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AR/ARSH FF "Sunn Leyna" #1 (Page 128)

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 9:22am | IP Logged
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arsh_eternal_u Senior Member
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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Amazing part Sameera!
Cliffhanger!!!! Jaldi jaldi update karo ab plz!

Vanshika

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Awesomeee update,loved it,shilpa opening upto armaan,n he knows it that it was shilpa,do cont soon pls :)

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
I already told u ke this was the best from u Embarrassedgrrt job Sam...kuch scenes itne ache lage mjhe ke mere dreams ka to pata hee hai tumheLOLjokes apart..I loved the way how u r going with arsh...fast nahi but sensible pace...loved each and every scene of them...
I dont want to comment abt shilpa coz it is difficult for her bt frm the very beginning galti usiki thi she shld have told him ke it was her to pyar bhi usse karta aur shaadi bhi..bachche bhi usike hote isliye bhukto abh bewakuf ladkiAngry

goshhh kya darwaza yaar...shilpa ko armaan se zyada door se mohabbat ho gyi thi lagta haiROFLchalo sach to samne aya and I like itWinkarmaan ko pehle se to nahi pata hai kyunke itni nautanki nahi krta woh...directly isise shaadi kar leta agar pata hota to so Iam waiting for tht to unravelDead

now the hillarious part..i can actually imagine the scene yaar kaha se atey hai yeh ideas tmhre paas...Ayaan covered in powder lmaooo...itna cute tha na wohh aur the twins r adorableee...glad that our hero is back from devdas mode and ready to romance...ufff baahon mein bhi le liya ab to next suhaagraaat Blushingjab he is all ready to accept her :D nikammi se koi drama mat karvana abh and meri req ek romantic kuch to banta hai Silly

Superspeed mein ho tum aajkal isliye I know update jaldiii ayega love uuu :)
-LaddooTongue

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rihanna09 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
finally like a proper husband wife...!
both are like bending towards each other...!
hope love blossoms between them soon!
waiting for their romantic moments!
but how come armaan knows about that???
i am really exited for the next part!
update soon!


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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
oh my god sam 
i think im gonna cry with happiness 
finally armaan ko maloom pad gaya ki woh ladki shilpa thi 
yeh poora part was just to too good 
i loved the way the things is getting better between armaan and shilpa 
armaan shilpa ko apnane lag gaya hai 
bus shilpa ki baari hai 
mujhe next kya hone wala hai usko jaane mein itni beshabari ho rahi hai yaar 
thanks for the awesome part sam 
and for the pm as well 
and i hope ki tum ab pehle se better feel kar rahi ho
just take care of urself.

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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
well th name of the part nd banner is making me so excited to read the part
plus the teaser i gt is making me anxious too

le bhai back to square one
ban gayi wapis se robot

darwaze ko ghorne se kya hona hai bhala
pyar b hogaya shadi b

aur uske tou bache b hai... darwaze ki bajaye live bande ko ghoor le.. sab ki zindagiyan asaan hojain giii

atleast armaan is behaving like a normal human being

nd he started noticing her

biviyun wale kaam sb kaam krti hai r relation accept nhi krna
kamaal hai

he rememberes her birthday aur baki sb bhool gaye
bakiyon ko b bholna nahi chahye tha na
esp padma aur arjun ko


loved armaan when he said kabhi hass b liya kro achi lagti ho
i am glad atleast armaan wants k wo apna dil ka bhoj halka kare
nd he is helping her in that
when she said mai galat jaah aa gayi.. bht tars aya uspe

chlo armaan ne arjun ko yad tou dilaya

lol.. armaan jee farmaishain b krne lage

good going jjeee
hahha
armaan loves to irritae her.. tm kaam krte hue itni achi lagti ho tou mai kya karun...roflss

shabashyyy
armaan ka beta uss se b do hath aage hai.. powder se naha baitha...loved armaans antics
armaan jee ne job b churwa di.. raub dalna shuru kiya hua hai full on :O

ahaana b bt mast cheex hai. sahi loug mathe lage hai shilpa k
:P
loved her when she said naiii

padma needs to work on her relation wd shilpa
she has lost her one daughter. aise tou she ll loose other one too
nd she became the trigger nd shilpa finally broke down
and thank God armaan was their wd er
to be her support nd gave her a shoulder to cry on


"Lekin kuch bhool gayi thi tum!!".. "Shilpa!!" He took her hand in his.. "Tumhe haq diya hai maine iss ghar ko apna ghar kehne ka!! Khudko in bachon ki maa kehne ka!! Tum yeh jhutla nahi sakti!!" And she looked up at his face with hollow eyes... "Wo tumhe maa kehte hain kyunki tum unki maa ho!!! Aur yeh haq tumse koi nahi cheen sakta!!" He smiled lightly moving away the flick of hair from her face...  "Hmmm??" 

loved armaan for saying this
shilpa kept them in a box wd toys.. sahi hai yaaar


chalo shukr hai armaan ko shilpa ki tabiyat ka pata tou laga
nd he called her defected piece
roflsss

shilpa's care towards the kids is phenomenal
itni jaldi inko accept kr liya usne 

well shilpa jee ko b dhere dhere armaan ki care achi lag ri hai
kab tk bach k jao gi bachuu

lo bhai shilpa begum bari hoshiyaar ban k usse jhatka de rhi hain 
par idhr tou humain he jhatka lag gaya
HE knows... hailaaa
ye tou mast twist hai boss


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Posted: 26 September 2014 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome update Sameera
Continue soon and thank you for the PM :))

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