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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 39)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KriYa_life

Wowieee Trishu sweetie.. Fantastic Update. Meera itni modern hai & still so Superstitious..
thank uuuuuuuuBig smile

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by similuvs_ashiuv

hey nice update ... meera and daksh scene was cute.. mujhe toh yuvi our soniya ka scene yaad aa gaya .. jahan woh dono adtiya ki baat karte hain .. what a lovely scene ..
and its good which daksh say bhanji toh bhanji massi us se bhi zyada .. LOL ..     thats soo funny ..
wel next update soon ..
thanx simiHug
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidhsara

fab updt trish........So Massi can sense supernaturals.....gr8......So nw Daksh will keep an eye on Shlok....hope he doesnt fall in trouble.....Massi is in a fix...ab woh apne mum mum ko kya jabab degi...and Arjun ke khyalon ko Aanchal ne conquer kiya hain....update soon hun...thnx for the pm
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
firstly , I am really sorry for such a late reply Cry 
I have read all the three updates at one go ... and this FF is getting better and better ... i am just loving maasi ... but is she a supernatural too ??? I mean how come she sense supernaturals so easily ... the maasi-bhaanji track is really good and i am loving daksh-asmin a lot Tongue loved the way daksh-maasi teamed up together ..Tongue arjun-aanchal track is really sweet Tongue
loved all the three updates ... keep up the good work honey bunch TongueTongue

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

firstly , I am really sorry for such a late reply Cry 
I have read all the three updates at one go ... and this FF is getting better and better ... i am just loving maasi ... but is she a supernatural too ??? I mean how come she sense supernaturals so easily ... the maasi-bhaanji track is really good and i am loving daksh-asmin a lot Tongue loved the way daksh-maasi teamed up together ..Tongue arjun-aanchal track is really sweet Tongue
loved all the three updates ... keep up the good work honey bunch TongueTongue
thanx apssHug

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
tomorrow i'll give u guys 3 updtsDancing

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                                               Part-17
 
(suddenly Aish came there)

Aish:"massi???"

(she was astonished)

(Meera & Daksh shocked)

Meera:"sweetu tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"

(Aish a little angrily said)

Aish:"main yaha kya kar rahi hoon?pahele ye bataiye ap yaha Daksh k sath kya kar rahi hai?"

(Daksh was trying to change the topic)

Daksh:"vo untie yaha……….

Aish:"oh wait wait…………..ab main samjhi k kal rat ap baheki baheki batey kyu kar rahi thi,like ghost n all…………I'm sure k ye saab apko iss looser ne bataya hoga Shlok k bareme"

Daksh:"what??"

Meera:"no no………lollipop tum galat samajh rahi ho…….aisa kuch nahi hai"

Aish:"accha toh kya hai?ab ye mat kahena k ap dono dating kar rahe ho"

Daksh:"what rubbish?...........tum janti v ho k tum kya bol rahi ho?"

Meera:"chup raho tum dono………….Asmin………main Daksh se ye kahene ayi thi k vo tumhe or Shlok ko disturb na kare"

Aish:"really?ap ye kahene k liye ayi thi"

Meera:"of course………..tumhi batao main vala tumse kuch kyu chupaungi?"

Aish:"right……..ap mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti"(she was smiling)

(Daksh also gave a smile………Aish looked at him)

Aish:"listen u looser……………..mera or most important Shlok ka picha chor do……….understand?"

Daksh:"hm……….main tum dono k beech me nahi ayunga"

Aish:"whatever……….massi chale?"

Meera:"han tum jaao main ati hoon"

Aish:"come soon"

(she left)

Meera:"tum mum mum ki chinta mat karo…….main usse samhal lungi tum sirf Shlok k bareme information mujhe dete raho"

Daksh:'don't worry………..main apko nirash nahi karunga……….waise v main beautiful ladies ko mavi nirash nahi karta hoon"(he gave his flirt smile)

Meera:"all the best & byw,ye lines kisi or pe use karma…………bcoz ye mujhpe nahi chalenge…………okey"

(Daksh just moved his head as yes)

(Meera left)

Daksh:'lets get to work…………..Shlok Raichand,tum kon ho,kya ho……….yeh toh main pata karke hi dum lunga"

 

(in college halt)

(Aish & Shlok was talking)

Aish:"main tumse bahut gussa hoon…………tumne ke bar v mujhe contact nahi kia……………….why?"

Shlok:"actually mujhe laga tha k shayed tumhara number change ho gaya hoga itne salo baad or mere pass to tumhara mob number v nahi tha"

Aish:"oh yah………..but tum try to kar sakte the na?"

(Shlok just smiled)

Aish:"accha choro………ye batao k tumne Mumbai me kya kya kia?"

Shlok:"kya kia matlab?"

Aish:"matlab koi girlfrnd?"

Shlok:"no…….no girlfrnds"

Aish:"or frnds?"

Shlok:"the kuch"

Aish:"tumhe yah ape or v dosst mill jayenge"

Shlok:"I hope so"
(Daksh was standing behind a wall & listening at them)

Aish:"tum aaj mere ghar chalo…….mumma,papa tumhe dekh k bahut khush ho jayenge"

(Shlok getting tense)

Aish:"kya hua?"

Shlok:"nothing…………….aaj nahi………….mujhe ghar pe thor da kaam hai………..i've to go"

(he left very fast)

(Aish was confused)

Aish:"arre isse lya hua?.......offo ye boys v naa"

(she also left)

Daksh:"okey Mr.Shlok………….lets see k tumhe ghar pe kya kaam hai"

(Shlok sat in his car & left the college…………Daksh was followed him)

(after some time Shlok felt that someone was following him………..a idea was came in his mind……….he still driving)

 

 

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Madhu was sitting in leaving room…………Anchal entered in house)

Anchal:"hello Madhu untie"(with her cute smile)

Madhu:"arre Anchal…….aao andhar aao"

Anchal:"thank u"

Madhu:"aaj college nahi gayi?"

Anchal:"gayi thi…….vo actually library me Arjun ka cote rahe gaya that oh ye lotane ayi thi……….untie plz aap ye usse de dena"
(a plan was came in Madhu's mind)

Madhu:"dekho Anchal………..mujhe yaha kaam toh tum jakey usse de do"

Anchal:"par vo toh office me hoga na?"

Madhu:"nahi…….aaj ussne chutti li hai,vo apne room me hi hai………..jakey de aao"

(Anchal blushing)

Anchal:"okey untie"

(she went for Arjun's room)

(she saw Arjun's bedroom's main door was open so she entered in room & Arjun came out from bathroom in towel…………like sawariya style)

(when Anchal saw this then she screamed)

Anchal:"aaaaaaaaaa……………Arjun ye kya hai?"(she turned her face in other side)

(Arjun also turned to bathroom)

Arjun:"yeh mera room or tumhe knock karke ana chahiye tha"

Anchal:"I'm sorry………..main bhool gayi thi"

Arjun:"lekin tum yaha kya kar rahi ho"

Anchal:"kal tum apna cote library me bhool aye the to main dene ayi thi………ye lo"

(she troughed the cote on his bed & ran away)

(she came down from the steps then Madhu asked her)

Madhu:"Anchal……kya hua,tum chillai kyu?"

(Anchal didn't said anything,she was just smiling……………she left the house)

Madhu:"arre Anchal beta ruko to……………pata nahi kya hua………….zarur Arjun ne hi kuch kaha hoga"

(she went to Arjun's room)

(Arjun came out from bathroom once again wearing cloths)

Madhu:"beta kya hua?Anchal aise chali kyu gayi?"

Arjun:"actually mom vo mere room me ayi thi or main that oh……………….

(Madhu laughed loudly)

Arjun:"mom aap hass rahi ho…………..what's so funny?"

(she was still laughing)

Madhu:"nahi koi baat nahi"

(she left)

(Arjun blushed)

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