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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww
That update :(
Poor Armaan
The pain is visible in your words
Great job and continue soon
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
A big hug ðŸ¤— kyunke yeh ab tak ka best part tha tumhara Sam..very well written presented and banner aur song ka kya kehna =)) 
Sad nahi but thora to dukh laga parhke kyunke shuru se isi baat ka wait kar rahi thi ke kab ridhima maregi aur shilpa ayegi but kyunke Shilpa anand hee ridz hai to thora dukh ho gaya :( per koi nahi...shilpa bhi to shilpa hee hai so acha hai :)  Armaan ka gussa for shilpa natural hai per baad mein jaake jab pata chalega usise pyar kiya tha to ridz ki atma sochne lagegi ke mujhe in sab mein kya mila?thullu :|
Ek to req kii hui hai maine..ek twin ske pic de doo ek...plz..google karoo mil jaenge usse story parhne mein aur dream karne mein extra maza ajayega samajh rahi ho na?
Ab aate hai angad ki bidaai pe...main to kabse intezaar mein baethi thi bidaai kab hogi and I hope yeh final wali hai warna:@ acha hai woh pe rmujhe zara bhi bura nahi laga uske  liye.huh bara aya tha gussa karne jab shilpa ne uske kareeb ane nahi diya...ab acha hua tumhare saath -_-
Mujhe shilpa pe gussa ata hai armaan se nafrat karne ki wajah...coz she is the reason for her divorce armaan kaha se yaar...ab woh to chaen se jee raha tha biwi bachcho ke saath...khamakha bechare ko blame karke kya hoga...uske stupid dill ki wajah se pehle rahul aur phir angad...
You brilliantly showed ridhima's death and story situations relations after her death...its really difficult for a writer to pen down such things jab leap ki baat ho to bt mujhe khushi hai jis tarah se tumne yeh kiya..I felt awesome reading it...
I loved this thing ke sabko shilpa ke face pe ridhima nazar ane lagi..ab kuch to fayeda ho twin hone ka...gham nahi hoga kisiko ke ek chali gayi :(  shilpa ko time nahi laga armaan ke bachcho ki ma baane mein ab jald hee biwi bhi ban jaegi...dhishum dhishum ka intezaar hai...isliye update sooon...Love u
-laddoo

P.S.- I hate the way your readers r mourning over angad ki bidaai kasam se😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Laddoo.Phaddoo

A big hug ðŸ¤— kyunke yeh ab tak ka best part tha tumhara Sam..very well written presented and banner aur song ka kya kehna =)) 

Thank you!!!😊

Sad nahi but thora to dukh laga parhke kyunke shuru se isi baat ka wait kar rahi thi ke kab ridhima maregi aur shilpa ayegi but kyunke Shilpa anand hee ridz hai to thora dukh ho gaya :( per koi nahi...shilpa bhi to shilpa hee hai so acha hai :)  Armaan ka gussa for shilpa natural hai per baad mein jaake jab pata chalega usise pyar kiya tha to ridz ki atma sochne lagegi ke mujhe in sab mein kya mila?thullu :|

Hahahahaha!!! Yeh naa aur koi nahi bol sakta tha mujhse...🤣

Ek to req kii hui hai maine..ek twin ske pic de doo ek...plz..google karoo mil jaenge usse story parhne mein aur dream karne mein extra maza ajayega samajh rahi ho na?

Haan haan sab samajh rahi hun main... dekha jayega jab next part ayega...🥱

Ab aate hai angad ki bidaai pe...main to kabse intezaar mein baethi thi bidaai kab hogi and I hope yeh final wali hai warna:@ acha hai woh pe rmujhe zara bhi bura nahi laga uske  liye.huh bara aya tha gussa karne jab shilpa ne uske kareeb ane nahi diya...ab acha hua tumhare saath -_-

Pleeease!!! Bohat bura hua bechare k saath... Kitni mushkilon se likha hai maine wo Shilpa Angad scene!! tumhekoi idea nahi hai... Poor guy!! Riddhima k jaane ka sab se bada ghum to ussi ko laga hai!

Mujhe shilpa pe gussa ata hai armaan se nafrat karne ki wajah...coz she is the reason for her divorce armaan kaha se yaar...ab woh to chaen se jee raha tha biwi bachcho ke saath...khamakha bechare ko blame karke kya hoga...uske stupid dill ki wajah se pehle rahul aur phir angad...


Donow ki band bajj gayi!! Ab Armaan ki baarui hai!! Haiii !! Kya na kare kya kare?? Yeh Dill Kya Kare??😉

You brilliantly showed ridhima's death and story situations relations after her death...its really difficult for a writer to pen down such things jab leap ki baat ho to bt mujhe khushi hai jis tarah se tumne yeh kiya..I felt awesome reading it...
I loved this thing ke sabko shilpa ke face pe ridhima nazar ane lagi..ab kuch to fayeda ho twin hone ka...gham nahi hoga kisiko ke ek chali gayi :(  shilpa ko time nahi laga armaan ke bachcho ki ma baane mein ab jald hee biwi bhi ban jaegi...dhishum dhishum ka intezaar hai...isliye update sooon...Love u
-laddoo

That is so sweet of you!! Thank You!!😊 Aur haan dhidhum dhidhum to pakki hai!! Mujhe likhne mein seriously bohat maza ane wala hai!! Kyunki Riddhima seedhi thi aur Shilpa tedhi hai!!😆

P.S.- I hate the way your readers r mourning over angad ki bidaai kasam se😡

Madam!!! Yeh Angad ka naam aur chehra! App ki advice le k he decide kiya tha maine!! Mujhe kya pata tha itna hit ho jayega??😲 How about writing an Angad Shilpa ff??😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
laddoo ko jiska comment krna chahye uska kiya nhi
sun leyna ka kr diyaaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
Farwa kaha comment karna chaiye tha? :O
Sam koi zaroorat nahi itna hazam nahi hog amujhe angad ko kripa ke liye hee chor do tum :@ tumhara koi bharosa nahi ky apata phir wapas la loo usko...satyaanaash karega kaam huh🥱

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Posted: 9 years ago
arey yara kitna wait kia maina is ff ka very bad huh 2 mnth k baad udate ki 
what happened ,,, ridz died and xhilpa ka divorce nt good bt story ka track accha chal raha hain hope n nezt pzrt we will get to see arsh agreing to get married

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Posted: 9 years ago
so many jatka in one update.ek ke saath ek free milgaya.ridz ko marva diya saath mei angad shilpa ka divorce bi kara di gd going.arsh i hate u i hate u competition khel raha hai.anji so nc she tc of da babies bt babies ko shilpa chahiya.armaan bechara yar biwi ki marne ke ghame hai.koi baat nahi saali puri garwali banengi.angad janta de shilpa lvs armaan.nc one.angad jo tera hai toh mera jo mera hai tera mood mei hai isliye ridz ke marne gam hai armaan ko akela nahi chodna chati seede shi ko dvce dediya.wah wah
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Posted: 9 years ago
here i am again
but ths wont be a long comment

well ridhimmas death ws a shocker, i wanted her out of arsh life but aise ek dum se mar gayi tou feeling bad for her

ahaana;s excitement on seeing shilpa  face was an emotional moment

full on emo part tha yee

armaan is misunderstanding her yaar. koi isse sach bataoo yaaar
aise kaise chale gaaa

angad shilpa confrontation nd then divorceee... ek aur shock bt a pleasant oneee
hehehhe

thanks to anjali for handling the kidss

par ab massi ma ka maa banane ka time aa gaya hai

i hope armaan shilpa ziada nakhre na karainnn

jald hi arsh k shadi k laddooo khilaoo humain :P


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Posted: 9 years ago
sam i like the white wala background more. ye wala aankhon me chubta haii