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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged

part 1 is really nice .... liked it Tongue

waiting for the asmin-daksh 's 1st meet Wink

plzz continue soon .. Tongue

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Part-2

(Deradoon)

(Aish & Anchal at college gate)

Aish:"hey Anchal.........mai car lock karna vool gayi......tum andhar jaao mai avvi aati hu....OK"

Anchal:"alright"

(Aish left...............Anchal entered in the college.......................Daksh was sitting with his frnds)

Angad:"Daksh look..............lagta hai new hai college me"(to Anchal)

Daksh:"ha par vo mere type ki nahi hai but i can try"

Rohan:"No dude uss ladki ko mat cherna"

Daksh:"kyu?tumhe try marna hai?to marlo"

Rohan:"I mean vo Asmin Dobriyal ki frnd hai"

Daksh:"Asmin Dobriyal?vo kon hai?"

Rohan:"tumne shayed Arnab Dobriyal ka naam sunahi hoga................unki beti hai Asmin Dobriyal....or usse ya fir usske dossto se panga lena matlab............

Daksh:"jo vi ho hai to ladkihi na................or Daksh Rajwansh kisi vi ladki ka heart melt karsakta hai...................just wait & watch par filhal usski frnd se hi baat karte hai"

(Daksh comes to Anchal)
Daksh:"hello beautyful"

Anchal:"hi"

(she is trying to cross him but again Daksh stoped her way)

Daksh:"I'm Daksh Rajwansh the cool guy of college & u?"

Anchal:"Anchal"

Daksh:"hmmm..........pretty & old name.So do u have any B.frnd?"

Anchal:"What??"

Daksh:"yes,agar hai to bata do................tumhari akhey...uff.....or tumhare baal..........

(He's just trying to touch Anchal's hair but suddenly Aish come & hold his hand tightly)

Aish:"meri dosstko haath vi mat lagana"

Daksh:"oh really?but why?tum kya yaha ki quine ho jo tumhare dosstoko haath nahi lagaya jaa sakta"

Aish:"quine to nahi hu but tumse better hu...............now move we're getting late or Anchal se door rahena"

(Aish & Anchal start walking)
Daksh:"hey,aapna naam to batati jaao"

Aish:"mera naam nahi jano toh bahetar hoga"

(she left)

(Daksh smiling)

(Mumbai)

(Raichands)

Haseena:"Chand.......hume kisisvi tarha Asmin ko Shlok k dimag se nikalna hoga"

Chand:"aahhhh......

(Ph. ringing)

Chand:"hello"

Maneger:"sir hume abhi abhi pata chala hai ki kisi buisness k kaam se aapko Deradoon jana hoga"

Chand:"what???Deradoon??"

Haseena:"Deradoon?"

Maneger:"yes sir...........any problem?"

Chand:"oh noh noh...............mai aapse baad ,me baat karta hu"

Haseena:"kya hua Chand?Deradoon ki kya baate ho rahi thi?"

Chand:"kisi buisness k kaam se mujhe Deradoon jana parega"

Haseena:"What???oh no.......agar Shlok ko ye baat pata chal gayi to accha nahi hoga"

(suddenly Shlok come to the room)

Shlok:"konsi baat mom?............aaplog mujhse koi baat chupa rahe hai?"

Haseena:"nothing.......

Chand:"just some buisness problems............jisse hum tumhe door rakhna chahate hai..........that's all"

(Deradoon)

(in college cantin)

(Asmin sitting on a table...............Daksh comes & sits on other chair

)

Aish:"tum yaha firse..............mera picha karrahe ho?"

Daksh:"yehi samajh lo...............jabse tumhe dekha hai mere dil or dimag pe kabu nahi raha........

Aish:"Oooo hello............ye sare bekar lines aapne un bimbo type G.frnds k liye bacha k rakkho.................mujhpe ye kaam nahi karega"

Daksh:"okey.now u hurting me...............aajtak kisi ladki ne mujhse aise baat nahi ki"

Aish:"kyu ki aajtak tumhara pala mujhse nahi para..........duh uh...tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai"

(she's standup & start walking)

Daksh:"hey,kamse kam aapna naam to bata do"

Aish:"mujhe tumhe aapna naam nahi batana hai"

(again start walking then Daksh said)

Daksh:"WACKO"

Aish:"What???"

Daksh:"yes that's the perfect name................WACKO"

Aish:"watever.........huh"

LOVE Trish

Edited by 00123trisha - 25 February 2011 at 3:11am

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RB81

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged

that was nice convo b/w ashi n daksh..
i hav a feeling tat after sometime ashi wud punch daksh..as he is trying to irritate her..
will shlok meet ashi sometime?
write lengthy updates yaar..
anyway do update soon..
luv,
ramani

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_trish_

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by RB81

that was nice convo b/w ashi n daksh..
i hav a feeling tat after sometime ashi wud punch daksh..as he is trying to irritate her..
will shlok meet ashi sometime?
write lengthy updates yaar..
anyway do update soon..
luv,
ramani

yes,Shlok & Aish will meet after somedays in this story

btw,thanx 4 commenting

PristineSoul

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged

Trishaaaaa.... Hug

Very well written.. Daksh is such a flirt.. I loved the Aish- Daksh convo.. It was so funny... Daksh ne Aish ke liye naya naam rakha, WHACKO.. ROFL

Chand will go to Dehradoon.. Hmm.. Not Bad.. Jaldi se next part likh do.. Pls make it thoda lengthy ok. Thank u for the PM..

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Kohoko

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged

wow! what a name - WHACO!!!! waiting 4 the next part......................

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Kohoko

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged

wow! what a name - WHACO!!!! hahaha..waiting 4 the next part......................

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged

it was so nice and wonderful.... add 3 part soon....

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