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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 39)

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

firstly , I am really sorry for such a late reply Cry 
I have read all the three updates at one go ... and this FF is getting better and better ... i am just loving maasi ... but is she a supernatural too ??? I mean how come she sense supernaturals so easily ... the maasi-bhaanji track is really good and i am loving daksh-asmin a lot Tongue loved the way daksh-maasi teamed up together ..Tongue arjun-aanchal track is really sweet Tongue
loved all the three updates ... keep up the good work honey bunch TongueTongue
thanx apssHug

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tomorrow i'll give u guys 3 updtsDancing

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                                               Part-17
 
(suddenly Aish came there)

Aish:"massi???"

(she was astonished)

(Meera & Daksh shocked)

Meera:"sweetu tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"

(Aish a little angrily said)

Aish:"main yaha kya kar rahi hoon?pahele ye bataiye ap yaha Daksh k sath kya kar rahi hai?"

(Daksh was trying to change the topic)

Daksh:"vo untie yaha……….

Aish:"oh wait wait…………..ab main samjhi k kal rat ap baheki baheki batey kyu kar rahi thi,like ghost n all…………I'm sure k ye saab apko iss looser ne bataya hoga Shlok k bareme"

Daksh:"what??"

Meera:"no no………lollipop tum galat samajh rahi ho…….aisa kuch nahi hai"

Aish:"accha toh kya hai?ab ye mat kahena k ap dono dating kar rahe ho"

Daksh:"what rubbish?...........tum janti v ho k tum kya bol rahi ho?"

Meera:"chup raho tum dono………….Asmin………main Daksh se ye kahene ayi thi k vo tumhe or Shlok ko disturb na kare"

Aish:"really?ap ye kahene k liye ayi thi"

Meera:"of course………..tumhi batao main vala tumse kuch kyu chupaungi?"

Aish:"right……..ap mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti"(she was smiling)

(Daksh also gave a smile………Aish looked at him)

Aish:"listen u looser……………..mera or most important Shlok ka picha chor do……….understand?"

Daksh:"hm……….main tum dono k beech me nahi ayunga"

Aish:"whatever……….massi chale?"

Meera:"han tum jaao main ati hoon"

Aish:"come soon"

(she left)

Meera:"tum mum mum ki chinta mat karo…….main usse samhal lungi tum sirf Shlok k bareme information mujhe dete raho"

Daksh:'don't worry………..main apko nirash nahi karunga……….waise v main beautiful ladies ko mavi nirash nahi karta hoon"(he gave his flirt smile)

Meera:"all the best & byw,ye lines kisi or pe use karma…………bcoz ye mujhpe nahi chalenge…………okey"

(Daksh just moved his head as yes)

(Meera left)

Daksh:'lets get to work…………..Shlok Raichand,tum kon ho,kya ho……….yeh toh main pata karke hi dum lunga"

 

(in college halt)

(Aish & Shlok was talking)

Aish:"main tumse bahut gussa hoon…………tumne ke bar v mujhe contact nahi kia……………….why?"

Shlok:"actually mujhe laga tha k shayed tumhara number change ho gaya hoga itne salo baad or mere pass to tumhara mob number v nahi tha"

Aish:"oh yah………..but tum try to kar sakte the na?"

(Shlok just smiled)

Aish:"accha choro………ye batao k tumne Mumbai me kya kya kia?"

Shlok:"kya kia matlab?"

Aish:"matlab koi girlfrnd?"

Shlok:"no…….no girlfrnds"

Aish:"or frnds?"

Shlok:"the kuch"

Aish:"tumhe yah ape or v dosst mill jayenge"

Shlok:"I hope so"
(Daksh was standing behind a wall & listening at them)

Aish:"tum aaj mere ghar chalo…….mumma,papa tumhe dekh k bahut khush ho jayenge"

(Shlok getting tense)

Aish:"kya hua?"

Shlok:"nothing…………….aaj nahi………….mujhe ghar pe thor da kaam hai………..i've to go"

(he left very fast)

(Aish was confused)

Aish:"arre isse lya hua?.......offo ye boys v naa"

(she also left)

Daksh:"okey Mr.Shlok………….lets see k tumhe ghar pe kya kaam hai"

(Shlok sat in his car & left the college…………Daksh was followed him)

(after some time Shlok felt that someone was following him………..a idea was came in his mind……….he still driving)

 

 

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Madhu was sitting in leaving room…………Anchal entered in house)

Anchal:"hello Madhu untie"(with her cute smile)

Madhu:"arre Anchal…….aao andhar aao"

Anchal:"thank u"

Madhu:"aaj college nahi gayi?"

Anchal:"gayi thi…….vo actually library me Arjun ka cote rahe gaya that oh ye lotane ayi thi……….untie plz aap ye usse de dena"
(a plan was came in Madhu's mind)

Madhu:"dekho Anchal………..mujhe yaha kaam toh tum jakey usse de do"

Anchal:"par vo toh office me hoga na?"

Madhu:"nahi…….aaj ussne chutti li hai,vo apne room me hi hai………..jakey de aao"

(Anchal blushing)

Anchal:"okey untie"

(she went for Arjun's room)

(she saw Arjun's bedroom's main door was open so she entered in room & Arjun came out from bathroom in towel…………like sawariya style)

(when Anchal saw this then she screamed)

Anchal:"aaaaaaaaaa……………Arjun ye kya hai?"(she turned her face in other side)

(Arjun also turned to bathroom)

Arjun:"yeh mera room or tumhe knock karke ana chahiye tha"

Anchal:"I'm sorry………..main bhool gayi thi"

Arjun:"lekin tum yaha kya kar rahi ho"

Anchal:"kal tum apna cote library me bhool aye the to main dene ayi thi………ye lo"

(she troughed the cote on his bed & ran away)

(she came down from the steps then Madhu asked her)

Madhu:"Anchal……kya hua,tum chillai kyu?"

(Anchal didn't said anything,she was just smiling……………she left the house)

Madhu:"arre Anchal beta ruko to……………pata nahi kya hua………….zarur Arjun ne hi kuch kaha hoga"

(she went to Arjun's room)

(Arjun came out from bathroom once again wearing cloths)

Madhu:"beta kya hua?Anchal aise chali kyu gayi?"

Arjun:"actually mom vo mere room me ayi thi or main that oh……………….

(Madhu laughed loudly)

Arjun:"mom aap hass rahi ho…………..what's so funny?"

(she was still laughing)

Madhu:"nahi koi baat nahi"

(she left)

(Arjun blushed)

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                                         Part-18
 
(on road)

(Daksh was following Shlok)

(after some time Shlok start driving very fast)

Daksh:"yeh itni jaldi kyu chala raha hai…………isse traffic rules nahi pata kya"

(suddenly Shlok stoped his car in forest side…………..Daksh also stoped his car………..Shlok came out from his car & went to forest)

(Daksh was thinming why he gone to the forest)

Daksh:"ye jungle me kya karne jaa raha hai?.....ajeeb hai…………oh wait…..Meera untie ne kaha tha k ye koi insane naqhi hai………..oh god this all is so confusing………ab main jungle k andhar jakey kya karunga?"

(he left the place)

(Shlok noticed him)

Shlok:"Daksh???yeh yaha kya kar raha tha?kahi isse kuch pata toh nahi chal gaya………..kal college me dekhna parega"

 

 

(in hostel)

(Anchal was laughing & thinking about Arjun)

Anchal:"oh my god………..Arjun……….ha  ha  ha"

(her ph. rang)

Anchal:"hey Asmin"

Aish:"hey hi baad me pahele ye batao k tum aaj college se kaha gayeb ho gayi thi?"

Anchal:"main tumhare hi ghar gayi thi"

Aish:"mere ghar??kyu??"

Anchal:"Arjun ka cote dene"

Aish:"ohhoo…….toh ye baat hai"

Anchal:"aisa kuch nahi hai"(she smiled)

Aish:"oh really??kyuki mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta"

Anchal:"whatever…….ye batao ph. Kyu kia tha?"

Aish:"yello…..ab tumhe ph. karne k liye v reason chahiye……..jaao fir nahi karungi"

Anchal:"maine to bass aise hi puch liya…….plz don't take me wrong"

Aish:"okay okay n anyways mujhe sona hai toh good night"

Anchal:"accha good night…sweet dreams"

Aish:"same to u"

(they were smiling)

 

 

(next day in college)

(in class………….Daksh was waiting for Aish)

(Aish came with Shlok & Daksh was getting jealous……………..Shlok rudely looking at him)

Aish:"hey looser………move"

Daksh:"why?"

Shlok:"bcoz hum yaha bathenge"

Daksh:"hum???"

Aish:"yah hum,any problem?"

Daksh:"oh no,no probs………mujhe Shlok se kuch baat karni hai"

Aish:"yehi karo………….mere samne"

Shlok:"what?"

Daksh:"kal rat ko tum jungle me kya kar rahe the??"
(Aish was a little shocked)

Aish:"kya??what r u saying??"

Daksh:"the truth……….so Shlok tell me"

(Shlok was trying to avoid Daksh)

Shlok:"I don't know"

Daksh:"jhut……..

Aish:"tumhari problem kya hai?tumhi ne kaha than a k tum humse dur rahoge………toh ab kya hua?"

Daksh:"tum beech me mat bolo Asmin……..yeh mere or Shlok k bech ka mamla hai"

Shlok:"look dude………….main nahi janta k tum kya bol rahe ho but tum ye kaise kahe sakte ho k main kal jungle me tha?kya tum mera peecha kar rahe the?"

Daksh:"han kar raha that oh?"

Aish:"what???tum Shlok ko follow kar rahe the?"

Shlok:"Daksh………..tumhe jo sochna hai tum socho…I don't care but jungle k aas pass ghumna khatre se khali nahi"

Aish:"Shlok just forger him……lets go"

(they sat on other seat)

Daksh:"or I think main janta hoon k vo khatra kya hai"(he said this silently)

 

(after the class Daksh ph. rang)

(it was Meera)

Meera:"kuch pata chala?"

Daksh:"zyada toh nahi lekin Shlok k sath kuch toh garbar hai for sure"

Meera:"sidhe sidhe batao kya hua"

Daksh:"kal rat maine usska peecha kia….

Meera:"or fir kya hua?"

Daksh:"suddenly vo gari se nikal k jungle me chala gaya………..strange na?"

Meera:"very strange………..isska matlab I was right"

Daksh:"yup………..okay then……..main apko or information deta rahunga"

Meera:"okay but be careful……….bye"

Daksh:"hmmm"

 

 

(in Arjun's office)

(he was thinking about Anchal & smiling………….Arnab saw that he was smiling)

Arnab:"ye Arjun itna smile kyu kar raha hai or vo bhi akele………….kuch to garbar hai"

(he came to Arjun)

Arnab:"hey bte……….hass kyu rahe ho?"

(Arjun was confused………..he didn't know what to say so he was just staring at Arnab)

Arnab:"main tumse kuch puch raha hoon………….pagal toh nahi ho gaye ho?akele akele muskura rahe ho"

Arjun:"kuch nahi dad vo bass office k kaam k bareme soch raha tha"

Arnab:"toh isme hasne wali konsi baat hai?"

Arjun:"dad mujhe ye file client ko dene jana hai"

(he left)

Arnab:"kaam k beech me smile kar raha tha……….kuch to garbar hai………pata lagana parega…..hah"

 

 

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Arnab came from office)

Arnab:"Madhu"(loudly)

Madhu:"ayi babba…….kya hua chilla kyu rahe ho?"

Arnab:"tumne Arjun ko dekha?"

Madhu:"ye kya baccho jaisi batey kar rahe ho…….vo humara beta hai usse nahi dekhungi toh or kisse dekhungi?"

Arnab:"I mean usska behaviour dekha…………he is changing"

Madhu:"I know………..pyar saab badal deta hai"(she smiled)

Arnab:"han pyar…………….what?pyar kisse?"

Madhu:"Arjun ko or kisse?"

(Arnab was shocked)

Arnab:"kisse?"

Madhu:"Anchal se"

Arnab:"Anchal???vo Aish ki frnd?"
Madhu:"ha wahi…………..Anchal kitni acchi ladki hai na………humare Arjun k liye perfect hai"

(Arnab still shocked)

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                                         Part-19
 
(at night Daksh was following Shlok again but not with his car)

(this time Shlok didn't feel anything)

(he came to his house)

(Chand & Haseena was sitting in leaving room)

Haseena:"Shlok…….hume tumse kuch baat karni hai"

Shlok:"What?agar Asmin k bareme hai toh mujhe nahi karni hai"

Chand:"it's important…………u have to listen to us………..come sit"

(Shlok sat on sofa)

Chand:"u know k hume apni pahechan kisiko nahi batana hai"

Shlok:"so??"

Haseena:"so ye ki tumhe Asmin ya fir kisi or se milna band karna hoga…….do u understand?"

Shlok:"ap dono kuch v kahe par jabtak hum yaha hai tabtak main Asmin se milna band nahi kar sakta hoon"

(Daksh was standing behind a window & listening at them)

Chand:"u r our son or tumhe humari baat manni hi padegi"

(Daksh thinking)

Daksh:"pahechan chupani padegi???akhir ye log hai kon?"

(suddenly Haseena felt something)

Haseena:"Chand………..mujhe ek insane ki smell aarahi hai………yaha humare ilawa koi or v hai………….can't u feel it?"

Chand:"haaaa………..i can feel…

(Daksh get feared)

Daksh:"oh no,inhe kaise pata chala k main yaha hoon………..mujhe jana hoga"

(Shlok also felt that)

Shlok:"main bahar jakey dekhta hoon"

(when Shlok came to the window side then Daksh was gone)

Shlok:"oh Daksh……….tum firse mujhe follow kar rahe the"

 

 

(on road)

Daksh:"mujhe kisi tarha Meera untie ko inform karma hoga but how?.........yah I have a idea"

(he smiled)

 

(in Aish's bedroom)

(she was hearing some music………suddenly someone knocked her window)

Aish:"itni rat ko kon ho sakta hai?"

(she slowly slowly came closer to the window…………….then she opened it & it was Daksh)

Aish:"tum?..............yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

(he jumped in the room through the window)

Aish:"arre arre bahar niklo"

Daksh:"look mujhe aaj rat k liye yaha rukne do……….i promise kal subha main chala jaunga"

Aish:"but tum yaha kyu aye ho?"

Daksh:"vo……

(he thinks that if he will tell anything about Shlok to Aish then she will not believe him………..so he changed the reason)

Daksh:"actually aj main apni Gfrnd k ghar gaya tha or suddenly uske dad aagaye to mujhe vagna padha"

Aish:"toh tumhe merahi ghar mila tha chupne k liye?"

Daksh:"tumhara ghar karib tha issi liye main yaha aagaya varna tumhare pass kon ayega"

Aish:"u psycho niklo mere room se"

(Daksh gave a devil smile)

Daksh:"agar main iss waqt yaha se bahar nikla to uss ladki k dad mujhe dekh lenge or unhe lagega k main tumhare sath tha or fir vo tumhare parents se baat karenge………..

(Aish bit her lips )

Aish:"wow wow dude……….okay………tum yaha ruk sakte hoo but subahi tum chalr jaoge"

Daksh:"I promise"

Aish:"fine"(she went to the bathroom)

Daksh:"tumse kaise kahoon k main tumse milne aya hoon"(he said silently)

(when she came out from bathroom then saw he was laying on her bed)

Aish:"eeyyyy…………yeh mera bed hai"

Daksh:"so?........ab dono ek hi room me hai toh aao dono ek sath sotey hai"

Aish:"eeeeeeee…………main tumhari biwi nahi hoon jo ek sath sow jau…….ye mera bed hai or yaha sirf main soungi"

Daksh:"toh main kaha sounga?"

Aish:"ground pe"
(Daksh jumped)

Daksh:"what???ground pe??r u crazy?zain kitna thanda"

Aish:"so what?ye mera room hai or yaha mere rules chalenge"

Daksh:"ok……..as your wish……..main zamin pe sow jaunga……….khush?"

(Aish didn't say anyting…………..she took a pillow & throw it on ground)

Aish:"jaao niche jaao"

(Daksh got down from the bed & sat on the ground)

(Aish on bed)

(at midnight)

(Aish was sleeping…………..suddenly Daksh got up)

(he saw Aish was sleeping & she was looking very beautiful)

Daksh:"oh god…………yeh kitni pretty lag rahi hai……………pata nahi kab main isse apni dilki baat kahe paunga……………..i wish k vo din jaldi aye"

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heres my 3 updts

hope u guys like it
time for a sad news
my dad said he will disconect the net conection tomorrow & will buy a new one but i'm not allowd to use the new one yetCry


Edited by 00123trisha - 29 March 2011 at 12:33am
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

heres my 3 updts

hope u guys like it
time for a sad news
my dad said he will disconect the net conection tomorrow & will buy a new one but i'm not allowd to use the new one yetCry

Ouch

hope he agrees and let u use

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

Originally posted by 00123trisha

heres my 3 updts

hope u guys like it
time for a sad news
my dad said he will disconect the net conection tomorrow & will buy a new one but i'm not allowd to use the new one yetCry

Ouch

hope he agrees and let u use
yah i hope so
but don't u worry
main kisi v tarha se updt karungi bcoz main chori chupe net surfing karne me expart hoonTongue

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