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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 46)

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KriYa_life

Oo La La.. Trishu.. Awesum Update. I just love dat scene between Asmin-Daksh. Update soon Ok..
thanx alotHug

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..kashUrock..

hey ive read it its just amazing..........u r such a good writer :)..........add me to ur pm list!!
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i'll add u to the pm listSmile
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
hey !! trisha ... read all the four updates ... loved reading all of them .... i really liked the daksh-maasi bonding .... they are really cute ... loved the way daksh is risking himself to know about shlok .. . the shlok-aish relationship is really sweet too ... the ff is getting really interesting now .. would love to read what happens next Tongue

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

hey !! trisha ... read all the four updates ... loved reading all of them .... i really liked the daksh-maasi bonding .... they are really cute ... loved the way daksh is risking himself to know about shlok .. . the shlok-aish relationship is really sweet too ... the ff is getting really interesting now .. would love to read what happens next Tongue
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                                               Part-21
 
(in Raichand's house)

(as usual Haseena was drinking blood'''..Shlok got down through the steps)

Haseena:"Shlok''.college jaa rahe ho?"

(he didn't looked at her just answered)

Shlok:"han"(he left)

(then Chand came there & sat beside Haseena''''she looks tensed)

Chand:"what happened Haseena?"(he asked)

(Haseena looking at the glass & the blood which was she holding in her hand)

Haseena:"mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raga hai"

Chand:"what?tumhe kya parishan kar raha hai?tell me'''.is the reason is Shlok?"

(she looked at him)

Haseena:"no Chand'''main Kruti k bareme soch rahi thi"

Chand:"suddenly why?"

Haseena:"I think k hume Shlok ko uske bareme bata dena chahiye"

Chand:"no''.at list not now"

Haseena:"but why?tum jante ho k Kruti ko Deradoon k ass pass hi kisi orphanage me veja gaya tha or I'm sure k usse pata chal gaya hoga k hum sab yaha hai"

 

 

(in a orphanage)

(in hall area'''..the head nun was announcing)

Nun:"aaj ap sab me se kisi ek child ko Deradoon k mount college me dakhla milega"

(all the students were clapping0

Nun:"or vo lucky child hai''''Kruti"

(everyone was looking for a girl named Kruti)

Nun:"kaha hai Kruti?"

(then one of her room met said)

Roomi:"Kruti ka pet kharab hai'''subha se vo bathroom me hai"

Nun:"thik hai'''.main jakey dekhti hoon"(an other nun said & went to Kruti's room)

(in room)

(the nun knocking the bathroom door)

(a girl jumped in the bathroom through the window & answered the nun but didn't opened the door )

Kruti:"mam''mera pet kharab hai'''..main thori der me ati hoon"

Nun:"thik hai but come fast okay"    

Kruti:"yes mam"

(the nun left the room)

(in bathroom)

(some blood was dropping from her mouth & she was staring at herself in the mirror''''.then she washed the blood from her face with water & then came out from the bathroom)

(in hall area)

(everyone saw that she was coming & a smile on her face)

Nun:"come my child''come here"

(she stood beside the head nun)

Nun:"Kruti'''..tum aaj yaha se mount college jaa rahi ho'''.i wish k tum waha humesha khush raho''..my all blesses with u my child"

(suddenly a treni nun came there & she was breathing very fastly)

Nun:"ap logo ne suna'''..aaj morning ko jungle me ek or mowt hui hai''''ek or ladki"

(everyone was shocked'''.then the head nun said)

Nun:"what??ek or shikar?"

(Kruti was acting like she also shocked)

Kruti:"what r u saying?"

Nun:"pata nahi humare iss chote se town ko kiski buri nazar lag gayi hai"

(Kruti gave a little smile herself)

 

*Flashback*

(in morning at jungle)

(a girl was lost in core jungle area'''she was trying to find out main road''.after some time she saw someone was sitting there on a rock'''..she went there)

Girl:"excuse me''''kya ap please meri help kar sakti hai iss jungle se bahar nikal ne me?"

(that was Kruti)

Kruti:"of course''..chalo mere sath"(she replied)

Girl:"thank u so much"(a big smile on her face)

(they both started walking together'''..after few seconds the asked Kruti)

Girl:"tumhe rasta toh pata hai na?"

Kruti:"kyu?tumhe koi shak hai?"

Girl:"arre nahi''..vo main bass aise hi puch rahi thi''btw,hum kab tak pohchenege?"

Kruti:"bohot jald but I think k tum yaha thori si dar gayi ho''.do one thing''.close your eyes & take a deep breath, you'll feel better'..trust me"(she smiled)

(the girl closed her eyes & took a deep breath'''..other side Kruti's eyes were getting blue,her teeth were getting more sharper, she turned into a vampire''''the girl's eyes was still closed''''.Kruti slowly slowly came closer of her,then caught her neck & bite''''.the girl was trying to say something but she couldn't'''..blood was falling from her neck on ground like a waterfall)

(after some time she died'..then Kruti gave an evil smile)

*Flashback end*

 

(she was still smiling but non of them noticed that)

 

(in Aish's room)

(she was wearing her snickers '''then Arjun came there)

Arjun:"hey sis'..college k liye ready ho gayi?"(sat on bed)

Aish:"han"(she replied)

(Arjun looked at her snickers & said)

Arjun:"eeeeee'''yeh kya pahen rahi ho''''..vulo mat k tum ek ladki ho"

(Aish looked at him)

Aish:"ya ya mujhe pata hai,btw, tum yaha kaise?"

(he start blushing)

Arjun:"vo actually''..mujhe tumse apne life k bareme kuch kahena tha"

Aish:"kya''.k tumhari life kitni boring hai"

(Arjun irritated)

Arjun:"shut up yaar Aish''

(she went to the mirror)

Aish:"jaldi bolo mujhe college bhi jana hai"

Arjun:"kya tumhe kabhi kisi k liye aisa laga hai k koi sirf tumhare liye bana hai?"

Aish:"han ek bar laga tha'''.mere uss goldfish k liye,jisse tumne toilet me flush kar dia tha"

Arjun:"bhool jaao uss fish ko'''''koi aisa jisske kareeb aney se ajeeb sa lage"

(Aish was thinking about the last night's incident''''..when Daksh  jumped in room through the window,when he was sat front of her at night)

(then Arjun brocked the silence)

Arjun:"achha'''Anchal kabhi mere bareme puchti hai?"

Aish:"vo tumhare bareme kyu puchegi''''usska dimag kharab hai kya"

(Arjun getting angry)

Arjun:"tumse baat karma hi bekar hai"

(he angrily left the room)

 

 

(next day in college parking area)

(Shlok came there to park his car but Daksh blocked his way with his car''''..then he came out from car)

Daksh:"bahar niklo'''we need to talk"(full of confidence)

Shlok:"I don't think so"(he replied from the car)

Daksh:"tumhare sochne or na sochne se mujhe koi farak nahi parta,chalo bahar niklo"

(Shlok came out)

Shlok:"tell"

Daksh:"dekho main janta hoon k tum kon ho yah ye kahoon kya ho''.I know everything"

(Shlok gave a rude attitude)

Shlok:"kya jante ho''..zara main bhi toh janu"

Daksh:"yehi k tum ek vampire ho"

(Shlok shocked''''for few seconds he staring at Daksh)

Shlok:"what rubbish''''.vampire?tum kya ghost,fairies me believe karte ho?.............i mean vampire???"(he was trying to be normal)

(but Daksh knew everything so that's why Shlok's words were not effected on him)

Daksh:"zyada bano mat'''..main saab janta hoon or main tumhari help karma chahta hoon"

(Shlok gave a fake smile)

Shlok:"hmh'.help or meri?.........agar tum ye jante ho k main ek vampire hoon toh tumhe shayed ye nahi pata k hume badla nahi ja sakta hai"

Daksh:"okay'''.but ye saab hua kaise?" 

Shlok:"yeh main tumhe batana zaruri nahi samajhta hoon"

(he turned back to go)

Daksh:"or Asmin ko?"

(Shlok stopped'''..looking at Daksh)

(after few seconds Asmin came there)

Aish:"hey Shlok"(she was shocked to see them together)

(Shlok didn't said anything to Daksh or Aish,he just left)

(then Aish looked at Daksh but he also left)

Aish:"aaj inhe kya hua''..aise kyu behave kar rahe hai''..itne dino tak toh mujhse milne k liye ladte the or aaj''.hah,boys"

 



Edited by 00123trisha - 07 April 2011 at 4:28am

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Awsome update Trish.......Shlok Daksh talk was superb........i would love to see a frndshp between them.........Kruti???....ismell trouble......Arjun-Aish talk was so hilarious...GoldfishLOL.............loved it yaar...update soon...love you

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Awesome Update Dear.. Whoz Kruti n how is she related 2 d Raichand's..waiting 2 know abt it.. Aish-Arjun part was Gr8.. n dat Goldfish thing was rocking.. I still cant stop laughing. Daksh-Shlok part was nice.. Shlok came out very well wit d vampires thing n dat they can't b changed. Continue soon.. I wont say thanx for d pm.. Bt ha Thanx for d Amazing Update..lol.

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
hei trisha,
that was nice..who is this kruti?wat is her relationship with raichands?r u trying to make her shlok's partner..coz i think aish-daksh-shlok triangle is not gonna work in favour of shlok..continue soon..

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