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**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] (Page 32)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Trish... Wonderful Update. Asmin knows dat he is Shlok Raichand. OMG.. Update soon ok.

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Gr8 part.. Shlok is Asmin's Childhood friend n now he is a vampire.. D Mystery needs 2 b unfold soon.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KriYa_life

Trish... Wonderful Update. Asmin knows dat he is Shlok Raichand. OMG.. Update soon ok.
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Originally posted by Gals1110

Gr8 part.. Shlok is Asmin's Childhood friend n now he is a vampire.. D Mystery needs 2 b unfold soon.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
hey u all
i've another surprise 4 u
don't know will u guys like it or not.............but not now..after some days

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                                              Part-14
 
 (Shlok came & sat on Aish's back seat)

(Aish turned to his face,Shlok also looking at her………..after 1 min Aish turned back)

(Daksh was looking at them…………..as usual he was jealous)

(after some time class was finished…………….Shlok left the class at first & Aish ran to him………..she called his name a little loudly)

Aish:"Shlok"

(Shlok stoped & turned back to Aish)

Aish:"so Mr.Raichand…………….tumhari poll khul gayi………….tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi?"

Shlok:"tumkya bol rahi ho?"
Aish:"accha ji,zyada bano mat……………itne dino baad ayeho or mujhe inform bhi nahi kia………….yehi hai tumhari frndship?"

(Daksh came out from the class & saw them together again)

(even Shlok say anything Aish hugged him with a cute smile on her face)

(Shlok didn't know what he had to do)

(Daksh getting more jealous)

 Aish:"tumse bohut sari batey karni hai but iss waqt mera gym class hai………..so I'll talk to u later…………bye"

(she left……………..then Shlok also left)

(Daksh was still stood there……..he was hurt……….he also had gym class but didn't went there)

 

 

 

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Meera was looking for Arjun………..she came to Madhu's room)

Meera:"didi……..Arjun kaha hai?"

Madhu:"apne room me hoga"

Meera:"maine usske room me dekha lekin vo toh waha nahi tha"

(then Arnab said)

Arnab:"oh,main to bhul hi gaya tha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,office me kuch zaruri kaam tha or  ussne kaha ussi kaam k liye usse late ho jayega"

Madhu:"what?or tum ab bata rahe ho?Arjun puri rat office me tha?"

Arnab:"main usse ph. Karta hoon"

(Arnab took the ph. & trying to call Arjun but as Arjun was locked in library so there's no network)

Arnab:"network fail ho gaya………….main office me ph. kar k dekhta hoon"

(then he called in his office…………….one man took the ph.)

Man:"hello"

Arnab:"Arjun kaha haqi?"
Man:"sir Arjun ji to kal rat ko hi chale gaye the"

Arnab:"chale gaye the?par kaha?"

Man:"college library me………….koi information collect karne k liye"

Arnab:"accha?.........ok thanx"

(he cut the ph.)

Arnab:"Arjun college library me hai"

Madhu:"what?"

Arnab:"main jata hoon"

Meera:"jija ji plz……….aap office jaiye……..main college chali jati hoon or lage hath Asmin se bhi mil lungi"

Arnab:"thik hai………..tum jaao"

(Meera went for college)

 

 

(in gym class)

(Teach to Aish)

Teach:"tumhara partner kah hai?"

Aish:"mujhe kya pata…………I'm sure kahi pe flirt kar raha hoga"

Teach:"tumhe apne sathi k breme pata hona chahiye………….now go & find him"

(Aish angrily went)

(in hall way………….she was asking to people for Daksh…………at last one boy said he saw him in a empty class room…………….then she went there)

(she saw Daksh was sitting alone in a room……………..she entered in the room)

Aish:"oh toh tum yaha ho or main puri dunia dhund k aagayi……………chalo"

Daksh:"kaha?"

Aish:"gym class or kaha…………..tum nahi aye issi liye mam mujhe khari khoti suna rahi hai………ab chalo"
Daksh:"main nahi jaunga……tumhe jana hai to jaao"

Aish:"agar tumhe nahi jana hai to tum jakey mam ko bata k aao"(she said a little angrily)

Daksh:"main nahi jaunga baas"(he also getting angry)

Aish:"mujhe lagta hai k tum kissi se naraz ho"

Daksh:"ha hoon…………tumse or uss Shlok se"

Aish:"what?oh no   not again…………..tum fir shuru ho gaye……………tumhe main bhi pasand nahi or Shlok bhi pasand nahi to kyu tumhe farak parta hai……….stay away from us"

Daksh:"bcoz I lo…………..

(Aish was shocked)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
hei trish,
wat..daksh is abt to say tat he loves her...too funny...i wish to c aish's reaction to this..gr8 maasi..so she'll c daksh-aish together here n in library arjun-anchal..too good...maasi will be double happy i think..continue soon..loved it totally

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
hahaha... love the last scene..
ab daksh kahe ga 'i love the way u are'
omg ashi yuvi ka scene after rock concert....
yar tu bhi na us hitler ki tarh blooper kyon kar rahi hai agr arjun or anchal lab me locked hai to last wale part me tumne ye kyon likha k aish entered with anchal..... well update soon next part....

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