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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
ohhhhhhhhhhh such a lovely .. in remix ashi say yuvi that dadies boy .. and here mama 's girl really amazing ..
wait for next update

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Asin.pkyek

dude u write awesome!!!!!!!!!! love daksh nd aishHeart
thanx AsinBig smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Trish, awwwww I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hug 

I looveeeeeeee Daksh and Asmin!! They crack me up everytime! LOL They are fighting for a seat? And Asmin, being Asmin, refuses to let go of it? And then they collide when they're going out ? LOL LMAO .. Me loves! Embarrassed

Asmin .. mama's girl? Are we getting a Sonia Ray here? Big smile

Shlok is coming back! Dancing I like Shlok .. he's cute! :)
thanx akhi
for ur information very soon i'll also add sonia hereBig smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by similuvs_ashiuv

ohhhhhhhhhhh such a lovely .. in remix ashi say yuvi that dadies boy .. and here mama 's girl really amazing ..
wait for next update
thank u so muchHug

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
 
                                                               Part-4
 
 
(Aish & Anchal in gate side)
Anchal:"tum fir usse baat karne gayi thi na?"
Aish:"kya yaar tum kabse ekhi track ghiss rahi ho................change the topic"
Anchal:"ok fine,ghar chalte hai"
Aish:"oh no no........hum akele ghar nahi jayenge...........Arjun ne kaha hai vo hume pickup karne ayega"
Anchal:"Arjun?Embarrassed
Aish:"ey.......Arjun ka naam lete hi tum blush karne kyu lag jati ho?"
Anchal:"kuch nahi"
(Arjun comes with his car)
Arjun:"hey girls............come on lets go"
(Anchal sttil blushing)
(they sit in the car & left)
(in  the car)
Arjun:"so aaj ka din kaisa gaya?"
Aish:"bilkul bekar.............pata hai Arjun aaj mujhe college me ek looser boy mila.........ek number ka womannizer hai or to or ussne muhpe bhi line marne ki kousis ki"
Arjun:"kisis ladke ne tumpe line marne ki kousis ki?Shocked..................i hope ki vo ladka thik ho"LOL
Aish:"dude,tum mera mazak ura rahe ho?"
Arjun:"nahi nahi........mai tumhara mazak kyu uraunga.....afterall tum meri sister ho.............mai to baas uss ladke k bareme soch raha tha jissne tumpe line marne ka khatra uthaya"
Aish:"ha ha very funny"
Arjun:"hmh......accha Anchal tumhara din kaisa gaya?"
Anchal:"it was nice"Blushing
Aish:"tum abhi tak blush kar rahi ho?................wats wrong with u?"
Anchal:"kuch bhi to nahi"
 
 
(Mumbai)
(Raichands)
Chand:"Haseena.............maine pata kia hai ki Deradoon me town se door ek ghar hai...............jaha koi ata jata nahi hai..............hum waha rahe sakte hai"
Haseena:"right..........jaab hum Deradoon se yaha aaye the taab Shlok chota tha...............usse Deradoon k raste yad nahi honge..................agar hum shaher se door rahenge to humare liye accha hoga"
Chand:"haaaah..........Shlok ko pata nahi chalna chahiye hum kaha jaa rahe hai"
Haseena:"mai jaake ye baat bata k aati hu"
(Haseena enterd in Shlok's room)
Haseena:"Shlok..........tumhare dad ko kisi kaam se bahar jana hoga............kisi deel ki wajay se...........or deelar hum saab se milna chahata hai"
Shlok:"to hum kaha jaa rahe hai?"
Haseena:"vo to mujhe bhi nahi pata..................Chand ne kuch nahi bataya hai"
Shlok:"to hum ek aaisi jaga jaa rahe hai jiska naam bhi hume nahi pata"
Haseena:"Chand ne aaisa kaha hai"
Shlok:"okey"
(Haseena left the room..................then Shlok starts smiling)
 
 
(in the car)
Arjun:"Lo ghar aagaya...............Aish tum utar jaao mai Anchal ko drop karke ata hu"
Aish:"ok.............Anchal tum aagey aake baitho"
(Anchal come to the front seat & sttil blushing)
Aish:"bye.............see u"
(in the car)
Arjun:"so tell me college me naye frnds baney?"
Anchal:"no......no new frnds"Embarrassed
Arjun:"accha Aish jiss ladke k bareme baat kar rahi thi vo kon hai?"
Anchal:"Daksh Rajwansh..............college k principal ka beta"
Arjun:"oh ya i know him............usske bareme kafi suna hai............bohut bara flirt hai..............zara samhal k rahena usse"
Anchal:"hmm"
Arjun:"lo tumhara ghar aagaya.............see u later"
Anchal:ok bye"Embarrassed
 
 
(in Shlok's room)
Shlok:"kaam ho gaya mom,dad ko pata bhi nahi chala ki maine hi ye saab karwaya hai..............aab mai jyada din Asmin se door nahi rahe sakta"
 
 
(Deradoon)
(in Daksh's house)
Princi:"Daksh.............kya tumne aaj kisi nayi ladki ko chera tha?"
Daksh:"no dad.............maine kisi ko nahi chera..............baas mujhe paheli baar kisi ladki pe gussa aaraha hai"
Princi:"tumhe kisi ladki pe gussa aaraha hai?..............taab to uss ladki se milnahi parega"
Daksh:"nahi dad.............aapko usse milne ki koi zarurat nahi hai..............vo iss layek hi nahi hai"
 
(in Dobriyal's house)
Arnab:"arre Madhu ek good news hai"
Madhu:"kya good news?"
Arnab:"mujhe khabar mili hai ki Meera aarahi hai"
Madhu:"what?really?.............itne dino baad................Asmin sunke to bohut khush hogi............akhir ussi k saath to Asmin ki acchi banti hai"
(Aish heared the news)
Aish:"what?........papa aap sach kahe rahe ho?...............masi aarahi hai?"
Arnab:"ha...........shyed kal hi ayegi"
Aish:"owao.........kitne dino baad............i'm so happy"
 
 
 
 


Edited by 00123trisha - 27 February 2011 at 11:58pm

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
*edited* Me... First to comment.. Whoppeee.. Trish.. It was a very nice chapter.. Loved the Arjun- Aanchal Convo.. I just cant wait for Shlok-Asmin meeting..

Edited by KriYa_life - 27 February 2011 at 11:29pm

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
hei trish,
nice update..eagerly waiting for shlok to reach dehradun..who is this masi?anything spl abt her..did arjun not notice that anchal is blushing?anyway v r waiting for shlok-aish meeting..will both identify the others?as they have both met at very young age..may be shlok will identify as he is in love..wat abt aish?does she remember a shlok in her life?ahhh..too many ques..update soon...

luv,
ramani

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KriYa_life

*edited* Me... First to comment.. Whoppeee.. Trish.. It was a very nice chapter.. Loved the Arjun- Aanchal Convo.. I just cant wait for Shlok-Asmin meeting..
first comment u nice....................thanxHug

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