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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 49)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweet_Shalini

Hey Trish, I've just completed reading all the parts. There wasn't an Index so had dificulty finding all the updates. By the way your story is simply FANTABULOUS. Continue soon:)
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidhsara

Awsome update Trish.......Shlok Daksh talk was superb........i would love to see a frndshp between them.........Kruti???....ismell trouble......Arjun-Aish talk was so hilarious...GoldfishLOL.............loved it yaar...update soon...love you
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kruti will creat a big trouble in everyone's life..........specialy in aish's life
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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
hey u were suposed 2 send me pm me very angry wd u but update was very gud plz make arjun and anchal part much longer

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mangona

hey u were suposed 2 send me pm me very angry wd u but update was very gud plz make arjun and anchal part much longer
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i'm very sorry
next tym pakka
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Awsum update.i loved it.by d way wen u'r updating nxt.

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anurag24t

Awsum update.i loved it.by d way wen u'r updating nxt.
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i'll updt it tomorrow
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

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hei trisha,
that was nice..who is this kruti?wat is her relationship with raichands?r u trying to make her shlok's partner..coz i think aish-daksh-shlok triangle is not gonna work in favour of shlok..continue soon..
Kruti is a dark vamp & she will be Daksh's partner 4 sometime
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ahhhhh wat?Shockeddaksh's partner?i didnt expect this..ok waiting for ur updates to know abt all those..

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                                         Part-22
 
(in Dobriyal's house)

(Meera was passing Madhu's room suddenly she heard a crying voice from there………….she went to the room………..she saw Madhu was crying front of her mother's picture)

Meera:"didi………kya hua?"

(Madhu was trying to show she was fine)

Madhu:"kuch bhi toh nahi……..mujhe kya hoga"

(but Meera knew that she was not fine)

Meera:"aap mujhse jhuth bol rahi hai,apni bahen se"

(Madhu started crying again)

Madhu:"jati ho Meera……….bachpan me javvi main udas hoti thi ya fir akeli hoti thi tab humesha ma mere sath hoti thi or ab baccho k sath sara din nikal jata hai"

Meera:"lekin aap row kyu rahi hai?"

Madhu:"aaj mujhe wahi akelapan mahesus ho raha hai"

Meera:"didi……..kisne kaha aap akeli hai……main hoon,jija ji hai,apke do acche bhi hai toh fir?"

(Madhu smiled)

Madhu:"tum thik kahe rahi ho"

(Meera was going to say about Shlok & Raichand's  to Madhu in that time Arnab came there)

Arnab:"dono baheno me kya khichdi pak rahi hai?"

(both of them smiled)

 

(in hostel gate)

(Anchal was going for college but suddenly she collided with a girl….it was Kruti)

Kruti:"hey you bahenji type……….dekh k nahi chal sakti"

Anchal:"I'm sorry maine dekha nahi"(with a little crying voice)

Kruti:"whatever"(she left)

(Anchal took a breath)

 

(in college)

(Aish was walking in the hallway & thinking about Daksh & Shlok………..why they were behaving like that)

(then Anchal came there & start walking beside her but Aish didn't noticed her)

Anchal:"Asmin…….tum thik toh ho?"

(Aish's silence brocked)

Aish:"han?.......oh tum kab ayi?"

Anchal:"main 2-3 minute se tumhare sath chal rahi hoon or tumhe pata bhi nahi?..........chalo chodo,kya soch rahi thi?"

(even she could say something some boys crossed her very speedily)

Aish:"why they are running?"

(Aish & Anchal went to the college gate………..they saw a stylist girl with top & mini scart entered in college & the boys were staring at her………………she was Kruti)

Anchal:"arre…….yeh toh wohi ladki hai"

(Aish looked at her)

Aish:"konsi ladki?"

Anchal:"hostel gate pe main issi ladki se takrai thi"

Aish:"isse dekh k toh lagta hai k yeh koi bahot badi bimbo queen hai"

(all boys were staring at Kruti………..Daksh was also there but he didn't noticed her bcoz he was thinking about Shlok)

(when Kruti came closer of Daksh then somehow suddenly she fall down & Daksh caught her in his arms)

(Kruti looked in his eyes…………her eyes were stucked there but not Daksh……….he was not interested………..so he pulls her up)

Daksh:"are you okay?"

(Kruti rolled her eyes)

Kruti:"tumne pakad liya issi liye thik hoon"(smiled)

(Aish saw that & she felt a little jealousy)

(Kruti started flirting with Daksh………..she put her hand on Daksh's shoulders)

Kruti:"so……what's your name?"

Daksh:"Daksh Rajwansh"

Kruti:"Daksh………sounds cool………..i'm Kruti……Kruti Mishra"

(suddenly Daksh noticed that Aish was staring at them……..then an idea came in his mind………to make jealous Aish)

(Daksh to Kruti)

Daksh:"well new hello Kruti……..would you like to friendship with me?"

Kruti:"oh of course……..why not………toh tum mujhe college dikhaoge?"

(now Aish got more angry………she went to them)

Aish:"hey bimbo…….yeh college hai koi ghumne ki jaga nahi or tum…………gym class hai na…….lets go"(she holds his hand & pulls him with her)

Kruti:"Daaaaaaksh"

 

(in gym class)

(Aish & Daksh entered in gym room……..she was very angry on him so she starts shouting)

Aish:"tum kya kar rahe the?"

Daksh:"kya kar raha tha matlab…….vo yaha new hai toh usski help kar raha tha"

Aish:"help my foot……….koi kissi ladki ko apne arms me uthake help karta hai kya???"

Daksh:"main karta hoon…..any problem?"(he snapped)

(a few seconds silence)

Daksh:"wait wait……..r u jealous?"(devil smile)

Aish:"no way……..main kyu jealous houngi…………….main ye saab issi liye kahe rahi hoon kyuki tum mere gym partner ho"

Daksh:"accha……..toh jab main tumhe Shlok se dur rahene k liye kahe raha tha tab toh tumne meri baat nahi mani"

(she didn't know how to answer it)

Aish:"duh uh mujhe nahi pata………lets start workout"

(she went to the working machine)

 

(Shlok was in library………….he felt a strange feeling………………like some supernatural powers were in college)

Shlok:"mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai k mere alawa yaha koi or vampire hai………..yeh kaisi feelings hai"

 

(in office)

(as usual Arjun was doing his work with a file……….suddenly he saw Anchal's face in the file)

Arjun:"haanh"(he was shocked)yeh kya ho raha hai(he closed the dile)mujhe iss bareme kisise baat karni hi padegi………..lekin kisse??...................yah dad"

(he went to Arnab's cabin)

Arjun:"may I come in?"

Arnab:"oh aao aaao………have a sit……….suddenly yaha?"   

(Arjun start blushing)

Arjun:"vo dad…….mujhe apse kuch kahena tha"

Arnab:"han bolo"

Arjun:"i…..

Arnab:"what??"

(Arjun took a deep breath)

Arjun:"I like some one"

Arnab:"han u like…..(he was shcked)wait wait……..u like someone???"

Arjun:"yes dad"

Arjun:"who is she??"

Arjun:"An…..(it that time a employ knocked the door)

Arnab:"come in"

Employ:"sir iss file pe apke signatures chahiye"

Arjun:"dad main apse baad me baat karta hoon "(he stood up & left the cabin)

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