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AR/ARSH FF "Sunn Leyna" #1 (Page 106)

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Sam!!
Okk so I have read the part..and this is gonna be after so long that I don't have a long comment to post on your FF. This time I have only a few things to say...
1. I was already feeling so bad for angad...and now knowing that he had already realised about the feelings Shilpa had towards Armaan and was still trying to work out this relationship..only makes me feel worse about him. He really did love Shilpa a lot..only if she had realised it.

2. Armaan's anger..well its human. No further comments.

3. I really feel for Anjali and Atul.they are the people who are really suffering due to all the circumstances.

Overall..its a lovely part. 
And moreover I like the banner a lot :)

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Wow yr beautifully written
Armaan pain...ughh...
N thnku Anjali fr d idea of armaan n Shilpa together...go fr it

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
very touching update...felt really really bad for angad...shilpa did injustice to him somehow Ouch
and armaan is hating shilpa because he thinks ridhima died coz of her? how ungrateful Angry she lost her relationship with angad because of all this and armaan is busy hating her Sleepy
anyway, the story has already taken most awaited and interesting turn, m so looking forward to read more...have waited for this track from the start of this ff..for 3 years maybe? Shocked...make shilpa hate armaan as much as possible please Tongue before starting their normal relationship Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 June 2014 at 4:20am | IP Logged
I like the idea of Shilpa hating Armaan

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Posted: 24 June 2014 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Awww
That update :(
Poor Armaan
The pain is visible in your words
Great job and continue soon
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 25 June 2014 at 7:54am | IP Logged
amazing update
loved it
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Posted: 25 June 2014 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
A big hug Hug kyunke yeh ab tak ka best part tha tumhara Sam..very well written presented and banner aur song ka kya kehna =)) 
Sad nahi but thora to dukh laga parhke kyunke shuru se isi baat ka wait kar rahi thi ke kab ridhima maregi aur shilpa ayegi but kyunke Shilpa anand hee ridz hai to thora dukh ho gaya :( per koi nahi...shilpa bhi to shilpa hee hai so acha hai :)  Armaan ka gussa for shilpa natural hai per baad mein jaake jab pata chalega usise pyar kiya tha to ridz ki atma sochne lagegi ke mujhe in sab mein kya mila?thullu :|
Ek to req kii hui hai maine..ek twin ske pic de doo ek...plz..google karoo mil jaenge usse story parhne mein aur dream karne mein extra maza ajayega samajh rahi ho na?
Ab aate hai angad ki bidaai pe...main to kabse intezaar mein baethi thi bidaai kab hogi and I hope yeh final wali hai warna:@ acha hai woh pe rmujhe zara bhi bura nahi laga uske  liye.huh bara aya tha gussa karne jab shilpa ne uske kareeb ane nahi diya...ab acha hua tumhare saath -_-
Mujhe shilpa pe gussa ata hai armaan se nafrat karne ki wajah...coz she is the reason for her divorce armaan kaha se yaar...ab woh to chaen se jee raha tha biwi bachcho ke saath...khamakha bechare ko blame karke kya hoga...uske stupid dill ki wajah se pehle rahul aur phir angad...
You brilliantly showed ridhima's death and story situations relations after her death...its really difficult for a writer to pen down such things jab leap ki baat ho to bt mujhe khushi hai jis tarah se tumne yeh kiya..I felt awesome reading it...
I loved this thing ke sabko shilpa ke face pe ridhima nazar ane lagi..ab kuch to fayeda ho twin hone ka...gham nahi hoga kisiko ke ek chali gayi :(  shilpa ko time nahi laga armaan ke bachcho ki ma baane mein ab jald hee biwi bhi ban jaegi...dhishum dhishum ka intezaar hai...isliye update sooon...Love u
-laddoo

P.S.- I hate the way your readers r mourning over angad ki bidaai kasam seAngry

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Posted: 25 June 2014 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Laddoo.Phaddoo

A big hug Hug kyunke yeh ab tak ka best part tha tumhara Sam..very well written presented and banner aur song ka kya kehna =)) 

Thank you!!!Smile

Sad nahi but thora to dukh laga parhke kyunke shuru se isi baat ka wait kar rahi thi ke kab ridhima maregi aur shilpa ayegi but kyunke Shilpa anand hee ridz hai to thora dukh ho gaya :( per koi nahi...shilpa bhi to shilpa hee hai so acha hai :)  Armaan ka gussa for shilpa natural hai per baad mein jaake jab pata chalega usise pyar kiya tha to ridz ki atma sochne lagegi ke mujhe in sab mein kya mila?thullu :|

Hahahahaha!!! Yeh naa aur koi nahi bol sakta tha mujhse...ROFL

Ek to req kii hui hai maine..ek twin ske pic de doo ek...plz..google karoo mil jaenge usse story parhne mein aur dream karne mein extra maza ajayega samajh rahi ho na?

Haan haan sab samajh rahi hun main... dekha jayega jab next part ayega...Sleepy

Ab aate hai angad ki bidaai pe...main to kabse intezaar mein baethi thi bidaai kab hogi and I hope yeh final wali hai warna:@ acha hai woh pe rmujhe zara bhi bura nahi laga uske  liye.huh bara aya tha gussa karne jab shilpa ne uske kareeb ane nahi diya...ab acha hua tumhare saath -_-

Pleeease!!! Bohat bura hua bechare k saath... Kitni mushkilon se likha hai maine wo Shilpa Angad scene!! tumhekoi idea nahi hai... Poor guy!! Riddhima k jaane ka sab se bada ghum to ussi ko laga hai!

Mujhe shilpa pe gussa ata hai armaan se nafrat karne ki wajah...coz she is the reason for her divorce armaan kaha se yaar...ab woh to chaen se jee raha tha biwi bachcho ke saath...khamakha bechare ko blame karke kya hoga...uske stupid dill ki wajah se pehle rahul aur phir angad...


Donow ki band bajj gayi!! Ab Armaan ki baarui hai!! Haiii !! Kya na kare kya kare?? Yeh Dill Kya Kare??Wink

You brilliantly showed ridhima's death and story situations relations after her death...its really difficult for a writer to pen down such things jab leap ki baat ho to bt mujhe khushi hai jis tarah se tumne yeh kiya..I felt awesome reading it...
I loved this thing ke sabko shilpa ke face pe ridhima nazar ane lagi..ab kuch to fayeda ho twin hone ka...gham nahi hoga kisiko ke ek chali gayi :(  shilpa ko time nahi laga armaan ke bachcho ki ma baane mein ab jald hee biwi bhi ban jaegi...dhishum dhishum ka intezaar hai...isliye update sooon...Love u
-laddoo

That is so sweet of you!! Thank You!!Smile Aur haan dhidhum dhidhum to pakki hai!! Mujhe likhne mein seriously bohat maza ane wala hai!! Kyunki Riddhima seedhi thi aur Shilpa tedhi hai!!LOL

P.S.- I hate the way your readers r mourning over angad ki bidaai kasam seAngry

Madam!!! Yeh Angad ka naam aur chehra! App ki advice le k he decide kiya tha maine!! Mujhe kya pata tha itna hit ho jayega??Shocked How about writing an Angad Shilpa ff??Wink

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