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Nazmaa Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Chapter one is here guys :)

Nazmaa Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged

Chapter one '.

4 years later

It is a nice beautiful day in Handa household. The sun is out and the birds are singing their early morning song. Throughout the whole house there is silence. There is no one in the house. Everyone is sat outside. Sonia and Vijey are sat outside in their big garden. All the servants are also sat outside and are enjoying the sun. Sonia told them that once all the housework was done they can all have the rest of the day of and relax in the garden. Nakul head of all the helpers (servants) thinks it's too boring just to sit there in the garden and all decide to play cricket. Sonia and Vijey agreed and have joined in the game. Sonia is in nakuls team and Vijey is in the opposite team. It is sonia's turn to bat and Vijey is the bowler.

Sonia ' Cheating maat karna Vijey' She said jokingly

Vijey 'Cheating Aur Meh' Shaking his head in mock horror' You think I would cheat. Haaaw you don't know me at all do you' is pretending to be upset'

A voice comes from behind them all - Nooo She Doesn't Know You That Well but I do'. Come on you taught me to cheat' he said laughing'

All turn their heads around to see who has spoken. Vijey who already knew this voice too well started laughing and said ' Yeah I taught you to cheat but you are a bigger cheat than me. There stood a man who looked at least 21 years old. He Was dressed in dark blue McKenzie jeans and a blue McKenzie t-shirt. He had brown eyes which were to die for and a killer smile. He was extremely good looking. Immediately he joined in the game and decided to join his mothers team. Sonia gave her son an enormous hug kissed his forehead. Prem immediately kissed his mum on both of her cheeks.

Prem ' Love you mama <3

Sonia ' Love you too Beta

He then walked upto his dad and ducked down before Vijey was about to hug him and extended his right hand for a handshake. Vijey laughed and shook his son's hand.

Vijey ' Tum Mera Saath Mera team meh Bowling Karna acha..

Prem ' What!! '. Papa Aap Bhi Na' I'm Joining Mama's Team' he said with a big grin on his face as he walked over to his mama'. Waise Bhi Apke vo dono rajkumariya kahan hai.. Abhi tak jaaga nahi kya??

Main tho yahan hoon prem bhaiCame a sweet voice. Prem turned and saw a young girl stood before him'

Prem ' Hmmmm Aap Koun?? He said with a mischievous smile on his face.

The young girl smiled.

Young Girl ' Main Tho Main Hoon Laken Aap Yahan Kaise?

Prem ' yeh tho mera ghar hain'. Acha ab yeh batoa tum koun ho?? He carried on teasing this young girl knowing he was definitely going to win.

Young Girl ' Acha acha.. we all know you are going to win prem bhai' ab bas karo bohat mazak karliya '

Prem went over to the young girl before tears filled her eyes and hugged her. He knew her too well. He knew if he carried on then she would eventually start crying.

Prem ' Sorry Baba ' Aab aur mazak nahi karoga.. aaj ke liye thumari liye mazak kaafe' hehe' naraz mat hona..

Young girl ' arre bhai, Arohi Handa apne Prem bhai ki saat naraz ho saakthe haon kya .. she replied with a huge smile'

Prem and Arohi looked at each other and smiled.

Meanwhile inside the Handa house there was a strange man walking through the corridors. He recognized this place all too well and smiled to himself. He went to the lounge knowing that he would definitely find one of the Handa family members sat there. There on the wall was big picture of two girls. He looked at the picture lovingly for a few minutes with tears in his eyes. He was soo glad that he finally found them. He couldn't wait to hug them both. He was wondering where on earth everyone was. He had an Armani black suit on which made him look gorgeous and had black shades with made him look cool. He was drop dead gorgeous. His smile and his heart was the one of things he loved. this was because he knew if he was smiling then his precious sisters were smiling. Nothing was more important to him then his parents, brother and his two beautiful sisters. He walked into the garden where he saw his family playing cricket. He looked around and very happy that he saw everyone happy and excited. No-one apart from his mama and papa knew he had come back. He wanted to see the look on his younger siblings face when they saw him. That was the only thing that kept him going for the past four years. He walked up to younger sister and stopped. He didn't touch her or call her. He knew as soon as he stopped that arohi would immediately recognize that he was here. Arohi sensed that someone was behind her. She stopped everything altogether. She started having flashbacks of her and her older brother. She whispered his name slowly and quietly.

Arohi - Yash veerji.

She suddenly turned and threw herself in his arms. She screamed very excitedly and happily. She had tears coming out of her eyes and was very pleased that he was here. She was about to shout his name out when he suddenly put his hand over her mouth to stop her. He didn't want his other sister to find out that he was here yet. He wanted to surprise her too. Prem saw this emotionly reunion along with his parents who stood there smiling. Prem turned to his parents.

Prem ' you both knew didn't you??? He questioned then with an angry face

Sonia and Vijey ' Ermmm Nahii.. we didn't kow anything they said scared..

Prem smiled then and said thank you to them both for making his younger sister smile. He couldn't wait to see his other sisters expression. Just then Sonia went inside to wake up their other daughter who was still asleep. She had been awake all night studying for her finals and needed her rest. She knocked on the bedroom door.

Sonia ' Get up beta' subah hogaya hai' she waited a few minutes and walked up to the curtains. She opened the curtains slowly and watched her daughters face as the sunlight hit her face. The young girls eyes were getting very irritated by this sudden exposure. Sonia walked over to her daughter and smoothly stroked her face.

Sonia ' Geet Beta Get up..

Geet ' Hmm sone do nah mama ' I'll come down later I promise.

Sonia ' baad mein nahi' Now!! and Sonia walked out of the room.

Geet stretched her arm wide and yawned. She sat up slowly with her eyes still closed. (only shows her eyes)She slowly opened her eyes revealing a beautiful brown color that was the most amazing color ever. She smiled at herself knowing she again woke up late.(show her body from the back.)  She walked into the bathroom and washed her face and had a shower. She brushed her teeth and went straight to the cupboard to decide what to wear. She pick our her favourite Blue chooridaar dress which she adored. (now will start to show her face slowly) She put on her pencil Eyeliner and mascara. She put on her bronzer slowly so she could see the color on her cheeks was a pale pink. Not too overdone but perfect. She then put on her lipgloss and blew a kiss at her teadybear that was sat on the side of her bed. She got out of her room and went to the kitchen to get a piece of fruit. She then looked around wondering why the house was quiet.

Geet ' Yeh saab kaha chaliga hain'. This house is never this quiet. She immediately knew something was up. She searched the whole house for her mama, papa, prem bhai and Arohi di.. Even the helpers weren't in. she was getting very scared. She started running around the whole house. She went up to prem bedroom and checked in there. He wasn't there she checked in mama & papa's room they weren't there. Also she went to Arohi's Bedroom and saw she wasn't there also.

She ran downstairs through the hallway and bumped into a figure that was stood there in the darkness. She was too scared to recognize who this figure was. All she knew that it was a man. But who she didn't know herself. She tried to figure it out but she couldn't.

Geet's thoughts ' Stupid man show your face then' pagal larka' ghar mein koi nahi hain or mein ek akeli larki' Aab mein kya karoon '


Next ' Geet Comes Face to face with the mystery man hiding in the darkness'. 

Chapter 2 -

Sorry was a little wrong with the precap.. she does come face to face with the darkness but not then later on

Guys you have any idea who it is??? x

Edited by Nazmaa - 13 March 2011 at 10:13am

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
guess it's her brother yashWink

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
awsome update..
love it.

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
superb update....

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
gr8 update
Well da mystery man is yash obviously as he wanted 2 surprise Geet
Cont soon Xx...
Thanks 4 the PM

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Nazmaa Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Haha :) Thanks guys for your comments...
i promise tomorrow you will have chapter 2 and maybe chapter 3....
im glad you like the first 2 parts :)

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged the bonding Handa family share........ cant wait Smile

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