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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update
Grrr want maan to get jealous...don't Like seeing geet jealous all the tym
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


thanks...
you will get to see maan jealous lol :)

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Updating...




Edited by Nazmaa - 12 August 2011 at 6:32pm

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Hey guys...
Well Here Is Another Update..Tongue
Last
Update Was A Little Crap Confused
So Hope You Like It... LOL
Also This Is The Last Of The Jealousy Part Unless You Want Me To Carry On??
Well Here You Go...

Chapter 30


The club was loud, full of people and very disorienting.. Geet was getting very tipsy' she drank another shot.. she looked around to see if she can find the people she came with' there she spotted armaan  dancing with ridz, Maan with pari.. she thought he was more trying to eat her then he was dancing with her' she giggle at her own thought'

She got up and made her way to the DJ.. whilst walking past guys were ogling at her.. she gave them a look and was about to walk up to them when she remembered her little plan' she walked up to the DJ and Asked him to play a Song'

Geet- Excuse Me Handsome , she said.. she was too drunk to notice what she was saying' she gave them a time and told them to put the spotlight on her when the song starts'

Dj ' Okay Gorgeous.. he said'

Geet ' Welcome Sexy! She said grinning'

She made her way back to the dancefloor and that's when the lights when off'  everyone stopped dancing and the spotlight made its way to geet' who was in the middle of the dancefloor..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WBwsz8mZj2Y

watch the video...

The music starts and geet blinks real hard in order to get her vision in control' She takes her duppata off and throws it to maan' Yash, Prem, Arjun, Armaan, Meera, Sandiyah, Arohi, Pari , Ridz and Maan were stood together shocked'. As Brothers Arjun, Yash, Prem and Armaan Stood there anger building up inside seeing Geet Drunk'. As Friends of Her's Meera, Ridz, Arohi And Sandiyah were loving it..

Geet - Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya

Geet dances around enjoying herself whilst singing' she dances with a group of Ridz friends' Rahul, Atul, Anjali, Nikki And Abhi' Maan was seething with jealousy..  she was dancing around with other people.. Seeing her with Rahul Who was trying it on with her Really peeved him off'
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya
Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho

She looked back at maan who was giving her evil looks and she started laughing.. she carried on dancing.. she went to prem and grabbed his hand and took him to the middle of the dancefloor.. prem got caught up in the music and started Dancing'

It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco
Kaun mile hai kisko
It's the time to disco

Maan  joined in the song and danced with Pari'. He was dancing with pari but was wishing he could dance with Geet.


Maan - Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya

Prem, Arjun And Arohi went to geet as they all started singing and dancing together' they were enjoying themselves'

G, P, Ar, A- Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho
It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco
Kaun mile dekho kisko
It's the time to disco


yash still angry at geet for drinking' Prem goes to a group of a girls and tells them to go and get maan on the dancefloor' the girls go and get maan to the dancefloor and dance with him.. girls have crowded him.. he is close to them as he his dancing...  he has his hand around one of the girls waist and dips her and she starts to caress his cheek... Geet see's this and starts getting annoyed... she looks away in anger and the looks back at him with anger... he see's this and smirks... he carries on dancing with the girls stroking his chest...  he laughs..


Maan- Balkhata hai badan aisi jo taal hai
Saanson mein chalti hai aandhiyaan


Armaan - Behkata hai yeh maan ab to yeh haal hai
Masti mein khoye hai hum yahan


Geet - Tum bhi khoke mast hoke
Koi toke to khul ke kaho

She gets her brothers and Ridz friends on the dancefloor as they all dance together.. she ignores Maan and dances with Armaan... she laughs and smiles and every now and then looks at Maan..

All together - It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco
Keh do milo jis jisko
It's the time to disco

She goes off through the dancefloor and twirls around... she shakes her body abit and stops in front of Rahul.. she then dances with Rahul and then suddenly feels a pair of hands on her wrist.. she gets pulled towards someone and starts dancing with him as her back is against his chest..  she moves her body with the beats. Deep down she knows its Maan.. she doesn't forget she is trying to make him ... she turns around so she is facing him.. she pretends to act like she didn't know it was him.. she gave him a fake anger look and walked off to Armaan.. she then danced with Armaan..


Maan- Josh mein naachti rangeen shaam hai
Bin piye jhoomta hai sama

He dances and goes to Geet...


Armaan - Hosh ka ab yahan bolo kya kaam hai
Tez hai dhadkane dil javan

Dances with Ridz... he spins her around.


Ridz - Yuh hi reh hai theek hai na
Aur hai kehna to khul ke kaho


Armaan , Ridz, Meera And Yash It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco
Samjho zara tum isko

It's the time to disco

Geet Goes To Maan , she see's him dancing passionately with pari and gets angry. She walks up to Rahul who dances with her...

 Geet -Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya

 Maan turns away from pari and looks around..there he spots Geet dancing soo romantically that he gets fed up..


Maan -Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya

Maan didn't like it when another guy was touching her.. she saw him looking at her.. his eyes bloodshot red... she tried to move away from Rahul but Rahul grabbed her hand...


Sandiyah - Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho


meera and yash - It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco


pari and Arjun - Kaun mile dekho kisko
It's the time to disco


All Together - It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco
Kaun mile dekho kisko
It's the time to disco

The Music has stopped but Geet still sings off key... suddenly her head spins... she sits on her knees and puts her head down a little bit just to get the dizziness away... Yash, Prem, Arjun, Armaan And The Rest all come to her...

Yash is fuming with anger...

Yash ' Geet .. he said he grabbed her hand and made her stand up... but she wasn't able to stand up straight...

Geet ' Veerji... she said slurry...

Yash ' Tumne Sharaab Pee Hai?? He asked... knowing Full Well she has...

Geet ' Veerji  my head hurts... 

Maan went up to her and held her hands...

Maan ' Chal Geet... ghaar chalta hai...

Geet moved her hands out of his and said

Geet ' Nahi.. mujhe dance karna hai...

Maan ' Geet chal varna utta kar la joanga... he stated...

Geet was shocked... then she started laughing...

Geet ' tum... haha.. Nahi leh kar ja sakta...

Maan ' acha... he said.. and lifted her up... he hauled her over his shoulders and took her out.. he put her in the car and drove her home...

One she was at home, he went up and put her in bed... he looked at her and saw she had her eyes closed... As he turned away, she slowly opened her eyes.. she saw how hurt and upset he was at the disco, she saw he was jealous... she wanted to finish this now.. she had enough.. she didn't like hurting him and she couldn't see him with that chipko pari...

He got up to go and as he was about to move away she held his hand stopping him from going... he turned around and saw her eyes opened... he sat down next to her and stroked her hair until slowly she was closing her eyes...

Geet ' I Love you.. she said quietly

Maan was stunned..

Geet ' I Love you Armaan.. she said again..

This time he was hurt.. he was upset.. he was about to get up when he heard it again..only this time he was confused...

Geet ' Thank you Armaan bhai... I Love you Maan singh Khurana.. she whispered...

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Edited by Nazmaa - 12 August 2011 at 6:29pm

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Love love love loved it!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved the whole song sequence
Wooohoo geet confessed and wat a way...first I got shocked and then I started dancing!!
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
lovely update

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Posted: 12 August 2011 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anshra

yayyy me frstDancing
wow nazma
i loved it yaar
and armnan bhaiLOL
acha hua geet ne keh dia
nahi tu maan ko heart attack a jana thaLOL
me waiting for the next part


haha
glad u liked it...
i was getting annoyeed while updating this...
as the stupid video wouldnt show...Angry
haha yeah.. its confusing the end bit for maan...
he doesnt know what to believe lol :)

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