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AR/ARSH FF "Sunn Leyna" #1 (Page 135)

blackkitty Goldie

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 7:35am | IP Logged
update sent karogi kya?

armaanriddima Senior Member

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 8:06am | IP Logged
this chapter was so sensitive  har kisi ki feeling ki bare mai tha ... the way armaan felt his feelings his anger but he wasa not gulit of his feelings...whereas shilpa ko gulit ne hi baand rakha tha ...she still sees him as her sisters husband ... she do not see the fact that ridhima is dead she is not coming back... she is and will remain it is shilpas husband shilpas family  sab  kuch shilpa ka LOLLOL acha the update was nice kiss was sudden par how was it yeh bata nahi sakthi jab tak reaction na dekho 

Edited by armaanriddima - 13 October 2014 at 3:08am

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priyanka2607 Groupbie

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 10:30am | IP Logged
hi sam how r u ?
gana toh tumne laga diya page 135 par 
kya  update bhi milega aaj 
dying to read the next part sam
please update karo na 
ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 10:51am | IP Logged
What happened dear?
Please update this and pm me
teenorchid IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
LOLgotta readd
well i am super duper late sam
almost ek maheena hogaya


so ab phir se part parhna pare ga aur phr omment likhna pare ga
the starting scene so armaan knew it from long
he wants to knw abt her, wo kis se pyar krti hai 
pata lag jaye thande hojana hai armaan ne

so it was arjun who told him. shabash ehhh

well much needed armaan's POV

well i am glad armaan wants this relation to work

i love ahaaana nd her naiii
she is so cuteee

comment me delay ka reason ye b tha k kch parts me bande ko samajh nhi aata wo kya likhe
like ab armaan pov tha major part me, parhne me sahi hai bt uss cheex pe comment krna is thora difficult

iske ye wala aur BD ka Zindagi in dono pe bht muskil tha comment likha mere liya

coming back to part
oo teri armaan ne utha k bed pe lita diya
armaan rocks yaar

Armaan shilpa confrontation
much needed nd at last he acccepted that he didnt want to loose her

and the kiss was cherry on cake
now i have realized how tough it was to write all this

but u have done a tremendous job sam
whatever u have tried to write or to convey to us has been delivered very well

it was not my best of comments
cx it was really difficult to express what i really feel abt this part

Edited by teenorchid - 11 November 2014 at 9:00am

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priyanka2607 Groupbie

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
hey sam padne se pehle hi comment kar rahi hoon 
thank u for the update finally 
u r awesome 
baaki padne ke baad ok 
take care

priyanka2607 Groupbie

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
sam a usual this was an update which completely blowed my mind 
itna emotional yet itna romantic 
iss mein tumne saare pieces ko jodh diya thru armaan which was really good 
armaan ne finally shilpa ko not poori tarah but almost samajh gaya and he best part is that armaan loves her now 
the conversation between them was so touchy and emotional that made me cry
the way armaan has sorted his mind out and accepted the relation between them is the best thing 
and the way u have portrayed is so right 
on the other hand shilpa we all know she loves armaan but this regretting thing of her im not liking it at all
i know ke move on hone mein bahut waqt lagta hai lekin agar samne wala itna effort daal raha hai toh tumhe bhi kuch toh kadar karni chahiye uske feelings ki 
shilpa kadar karti hai patah hai par phir bhi armaan ko sab kuch jaane ka poora haq hai 
jab armaan itna kuch kar raha hai toh kyun nahi let go kar rahi hai 
kyun woh itni confused hai 
shayad usse ek haan sunni hain kisi se ki jo kuch usske or armaan ke beech mein hai woh galat nahi hai 
woh yeh sab deserve karti hai,  yeh sab uske fate mein hai 
las mein jo bhi uske or armaan ke beech hua hai woh theek hai bus is baat ko shilpa regret na kare issi ki umeed karti hoon
i hope shilpa jaldi hi apne regret mode se bahar aakar is relation or armaan ko poore maan ke saah apna le 
and jo tum samjhana chahati thi sam woh samajh aaya hai 
bus ab next part ka or bhi beshabri se intezaar hai yeh dekhne ke liye ki jo kuch bhi armaan or shilpa ke beech hua usse shilpa regret na kare bus 
u r awesome sam 
thanks for this lovely part sam

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-Keerthi- Goldie

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Posted: 12 October 2014 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
I knew tum update hi karogi..
Worth the wait yaar..
Literally a very emotional coaster ride.. 
Armaan ne riddhima se bhi pyaar kiya lekin he is now clear tat it was shilpa he first fell for .. And tat the fact i love most.. 
Armaan is ready to take the next step in their relationship but shilpa.. She is hell confused.. Poor girl..
Armaan is damn angry tat she regretted their moment in rain.. And in frustration he went one step ahead nd kissed her.. Well she deserves it.. It was kind of a reality check for her.. He is her husband now not her sister's nd she needs to accept it.. I liked the way you portrayed everything..  it was really good sam.. Well i m a little disappointed that armaan didn't react to the truth immediately after knowing it.. But it's alright.. Now is the right time to bring shilpa on right track anyway.. Let's wait for her reaction for his kiss.. 

Edited by -Keerthi- - 13 October 2014 at 7:05am

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