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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
now this is a SURPRIZE (hope not awful) for all of U readers....
but basically its a SMALL.... TINY... TOKEN of JESTURE or GIFT
for my BUDDY... PAL... and FRND "SHIVANI" for her BIRTHDAY in IF Forum....
its a small BIRTHDAY TREAT from my side to all IF members....
i hope SHIVANI and U all will entertain with this small PARTY....
have FUN.... do wat U want... enjoying URself...
this is a BITE of CAKE from my site.... i knew acha nahi hay... per chalay ga....
ya i really THANKFUL to RASHIDA DII.... DEEPIKA DII whose Support
and encouragement really helped me... i used the main INGREDIENT
of the POEM's of both DII's included in IF POETRY CONTEST and also
won 1ST and 3RD place in the CONTEST.....
i DEDICATED my this STORY to RASHIDA DII and DEEPIKA DII and their SPECTACULAR WORK... and AFFILIATED it to SHIVANI HAPPY BIRTHDAY FUN...... i hope SHIVANI
will like this TREAT... cz its also a surprize for her...
i again obliged to BOTH DII's who gave their permission to used their
GOOD NAMES and POEM THEME.....

NOTE: dunt even think that this story touched the vey TINEY SPOT of that TERRIFIC
work by both DII's.... so please dunt compere it with those FABULOUS
POEMS of RASHIDA DII and DEEPIKA DII.... thanx readers....
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DUO vs DUO vs DUO

CID bearue is looking busy…. Everyone is working to complete its respective tasks…. ABHIJEET and DAYA entered…. They saw VIVEK sit aside but looking tense….

ABHIJEET: kya hua VIVEK???

VIVEK: Sir, wo main kafi der say FREDDIE Sir ka phone laga raha hun… magar phone lug he nahi raha hay…

ABHIJEET: hmmmm… aur tumhein FREDDIE kay bina chain kahan!!! Hain na!!

VIVEK smile with shy…. While DAYA say to him…

DAYA: acha tou FREDDIE kay ghar ja ker pata ker aao…

VIVEK: jee Sir….

He leaves the bearue…. After an hour…. VIVEK calls on DAYA's cell….

VIVEK: Sir, FREDDIE Sir ko buhat bukhar hay…. main nay DR ko bulwa ker dikha diya hay… ab wo theek hain… magar wo aap ko aur ABHIJEET Sir ko bula rahay hain… (low his voice) buhat ro bhi rahay hain…

DAYA: acha…. Chalo hum aatay hain… tum wahein raho…. Ok…

ABHIJEET: kya hua??? FREDDIE theek hay???

DAYA: nahi bukhar hay usay…. Boss…. FREDDIE kay ghar chalna hay…. buhat ro raha hay wo….

ABHIJEET(strange): ain…. Kyun!!! (smile) kya bukhar ki wajah say???

DAYA(in smile): wife nahi hay… shayed is wajah say….

Both shares smile and move towards FREDDIE house…

On way…

ABHIJEET: dekh lena… koi bewakoofi ki hogi… jabhi  bukhar carha liya hay…

DAYA: boss…. tum bhi na….

 when they reached…. VIVEK opened the door… and take them at FREDDIE's bedroom… where FREDDIE was sat and still crying….

DAYA: arry FREDDIE… itnay say bukhar say dar gayey… haan!!!

FREDDIE: DAYA Sir… mujh say ek buhat bari ghalati ho gayii….

ABHIJEET and DAYA looked at each other… ABHIJEET want a praise abt his correct assumption…

DAYA: kiya hua???

FREDDIE: DAYA Sir pehlay aap ABHIJEET Sir ko kahein kay wo mujhay daantein gay nahi….

DAYA: ABHI…..

DAYA: haan bolo….

FREDDIE take out a file and give it to DAYA and said….

FREDDIE: DAYA Sir ye file main kal ghalati say utha laya tha…. ACP Sir ab mujhay buhat daantein gay…. Magar main nay jaan ker ye nahi kiya….

ABHIJEET comes in real anger… jus cz of this file ACP scolds both of them a lot and they searched the whole bearue even every possible places including house, vehicles everywhere… and now FREDDIE…

ABHIJEET(in anger): FREDDIE…. Tum….

DAYA signals him to keep quiet and said….

DAYA: tumhein kub malum hua kay ye file tumharay pass hay??

FREDDIE: Sir kal jub main wapus aaya… phir mujhay soch ker hee itna darr laga kay ACP Siir tou mujhay buhat daantein gay….

ABHIJEET(interrupts in anger): isi liyey bukhar carha liya…..

FREDDIE again starts crying…. DAYA moves with the file and ABHIJEET…

DAYA: FREDDIE tum aaram karo… bye….

They sat on quallis… ABHIJEET was in bad mood… DAYA try to refresh his mood…

DAYA: arry boss… choro na… ho gayii ghalati….

ABHIJEET: DAYA malum hay na hum nay kal kitni daant khaii hay… is kay liyey….

DAYA: acha choro….

Unhesitately ABHIJEET thoroughly checks the file… and a weird voice come out from his throat…

ABHIJEET: arry ye kiya….

DAYA stopped the quallis… he showed that to DAYA as well….

DAYA: aisa kesay ho sakta hay???

ABHIJEET: wapus chalo…..

DAYA reverse the quallis and again reached at FREDDIE house… where they saw VIVEK came out from the house… FREDDIE's wife seeoff him with thanx…. They don't try to go inside… they jus signal VIVEK to come here…

VIVEK: arry Sir aap log??? Kya hua???

DAYA: VIVEK, FREDDIE theek hay???

VIVEK(with smile): Sir ab wo theek ho jayein gay… un ki wife jo aa gayein hain…

VIVEK also moves with them, cz he has no vehicle… he came on FREDDIE house in cab… At Quallis

VIVEK:  mujhay samajh nahi aa raha Sir kay FREDDIE Sir abhi bhi kyun keh rahay hain kay main nay ghalat kiya…. Ab tou unhun nay bata diya hay aap logun ko…. Phir bhi…

ABHIJEET try to ask but DAYA pressed his hand and he keeps quite…

DAYA: arry ACP Sir ko jo nahi bataya na… is liyey… acha VIVEK tum MALAT  kay POLICE STATION say BRIJESH ki file lay aao… meri Inspector say baat ho gayii hay… tum bearue hee pohanch jana….

He dropped VIVEK at TAXI stand and moves his quallis at different area…. On way…

ABHIJEET: haan kaho…. Kyun roka tha mujhay??

DAYA: boss…  acha nahi lagta yaar kay hum VIVEK ko us per nazar rakhnay kay liyey kahein…. Mera khayal hay main apnay kisi INFORMER say ye kaam lun….

ABHIJEET: haan ye bhi saheh hay… ab dekhna ye hay kay FREDDIE nay kitni bari bewakoofi ki hay…. aur DAYA ab tum mujhay nahi roko gay… samjhy…

DAYA moves his head in YES and call to his INFORMER….

DAYA: haan PAKYA… ek kaam ker… ek ADDRESS hay… 17/H MALABAR ROAD… wahan per ek aadmi hay… FREDRICKS… us ki 24 ghantay ki saari information mujhay chahyey… samjhay… haan wo hum say bhi milay ga… POLICE wala hay… zara sanbhal ker….

PAKYA: sahib… paisa tou milay ga na!!!

DAYA(in anger): pehlay kabhi nahi diya hay kiya?? Haan!!

He dropped the call…. Both move towards bearue…. On way…

ABHIJEET: DAYA tumharay INFORMERS bhi na tumharay jesay ho gayey hain… her waqt khana… paisay…

DAYA(surprise): tou main kiya her waqt khana khata rehta hun… haan…

ABHIJEET(in smile): mujh say tou her waqt yehi demand hoti hay tumhari….

DAYA(smile again): chalo ab main tum say khanay ki demand nahi karunga…. Balkay sirf LUNCH aur DINNER ki karunga… theek…

ABHIJEET: saheh keh rahay hain ACP Sir….

DAYA: kiya!!!

ABHIJEET: larkiyun mein reh reh ker tumhara dimagh buhat chalnay laga hay…

DAYA(laugh a lot): hahaha….. kaun sii larkiyaan??? Boss!!!

ABHIJEET(in anger): wohi MONA, VRUSHALI…. aur pata nahi kaun kaun….

DAYA laughing a lot…. He really enjoyed it a lot….. they move at bearue and busy in their schedule…

At Night

DAYA's informer called him and both reached at the place where they had decided to meet….

DAYA: haan kiya khabar layey ho???

PAKYA: sahib… wo jo… aadmi… FREDR… FREDRIS… arry kiya mushkil saa naam hay….

ABHIJEET(in hurry): acha aagay bolo…

PAKYA: sahib wo tou bara gadbar aadmi hay… sham mein ek BAR mein gaya… aur bar walay say larnay laga…. Kuch maang raha tha us say… magar wo bar wala us say larnay laga… buhat bak bak ker kay bahar aa gaya….

DAYA: baar kaunsa tha??

PAKYA: RANCHO bar…

DAYA gave him money and told him not to open his mouth and both move at FREDDIE house now…. They met with FREDDIE and now…

ABHIJEET: FREDDIE is waqt sach mein mera dimagh buhat kharab hua hua hay… jaldi batao tum RANCHO bar kyun gayey thay??

FREDDIE(start cry): Sir wo….

ABHIJEET(in anger): DAYA isay samjha lo… meray saamnay ab ye rona dhona nahi chalay ga…. foran batao…

DAYA(angry voice): FREDDIE…. Jaldi batao….

FREDDIE(in hurry): Sir,  file mein say mujh say ek PAGE phut gaya tha… main nay usay apany VALLET mein rakh liya tha… kal main bar mein gaya tha… ek aadmi per nazar rakhnay…  Sir wahan per  main nay thora….

ABHIJEET: haan haan… malum hay carha li hogi sahib nay!!!

FREDDIE(embarrass): Sir wo bus… thori buhat…. Magar paisay khatam ho gayey tou main apna VALLET day aaya tha… leenay gaya tou wo bola kay sham ko bar mein hangama hogaya tha tou koi DRAWER per hath saaf ker gaya….

ABHIJEET was totally out of control… DAYA try really hard to calm him…. although he jus grab FREDDIE… DAYA take out ABHIJEET from the scene…. FREDDIE still weeping…. They sat on quallis….. very tensed as well… the PAGE contains some SECRET about a CRIMINAL… its quite difficult to swelled the case…. How could bring the case under ACP consideration is a big task for the DUO….

On next morning…. When both entered at bearue…. ACP move out from his cabin and call both of them…

ACP: ye PAPER dekh rahay ho tum dono… (show that PAGE)… abhi GORAY GAON POLICE STATION nay humein bheja hay… cz is mein CID ki STEMP lagi hui hay…. ye ek laash kay pass mila hay….

DAYA: Sir wo….

ACP(in anger): CID ka secret document ek laash kay pass say mila hay….. POLICE nay wo case idhar humein refer ker diya hay… aur tum log aik doosray ka munh dekh rahay ho…. Haan…

Suddenly ABHIJEET get a call… he moves outside the bearue…. While DAYA and VIVEK both come forward and take the responsibility of the act…

ACP was shocked….

DAYA: Sir ye mujh say gir gaya tha…. mera VALLET ek mujrim ko pakarty waqt bhagtay huay gir gaya tha… tou ye paper usi waqt gir gaya hoga….

VIVEK: Sir DAYA Sir mujhay bachanay kay liyey aisa keh rahay hain…. Ye mujh say hee gir gaya tha….

ACP comes in anger…. After seeing this… FREDDIE comes and in cry presents the whole situation….

ACP in trouble as well… when ABHIJEET entered in bearue again… the whole scenario was completely changed…. ONE BLUNDER… but THREE CULPRITS… and all of them try to convince that he did that… ABHIJEET was stunned he tried to do anything but now it totally endup….

ACP(in straight tone): tum teenun ko yaqeen hay kay ye tum say gira tha??

DAYA(strongly): Sir…

VIVEK(in low tone): yes Sir…

FREDDIE(cry): jee Sir….

ACP: tou  tum sub sach keh rahay ho ….

THREE of them move their heads in YES….

ACP: aur agar mujhay malum hua kay tum mein say koi jhoot bol raha hay tou!!!

DAYA: Sir….

ACP(in anger): tou main usay CID say nikaal dun ga…. samjhay…

Every team member was shocked…. After a meaningful silence…. ABHIJEET has a call of SALUNKHY…. They all go to FORENSIC… DAYA was silent while ABHIJEET was really angry….

At Forensic

SALUNKHY: bhae ACP jo larki ki laash layey hain aap log… POLICE station say… usay zehr diya gaya hay…. zehr us ki hatheli kay through us ki body kay ander gaya hay….

ACP: magar kesay SALUNKHY???

SALUNKHY: ye tou bhayya aap log hee janein… magar kuch aisa jisay us larki nay chua ho….

ABHIJEET: magar Sir aisi tou kitni hee cheezein hon gi….

SALUNKHY: aisa karo…  tum log us kay ghar mujhay lay chalo… her cheez ko check karna parayga….

ACP: haan ye saheh hay….

All move on their task…. DAYA and VIVEK were so confused… while FREDDIE relaxed cz he knew that he is correct….

 At Night…

FREDDIE: tu nay aisa kyun kiya VIVEK??? Wo bhi meray liyey!!!

VIVEK: FREDDIE Sir…. aap say ghalati ho gayii… bus…. Aur main nay aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hay…

FREDDIE(in cry): magar tujhay aisa nahi karna tha… ACP Sir na tujh per buhat gussa hongay…

VIVEK(bit low): koi baat nahi Sir… aap itna feel na karein… aur phir aap tou hain na mera sath…

FREDDIE: haan VIVEK… (emmotional tone) main hamesha tery sath hun…. Main ACP Sir say baat karun ga… zarur….

 Here  ABHIJEET moves to DAYA's house…. DAYA opened the door….

ABHIJEET(in anger): ban gayey HERO??? Kya zarurat thi… wo sub kehnay ki….

DAYA: boss… mujhay kya malum tha kay ACP sahib ye keh deingay…. Main nay socha FREDDIE ko hum itna daant chukay hain… phir bechara ACP Sir say bhi daant sunay… is liyey….  Aur phir VIVEK bhi tou kood gaya beech mein….

ABHIJEET: khud hee tum dono nay apnay pairiun per kulhari maari hay….

DAYA: boss… ab kya hoga??

ABHIJEET: dekho… main baat karnay ki koshish karta hun…

DAYA: mujhay kya malum tha… ACP Sir itna gussa ho jayein gay….

ABHIJEET move… suddenly DAYA hugged him… he is quite worried….

DAYA: yaar ABHI…. Sir mujhay ya VIVEK ko nikaal tou nahi deingay na… CID say….

ABHIJEET: DAYA fiker mut karo… sub theek ho jayeyga….

Both pair of DUO's are really comes in bad state…. Wat to do or wat not!!! Nobody understands…

On next day….

ABHIJEET and FREDDIE both try to talk to ACP but ACP did not discuss on that anymore… he ordered ABHIJEET and FREDDIE to manage the case… SALUNKHY checked the whole… but still find nothing from the house and their items…. Suddenly TAREEKA screams…. She just rubbed her palms with each other… SALUNKHY jus checked her and take her with SACHIN and KAJAL to the hospital…. ABHIJEET and FREDDIE were really in trouble…. They searched that specific thing which touched by TAREEKA at that moment…. ABHIJEET called at SALUNKHY cell…

ABHIJEET(tense voice): Sir kya hua??? Kesi hay TAREEKA??? Kya hua usay??

SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET relax… us kay hathun per bhi zehr laga hay… magar shuker hay she is out of danger… tum pareshan na ho… haan us BILLI ko foran FORENSIC LAB lay aao…. Jaldi aur haan dihaan say usay uthana… gloves  pehun ker…. Usi per zehr laga hua hay….

ABHIJEET: jee Sir…. acha… main FREDDIE kay hath wo bhijwata hun… LAB….

SALUNKHY: haan main LAB he ja raha hun…  aur ABHIJEET tum pareshan na ho… TAREEKA theek hay…

He dropped the call… and told everything to FREDDIE…. and sent the cat with FREDDIE in xtra care… and now he tries to gather the information abt the killed girl from the neighbors and the concerned POLICE station…

At Bearue

ABHIJEET: Sir, larki ka naam SUNAINA hay…. yahan per JOB kay liyey aayii thi… WHITE FLOWER company  mein…. wesay aik bhai hay jo USA mein rehta hay…. parosiyun ka kehna hay kay larki zyada kisi say ghulti milti nahi thi… zyada baat nahi thi kisi say us ki….

ACP: aur us BILLI ka kya hua….

ABHIJEET: Sir billi kay baalun mein zehr laga hua hay….

ACP: acha.... aur wo billi us larki kay pass kesay aayii???

ABHIJEET: Sir ye tou malum hee nahi ho saka aur na hee qatal ki wajah malum hui hay…. bus us ki ek colleague ka kehna hay kay pichlay do din say wo kuch pareshan thi… aur kaam per bhi dihaan nahi day rahi thi….

ACP: SACHIN us kay phone records check kiyey???

SACHIN: jee Sir….

He moves aside… ABHIJEET again try to talk…. And this time he was successful…

 ABHIJEET: Sir wo DAYA aur VIVEK….

DAYA and VIVEK entered at that moment….

ACP(interrupts): ABHIJEET main us paper per say FINGERPRINT uthwa raha hun… jis ka hoga wohi gunahgaar hoga…

DAYA and VIVEK see each other…. DAYA also looks ABHIJEET too…. SACHIN comes….

SACHIN: Sir kuch khas tou nahi… magar bus ek SMS hay…. kay "SURPRISE FOR U"… jis number say ye SMS aaya tha… wo filhaal band hay… kisi RITU naam ki larki ka hay…. tracking per laga diya hay….

ACP: good…. Dekho nikalnay na payey ye RITU hum say bach ker….

On Next Morning…  ACP sent the paper to SALUNKHY from where he got the news that FINGERPRINT of DAYA, VIVEK and FREDDIE all are found on the paper…. ACP gets in real anger…. All THREE of them sharp their minds… and its really bad….. SALUNKHY calls him….

SALUNKHY: kya chakker hay ye???

ACP: bacchy hain… magar apnay baap say khel rahay hain….

SALUNKHY(smiles): magar boss… taiz ho gayey hain….

ACP(in anger): DAYA ka tou mujhay  malum hay… magar VIVEK!!! Per nikal aayey hain us kay bhi….

SALUNKHY: chalo yaar…. dekhtay hain kis ki jeet hoti hay… best of luck….

The team still tracked the phone of RITU…. After a day… the phone respond and CID team caught the culprit….

At CONFESSION Table

RITU: SUNAINA buhat achi  larki thi…. Main jis larkay ko pasand karti thi…. Wo SUNAINA ko chahta tha… mujhay SUNAINA say jalan honay lagi aur phir (crying) main nay ek din us say pocha kay tum ko kay pasand hay… us nay kaha us ki BILLI…. Main aik din chupkay say us kay ghar mein chali gayii… us kay ghar ki chabi main nay us kay purse say churai thi…. Phir billi per zehr laga diya tha…

ACP: aur zehr kahan say mila tha tum ko???

RITU: meray uncle college lab mein attendant hain… un kay lab say hee churaya tha….

ACP: lay jao isay… aur RITU intaizaar karo… apni phansi ka….

After RITU exit….

ACP(pointing towards THRICE): tum teenun kay FINGERPRINT us paper per milay hain….

ABHIJEET jus grab his head… he tried to vanish the case… but DAYA and VIVEK makes the case more difficult….

ACP(again): kal tum teenun mujhay FORENSIC LAB mein milna…. Bus ab LIGHT DETECTOR hee reh gaya hay….

At Night…

DAYA: boss… kya hoga kal???

ABHIJEET: FINGERPRINT kesay daalay???

DAYA: raat mein ACP Sir kay cabin mein… chori say… magar yaar VIVEK kay FINGERPRINT kesay aayey us per??

ABHIJEET(in anger): us nay bhi tumhari tarah hee chori say daalein hongay…. Main jitna is case ko jaldi khatam karna chah raha hun… tum dono apni bewakoofi say usay aur lamba kheench rahay ho…. Ab kal najany kya tamasha hoga….

On other side

VIVEK: FREDDIE Sir aap ghabrayein nahi… kuch nahi hoga….

FREDDIE: VIVEK LIGHT DETECTOR TEST…. Achay achay ro partay hain… aur phir ACP sahib ka gussa… tu nay FINGERPRINT kyun daalay???

VIVEK: Sir sub theek ho jayeyga… aap ro nahi… pareshan na ho….

On next morning…. All team were there at FORENSIC… TAREEKA feels better after that incident so also there…. All are in tension… SALUNKHY also feel sad and bad… but this was ACP order…. He first invited FREDDIE and in two queries…. GREEN LIGHT on…. FREDDIE FAIL the test…. Then its VIVEK test…. In  4 queries…. All GREEN… VIVEK also lose his chance… now DAYA is at the seat... and RED light on…. DAYA PASSED the test…. Everyone shocked and stunned… DAYA bit relaxed to see that now FREDDIE and VIVEK were FREE while he is in danger….

ACP(comes near): DAYA… mujhay tum say ye umeed nahi thi…. (in anger) Tayyar ho jao… aur jo bhi bearue say lena hay lay lo….

DAYA move in sad feel… although he knew the result but it always painful for him to exit from bearue like that…. ACP signals ABHIJEET not to move behind him….

ACP:  SALUNKHY tum aa rahy ho na!! PARTY mein???

SALUNKHY: yes….

ACP(smile): tayyar ho ker aana… shayed koi mil jayey….

SALUNKHY(laugh): arry aisay bhi mil sakti hay… mujhay tumhari tarah ghantun lagany ki zarurat nahi parti….

DAYA heard this before leaving the LAB…. He feels really sorrow… he never thought that ACP Sir and SALUNKHY Sir both relaxed and happy on his exit… even ABHIJEET also did not come behind him… these all things makes him angry as well hurted…. Now he be at bearue…. His mind reflects all 13 years portions… scenes…. Conversation…. A guy comes inside the bearue…. He is telling something… DAYA mind was strucked… he jus saw the face of the guy and his moving lips… take out his GUN… placed it on his head… GUY screams…. All team is there jus by now… the FIRE and ABHIJEET fear both strikes at the same moment and every scene undergo into dark…

DAYA open his eyes…. saw same faces…. Get up…. And ask….

DAYA: kya hua mujhay???

ABHIJEET: kuch nahi…

DAYA: tou phir yahan… (remembers)(with tears) ABHI…  Sir nay mujhay CID say nikal diya… (in anger) aur wo aur tum sub kitnay khush huay… mujhay yaqeen nahi aata… phir mujhay yahan kyun layey ho…  wahein mar jata tou acha hota….

 ABHIJEET(irritation): DAYA… kisi nay tum ko nahi nikala…. (bit harsh) Kya Sir nay tum ko kaha tha kay apna BADGE do… GUN do!!!

DAYA move his head in NO….

ABHIJEET(still in rash): tou!!!! (relax n bit smile) abay jub sirf SUSPEND mein ye sub wapus lay liyey jaatay hain tou nikalay janay per kiya rehnay dein gay… DAYA tum bhi na….

ABHIJEET( again in anger): aur ye dialogues na…. itna maarun ga na tujhay…  bhool jayeyga saary dialogues…. shuker karo… bach gayey….

DAYA: tum mujhay daant rahay ho…. ABHI???

ABHIJEET: abhi tou daant raha hun… yahan say release ho jao…. Pitai bhi hogi….

ABHIJEET(again after few sec): ACP sahib ko pehlay say malum tha kay wo paper FREDDIE say misplace hua hay… FREDDIE ka VALLET bhi us paper kay sath mila tha…. aur us mein FREDDIE ki wife ki PIC hay… (laugh) ab tum BHABI jee say affair tou chalanay say rahay…. Kay un ki tasweer apnay vallet mein rakhtay phiro…

DAYA(relaxing): hahaha… ye tou hay boss…..

ABHIJEET: wesay LIGHT DETECTOR mein RED light kesay on hui thi???

DAYA: main nay us kay taarun say cheer chaar ki thi….. kay jo 3rd place per hoga… tou light RED hee rahy…

ABHIJEET: aur agar sahib ka pehla number aa jata…. phir!!!

DAYA(wink him): yaar seniority kay hisaab say main last hee hota….

ABHIJEET(smily way): haan jabhi pakray gayey….

DAYA(in confusion): kya matlab???

ABHIJEET: matlab ye kay queries poochnay say pehlay hee RED light on ho gayii… tum kyunki  tense thay is liyey dekha hee nahi…. Wesay ACP sahib saheh keh rahay hain… tum apna dimagh bhi wahein bhool aayey ho…

DAYA(embarrass): jee nahi… wesay pata kesay chala??? Main nay tou machine test bhi ki thi!!!

ABHIJEET(in laugh): kyunki meray PAGAL DOST… tum ek CID officer ho…. Koi ELECTRICIAN thori….

DAYA: yaar main tou dar hee gaya tha… ACP Sir tou SALUNKHY Sir ko bhi bula rahay thay…. Main nay socha shayed FAREWELL PARTY day rahein hun mujhay…..

ABHIJEET: hahaha…. Oh PAGAL… hum tumhein WELCUM PARTY dena chahty thay…. Magar tum… (bit anger) saara plan barbad ker diya…. TAREEKA bhi aa jati party kay bahany….

DAYA: hahaha…. TAREEKA….. hmmmm…

Suddenly FREDDIE and VIVEK enter…. Both feel good to see DAYA….

FREDDIE: Sir aap dono nay meray liyey ye sub kiya….

DAYA: haan FREDDIE…. aur aainda bhi karein gy…. Bus tum wo sub nahi karna…

FREDDIE jus touch his ears…. While VIVEK smiles…

ABHIJEET: VIVEK aainda koi aisi ghalati mut karna…. Samjhay…. Tum dono ki bewakoofiyun nay tou mujhay pagal hee bana diya tha…. (pointing towards FREDDIE) ye aik hee kafi hay… sub kay liyey….

VIVEK: jee Sir… wesay DAYA Sir machine nay aap mein kyun RED light on ki…

ABHIJEET(wink to DAYA): arry 13 saalun ki mehnut hay… kya DAYA apnay saaray secrests bata day…. Wesay is saaray qissay mein FREDDIE sub say faiday mein raha…. Kyunki us ko ACP Sir say daant hee nahi pari…. (relax tone) Tou FREDDIE is khushi mein kuch MITHAI hee khila do…

DAYA(instantly get up): haan boss… FREDDIE kuch MEETHA tou ho hee jayey….

ABHIJEET: DAYA itni mushkil say tou weight kum kiya hay….

DAYA: arry kuch nahi hota yaar… chalo FREDDIE…

ABHIJEET(himself): haan tum jesay bhi hogay… FAN FOLLOWING barhti hee rahay gi….

VIVEK and FREDDIE move outside… DAYA grab ABHIJEET wrist and say…

DAYA: thanx boss…

ABHIJEET(rash): phir wohi… mana kiya hay na … THANX or SORRY bolnay say….

DAYA(wink him): acha tou phir mujhay khana hee khila do….

ABHIJEET(pat on head): aye BHAGWAAN… kay karun main is ka!!! Abay khany kay ilawa bhi kuch kehna aata hay…. tum ko….

DAYA(with smile): haan… chalo phir LUNCH hee karwa do… abhi tum say maar bhi tou khani hay…. hahaha….

DAYA  laughing….  On way out… he is still convincing ABHIJEET with his opinion…. That SORRY, THANX and KHANA all are the backbone of any relation….

 



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Nice story as usual gadhadadaSmile...i really like it...But one thing the main reason...The important paper...I dont think so ACP can do it just because of paper...its not a big deal...I just feel that ...Otherwise very well written...and good story....ClapClapClapClapClapClap.

But one thing i like ur previous stories more than this...i hope u dont mind...But Expectation are so high form u now...Big smile...If i dont remeber ur previous stories than its a great story for me...But i knw u can do better so thats y i m saying this to u...
But overall...Very Good jobClapClapClapkeep it upThumbs Up...i m relly waiting for ur next story...


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gadhadada
ur story is keeping on improving day by day its more touching sith emotions
thanx for another update
stor y acchi hai acchi details bhi express haai sides main which lets know the reason
keep it upClapClap

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srry gadhadada i read all the stories nw only
i m posting all the three stories comments in dis itself
bt srry for late rsponse
all the stories were marvelous in ur these four attempts oly
ur first story was ok n good as ur first attempt
second n third were more better n best than fourth one


specially i liked the stories more n more thank you
wonderful stories updates
thank you
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Wow a very nice story. I am liking your stories more and more.
Keep wriying

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@gadhadada--another story in short span of time..really quick at story writing.
Like the story being duo centric.Its a nice attempt at story writing!Thumbs Up
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wow, a really nice storyClap
Big smilereally liked the conceptBig smile
all the scenes were nice especially about finger print testSmile



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sorry for late replyCry

A big thanxx for surprise gift  HugHugHugHug

nd now coming about story,........again nice one.....very gud attemptation, sweet dialouges,.....how sweet of  DAYA and VIVEK but yaar ABHIJEET can also do anything for his teamSmileSmile
poor FREDDYCry.....................hmmmm a little bit confused plot for me..........again ABHIJEET DAYA's chemistry, bonding toooo gud........in short word SWEET STORY..........

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