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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 43

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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Sweet_Shalini

Both parts were lovely and sweet. I lv arjun anchal 2gdr. They're so adorable. Thanks fr the pm!

thanx alot😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey trisha !!! both the parts were really good ... loved the way daksh was making aish jealous ... they both are so cute when they fight with each other .....anchal bechari jungle mein kho gayi ??? glad that they managed to find her .... the entire car sequence of daksh and aish was really good ... kruti is supernatural , right ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: BUBLAI

hey trisha !!! both the parts were really good ... loved the way daksh was making aish jealous ... they both are so cute when they fight with each other .....anchal bechari jungle mein kho gayi ??? glad that they managed to find her .... the entire car sequence of daksh and aish was really good ... kruti is supernatural , right ?

thanx appy🤗n yes kruti is evile
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Posted: 12 years ago

 

                                           Part-25 
 
(in car)

(Shlok was driving & Aish was looking at the forest)

Shlok:"tum thik ho na?"

Aish:"yeh kaisa sawal hai…….of course main thik hoon or tumhatre samne baithi hoon"

(silence)

(Shlok dropped her home)

Shlok:"bye……take care"(smiled)

Aish:"good night"(friendly smile)

 

(in Raichand's house)

(Shlok entered in the leaving room n Chand & Haseena was sitting there…………….Shlok came n sat on sofa……….he was looking tensed)

Haseena:"kya hua Shlok?parishan lag rahe ho"

Shlok:"aaj college me ek nayi ladki ayi hai or vo……….

Chand:"vo what?"

Shlok:"dad vo………..i don't know uske karib janey se mujhe ek ajib si feeling ho rahi thi………..like humare jaisi koi power"

Haseena:"naam kya hai uska?"

Shlok:"some called Kruti"

Haseena:"what?"

(Chand n Haseena was shocked)

Shlok:"han….usne aaj hi college join kia hai"

Chand:"hum dekh lenge………….tum apne room me jaao"

(Shlok leaved)

Chand:"Haseena……….tum samajh rahi ho k yaha kya ho raha hai?"

Haseena:"ha Chand………….vo yaha humse badla lene ayi hai"

Chand:"we have to be careful"

Haseena:"hume Shlok ko usse door rakhna hoga"

 

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Anchal & Aish in Aish's room)

Aish:"tum na bilkul dumbo ho……kya zarurat thi uss maindhki k piche janey ki?"

Anchal:"I'm fine okay,kuch nahi hua hai n by the way tumhe aney me itni der kyu ho gayi?"

Aish:"vo Da…….

(she remembered the car scene when she was sleeping on his shoulder)

Anchal:"Da????u mean to say Daksh??tum uske sath thi?"(she was looking very excited)

Aish:"noway………vo toh baas aise hi nikal gaya mere moo se……meri chodo tum batao car me mere looser brother k sath kya hua?"(naughty smile)

Anchal:"kuch bhi toh nahi"(she start blushing)

Aish:"oho kuch bhi nahi hua……………toh tumhara face lal kyu ho raha hai?"

Anchal:"vo……ye……actually"

Aish:"rahene do"

(Arjun came in the room)

Arjun:"hey"

Aish:"aa Arjun yeh mera room hai,tumhara room doosri taraf hai….bye han"

Arjun:"mujhe pata hai ye tumhara room hai"

Aish:"are bapre……….mr.Arjun ko girls me interest kabse aney laga?"

Anchal:"Asmin chup karo"(she stopped her)

Aish:"achha bacchu…………..fine main hi nikal jati hoon,tum dono apna gutargu chalu rakkho"

(she left the room n it was a cute smile on her face)

Anchal:"dekha tumne kya kia?apni sister ko room se bahar nikal dia"(little angrily)

Arjun:"sister??kon sister?vo toh mera bhai hai………..vo tumhe kiss angle se ladki lagyi hai?"

Anchal:"what???"

Arjun:"chodo in saab baato ko"

(suddenly he noticed there was a scratch mark in her left hand & it was bleeding)

Arjun:"yeh kya hai……..oh god yaha se toh khun bhi nikal raha hai"

Anchal:"oh han…….tabhi toh mujhe yaha jalan mahesus ho rahi thi"

(Arjun went & took a first aid box n sat beside Anchal)

Arjun:"main laga deta hoon"

(he took a liquid medicine & applied it with a cotton ball in her hand…………when the medicine touched the damaged place then it was too painful………..Anchal hold his hand tightly……….Arjun looked at her………her eyes were closed n her hair was moving on her face…………he slowly slowly touched her hair & put it behind her ear………….she was also staring at him………their eyes mate)

 

(Aish went to her Masi's room…………..she was sitting on a chair & reading a book)

Aish:"hey massi"

Meera:"andhar aao"(smiled)

(Aish came & sat beside her)

Meera:"ek baat mujhe sach sach batana…………….tumlog kisi problem me the kya?"

Aish:"problem?nahi toh"

(she was laing n Meera knew that)

Meera:"jhut mat bolo…………..sach batao"(seriously)

Aish:"pata nahi kaise Anchal jungle me faas gayi thi fir main or Arjun usse bachane k liye gaye the that's it"

Meera:"par tumhe itni der kyu ho gayi?"

Aish:"meri bike kharab ho gayi thi fir Daksh se lift li r uss dumbo ki car bhi kharab ho gayi………what an idiot"

Meera:"hmmm"(naughty smile)

 

(in Daksh's room)

(he was trying to call Aish but every time he was loosing his confidence……………..at last he send a call her)

(in other side Aish came out from Meera's room then her 

ph. rang…………she took the call)

Aish:"hello"

Daksh:"hello Asmin"

Aish:"tum"(snapped)

Daksh:"I need to talk to you"

Aish:"jaldi bolo………..btw,tum ghar kaise gaye?"

Daksh:"maine dad ko call kia tha vo mujhe pickup karne aagye"

Aish:"achha hua varna mujhe laga k tumhe koi jungli janwar kha gaye"(laughed)

Daksh:"very funny…………..agar aisa hota toh kya tumhe achha lagta?"

Aish:"of course…………not"

Daksh:"han??"

Aish:"look I know k tum thore se looser types ho but I think tum itne bhi bure nahi ho……………..lekin isska koi ulta matlab mat nikalna"

Daksh:"wahi toh main kahe raha hoon……………I don't want to fight with you,I want to make friendship with you"

Aish:"what??"(shocked)

Daksh:"yah……I mean kya hum friends nahi ban sakte?without fighting?"

Aish:"toh isska matlab tum logose fone pe friendship karte ho"

Daksh:"hah"

Aish:"lagar mujhse dosti karni hai toh face to face baat karo…………kal college me milte hai"

Daksh:"okay……bye"

(Aish entered in her room n saw Arjun ,Anchal was staring each other)

Aish:"hey bhaggu…………..meri best friend is getting mad n mere brother ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai"

(Arjun,Anchal's silent treatment was finished……….Arjun stood up)

Aish:"main jab yaha se gayi thi tab tum dono gutargu kar rahe the or jab wapas ayi tab silent silent khel rahe ho?"

(suddenly she noticed Anchal's hand)

Aish:"what is that?tumhe chot lagi hai"

(she went to Anchal n sat beside her)

Anchal:"nothing………..Arjun ne medicine laga dia hai n now I'm fine"

Aish:"oh Arjun ne lagaya hai?"(smiled)

(Arjun was blushing n Anchal also……………then Arjun left)

Aish:"arre kaha jaa rahe ho?"

(then Anchal through a pillow on Aish face
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like ur ff. read it just now. pls add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear.. Gr8 Update.. Anchal-Arjun part was so lovely.. Hope they 'll express their feelings to eachother soon.. I liked d short Arjun-Aish talk..it was sweet. Daksh-Aish part was Awesome.. Wat revenge is Kruti gonna take from d Raichands..?? Waiting for it.. Carry on.. Thanx for d Amazing Update..lolz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: dishu8

i like ur ff. read it just now. pls add me to ur pm list

thanx dear😃
i'll add u in my pm list
have u finished all parts??
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Gals_11

Wow Dear.. Gr8 Update.. Anchal-Arjun part was so lovely.. Hope they 'll express their feelings to eachother soon.. I liked d short Arjun-Aish talk..it was sweet. Daksh-Aish part was Awesome.. Wat revenge is Kruti gonna take from d Raichands..?? Waiting for it.. Carry on.. Thanx for d Amazing Update..lolz.

thanx alot🤗 n stop thanking me...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
res!

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itneee dino baad update kiya. :@ but, koi baat nahi.. it was worth it. :P well, actually, it was not. itna chota daksh-asmin scene. ðŸ˜­ LOL. ''phone pe koi dosti karta hai kya?'' i LOVE your one-liners. 😆

aanchal-arjun were CUTE. I love it when asmin teases the both of em. it's adorable. :D and when meera has a naughty smile on hearing about daksh from asmin, awie. :D kruti wants revenge. ðŸ˜ˆ.. nicey! continue sooon. 
Edited by _Akanksha_ - 12 years ago