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FF-Tum Kaun Ho (Chapters 24-44) (Page 119)

Miss-Riz Goldie

Joined: 25 July 2010
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Great update :)

Continue soon ;)

desilife Senior Member

Joined: 10 April 2008
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
aww so good. you left us hanging. the date awaits.. :) 
desilife Senior Member

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Posts: 217

Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
awww.. a happy date that ends with a good night kiss. :)
PLKG90 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 November 2010
Posts: 2547

Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged

wow yaar, loved this part!

can't wait to c there romantic moment!!!!

seems like we are gonna have some nice romantic moments!!! 

Plz plz update soon!

Can't wait to read more and more!!!

plz PM me as soon u updated!

thanks for the PM yaar!

and btw, thank you for those videos. helped to me clear some uncleared parts! lol 

Mrs.MSKForever Senior Member

Joined: 31 January 2011
Posts: 266

Posted: 28 March 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
I loved Navy Pier cruise when I took one... it sure makes for a very great idea to be on a date venue like that... m glad u chose something that was even though a regular place yet the setting was special... the way Geet hung onto Maan when talking about her happy times, u sketched a very endearing sight of a couple who by companionship wanted to be there for each other not just for physical attraction...
the goodnight kiss was like icing on the cake... hope we get to read more of this nicey nice parts in your upcoming updates where maan and geet get comfy with their relationship....maybe a jealous geet and a jealous maan would be fun to read too :).. actually the vivid description that you give makes for a painted read to me atleast... as if I am watching them being in each other's arms or teasing each other :)
Though its like "diye ko roshni dikhana" as they say.. but you are a talented wordsmith... n the story that you have created here makes both maan and geet human n not just characters from novel...
wishing to read the next update tonight... but then its a wishful thing... :)
PS: do you read our comments? I am just confused whether my wishes turned true magically on their own or my comments were read by fairy godmother(i.e. you) and were granted :) ... I had asked for a very regular yet special date where Maan had never taken any of his previous girls n you just granted me that... the usual couple stuff they did in your last update while preparing b'fast, even that I had asked for in one of my comments.. so just wondering if u happen to grant wishes while reading thru comments :D
if yes, then in one of your next updates... plzz make Maan go alone on a business trip n would love to see Maan missing Geet and viceversa...maybe every night phone conversations between them...just chit-chatting would also look cute....n then u can make them go on a business trip together after maan makes up a flimsy excuse to take geet with him...wud also love to see how they behave when they need to be 24X7 in each other's company... without anything much to do

Edited by Mrs.MSKForever - 28 March 2011 at 11:42pm
swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
nice update... wow lovely date.. continue soon
..Adeena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
really nice..
lovedd their date..!!!

KavyaNaik123 Senior Member

Joined: 21 February 2010
Posts: 699

Posted: 29 March 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
continue sooon

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