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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
conratz 4 the new update Wink
 
hey just was tnking of geets ryt now state so just tot of it as i was watching this movieEmbarrassed

Mujhe yuhi karke paapon se judaCry
Jane kahan chuppke baitha hai khudaCry
Janu na kab hua khud se gumshudaCry
Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai judaCry

Kyun, meri raaheinCry
Mujhse pooche , ghar kahan haiCry
Kyun, mujhse aakeCry
Dastak pooche, dar kahan haiCry

Rahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahinCry
Doondho mujhe ab mein rehta hoon wahinCry
Dil hai kahin, aur dhadkan hai kahinCry
Sansein hain magar ,kyun zinda main nahinCry

Ret bani ,hathon se yun beh gayiCry
Taqdeer meri ,bikhri har jagahCry
Kaise likhonn phir se nayi daastanCry
Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahanCry

Aahein jo chuni meri thi raza

Rehta kyun phir khud se hi khafa

Esi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khaata

Tune jo di jeene ki saza

Kyun, main jagoonCry

ooooooooo hope she gets her peaceful life back again

as where she is ryt now this says it perfectly



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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged

thanks foe the update di....

but, i mDead
will cry thru the night now
sorry, can't write more now

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congratulation for the new thread
beautiful part.  still so sad and emotional.
 feel crying for jr mk and geet.
 jr mk need maan now.
 she needs her papa.
omg what happen to handa family.
still they don't blame maan for this.
 my heart is crying now.
 muskan pls beg u dear. saare mu end karo aur maaneet ko mila do.
 jr mk need her papa.
 handa family need their daughter.
update soon.

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
congrats on yr new thread...nice update... but sad....pls make them happy.... 

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
this is tou actually very sad very very very sad
ooo wat is she duing yaar
plz plz plz plz gt them 2gtth
er sooon na baba
both are getting tortured
nd mostly us waitinanz who always just keep on waiting 4 ur update dear plz get everything clear soon

ryt now the story is going brilliant u are duing a fantastic job awesum simply loving it
bt still human
nature want everything sort out soon heheheeh
bt still happy wat going on
soon everything will b f9
im sure

have compleet faith on u
love ya
4 2 update in a day
love u u are actaul a darling
tc


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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
muskan , thank u and Thnk God mere prediction true nehi hue.
 hope na hue,
I just want to see them happy and together.
 my heart is crying now for geet and jr mk.
pls mila do unhe.

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
u did make me sad b4 going to sleep...............every update i hope things will b back to normal..........no u make us suffer..............i will wait till ur happy update muskaan................
congrats on new thread...............i am sure ppl will flock it with msg of making them sad with this turn over in this ff

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
 
CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE 13TH THREAD
 
So Geet literally lived with Maan in her daughter's life....what has this man gone n done to her?He pushed her to such extent that she's forced to lie to her own daughter that her dad is living with them only but he's so busy that he don't have time for them....how painful all this must be for a mother.....God,Men are so dumb sometimes.....I really am amazed at Maan's potential....he single-handedly transformed a lovely-bubbly Geet to a caring n possessive lover of his,then a doting, trusting n passionate wife who was always there for him,taking care of him in every way possible inspite of his insensible nager,arrogance and attitude....then over a period of 7 years he made her a cold,ruthless,emtionless,stone hearted n tough IPS officer GK who is a terror to all around her and finally a helpless mother who has been forced to make her daughter believe that her father,who even don't know she exists,has been living with them all the time.....A Real Spectacular Transformation made by Maan Singh Khurana....I salute him for this.....disgusting!!How can a man be so blind to the love that he himself had sought for....how can he be so blinded by his ego,his attitude that he couldn't see the pain of his sole love....Is he a real human?I don't hate Maan after this update....as I said earlier I pity him from the bottom of my heart.....I hope he realizes his mistakes as it seems that he has got some time left in Geet's eyes.....Lets see whether he makes good use of it or not....
 
Oh and sorry if I sounded too engrossed in the story...I know its a fiction but I detest such inhuman behaviours as this which compels a mother to lie to her own kid....Sorry to bore u!


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