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AR/ARSH FF "Sunn Leyna" #1 - Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh.. so much happened .. in so much less time
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Posted: 9 years ago
I cant wait for the next update
:)
Update soon 
Edited by dazzling_armaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome + shocking + emotional update...👍🏼

Angad and shilpa divorce and angad knowing shilpa past is very well written...👏

Armaan anger towards shilpa and arsh marrige disscussion had been started...😳

Looking forward for nxt part to know what is going to happen nxt now...😉

So plz update nxt part soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional and gr8 update
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st-ly , Most of my comments on ur work start with an apology & this time as well , i'm continuing my ritual 😛 ...
Sorry!!! 😳
2nd-ly , I always get a 'Shock' , like an actual electric shock when i go through the updates ...
3rd-ly , I can't stop loving ur work , however shocking & tragic they are 😉...

Now about this , what do i say 😳...
Kuch kehne layak chorda he nai u ne ...
Phir bhi try marti hun 😛...

Ahem Uhmm!! Starting from where i left...
From Riddhima's Pregnancy , Shilpa-Armaan ki kabhi inni bani toh thi nai & ab Riddhima ki demand ne kuch better bhi nai kiya tha 😆...
Aree!! Ab twins hain , esa toh hona he tha 😉...
But then that sudden change when Shilpa went to NY , Having feelings for ur twins husband , Not very good 🤔...
Shilpa-Rahul's so called Break-Up wasn't a shock But Shilpa n Angad's shaadi was a pure electric shock ...
She certainly did that to get Armaan out of her mind , which didn't help much...
Though i liked the relation Shilpa-Angad shared ...
That teasing , caring n all was nice 😊...

From the start i have admired Riddhima-Shilpa's Bond N now watching (Reading actually 😛) them go apart forever didn't feel right ...

About Chappy 20 , 3 things :
* It was a very Emotional one
* I loved the song selected
* I loved the Banner even more ^_^

Seriously , Riddhima's death wasn't a shock , i figured out that this would happen 😳...
But dukh toh hua na , Armaan , Shilpa , sab ko & mujhe bhi 😔...

The divorce thingy , i liked it , though i like Angand's character But i like ArSh even more 😛...
Waise bhi after this tragedy their relation wasn't going to work...

Armaan toh Shilpa ko dekhe ga nai as he blames her & Shilpa mein inni himat nai hogi...
But i'm sure for Ahana & Ayaan they will have to get together 😉... 

Now the thing i loved the most , ArSh's 1st meeting , logically Armaan fell in love with Shilpa at the 1st sight , woh shuru se he Shilpa se pyar karta tha , Buss 'Twins Confusion' ho gai...
A very strong point 👍🏼...

I have said way too much  😳...
Now i don't need to say that u r a wonderful writer cause u know it 😉...
Loving this story ❤️...
N thank u for the PMs 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...
Awesome one...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sam!!
Okk so I have read the part..and this is gonna be after so long that I don't have a long comment to post on your FF. This time I have only a few things to say...
1. I was already feeling so bad for angad...and now knowing that he had already realised about the feelings Shilpa had towards Armaan and was still trying to work out this relationship..only makes me feel worse about him. He really did love Shilpa a lot..only if she had realised it.

2. Armaan's anger..well its human. No further comments.

3. I really feel for Anjali and Atul.they are the people who are really suffering due to all the circumstances.

Overall..its a lovely part. 
And moreover I like the banner a lot :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow yr beautifully written
Armaan pain...ughh...
N thnku Anjali fr d idea of armaan n Shilpa together...go fr it
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Posted: 9 years ago
very touching update...felt really really bad for angad...shilpa did injustice to him somehow 
and armaan is hating shilpa because he thinks ridhima died coz of her? how ungrateful 😡 she lost her relationship with angad because of all this and armaan is busy hating her 🥱
anyway, the story has already taken most awaited and interesting turn, m so looking forward to read more...have waited for this track from the start of this ff..for 3 years maybe? 😲...make shilpa hate armaan as much as possible please 😛 before starting their normal relationship 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I like the idea of Shilpa hating Armaan