
omg..raj just read ur scene abt viren's pov.... loved it...it was exactly what i wanted the stroy to be...which the cvs have messed...thanks for the wonderful scene..

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
hey guys i was soo down after reading the news of ccbm ending so i just wrote a scene to make myself feel better so i just decide to share with u guys. it is going with the current track its not dat goood but hope u huys enjoy  reading anwayz

Viren was peacefully sleeping in Sharma house in Yash's room. Yash had already left for college. Viren was dreaming about his love Nivedita he saw her beautiful face appear in his dream. The blanket was only half on him and his hand was coming out the side of the bed. He looked like a little sweet innocent child whilst he lay on the bed smiling in his sleep.

Nivedita came in to the room with a tray of breakfast for Viren. She saw that he was sleeping and didn't want to wake him up so she put the tray on the desk. She turned and walked towards the door to leave the room. She suddenly felt a pull on her scarf she turned around and found that it was stuck on Viren's ring. She walked back towards Viren and took her scarf out gently trying not to wake him up she got the blanket and placed it on him properly she held his hand and tucked it in the blanket.

Nivedita sat down beside Viren and admired his beautiful face. She started thinking about all those moments they had spent together those moments were the best moments in her life and those memories could never be washed away. She said to herself "kyu itni pas hoke bhi hum itni door hai Viren yeh sab kyu hua. kya hum bicharne ke liye hi mile te" tears rolled down her eyes as she refreshed those memories one tear drop fell onto Virens cheek. Nivedita snapped out of her thoughts and wiped her tears away she then softly wiped away the tear drop on Virens cheek.

Viren felt a tear drop on his cheek after a few moments he felt a gentle hand across his cheek he knew whose it was as he can never forget the touch of those soft hands. He remembered how he recognised her touch when they played the blindfold game on their honeymoon. Those wonderful memories ran across his head as his loves hand moved across his cheek wiping the tear drop away.

Nivi saw Virens eyes twitching as he slowly opened his eyes and found the face he wanted to start his morning seeing was right in front of him looking more beautiful than ever her moon like face glowed before his eyes. She was wearing a lovely blue dress sequined with silver.

Nivi got up in haste as she saw viren smiling at her and saying good morning. "Viren tumhara nachta raka he ka le na" ahe said as she quickly turned around to get away from him.

Nivis scarf brushed across virens face as she walked away. Viren grabbed it and nivi stopped.

Nivi felt a pull on her scarf again but this time it felt different maybe beacause this time Viren held it and it wasn't a coincidence. She turned around with a angry look on her face she held her scarf and tugged at it to make him let go. Viren smirked and said " agar churana hai to yaha ake mere haath sai churao." Viren pulled the scarf towards him making nivi unwillingly follow he stopped pulling the scarf until him and nivi were face to face looking deep into eachothers sparkling eyes. After a few moments viren let go of the scarfand nivi tried to run away but viren quickly grabbed her hand."viren mera haat choro nivi said in an very angry tone. "nahin choronga to" viren questioned "meine kaha mera haath choro varna mein" nivi said her expressions getting angrier.Varna kya. Tum cheko gi chilao gi. Nivedita Mein tumhaara pati hoon mujhe kuch farak nahin parta agar koin yaha aye humein deke kunki mujhe sirf farak parta hain ki mein tumse bohot pyar karta hoon." He pulled her closer to him so they can feel each other's breath on their faces. Nivi looked away and started breathing heavily she didn't know what to do as she knew how stubborn viren was.

Viren held nivis hand and placed it on his chest with his hand on top of hers. "Meri dadkhono ko mehsos karo Nivedita. Yeh sirf tumhaara nam leti hain kyu ki main tumse haad se bhi zyada pyar karta hoon.  Mein tumhare bina nahi ji sakta aur mein janta hoon ke jitna pyar mein tumse karta hoon use kahin zyada pyar tum mujhse karti hotum chahen jitna inkaar karloo lekin tumhari yeh akein jooth nahi bhol ti." "mein tumse pyar nahiN karti" nivedita said."karti hon" Viren demanded. "tumne shahed suna nahi mene kaha ke mein tumse pyarnahin karti" viren brought her even closer and said "meri aankon mein aankein dalkar kahon ke tum mujhse pyar nahin karti" nivi tried to loosen his frip on her and looked down as she again said "nahi karti" viren held her chin up "meri aankon mein aankei dal kar kaho" viren tightened his grip on herthen held her waist and pulled her close to him so it seemed like they were hugging. Nivi removed his hand from her waist and walked back she stopped and relised her pendent was stuck on his t- shirt wich stopped her from moving away from him so they were still very close. She tried to get it off and was struggling. Viren didn't try and help as he loved the feeling of her being so close.

Nivi kept trying but still unable to she was scared someone may see them especially ks. A voice was calling Nivi it got louder as the person came closer to the room. It was dadi. Nivi started to panick she looked at viren hoping he would help her take the pendent off but viren just smiled at her he then quickly grabbed her by the waist hugging her with one hand pinned her to the wall behind the door so no one can see them. He put his finger on his lips gesturing nivi to keep quite. They then had an eyelock and didn't nivi come in and then going away after not finding anyone in the rrom. They just stood there for a long moment lost in eachothers beautiful eyes. Viren couldn't help himself to approach nivi and kissed her soft cheeks he then kissed her forhead. Nivi didn't stop him as she was still lost in his mesmerising eyes. Viren then trickled his fingers down nivis arm and grasped her hand as he slowly kissed her neck. Nivi shivered but didn't say anything as she was speechless. Viren then unhooked nivis pendent from his shirt. He kissed her cheek again and whispered in her ears "nivedita manie tumhara chain nikaliya"nivi snapped out of her thoughts after listening to his words she pushed him away and ran out of the room.

Viren scratched his head and said to himself " kab tak tum mere pyar se bag ti rahongi nivedita ek din tumhe mera hoon hai. Hai bagwan kab ayega who pal yeh dil intezar karkar ke tak choka hai ab to mere chand ko mere paas bej" he jumped on to the bed as he said those last words and gave a big grin                                                          

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

 

 



Edited by nivrenlover - 02 April 2011 at 9:07am

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG!!!!! WAT A SCENE!!!! Loved it re!!! Beautifully written and somethng i wud love to see on the show!!! God that was sooo beautiful!!! I cant stop dreaming abt it nw!!!! Brilliant scene!!!
Please doooo write more... Please!!! U write really well!!!! Awesome!!!
Im a small fan of urs nwBig smileLOL
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAYURIKTA

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! WAT A SCENE!!!! Loved it re!!! Beautifully written and somethng i wud love to see on the show!!! God that was sooo beautiful!!! I cant stop dreaming abt it nw!!!! Brilliant scene!!!
Please doooo write more... Please!!! U write really well!!!! Awesome!!!
Im a small fan of urs nwBig smileLOL
 aww thank u im glad u liked it
i wasnt really gonna post it as i didnt think it was good enough
ur soo sweet thanx again 4 ur lovely comments
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
awesome scene yaar...haaaiiiiii Day Dreaming...how much i missed d besharam scenes...sooo cute n romantic......Clap
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
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what a lovely scene dear.....these CT's should seriously come here and read what we write
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

awesome scene yaar...haaaiiiiii Day Dreaming...how much i missed d besharam scenes...sooo cute n romantic......Clap
thnx ash glad u liked itLOL
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raj_Luv_NiViren

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what a lovely scene dear.....these CT's should seriously come here and read what we write
thnx raj
wat can we do if only we cant pulled them to come and read creations of us fans can we
theyre to busy trying to end the show

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