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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
If i am to conclude in short i can say that an extremely sensitive n unjust thing put in a justful way n now the detailed comment- by reading the first 2 lines i could make out that it is a rape case but all my guesses were on armaan being the criminal n as the case proceeded i was busy giving him all sorts of bad words bcause of the way u had written abt ridzis emotion, later when u showed him as the lawyer of that criminal i hated him all the more. It was only later the supermarket n cofee wala episode made me think that if every lawyer supported the good then there would be no profession called lawyers n later the restaurant scene melted my heart. While reading i could go through all these emotions because u have potrayed all these characters at its best, i am really looking forward to the way ur continuing it.
this concept is definately one of the ur best

Edited by niknavyu - 07 March 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Amazin part n totaly new n superb concept...
armaan in opposite party bt stil looks out for ridhima
hope ridhima soon gets justice n nxt time she is strong in court...i knw it is easy to say bt difficult to do...
love d bond between rahul,ridhima n muskaan...
i m already craviin to read nxt want d nxt update super fast...
thnx 4 pm Smile

Edited by Arima47 - 06 March 2012 at 10:55pm

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
OMG...that was a splendid piece from u...i am still searching for right words. .I always love ur writing and u just again proved why...
1st of all having Armaan in this avatar was absolutely  refreshing and welcoming...i love the way how u gave a whole new dimension to his character altogether. . .brilliant..his character stands out erect, strong and powerful  with  the blend of supremacy and grace..i loved it... and now Riddhima..i fall in love with her here. . .loved the way u defined her confidence  and poise  . . given her a total new shade. .i can't say i can understand the feeling of a women who gone through this type of mishap but its a remarkable job from ur part to bring such kind of story  in the from of Riddhima. . .i just pray to god for the women who have been trough it be have the courage like Riddhima to stand tall. . .

i will just look forward for the next part...pls don't be late...i think it will be a hell for me to wait for the next part...  

Edited by roshni_A - 06 March 2012 at 11:32pm

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aar123 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
nice part..
GalwayGirl Senior Member

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Sanaa, that was FAB,Period.
Do u accept online hugsHugHug
that was one brilliant piece of work girl.. where is the superlike button?!LOL

Ive hardly stumbled across stories involving  these touchy kinda topics recently, i must say im still in awe!

-->The USP is the plot Sana.. how much i adored it! what's in the Grey matter of yours?? giving you all Hatke ideas! oh, my... all i could think of was how cool is this plot uve threaded!  

-->the scenario's u put up,its very easy to picturize the scene going on there as it folds.. 
your narrating style is mesmerising, getting us all involved in this story, imagining it happening as spectators.. 
-->Characters! Clap  a splendid work there dear.. Rids Armaan Muski Rahul! we know them as happy-go-lucky characters mostly all the time, but here it was so easy for them to fit in these shoes!

Loved the first part of the story(court).. i was almost certain what was going on in her mind, sympathised with her, felt how uncomfortable it must be for her but most of all,i felt a sense of Pride for her.. for standing up against even when facing it is the hardest thing to do..

-->Armaan!! girl u have the knack in bringing out all possible Armaan's!!
i wanted to hate him, just for a moment.. but couldnt.. something told me, complete the OS then judge him!

-->Incident after Supermarket, i looved it how Armaan listened to her, letting her talk.. vent out her feelings..  Rids is one hell of a strong character!!

also could you please post this and Love, maybe in other separate single posts? ?just a suggestion, i know this thread contains all your short stories but i somehow feel it will garner more views if posted separately..  Ignore this if u feel otherwise..

Please continue this soon.. im very much eager to read what happen's next.. pretty pleachh!!

Cheers (still in awe with the story)


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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
nice start dear:)

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zirwa Groupbie

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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged

u know this is the best of you...really!! 
the plot is entirely different form the rest of your work, or from anyone's work for that matter...totally different concept... n i loved it!! 
a few weeks ago i was reading LOOC season 1 n 2 n from that time to now...ur writing has improved like a billion trillion times.. i'm in love ...LOL
but u know there's only one problem...when u started LOOC, u wre very regular with ur updates, but now when u know people love ur writings, u make them for comments are we?! LOL just kidding Smile

i know u r quite busy and all...obviously studies come first n its difficult to manage time,but seriously have some mercy on us yaar Unhappy
love you a lot for giving us such great stuff to read...Thumbs Up
keep up the good work...
update soon Smile

P.S. please update the other SS na... waiting itniii dair se Cry

Edited by zirwa - 07 March 2012 at 2:05am

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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Title was intriguing ..catching attention! And then the way this story evolved was amazing, to say the least :)
Armaan maintaining such a contrast in his professional and personal life was so well portrayed... Such people somehow fascinate me, always. Ridz, a doctor as well as a victim of such an inhumane act was tearing ... Quite an irony that the girl who saves so many lives was destroyed by a ****** person like Sahil DeadAngry Only if such people could be erased from Earth and probably thrown away in the space somewhere like a garbage! Angry

I loved how RM are the pillar of Ridz's strength... I admire them for being always there for her in times when she actually needed such a support.. the way you explained how much Muskaan cares for her and is more like a mother, a guardian for Ridz at times was so touching. Awestricken ! Moreover, I even feel so proud of Ridz .. being an orphan, she must have had her shares of challenges yet she came out of them shining as such a sweet human and a professionally sound strong doctor... No wonder her personality is so appealing for Armaan ;)

Was almost expecting that Armaan might drop the case, by the end but you surprised me. It was another thing that added to my list of praises that how Armaan just wasn't impulsive in his act .. as they say good things take their own time, perhaps that impulsiveness wouldn't be so good for the story, may be!

You sure know how to tempt us all, Sanaa.. just hoping you continue this soon ..So, well speed up and be back here sooner Embarrassed


P.S: Wishing you and your family a colorful Holi Hug

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